Meranthias Marinas

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Meranthias Marinas

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Mai 4, 2008 - 16 25

The Meranthias Marinas is a typical Mermaid to us. But, these creatures have gone through so much more, look a little different too. They have 3 clawed hands, webbed of course, and there body is long and narrow. Most are females, only 1 out of every 20-30 is a male. They where created by a man called Albert Gunther Drill. He lived in the Drill world in my plot. He let the first 8 go. Over time that 8 became 150. Albert was long dead when the Gronlynns caught all of the Meranthias Marinas and sold them off to zoo's and labs all around Drill.
They are now put in small pens, in zoos run by the Gronlynns and the Groblees. They can talk but they are ignored whenever they do. They are forced to perform tricks and they are shocked if they refuse to do it. This is part of my plot for my story of the 3 different worlds. *Still need to name the third one*.
What do you guys think?
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Mai 4, 2008 - 16 46

Love their name! Is an MM the MC of your book?

:) Jen

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I am still deciding on that. Its going to be an MM or another creature. They are called Kurt Humans or KH. They are dogs, completely but there bone structure is built like a humans, they speak English but most of them bark more then they speak. There minds are 2 times more devolped then a humans mind. They wear close and stuff. There life is a lot less tragic then an MM's. These guys live in the Unamed Land. They have no one to torture them so they are the dominate creature. Its hard to decide but I think it is going to be an MM as the MC.

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