brionyjae wrote:Include the line "I jammed it in so hard, it got stuck in the bone. Do you know how hard it is to pull a knife out of bone?" BP if it's human bone DBP if the human can hear this line spoken TBP if the line is said TO the victim
This will work great. I can totally see my FMC saying this to her ultra-squeamish assistant about one of her own injuries.
Re: Dares 2011!
This will work great. I can totally see my FMC saying this to her ultra-squeamish assistant about one of her own injuries.
Re: Dares 2011!
I did it! My FMC was comparing scars with her soldier lover as part of a word count boosting 1,000 word scene!