ok...my fmc became blind when she was 12 years old and and is now 17 and she goes to a boarding school. what are some problems that she could face when she's there? i need some dramatic ones....the main plot is her learning to trust people, and this one boy falls in love with her. i need something to happen, it can be a misunderstanding or whatever, where she draws away from him and in the end he finally gets her to see the truth. and ideas?
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Apr 18, 2008 - 04 20
someone might challenge a boy to date her , first he does it for the challenge then he falls in love.
Bu she learns about it and cannot trust him anymore
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Apr 18, 2008 - 04 34
are we a musical theater person?
i do like the suggestion though...
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Apr 18, 2008 - 06 22
Are you talking to me ? Sorry I'm Frecnh, I might have missed some pivate joke here
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Jun 10, 2008 - 16 13
I got a Wicked vibe, too. You're not crazy. :D
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Bu she learns about it and cannot trust him anymore
I really like this.
It makes the reader want to scream at the main character to listen to what the boy has to say, just to give him a chance. And, since screaming at the book gets the reader into the book (the oh-so-important hook we all need), I suggest using it.