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30 Covers, 30 Days 2011: Day 25

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Tim Kim
50252 words so far Winner!

Today's cover was created in 24 hours by the ingenious Jamie Keenan:



Lancer's War
by Tom Martin (Tom Martin is the author's username. His name requested for his cover was Tom Olivier-Martin).

No one can predict the future.

There was no apocalypse that ravaged the planet, no global disaster. The near collapse of humanity came from the apathy and depravity that has always defined us. The last megacorporations are now pivotal to humanity's survival, specializing in resource recycling, agriculture and energy, the secrets of which are highly coveted and incredibly well guarded. It would seem that war would be inevitable, but a new sort of global conflict has arisen.

Enter the Lancers, mercenaries that pilot massive cyborgs, sponsored by governments and private organizations. They fight for the access rights to the megacorporation's resources, dueling in gladiatorial-style combat, at once both a source of great entertainment for the masses and the only hope some countries have of re-emerging from this new age of poverty.

Ethan and Chloe are up-and-coming Lancers, orphaned twins that were raised and bred to be the best. All seems well in their world until they meet Rana, a secretive and anti-social girl that might just be the best Lancer anyone has ever seen, but whose true nature might tear them apart. And even as they struggle to consolidate their differences, the war of the Lancers will take its toll and cost them more than they could ever imagine.

Will they survive the true price of being a Lancer, or will it destroy them, like it has so many others before?

No one can predict the future.




Jamie Keenan lives in England and designs book covers.

britthatsit
51414 words so far Winner!

I want to read this. Well done (both cover and synopsis) ^_^

Lilia Sparks
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Really busy, but once you see the title, you're like OHHH

DeepEnder44
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I LOVE THIS
....very very very clever
Only I couldn't find the title..but that dosen't matter, it attracts readers immediatley!

cleobourne
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Do you think the major companies might get a little edgy seeing thier logos on a book cover like this? Don't get me wrong, the execution of the style is astoundingly clever, but, I had a very very hard time looking for the name of the author who I thought might have been Oliver, or that might have been the name of the book, I had to scroll down to work it out.

lycaenide
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Very clever. The synopsis sounds great too.
But I'm a little confused as to why the name Oliver is there. Maybe I'm missing something...

arrawyn
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LOve this cover! very different and clever. love all the different logos but what other people have said - it's hard to figure out the author's name ( and title)

JEMMYTEE
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Sorry, but this one's too confusing to me. I like the concept, but you have to already know the title in order to find it.

As an off-note, I find it interesting that the vast majority of synopses chosen for cover art are fantasy-oriented. Was that a deliberate meme?

akaaliza
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I feel like most nanos are fantasy/ sci-fi, lol.

As for the cover, I'm not feeling it. :/ Looks like an expose at first glance, and not in a good way.

Lorata
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Yeah, just look at the number of novels/authors on the site and you'll see it skews high toward the speculative fiction end. It's just numbers.

Lady_Indis_Dress
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Don't like this one. Too difficult to pick out the title and author name from the noise of other things.

Auld Soul
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After my eyes stopped darting all over the cover, they still couldn't pick out the title or the author. Finding out these vitally important things from the synopsis still didn't help. Also, it seems that Olivier is just as important as the other words on the cover.

If I were Tom Martin, I'd be very disappointed but probably too polite to comment negatively.

The synopsis is good, but I wouldn't pick up the book to read it based on this cover.

Hautegeisha
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....really?

dolphinherovamp5
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:-/ Honestly, not my favorite cover. Can I be honest? I liked the covers from last year better. They just were. But all the synopses have been amazing. One of the things that bugs me though is that last year, if you wanted to be even considered, you had to try and keep up with the daily word count and such. This year some of them haven't and that makes me wonder if just having a synopsis is the only thing that's important instead of ACTUALLY writing it. I mean, you can see the effort and I know people have busy lives, but really, I prefer the method they had last year.
But anyways, here is what I think of the synopsis. Tom Olivier-Martin, it is excellent. It's not vague, flows, and sounds like it'd be an amazing book to read. I hope to see it in a Barnes and Noble store in the future. :)

deadkanon
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This is my first year doing NaNo, so I may be speaking out of line, but I don't think 38k is too bad of a word count (and I'm not trying to justify my pitiful 30k here :x). From what I've seen around the forums, there are quite a few people who rely on weekends or days off to do some catching up, and I feel like as long as authors get in their 50k before the first of December this shouldn't be too much of a problem. I personally prefer to sit and clack at my keyboard for hours without moving, and find shorter daily writing sessions wholly distracting (I'm also a junkie for near-deadline adrenaline rushes). It's not a very good habit, but that's how I work best. As I've said, though, this is my first year, and if there was some sort of tradition in previous years that only writers who could keep up with the daily word count would get covers, I respectfully and apologetically retract everything I've said.

Slight off-topic ramble aside, I actually really liked this cover. It might be that I'm partial to typography and logos, but I thought the idea for the cover was very clever. I would absolutely pick up this book if I saw it in a store.

dolphinherovamp5
54059 words so far Winner!

Well, last year was the first time they ever done 30 Covers, 30 Days and they had said then that you are more likely to get one if you do the daily word count goal. For some reason they changed it up this year and it kind of upsets me. Also, I agree that 38k (even 30k) isn't bad, especially for your first year. Trust me. In my first year, I started out with one story, got to 4k, switched to a different story three weeks in, and managed about 6k. It was a terrible word count and has helped me learn more about commitment.
But yeah. A couple days I looked at the profile of basically every person that has received a cover this year (not only am I a compulsive word count updater, but I also look at random profiles to compare word counts) and there were a few that disappointed me for being under 25k. I mean, they've probably improved by now, but it still upsets me because many people have been nominated and worked their butts off to get this wonderful opportunity.
No need to retract anything. It's best to speak your mind, or at least that's what I think. XD Plus, you made some really good points. :)

RoboPhantom
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I love the sound of the book, but I'm not feeling the cover. As many have already said, it's too busy and too difficult to pick out the vitally important title and author's name. I finally got tired of it and just scrolled down to see what it was.

That said, I might pick it up just to find out what on earth such a busy cover was for, so it would get it's job done at the very least.

WriterGirl11
50082 words so far Winner!

synopsis=amazing. Cover= a little bit confusing, but still eye-catching. I would definitely read this, and hope to read it soon!

Anahlynn
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The cover is really good and I can't wait for it to be published, but the cover is less than spectacular. Yet another cover that is confusing and hard to understand. The only way you would know what the title was is if you knew before hand. I agree with dolphinherovamp5. The covers from last year were much better.

Anahlynn
56995 words so far Winner!

Whoops. Meant the synopsis is really good, not the cover.

HeraldMage
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I feel like I'm the only one who immediately saw the title and author's name before scrolling down xD (okay I thought his name was just Tom Olivier). It just popped out at me, since Lancer's War seem to be the only two words that followed one another and made sense, and I figured the author's name would be right under it, or close by. I think it'd help if the title and his name were used in the same font/coloring.

Anyway, I do agree that it's congested and kinda just looks like some sort of traveling guide. Or maybe like a kid's collage project o.o

Lorata
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Apparently I'm not American-consumer-culture-savvy enough to realise those were logos; even after being told, I recognised the one that's a credit card (Mastercard?) but that's it. So whoops. But I'm definitely an outlier in this case.

Other than that, though ... ehhhhhhh. I have no idea what the title or the author's name is, and even when I looked down to see, I still can't find any instances of the words coming together in a meaningful way, so. I'd pick it up in a store just because I was like "wtf is this??" and check the spine for the relevant information, but whether I end up picking it up and opening it is another matter.

The synopsis, on the other hand, sounds fantastic. Not sure if I'd read it, because (as I said on another cover, actually) I'm depressed enough by real life that I'm sort of shying away from dystopia lately, but that's not a comment on the synopsis.

Lorata
115409 words so far Winner!

Just by the by, I went to the artist's webpage and absolutely adored the covers I saw there, so ...... off-day? It was done in 24 hours after all.

Auld Soul
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After reading the post of the person above, I also went to the artist's webpage. The covers are awesome and I really enjoyed looking at them.

arrawyn
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Now that the original post has been amended with the author's full name, the Olivier makes TONS more sense (i was really confused about it originally!) but now i can immediately make out the authors name and title ... but you do have to know his name first lol

his name really stands out though once you know what to look for! i'm assuming the 'main' name is the Tom in the grey circle, the green italicized Olivier and then purple Martin surrounded by dashes.

i love the tiny 'a novel' in the top right hand corner as the amazon logo!

sarahlucielle
50854 words so far Winner!

I'd agree with a lot of people here and say it is really hard just by looking at it to find the title and author. I get what he's trying to do with all the logos of the corporations, but something should stand out the most and be obvious as the title and author.

Eyes of Fire
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I agree.

ZeroDraftingGenius
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I want to like the over-the-top use of corporate iconography for this cover — but, like others who commented before me, I found it impossible to single out LANCER'S WAR and TOM OLIVIER-MARTIN from the jumble without reading the note and synopsis below.

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