So I'm supposed to have a big steamy scene (not with many details though, hey, i'm thirteen), so that my MC can reveal his secret to my other MC. I am completly stuck. Any tips?
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| lightsofbroadway | I'm stuck on the steamy scene |
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So I'm supposed to have a big steamy scene (not with many details though, hey, i'm thirteen), so that my MC can reveal his secret to my other MC. I am completly stuck. Any tips? |
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Nov 29, 2007 - 05 20
well, maybe they're dancing slowly - in a place where they can be alone (not sure what kind of setting you have the steamy scene in) and then they get close enough to kiss which could go on for awhile. then they could fall into an overstuffed chair where things get pretty 'breathie' then they break away and have some dialogue. you male character doesn't want to go any farther until he tells her something she needs to know. his secret. could something like that work for you. maybe she just wants to kiss and not talk. and he's the one that for honor's sake, has to hold back. good luck with your scene. remember to include the 5 senses. what they feel, hear, smell, taste and touch etc. and make your dialogue effective to move the story along. good luck!