Genre: Fantasy
About darkwolf58Location: Minneapolis, MN Home Region: Age:27 Favorite novels: Call of the Wild, The Gunslinger, The Jungle Book, and the Lovecraft story "The Dream Quest of Unknown Kadath" Favorite writers: Neil Gaiman, H.P Lovecraft, Stephen King, Carrie Vaughn, Richard Matheson Favorite music: Rock |
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Synopsis: Of Shadows and Flame
The weight of responsibility. The fires of rage. Two lives with one destiny.
Death is missing, and his son Zane has taken it upon himself to look for him. With the help of his sister Ana and his friend Shadow, they travel through both the mortal world and the land of the dead looking for clues. The best lead they have is word of a demon attacking the village where Death was last seen.
In the mortal world, the half demon Tenai is creating a path of destruction, burning and killing as he searches for the men who murdered his mother. Then he gets a visit from the father he's never seen, who is very encouraging.
Excerpt: Of Shadows and Flame
“So, how did it go?” Mom asked as soon as she opened the door.
Yep, here we go, Zane thought. “Okay, I guess.”
“You guess?” She looked from him to the tall figure of Death. “What happened?”
“I had him sever the tie and he missed the first time.”
“Well that’s nothing.” She stepped aside to let them in. “Don’t worry about it, Zane.”
“I know. I’m trying.” He stepped past her and walked into the house.
She laughed lightly and held her hand out. “Here, let me hang up your cloak.”
As he was taking off the oversized gray cloak (his mom kept asking if she wanted her to tailor it, but he kept insisting that it was fine), his sister bounded down the stairs. “Hey, Zane! Did you have a good day?”
He shrugged. “Not too bad, I guess.”
She looked at his face and frowned. “Oh. Did something go wrong?”
Zane sighed and started to explain before his parents could. “I tried to sever the tie and missed the first time.”
“But you _did_ do it?”
“Yes.”
“Then what are you upset about? Dad let you use your scythe on the first day. That is sooo awesome!”
It was hard to stay sulky around his younger sister. A genuine smile touched his lips. “Yeah, it was pretty cool.” He hadn’t expected Dad to let him do anything on his first day, let alone something so important.
“I’ll have dinner out in about five minutes. Go wash up,” Mom said.
Ana followed him into the bathroom. “So what was it like?”
“A little privacy, please? I need to use the toilet.” He shooed his sister out and closed the door.
“Did any of the people want to know who you were?” Ana asked through the door.
“Shut up! It’s hard to pee with you talking to me.” He heard his sister’s exaggerated sigh and waited a few seconds to make sure she wasn’t going to keep talking. She started up again when he turned on the sink.
“Did Dad take you to any accidents? Did you see anything gross?”
“Don’t be morbid,” he said over the water. He finished washing his hands and opened the door.
“What? We’re Reapers. We sort of _have_ to be morbid.”
Zane rolled his eyes. “Have a little respect for the dead.”
(and a scene with Tenai, aka The Fire Kid, for your reading pleasure)
The young man, not much more than a boy, walked down the main street of the village. Behind him, everything was in flames. Ahead of him, people fled, some of them screaming. At each house and building he came to, the young man raised his arms and shot flames out, standing in front of it until the structure was engulfed. Then he moved on to the next one. He gave almost no thought to the possibility of people still being inside the buildings. The smart ones had already fled. When he came across a man he recognized as one who had been at his house that night, he burned him as well.
Tenai hadn't come across any in the last several minutes. The men had run much faster than the women and children.
A stumbling, crying woman clutched her child's hand as she ran across Tenai's path. She tripped, over something in the street or over her own two feet. As she struggled to rise, she turned to shield her child from Tenai's approach. “Please ...” she begged when Tenai was only a few feet away. For a moment, the rage in his eyes faltered. He made a wide circle around the pair, leaving them clutching each other in the dusty road.
The rage rose back up in him, like fire caught on a fresh log. This village would burn. By tomorrow it would be nothing but charred timbers and ash. And the men that had fled wouldn't get far. Tenai would follow them, to the ends of the earth if he needed to. Every last one of them would die.
(the card game scene, for the folks at The Loft)
After a while he went below decks again. Shadow had found a deck of cards somewhere and she was playing with Ana. After he watched them for a few seconds, he realized that they were also playing with Tenai. He was still tied up, but Ana would hold his cards up to him whenever it was his turn. The demon would frown at the cards for a few seconds and then call out which one he wanted to play. Zane stood watching for a few seconds before Shadow noticed him. “Hello, Zane! Would you like to get in on the next game?”
The way Tenai glowered at him made the decision for him. “Okay.”
“Then I'm out,” Tenai said.
“Oh, come on!” Ana said. “Are you afraid he'll beat you?”
“No!” he growled.
“Well, then keep playing.” Ana smiled. “Besides, I'm winning anyway. I'll probably win both times.”
“I've never played this stupid game before. I haven't had time to get used to it,” Tenai complained.
“All the more reason for you to play the next game,” Ana said.
Zane caught Shadow trying to hide a smile. He sat down between Ana and Shadow, which put him across from Tenai. “So, what are we playing for?”
“Bragging rights.” Ana shrugged.
“I suppose that's good enough.”
“You'll have to wait a few more minutes. You can watch me kick both their butts.” Ana grinned.
“I better not catch you cheating and looking at my cards,” Tenai said.
“I don't have to cheat. I'm just that good.”
“Gods, is she always like this?” Tenai asked. “How has no one killed her yet?”
Zane was ready to yell at him for making such a horrible comment, but Ana threw her head back and laughed. “I think Zane has been tempted a few times.” She winked at him.
A slow smile spread across his face. “Yeah, but then I'd still have to deal with her. She'd probably haunt me.”
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