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jokerman
Novel: The Man in Me
Genre: Mainstream Fiction
23,383 words so far  

About jokerman

Location: Greenville, SC, USA

Home Region:
USA :: South Carolina :: Greenville

Age:38

Favorite novels: The Long Goodbye, Raymond Chandler

Favorite writers: John D. MacDonald, Lawrence Block, and James Lee Burke

Favorite music: Dylan, Matthew Ryan, Lucinda Williams

Non-noveling interests: Baseball, collecting Bob Dylan field recordings

Joined: Oktober 1, 2003

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'03 '04 '05 '06 '07
'08

NaNoWriMo posts: 86

NaNoWriMo buddies: 11

 

Synopsis: The Man in Me

After witnessing the ugliness of his parents’ divorce, Devon Addison struggles with intimacy in his own life and develops a crush on his younger sister, Elise. Elise marries James Furman, a marine, whom Devon dislikes. Unable to find love and meaning in his life, Devon attempts suicide. When James is killed in Iraq with Elise pregnant with their first child , Devon becomes a father figure to the newborn, Emily, but he is not used to caring for anyone but himself and Emily is nearly killed (drown? Something?) under his watchful eye. When Elise is diagnosed with terminal cancer, Devon begins questioning the purpose of his futile life once again, and finds the answer in the fatherly love he has for Emily.

Excerpt: The Man in Me

(From Chapter 7)

I made it across the street, and entered the woods. It was like stepping into another world. A world, at least to my young eyes, untamed. A narrow path had been beaten and furrowed where decades of neighborhood kids had explored, rode their bikes, and played tag. The world dimmed beneath the canopy of trees, but the sunlight painted flecks of its glory on the leaves of trees and danced on the fluttering wings of dragonflies. It smelled of rainwater and decaying dead leaves on the ground and blooming wild flower and little red berries we were told not to eat. We were also told not to enter the woods, but we didn't listen.
The pain eased a little. So I picked up my pace. I heard squirrels and other critters scurry off the path in front of me. When “Stick” Galilee and I first explored the woods, these sounds scared me. I was sure that they came from much dangerous creatures than squirrels and birds and raccoons. Now, I welcomed their noises. The woods in silence were much more troublesome.
I reached the ditch much quicker than I expected. It seemed to have widened since I'd last seen it. It's dark water looked like coffee faded to the color of tea at the banks. A greenish foam floated on top clinging to drifting tree limbs and Styrofoam fast food cartons. It was possible that the ditch could be forded simply by wading across, but none of us kids ever tried it. Nobody knew how deep it was or what lurked beneath it's dark and nasty surface.

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