30 Covers, 30 Days 2011: Day 27 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306 Tim Kim Today's cover was created in 24 hours by the dynamic duo known as Zut Alors!: <img src="http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lvchfiE2N21r0x68m.jpg"><strong> On the Breath of Rita</strong> by <a href="http://nanowrimo.org/en/participants/figsandthistles" rel="nofollow">figsandthistles</a> 29-year-old Rita has long admired Matthew, the bike messenger who picks up her envelopes at the office to courier them to downtown courthouses. But one day Matthew arrives solemn and concerned. She asks him a question that will carry her into the heart of his strange life, and in the days that follow, into a strange universe filled with muses and half-humans in the middle of a war, for which Matthew is of the utmost importance.  Rita has to decide if she will stay with Matthew and risk becoming a part of this universe in which her human breath is valued for the power it contains to bring things to life, or turn away from the battle with the elements in this realm that are slowly taking over her mind. <strong>Zut Alors! </strong>is: Creative Direction, Art Direction, Graphic Design, Copywriting, Illustration, Ideation, Print, Web, Exhibition, Motion, Tek Pack, Art, Architecture, Fashion, Culture, Industry, Bloomberg View, Christie’s, Creative Time, Definitive Jux, Good Magazine, Morrison &amp; Foerster, The New York Observer, The New York Photo Festival, The New York Times, Pratt Institute, Siegel + Gale, Socrates Sculpture Park, Yale University&lt;!-- more --&gt; Say hello: <a href="http://zutalorsinc.com/z.php" rel="nofollow">http://zutalorsinc.com/z.php</a> Sun, 27 Nov 2011 19:35:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_867889 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_867889 OceanWater First comment! Lovely! Sun, 27 Nov 2011 19:36:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_867893 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_867893 A. E. Killingsworth I would put this on the top of my to-be-read pile! I absolutely love the synopsis, and the cover is fantastic as well. I hope the author finishes and gets this published. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 19:38:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_867922 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_867922 cleobourne holy moly! This has just been placed on my top 3 favorite books Sun, 27 Nov 2011 19:51:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868073 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868073 She Who Writes The synopsis is enticing, and the cover is very pretty! Nice job, Zut Alors! Sun, 27 Nov 2011 19:57:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868139 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868139 jefflion I think this is an excellent cover. The synopsis is good, too, but the cover would definitely make me pick up this book. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 20:05:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868225 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868225 kimar2z This may be one of my favourite book covers/synopsis's by far... great job, both to the writer and the cover artist! Sun, 27 Nov 2011 20:10:51 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868299 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868299 arrawyn i absolutely love this! this is one of my top faves from this years Nano covers!!! fantastic story and fantastic cover! i would so read this! (and would HAVE to pick up the book if i saw it in the store!) Sun, 27 Nov 2011 20:14:01 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868349 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868349 Lady_Indis_Dress I don't really like this cover. I would pass it by, which is a shame because the synopsis is good. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 20:35:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868626 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868626 Minastauriel I love the cover (anatomy student here!!) :) But the synopsis is vague and rather boring. Sorry. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 23:14:32 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_870360 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_870360 cloister I'm kind of with Lady_Indis on this, but for different reasons. The cover is very precise. Very anatomical. Very analytical. The synopsis is mysterious, moody, and emotional. The cover is cold, while the synopsis is warm. The cover says "literary," while the synopsis says "fantasy." It's a nice piece of illustration in and of itself, and I get the obvious connection between the image and the story, but I can't say it fits the feel of the book at all. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 23:19:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_870407 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_870407 Hadiyah Jacqueline Oh wow! How do people get all of these great ideas? I love the synopsis but I'm not too keen on the cover. If this author would get this book published I would definitely read it based on the synopsis. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 23:45:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_870722 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_870722 Chillibean I personally love the cover :) Though the synopsis... I think it lacks information, so it doesn't draw me in. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 00:52:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_871480 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_871480 britthatsit I love the synopsis and the cover suits it nicely :) I would read this. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 06:02:39 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_873155 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_873155 Auld Soul I definitely do not like the trachea on this cover. Is Brandi Brandewie the author? And, if so, why is she connected to the lungs? I would have put Rita's there, not joined the title to the trachea, and put the author's name under the title. I like the synopsis and would be interested in reading the novel, but as the cover looks medical I'd probably not pick it up. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 07:16:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_873419 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_873419 Chestergirl28 Oooh! Creepy and awesome cover! The synopsis is pretty eerie, I think. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 07:55:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_873607 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_873607 ThirteenthWind "Matthew" seems like a really random thing to have added to the cover. I would have expected "A novel" or something. I understand it's part of the synopsis...but still. Fixing up the Anatomy Textbook look by announcing it's a novel, not actually non-fiction/medical text might have helped. Interesting though. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 09:20:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_874058 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_874058 figsandthistles That's me! I was so excited when I found this on the site I could hardly sleep. =) What an awesome way to start the week. I think the cover is SO COOL and will do my best to make sure the final draft of this novel (my first!) is on par with it. Thanks everyone for the feedback on the synopsis. Thank you!!!! Brandi Mon, 28 Nov 2011 12:36:06 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_875516 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_875516 42Gears Very nice cover, and a pretty interesting synopsis. I'm not sure if I'd read it, but that's more because the genre isn't really one I read often rather than any actual flaw. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 12:50:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_875663 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_875663 lycaenide This cover is beautiful! Mon, 28 Nov 2011 15:13:05 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_877052 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_877052 grenouille I adore this cover! Mon, 28 Nov 2011 18:26:58 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_879320 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_879320 sonshinemusic I like this one. I think it fits the idea well with the idea of breath being almost a commodity. Interesting idea and cover :) Mon, 28 Nov 2011 20:09:25 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=2#forum_thread_comment_880596 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=2#forum_thread_comment_880596 ZeroDraftingGenius this ^ Mon, 28 Nov 2011 20:14:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_880669 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=1#forum_thread_comment_880669 GeeBlaise I love this synopsis! I would definitely read this. Fri, 02 Dec 2011 10:05:26 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=2#forum_thread_comment_922353 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/30-covers-30-days/threads/44306?page=2#forum_thread_comment_922353