My MC is Theo, a college student who was born with superpowers. He's been keeping them secret all his life, but he also wants to use his powers for good. He dons a mask and becomes the campus protector, roaming the grounds at night and helping people out of trouble. The only one who knows his secret is his best friend and roommate Prue. Through a long and complicated series of events, Theo comes into contact with Quinn, an enigmatic billionaire who specialises in finding superpowered individuals and organising them. Suddenly, Theo's life is full of conspiracy theories and mysterious people in government cars and he's about to find out more about his past than he ever wanted to know.
My main issue right now is that I lack a good villain...
So, what are you writing about and what problems are you facing?
I may write the third in my superhero diary series this year, but haven't quite decided yet. My current problem is that I know exactly the shape of a particular plot point, but it's taking a bugger of an age to figure out the best way for everything to happen. (I am telling myself that this isn't outlining, it's still just notes; this may be a lie.)
I'm not writing it for NaNo, but I have an on hold superhero project. It's about two battling groups of supers and a lot of secrets (I know, I'm terrible at describing story plots).
Lots and lots of superheroes in my novel; I'm kind of having fun with the fact that the main character's power is basically to be a human boggart (didn't think of that particular description until I'd already thought her up), which isn't really a very typical hero power.
I'm writing a superhero novel this year! Though he has no superpowers, he just has a love for comic books and a friend who made awesome gadgets.
My main problem will be coming up with gadgets. I'm hoping I will invent them the moment I need them, but I kinda doubt it. It took me weeks to decide what superpower he has (or rather that he doesn't have any). Second problem might be him taking over the novel. Because the whole thing is written from the point of his biggest fan who will be at his side for a while. For now all scenes in my head are only with the hero. I already love him way too much. I admit, I have a thing for broken characters - Cox, House, the Doctor... meow.
I continue to write superhero fiction for Nanowrimo. This time around I will focus my attention on a new team of 4 genetically engineered heroes as they first step in to the world. I have some fun things slowly developing in it.
My superhero novel is set in modern times with a woman superhero with bug powers. She has the strength to lift over ten times her own weight (like an ant) and jump great distances (like a grasshopper) and even has her own stinger. But enough about her powers, what I really want to focus on in this novel is the romantic interest with an average fellow. It's gonna be in his pov.
I'm afraid I don't think I am explaining this very well.
Whoo! Superheros are awesome. My super villain is my protagonist, actually. He's sarcastic and very proper. I'm fond of him. He needs a name... Welp. Well, I guess it'll get there somehow. I'm excited to see how everyone else's plots develop! It's always quite the adventure.
Yep, I'm probably going to write a superhero novel. Try to anyway.
It takes place about a year after a group of people were kidnapped, tortured, and given super powers. Most of them will be come villains (is that believable?). They were freed (it's complicated to explain). The guy responsible (Aiken) is now collecting things to make himself more powerful and to create his own dystopian playground. A superhero with blood manipulation, an eccentric engineer (mad scientist), a colourful girl who likes explosives, and a roguish guy who can manipulate gravity go to stop him. Then there's a huge plot hole that I hope to fill with action and adventure and exciting things. At some point, they'll find out that one of them is a spy. It will also be revealed that some of Aiken's "followers" were manipulating him (they will stab in the back, figuratively speaking) and that his evil genius/mad scientist is the real Big Bad (Silas). Then there's another huge plot hole while they go after Silas. Then I am confused about how it ends. Wow I need to figure out what goes in those plot holes.
Yay! I love villain protagonists! I also like heroes with gadgets. :)
I like the sound of this. Whether or not it's believable they become villains depends on the character's original personality. I know they've been tortured and that messes a person up, but once they're free it'll be just them and their conscience (or lack of it, as the case may be).
What confuses me (and maybe I'm being an idiot here, I often am haha) is... what happens to the original group tortured and then freed to become evil? I understand that's the backstory, but from the rest of your plot I can't see where they reappear again. Are they Big Bad Aiken's 'followers' who are found manipulating him, or are those 'followers' completely different people? Are they going to pop up as villains the four MCs take down one by one, uncovering the truth of what happened along the way?
I like the sound of your MCs though. Four band man is always a good choice - and they sound so much fun to write with. Especially the guy who can manipulate gravity. That would be so much fun (I BELIEVE I CAN FLY ~).
The blood manipulating guy becomes a hero, his uber powerful sister becomes the Big Good, the guy who can manipulate gravity starts out with the hero, but he's complicated, a woman who can teleport and a guy who can manipulate plants work for Aiken (they don't know who is responsible for torturing them yet), and another might show up as one of Aiken's followers (she's complicated). The others won't show up yet, but they will in another story. The real Big Bad and his followers are (mostly) people without superpowers. Thanks. :) I really like the gravity guy too.
Oh I forgot to mention, unfortunately, this plot is frustrating me to the point where I despise it, so unless I can figure things out, I'm dropping it rather than torment myself in november.
I've got a superhero novel in the works. It's centered around a high school girl who discovers she has superpowers and follows her as she masters them and helps to lock away a supervillain who threatens the safety of superheroes and their families everywhere. My biggest worry that it might be to much on the light side and will lack some of the seriousness that typically follows some of the more mature superhero stories.
Don't worry about whether or not it is serious or not. Back in the introduction of superheroes, many were light-hearted and fun. I mean, look at the first batman series, it only has been since the 90s and beyond have superheroes have grown darker and more serious.
Also, this is nanowrimo, it's gonna be a little bit silly, even if you are trying for a serious novel. Trust me, I've tried.
Flight, the ability to create shields and engery lasers(I need to find a better term for it). She also has some martial arts training.
Also as a side note I completely agree with roping El Zorro into the superhero category. I think the writers of Batman took a lot of their ideas from Johnston McCulley's original stories. The two share many similiarities.
I'm pretty sure they've admitted outright that Zorro was one of the inspirations for Batman. I kind of like Zorro a little better at the moment because a] I'm on a bit of a kick (*blush*) and b] there are a number of episodes of Disney's Zorro at least where Zorro doesn't win. I don't remember too many where he outright looses, but there's one where he only manages to fight the Comandante to a draw, and at least two where he spends most of the episode stealing Tornado back from whoever stole him from Zorro.
So, yeah. I guess I like that he's not one of those "with prep time" sorts. He's beatable, therefore he's more...accessible? Fun? Swashbuckley? Something like that. :)
Photokinetic, hmm, I like the sound of that. I might have do a bit of research on that to see if she fits the classification or if I can tweak my world's science laws haha.
I'm a big fan of superhero stories that are more lighthearted - Bryan Q. Miller's recent Batgirl run was, IMO, one of the best comic stories of recent times, and while it had its serious moments it was definitely lighthearted and hopeful.
While I think there's a lot of angst and darkness to be mined from superhero stories, I think the idea of people who use remarkable abilities to help people has a lot of potential to be hopeful and joyful.
I agree with Psychickid and Kaldaka - don't worry about how light-hearted your story might be. Superhero stories have the potential to go a variety of ways, but none of them are wrong. It all depends on your audience. Who would you like to read the book? Whether or not anyone will read it, knowing what age range you write for will help.
Personally, I prefer light superhero stories. The dark, brooding protagonist who agonises over keeping his identity secret and losing friends because of those secrets gets dull and repetitive and is just plain depressing, especially when the basic plot is: guy saves the world. I understand it might be more realistic, but I think there's something wrong if the world is saved and everyone, the audience especially, is left unhappy (because the character they fell in love with along the way didn't get a happy ending, etc).
If worst does come to worst though, and at the end of it you still think 'this is way too light', just make it a children's story. There's always gonna be new kids to educate in the art of superheroes and villains.
Mine is about the dawn of superpowered people on Earth, and the subsequent confusion, panic, and path to heroism of one girl who's been chosen to wield huge amounts of power and ensure balance is kept.
I don't know what she's going to pick as a codename yet, but considering that she'll be picking it with her trigger-happy nonpowered-but-determined-to-help best friend and a nerdy powered teenager, they will probably all have ridiculous names. :P
This sounds neat. Is it set in the modern day, or is it set in a previous time period (Victorian age, maybe?). "The dawn of superpowered people on Earth" is a very intriguing phrase, and I'd be interested in seeing what it implies in your story.
I'm writing a superhero plot. Except it's more a parody of your regular superhero plot, but it still counts! I don't have any names set out yet, but I have a general gist of the plot (humour galore, I do believe). I've always been absolutely terrible with naming - I'll probably be wandering in and out of the adoption area a lot, ahaha.
As for superpowers... well, one of my MCs doesn't have any (but everyone is convinced she does). The rest are just your run-of-the-mill powers - strength, speed, intelligence, eating one hundred hamburgers in the space of a minute...
Her parents and brothers did, so obviously she must have them too. Her parents are FAMOUS superheros, like the best of the best, and her brothers are super good, so it's impossible for anyone to think their offspring isn't. They just think she's being modest or wants to keep it as a surprise. I'm going to have a lot of fun writing her frustration bahaha.
Have you read PS238? It's a comic about a school for super-powered children, and one of the kids is the son of two of the most famous and powerful heroes on the planet, so even though he has tested negative for every known power and has shown no indications of developing powers at all, his parents assume that he will and keep throwing him into dangerous situations hoping for them to spontaenously manifest. If you haven't read it, I'd definitely reccomend it, as it's a lot of fun (and available for free online!).
One of my plots I'm juggling with this year has do with superheroes. More like a team of non-powered heroes, they're all kind of mentally unbalanced, but in different ways. Anyways, scratch 'hero' and put 'vigilante' on there. The only 'villain' in the plot would be either a gang that they managed to upset or the police.
Catch is... the team members all work in the same office as their day job.
Joining, since my most stuck -on-my-brain idea that isn't a Criminal Minds fanfic is about a Superman-esque hero, if Superman had come to Earth as an adult soldier instead of an infant, with a biomechanical cavalry beast.
His name on Earth is Nick de Comte, but he's not anywhere near the kind of powers as Superman. Most of Nick's capability as a hero comes from Destroyer, his beast and partner, and alien armor and infantry weaponry. I know there'll be a conversation in the story with him complaining about unrealistic Superman is compared to what all the alien species he knows are really like, since in his world the Kryptonians would have invaded Earth because they have superpowers here and annihilated the Human race.
I chose an initial genre of Sci-Fi, might change it to Adventure based on how the story develops. What genres did everybody else put?
This is my first NaNoWriMo, and I'll be donning the spandex mantle and writing what is, hopefully, a tight superhero yarn.
My story takes place in the not-too-distant future, after an event called the Power Surge, wherein overnight every man, woman and child on Earth was suddenly granted a superpower, by means as yet unknown to them. Sudden chaos erupted as, across the globe, men and women now granted with miraculous power began committing crimes, waging wars, forming vigilante groups, fighting against former governments, and letting the darker side of their natures, brought to light by their powers, emerge. Nine years later, parts of the world have gained some semblance of order. In America and other former first-world nations, local city governments have been able to organize militias of the most powerful Talents [the term in my universe for superheroes] available, and uneasy peace is restored.
Top among the Talented is Carroll, a psychic with the power to project his consciousness into any organic structure. Working as a "Talent Scout" (read: detective) for Chicago's elite Superhuman Intelligence Force, he is tasked with scouting out potential threats to the reestablished civil order.
Sent on a routine scout mission into a power plant hijacked by third-rate "supervillains," Carroll arrives to find the threat terminated, and the would-be terrorists horrifically murdered. What's more, among their mangled ranks he finds a corpse which looks identical to his own, living body.
From here the story will spiral into a whirlwind of intrigue, mystery, and superpowered goodness as Carroll searches to uncover the mysteries behind this and other mysterious incidents around the globe. Readers who stick with me will be led through Cambodian jungles filled with living tree-men superheroes, under the ocean to the abode of a subterranean race of squid people, and to space itself as Carroll matches wits with an enigmatic murderer known only as "The Sun King." Through it all, he will search for the secret to saving humanity from an impending evil, and discover the cause of the mysterious Power Surge which has so affected and afflicted the world.
* * * Thus far I have a really solid working knowledge of how want the plot to go, I know how I want the mystery to work out, I know what I want the villains to be like and what powers they should have, and I have a good grasp of Carroll's character and the personalities of the other main characters. What I'm having trouble with is thinking up really unique powers and Talent names for some of the minor characters. I want to make the distribution of superpowers really random, where some people have Superman-like ultra abilities, whereas others have really stupid or useless powers, like being able to convert any solid object into mayonnaise or something. Finding clever powers for background characters is giving me some trouble.
That sounds awesome and groovy. I would love to read it when you finish it. Good luck!
Some stupid powers, eh? Well how about someone who can change the temperature of objects, meaning that he can boil water or keep it icy cold, or heat up leftovers, but he has to be touching the object.
Or a real super power that vaguely exists, they can see numbers in colors. I think it's called synthesism or something like that. It's a strange thing where numbers, letters, or emotions are seen as colors, and I am not meaning seeing auras. Like when a person looks at the number one on a piece of paper, it shows up as a color. It's a bit difficult to explain and I could be doing a terrible job at it.
The wanted to include a younger male child with superpowers at one point in the story, and I think I'll attach the temperature change power to him. Unless you object, I think I'll have him have "Psychic Kid" as his Talent show name, both as tribute to you for thinking up the idea, and because I had not yet thought up what to call him other than his Muggle name (Marcus).
I'm planning on trying my hand at a superhero story this year.
The basic idea is that the world knows about people with superpowers, and there re two major rival colleges that teach people with powers how to use them. One is for Heroes and the other for Villains. My MC wants to be a good guy, but he pretty much stinks at being good. So he's going to the Villain college on scholarship. It's pretty much his college life, falling in love, trying to pass Into to Mad Science, and dealing with being given an arch-enemy that should have probably been a Villain.
I really like this. It's got sort of a Sky High meets Megamind sound to it, plotwise, and some glorious internally-conflicted sounding bits to it characterwise.
Sky High was very much an influence on the original idea I had many years ago. Though I'm hoping to capture the idea in a new way. And I hadn't even thought of Megamind, but yes. Similar in that too. Glad you like the idea! :)
Looking for some support here, am I the only one who can come up with the hero's real name, his entire circle, his backstory, and yet suck donkey at inventing his enemies and choosing a public name for his heroing?
Nick's original concept has his heroing identity as the "Night Stalker." I kinda sorta don't like it, but I have a tendency to suck at coming up with supernames at times. Hit some generators and the only real good option I got was "Xenoclad" almost everything else was in something-person format I definitely didn't want. Opinions?
What are your superhero's powers? How did he get them? Maybe if you share a bit of him, we can help better to find a name.
Also this might help you: http://www.superheronation.com/2007/10/15/character-naming-superheroes-and-otherwise/ They have some awesome resources for writing superheroes, powers, etc.
In terms of your character you mentioned above, Nick de Comte, based on what you've mentioned thus far, I think it could go one of several different ways, all of which are contingent upon his personality and personal style. As a "Superman-esque" superhero (which I presume means he dedicates himself to selflessly saving others) reliant mainly on his mount and his technology, it would make sense for his superhero name to reference one of the three elements of being a savior, using advanced technology, or having access to a cool-sounding ally called Destroyer. Thus, various possibilities arise when you consider whether Nick is the type of person who is:
1) Really intelligent or serious. If intelligence is his main personality focus, it would make sense to play off the technology angle (since that, more than the other two angles, would lend itself to some more highfalutin' words). For instance, as both an alien and a technologist, he could call himself Xenotech, linguistically connoting his foreignness and his use of technology. However, if you wanted to promote one of the other angles, he could call himself something like Shiva (the Hindu deity personifying destruction, which would play on Destroyer's name). 2) Sardonic or humorous. If he is down to earth and funny, he could choose a fun, funny or silly name, such as something like Sputnick (to play off his technology focus and the fact that he's not from this world) or Comte Anansi (as a play on Compe Anansi, the mischievous and funny spider god, with "Compe" roughly translating to "companion" or "comrade," referencing the fact that he's always with his comrade Destroyer). 3) Normal or a Boy Scout/goody-two-shoes. Honestly, the only type of names coming to me for this category are the ones that end in "man," so either I'm just not being very clever or this might be the hardest personality facet to name-cover without falling into the traditional "man" names.
Anyway, hopefully some of that helps you out in some way. I look forward to seeing what you do with Nick and Destroyer!
He's not quite as selfless as Superman, I'm mainly taking the backstory and tweaking it, and how that would change the circumstances of the hero, like the fact that INS and ICE are going to be a problem for him since his human identity is a little bit fuzzy on legalities like paperwork, since he got here as an adult. Though he eventually lands a job as a wealthy businesswoman's personal assistant.
Nick is going to start out pretty serious and get less so as he adapts to Earth, but he sees humans with a sort of superior amusement that he generally hides. At times he's going to be struggling between his duty as a Rishan soldier who is supposed to be reconning Earth for invasion and having gotten to like us backward and naive people. The fact that the rest of his squad died soon after landing and he has no working way to call home help with that.
For powers, he's mostly dependent on the Rishan military technology he came here with; energy-based infantry weapons like rifle and handgun, with additional energy weapons built into his powered armor. Without his hardware, the only advantage he has on humans is breathing nitrogen from the 78% of it in our atmosphere, makes a general strength and stamina advantage. The oxygen in our air is a toxin, but he's adapted to that, breathing before they were adapted killed the other soldiers that landed with him. He's got a decent adaptive ability superpower, really only will come up at the very beginning of the story.
Destroyer is in the size range of something like an elephant, completely armored and can eat anything from plants to meat to junkyard metal, I figure that he'd be engineered that way as part of being a cavalry beast for the tip of the spear.
Superhero comics definitely exist, Nick complains that out in the real galaxy a race like the Kryptonians would simply wipe out humanity and take the planet because they gain superpowers here. He also thinks Independence Day is a stupid movie.
In your stories, are there fictional superheroes as well as real ones? Do people read comic books about Superman and Spiderman? Are you making this a part of the story? Or are you taking the Watchmen road where another genre has taken the place of superhero stories because superheroes exist in the real world?
My MC:s best friend is a massive nerd who loves comic books. I'm planning to use this to lighten up the story with her constantly referencing her fictional heroes to take the edge off the dark and tortured brooding the rest of the characters are so fond of. It's hard to be properly angsty when someone just compared you to Batman and suggested you make your sidekicks wear short shorts and pixie boots. Then again, my heroes aren't the cape-and-spandex type, just people with powers.
My superhero was a massive fan of superhero comics when he was a child. That was what brought him to do it (as he doesn't have any superpower himself). Though I'm not sure how much I will include, as I'm not a superhero comic reader. I usually only know the movies and some of the comics (shame on me).
My MC is rather obsessed with the real superhero,but might also like the comic. Or maybe rather the movies XD
In my world, superpowers have been around for a long time (For example, my MC opens the story by talking about a Roman Gladiator that once ripped seven people in half... superstrength ftw), but for a lot of history they were considered witches/demons/whatever.
After superheros and comics became... well, not mainstream, but at least fairly common, people born with superpowers started going public. Of course, there's also a lot of resentment toward non-supers from some parts of the super community, which is where a lot of the villains come from.
There are comics about fictional superheros (not specific ones, because I don't want this accidentally veering into fanfic territory, which I could see myself doing), but there's also fictionalized accounts of real superheros. Since saving the world from alien invasions and crazed maniacs doesn't exactly draw a salary, a lot of heros license their image and draw income that way.
Also, comics in my world are a lot more mainstream. Since the superheros are real, people treat them a lot like celebrities (hence the secret identities). There are still nerds, of course. Nerds are the ones that read about the fictional superheros.
I could go on (I've spent a lot of time thinking about this), but this post is already long enough that no one's going to bother reading it. XD
My story chronicles the real world (or, my own fictionalized version of the real world) suddenly being cataclysmically changed, wherein all persons are granted some powers. As such, I'm planning on retaining all the normal elements of modern life where they fit into the story. So my universe will technically have superhero comics, but I haven't yet decided whether any of the characters will or will not read them or regularly reference them. I guess that's just something I'll have to wait on the Muses to tell me.
Oh yeah, I would like my story to be kinda like a deconstruction of superhero stories, so there is going to be many references to DC and Marvel heroes. Like Zinnith, I want to use the the knowledge of fictional superheroes as kind of a comic relief. After all, my MC yearns to date a superhero and his roommate warns him, mentioning that most lovers of superheroes get kidnapped and sometimes killed. Fun times.
My story is definitely set in the same world as fictional superheroes. My MC is probably almost guaranteed to make some kind of remark about Wolverine, given the nature of her abilities. (She has super-healing, but unfortunately no metal skeleton, so broken bones definitely slow her down.) I don't think any 'real' superheroes exist in the setting, just people with powers-- and I think most of those are trained for covert ops or villainry instead of heroism.
I'm not doing it for Nano since I already started but I'm doing a rewrite of my first story. It's a young adult superhero/coming of age story about a girl named Haley, a Marvel and DC comic book fan who lives in a world where superpowers exist but are rare, and people do wear tights to commit or stop crimes. Everybody who does this has a secret identity, an important plot point. But nobody calls them "heroes" or "villains," because it sounds too much like fiction. Everybody calls them costumes or capes.
While at the general store in July, Haley nearly gets killed by some lava (long story) but is saved by a costume named Arctana and she decides she wants to be part of the "costume community." Like any superhero story there's some resentment of that part of town. That's the prologue. The rest of the story is set during her school year where her school gets attacked and she realizes someone at her school must be a costume so she tries to solve the mystery. Soon after, she discovers the secret identities of two of her heroic classmates, Clara Fernandez and Patrick . . . something. I'm still deciding. She makes Clara let her help solve the mystery, but along the way she comes to find that things aren't so black and white (even if she technically knew that from reading comics) but that costumes, even the "heroic" types have shades of gray and that powers don't really make the hero.
It's not lame and uninspiring unless you make it that way! As long as you love what you're writing, it'll turn out just fine. ;) I mean, I'm doing a superhero high school plot (I know, gag me, it's been done to death), but I don't care because it's going to be fun to write!
I agree with ClueBadger. No idea is really new, it's the author that brings something different to the table. It's the author who really makes the story. I'm doing a hero in high school story as well, covering her discovery and first big villain. However, I can guarantee that the two will be night and day, they already sound that way. A story is only lame and uninspiring if the writer makes it that way. Be proud of your story and don't ever say it's lame and uninspiring because then it might fall prey to the dreaded GRAVEYARD OF STORIES!!! (ghostly howling oOohh)
Thanks, both of you. I'll keep it in mind. So far despite it being a rewrite I've made major changes and am writing in the first-person present tense, neither of which I write in much, so it's a challenge. But . . . it's FUN. I love writing it. I'm on the fifth chapter and the more I write Haley and her world, the more I love it.
Well I just spend a couple of hours exploring Superhero Nation, and I have some new insights for Nick's character, and I'm trying to make my tech details for his equipment. I'm adding a little problem with fuel cells as a limiter, and difficulty in re-charging and replacing them here on Earth. Which is the primary reason his day job is as the personal assistant for tech millionaire businesswoman Jordan Harris, it gives him access to Harris Industries for equipment.
And I've mentally tweaked his boss Jordan's personality, she's still a hard-charging self-made millionaire businesswoman, but I've thrown some weekend party-hard on top of it. This was inspired by:
Who else has seen the new Avengers movie trailer? Looks like it'll be good, even though God only knows when it'll be at the theater here in Italy.
Has anybody decided who if anyone knows their hero's secret identity if he has one? Jordan will eventually, at first she knows Atlal and about his mission and the Rishan Empire, she won't find out until later that he's also her put-upon personal assistant. I think I can easily do this without forcing Jordan to be stupid, which she definitely isn't.
I think I have to check out Superhero Nation. Looks interesting...
My heores don't have secret identities as such even though most people with superpowers try to keep them secret. The only people who knows about my MC Theo's powers as the novel starts are his mom and his best friend and roommate Prue. I suppose you could say that he does have sort of a secret identity at first, even if it only consists of a black sweatshirt and a ski mask...
(OMG, the Avengers trailer! Steve and Tony butting heads! Hawkeye! I've lost count of how many times I've watched it already! I want it to be May NOW!)
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Who else is writing a superhero novel?
My MC is Theo, a college student who was born with superpowers. He's been keeping them secret all his life, but he also wants to use his powers for good. He dons a mask and becomes the campus protector, roaming the grounds at night and helping people out of trouble. The only one who knows his secret is his best friend and roommate Prue. Through a long and complicated series of events, Theo comes into contact with Quinn, an enigmatic billionaire who specialises in finding superpowered individuals and organising them. Suddenly, Theo's life is full of conspiracy theories and mysterious people in government cars and he's about to find out more about his past than he ever wanted to know.
My main issue right now is that I lack a good villain...
So, what are you writing about and what problems are you facing?
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I may write the third in my superhero diary series this year, but haven't quite decided yet. My current problem is that I know exactly the shape of a particular plot point, but it's taking a bugger of an age to figure out the best way for everything to happen. (I am telling myself that this isn't outlining, it's still just notes; this may be a lie.)
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I'm not writing it for NaNo, but I have an on hold superhero project. It's about two battling groups of supers and a lot of secrets (I know, I'm terrible at describing story plots).
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Lots and lots of superheroes in my novel; I'm kind of having fun with the fact that the main character's power is basically to be a human boggart (didn't think of that particular description until I'd already thought her up), which isn't really a very typical hero power.
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I'm writing a superhero novel this year! Though he has no superpowers, he just has a love for comic books and a friend who made awesome gadgets.
My main problem will be coming up with gadgets. I'm hoping I will invent them the moment I need them, but I kinda doubt it. It took me weeks to decide what superpower he has (or rather that he doesn't have any).
Second problem might be him taking over the novel. Because the whole thing is written from the point of his biggest fan who will be at his side for a while. For now all scenes in my head are only with the hero. I already love him way too much.
I admit, I have a thing for broken characters - Cox, House, the Doctor... meow.
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I continue to write superhero fiction for Nanowrimo. This time around I will focus my attention on a new team of 4 genetically engineered heroes as they first step in to the world. I have some fun things slowly developing in it.
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Does El Zorro count? I'm planning a Zorro novel.
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Hey, if Batman can be a super hero then Zorro is.
My superhero novel is set in modern times with a woman superhero with bug powers. She has the strength to lift over ten times her own weight (like an ant) and jump great distances (like a grasshopper) and even has her own stinger. But enough about her powers, what I really want to focus on in this novel is the romantic interest with an average fellow. It's gonna be in his pov.
I'm afraid I don't think I am explaining this very well.
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Whoo! Superheros are awesome. My super villain is my protagonist, actually. He's sarcastic and very proper. I'm fond of him. He needs a name... Welp. Well, I guess it'll get there somehow. I'm excited to see how everyone else's plots develop! It's always quite the adventure.
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This reminds me of Dr. Horrible, ever see that movie? :)
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Yep! Ah, I adore Doctor Horrible. It's so sad though...
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I'm just going to butt in and compliment both of you on your awesome taste in movies.
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I'd like to second that. Dr Horrible is pretty awesome.
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Or possibly Soon I Will Be Invincible. A wonderful deconstruction of both heroes and villains, chapters alternate between a new hero and the villain.
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Yep, I'm probably going to write a superhero novel. Try to anyway.
It takes place about a year after a group of people were kidnapped, tortured, and given super powers. Most of them will be come villains (is that believable?). They were freed (it's complicated to explain). The guy responsible (Aiken) is now collecting things to make himself more powerful and to create his own dystopian playground. A superhero with blood manipulation, an eccentric engineer (mad scientist), a colourful girl who likes explosives, and a roguish guy who can manipulate gravity go to stop him. Then there's a huge plot hole that I hope to fill with action and adventure and exciting things. At some point, they'll find out that one of them is a spy. It will also be revealed that some of Aiken's "followers" were manipulating him (they will stab in the back, figuratively speaking) and that his evil genius/mad scientist is the real Big Bad (Silas). Then there's another huge plot hole while they go after Silas. Then I am confused about how it ends.
Wow I need to figure out what goes in those plot holes.
Yay! I love villain protagonists! I also like heroes with gadgets. :)
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I like the sound of this. Whether or not it's believable they become villains depends on the character's original personality. I know they've been tortured and that messes a person up, but once they're free it'll be just them and their conscience (or lack of it, as the case may be).
What confuses me (and maybe I'm being an idiot here, I often am haha) is... what happens to the original group tortured and then freed to become evil? I understand that's the backstory, but from the rest of your plot I can't see where they reappear again. Are they Big Bad Aiken's 'followers' who are found manipulating him, or are those 'followers' completely different people? Are they going to pop up as villains the four MCs take down one by one, uncovering the truth of what happened along the way?
I like the sound of your MCs though. Four band man is always a good choice - and they sound so much fun to write with. Especially the guy who can manipulate gravity. That would be so much fun (I BELIEVE I CAN FLY ~).
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The blood manipulating guy becomes a hero, his uber powerful sister becomes the Big Good, the guy who can manipulate gravity starts out with the hero, but he's complicated, a woman who can teleport and a guy who can manipulate plants work for Aiken (they don't know who is responsible for torturing them yet), and another might show up as one of Aiken's followers (she's complicated). The others won't show up yet, but they will in another story.
The real Big Bad and his followers are (mostly) people without superpowers.
Thanks. :) I really like the gravity guy too.
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Oh I forgot to mention, unfortunately, this plot is frustrating me to the point where I despise it, so unless I can figure things out, I'm dropping it rather than torment myself in november.
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I've got a superhero novel in the works. It's centered around a high school girl who discovers she has superpowers and follows her as she masters them and helps to lock away a supervillain who threatens the safety of superheroes and their families everywhere. My biggest worry that it might be to much on the light side and will lack some of the seriousness that typically follows some of the more mature superhero stories.
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Don't worry about whether or not it is serious or not. Back in the introduction of superheroes, many were light-hearted and fun. I mean, look at the first batman series, it only has been since the 90s and beyond have superheroes have grown darker and more serious.
Also, this is nanowrimo, it's gonna be a little bit silly, even if you are trying for a serious novel. Trust me, I've tried.
What kind of superpowers does the girl have?
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Flight, the ability to create shields and engery lasers(I need to find a better term for it). She also has some martial arts training.
Also as a side note I completely agree with roping El Zorro into the superhero category. I think the writers of Batman took a lot of their ideas from Johnston McCulley's original stories. The two share many similiarities.
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I'm pretty sure they've admitted outright that Zorro was one of the inspirations for Batman. I kind of like Zorro a little better at the moment because a] I'm on a bit of a kick (*blush*) and b] there are a number of episodes of Disney's Zorro at least where Zorro doesn't win. I don't remember too many where he outright looses, but there's one where he only manages to fight the Comandante to a draw, and at least two where he spends most of the episode stealing Tornado back from whoever stole him from Zorro.
So, yeah. I guess I like that he's not one of those "with prep time" sorts. He's beatable, therefore he's more...accessible? Fun? Swashbuckley? Something like that. :)
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Sorry for the double posting, but I just had a brainwave.
If the shields and energy lasers your heroine makes are solid light constructs, you could say she's photokinetic?
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Photokinetic, hmm, I like the sound of that. I might have do a bit of research on that to see if she fits the classification or if I can tweak my world's science laws haha.
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I'm a big fan of superhero stories that are more lighthearted - Bryan Q. Miller's recent Batgirl run was, IMO, one of the best comic stories of recent times, and while it had its serious moments it was definitely lighthearted and hopeful.
While I think there's a lot of angst and darkness to be mined from superhero stories, I think the idea of people who use remarkable abilities to help people has a lot of potential to be hopeful and joyful.
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I agree with Psychickid and Kaldaka - don't worry about how light-hearted your story might be. Superhero stories have the potential to go a variety of ways, but none of them are wrong. It all depends on your audience. Who would you like to read the book? Whether or not anyone will read it, knowing what age range you write for will help.
Personally, I prefer light superhero stories. The dark, brooding protagonist who agonises over keeping his identity secret and losing friends because of those secrets gets dull and repetitive and is just plain depressing, especially when the basic plot is: guy saves the world. I understand it might be more realistic, but I think there's something wrong if the world is saved and everyone, the audience especially, is left unhappy (because the character they fell in love with along the way didn't get a happy ending, etc).
If worst does come to worst though, and at the end of it you still think 'this is way too light', just make it a children's story. There's always gonna be new kids to educate in the art of superheroes and villains.
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Thanks for all opinions everyone! I've actually been having this arguement with myself for awhile now.
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Mine is about the dawn of superpowered people on Earth, and the subsequent confusion, panic, and path to heroism of one girl who's been chosen to wield huge amounts of power and ensure balance is kept.
I don't know what she's going to pick as a codename yet, but considering that she'll be picking it with her trigger-happy nonpowered-but-determined-to-help best friend and a nerdy powered teenager, they will probably all have ridiculous names. :P
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This sounds neat. Is it set in the modern day, or is it set in a previous time period (Victorian age, maybe?). "The dawn of superpowered people on Earth" is a very intriguing phrase, and I'd be interested in seeing what it implies in your story.
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I'm writing a superhero plot. Except it's more a parody of your regular superhero plot, but it still counts! I don't have any names set out yet, but I have a general gist of the plot (humour galore, I do believe). I've always been absolutely terrible with naming - I'll probably be wandering in and out of the adoption area a lot, ahaha.
As for superpowers... well, one of my MCs doesn't have any (but everyone is convinced she does). The rest are just your run-of-the-mill powers - strength, speed, intelligence, eating one hundred hamburgers in the space of a minute...
Evil Overlord List here I come!
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That sounds interesting. Why does everyone think the MC has superpowers?
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Her parents and brothers did, so obviously she must have them too. Her parents are FAMOUS superheros, like the best of the best, and her brothers are super good, so it's impossible for anyone to think their offspring isn't. They just think she's being modest or wants to keep it as a surprise. I'm going to have a lot of fun writing her frustration bahaha.
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Have you read PS238? It's a comic about a school for super-powered children, and one of the kids is the son of two of the most famous and powerful heroes on the planet, so even though he has tested negative for every known power and has shown no indications of developing powers at all, his parents assume that he will and keep throwing him into dangerous situations hoping for them to spontaenously manifest. If you haven't read it, I'd definitely reccomend it, as it's a lot of fun (and available for free online!).
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One of my plots I'm juggling with this year has do with superheroes.
More like a team of non-powered heroes, they're all kind of mentally unbalanced, but in different ways. Anyways, scratch 'hero' and put 'vigilante' on there. The only 'villain' in the plot would be either a gang that they managed to upset or the police.
Catch is... the team members all work in the same office as their day job.
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Joining, since my most stuck -on-my-brain idea that isn't a Criminal Minds fanfic is about a Superman-esque hero, if Superman had come to Earth as an adult soldier instead of an infant, with a biomechanical cavalry beast.
His name on Earth is Nick de Comte, but he's not anywhere near the kind of powers as Superman. Most of Nick's capability as a hero comes from Destroyer, his beast and partner, and alien armor and infantry weaponry. I know there'll be a conversation in the story with him complaining about unrealistic Superman is compared to what all the alien species he knows are really like, since in his world the Kryptonians would have invaded Earth because they have superpowers here and annihilated the Human race.
I chose an initial genre of Sci-Fi, might change it to Adventure based on how the story develops. What genres did everybody else put?
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This is my first NaNoWriMo, and I'll be donning the spandex mantle and writing what is, hopefully, a tight superhero yarn.
My story takes place in the not-too-distant future, after an event called the Power Surge, wherein overnight every man, woman and child on Earth was suddenly granted a superpower, by means as yet unknown to them. Sudden chaos erupted as, across the globe, men and women now granted with miraculous power began committing crimes, waging wars, forming vigilante groups, fighting against former governments, and letting the darker side of their natures, brought to light by their powers, emerge. Nine years later, parts of the world have gained some semblance of order. In America and other former first-world nations, local city governments have been able to organize militias of the most powerful Talents [the term in my universe for superheroes] available, and uneasy peace is restored.
Top among the Talented is Carroll, a psychic with the power to project his consciousness into any organic structure. Working as a "Talent Scout" (read: detective) for Chicago's elite Superhuman Intelligence Force, he is tasked with scouting out potential threats to the reestablished civil order.
Sent on a routine scout mission into a power plant hijacked by third-rate "supervillains," Carroll arrives to find the threat terminated, and the would-be terrorists horrifically murdered. What's more, among their mangled ranks he finds a corpse which looks identical to his own, living body.
From here the story will spiral into a whirlwind of intrigue, mystery, and superpowered goodness as Carroll searches to uncover the mysteries behind this and other mysterious incidents around the globe. Readers who stick with me will be led through Cambodian jungles filled with living tree-men superheroes, under the ocean to the abode of a subterranean race of squid people, and to space itself as Carroll matches wits with an enigmatic murderer known only as "The Sun King." Through it all, he will search for the secret to saving humanity from an impending evil, and discover the cause of the mysterious Power Surge which has so affected and afflicted the world.
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Thus far I have a really solid working knowledge of how want the plot to go, I know how I want the mystery to work out, I know what I want the villains to be like and what powers they should have, and I have a good grasp of Carroll's character and the personalities of the other main characters. What I'm having trouble with is thinking up really unique powers and Talent names for some of the minor characters. I want to make the distribution of superpowers really random, where some people have Superman-like ultra abilities, whereas others have really stupid or useless powers, like being able to convert any solid object into mayonnaise or something. Finding clever powers for background characters is giving me some trouble.
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That sounds awesome and groovy. I would love to read it when you finish it. Good luck!
Some stupid powers, eh? Well how about someone who can change the temperature of objects, meaning that he can boil water or keep it icy cold, or heat up leftovers, but he has to be touching the object.
Or a real super power that vaguely exists, they can see numbers in colors. I think it's called synthesism or something like that. It's a strange thing where numbers, letters, or emotions are seen as colors, and I am not meaning seeing auras. Like when a person looks at the number one on a piece of paper, it shows up as a color. It's a bit difficult to explain and I could be doing a terrible job at it.
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I like both of those; thank you for your answer.
The wanted to include a younger male child with superpowers at one point in the story, and I think I'll attach the temperature change power to him. Unless you object, I think I'll have him have "Psychic Kid" as his Talent show name, both as tribute to you for thinking up the idea, and because I had not yet thought up what to call him other than his Muggle name (Marcus).
Thanks again!
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I'm planning on trying my hand at a superhero story this year.
The basic idea is that the world knows about people with superpowers, and there re two major rival colleges that teach people with powers how to use them. One is for Heroes and the other for Villains. My MC wants to be a good guy, but he pretty much stinks at being good. So he's going to the Villain college on scholarship. It's pretty much his college life, falling in love, trying to pass Into to Mad Science, and dealing with being given an arch-enemy that should have probably been a Villain.
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I really like this. It's got sort of a Sky High meets Megamind sound to it, plotwise, and some glorious internally-conflicted sounding bits to it characterwise.
So basically, awesome.
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Sky High was very much an influence on the original idea I had many years ago. Though I'm hoping to capture the idea in a new way. And I hadn't even thought of Megamind, but yes. Similar in that too. Glad you like the idea! :)
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Ahaha, this sounds brilliant!
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Looking for some support here, am I the only one who can come up with the hero's real name, his entire circle, his backstory, and yet suck donkey at inventing his enemies and choosing a public name for his heroing?
Nick's original concept has his heroing identity as the "Night Stalker." I kinda sorta don't like it, but I have a tendency to suck at coming up with supernames at times. Hit some generators and the only real good option I got was "Xenoclad" almost everything else was in something-person format I definitely didn't want. Opinions?
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What are your superhero's powers? How did he get them? Maybe if you share a bit of him, we can help better to find a name.
Also this might help you: http://www.superheronation.com/2007/10/15/character-naming-superheroes-and-otherwise/
They have some awesome resources for writing superheroes, powers, etc.
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I have the same problem, but this site looks helpful!
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In terms of your character you mentioned above, Nick de Comte, based on what you've mentioned thus far, I think it could go one of several different ways, all of which are contingent upon his personality and personal style. As a "Superman-esque" superhero (which I presume means he dedicates himself to selflessly saving others) reliant mainly on his mount and his technology, it would make sense for his superhero name to reference one of the three elements of being a savior, using advanced technology, or having access to a cool-sounding ally called Destroyer. Thus, various possibilities arise when you consider whether Nick is the type of person who is:
1) Really intelligent or serious. If intelligence is his main personality focus, it would make sense to play off the technology angle (since that, more than the other two angles, would lend itself to some more highfalutin' words). For instance, as both an alien and a technologist, he could call himself Xenotech, linguistically connoting his foreignness and his use of technology. However, if you wanted to promote one of the other angles, he could call himself something like Shiva (the Hindu deity personifying destruction, which would play on Destroyer's name).
2) Sardonic or humorous. If he is down to earth and funny, he could choose a fun, funny or silly name, such as something like Sputnick (to play off his technology focus and the fact that he's not from this world) or Comte Anansi (as a play on Compe Anansi, the mischievous and funny spider god, with "Compe" roughly translating to "companion" or "comrade," referencing the fact that he's always with his comrade Destroyer).
3) Normal or a Boy Scout/goody-two-shoes. Honestly, the only type of names coming to me for this category are the ones that end in "man," so either I'm just not being very clever or this might be the hardest personality facet to name-cover without falling into the traditional "man" names.
Anyway, hopefully some of that helps you out in some way. I look forward to seeing what you do with Nick and Destroyer!
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He's not quite as selfless as Superman, I'm mainly taking the backstory and tweaking it, and how that would change the circumstances of the hero, like the fact that INS and ICE are going to be a problem for him since his human identity is a little bit fuzzy on legalities like paperwork, since he got here as an adult. Though he eventually lands a job as a wealthy businesswoman's personal assistant.
Nick is going to start out pretty serious and get less so as he adapts to Earth, but he sees humans with a sort of superior amusement that he generally hides. At times he's going to be struggling between his duty as a Rishan soldier who is supposed to be reconning Earth for invasion and having gotten to like us backward and naive people. The fact that the rest of his squad died soon after landing and he has no working way to call home help with that.
For powers, he's mostly dependent on the Rishan military technology he came here with; energy-based infantry weapons like rifle and handgun, with additional energy weapons built into his powered armor. Without his hardware, the only advantage he has on humans is breathing nitrogen from the 78% of it in our atmosphere, makes a general strength and stamina advantage. The oxygen in our air is a toxin, but he's adapted to that, breathing before they were adapted killed the other soldiers that landed with him. He's got a decent adaptive ability superpower, really only will come up at the very beginning of the story.
Destroyer is in the size range of something like an elephant, completely armored and can eat anything from plants to meat to junkyard metal, I figure that he'd be engineered that way as part of being a cavalry beast for the tip of the spear.
Superhero comics definitely exist, Nick complains that out in the real galaxy a race like the Kryptonians would simply wipe out humanity and take the planet because they gain superpowers here. He also thinks Independence Day is a stupid movie.
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In your stories, are there fictional superheroes as well as real ones? Do people read comic books about Superman and Spiderman? Are you making this a part of the story? Or are you taking the Watchmen road where another genre has taken the place of superhero stories because superheroes exist in the real world?
My MC:s best friend is a massive nerd who loves comic books. I'm planning to use this to lighten up the story with her constantly referencing her fictional heroes to take the edge off the dark and tortured brooding the rest of the characters are so fond of. It's hard to be properly angsty when someone just compared you to Batman and suggested you make your sidekicks wear short shorts and pixie boots. Then again, my heroes aren't the cape-and-spandex type, just people with powers.
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My superhero was a massive fan of superhero comics when he was a child. That was what brought him to do it (as he doesn't have any superpower himself). Though I'm not sure how much I will include, as I'm not a superhero comic reader. I usually only know the movies and some of the comics (shame on me).
My MC is rather obsessed with the real superhero,but might also like the comic. Or maybe rather the movies XD
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In my world, superpowers have been around for a long time (For example, my MC opens the story by talking about a Roman Gladiator that once ripped seven people in half... superstrength ftw), but for a lot of history they were considered witches/demons/whatever.
After superheros and comics became... well, not mainstream, but at least fairly common, people born with superpowers started going public. Of course, there's also a lot of resentment toward non-supers from some parts of the super community, which is where a lot of the villains come from.
There are comics about fictional superheros (not specific ones, because I don't want this accidentally veering into fanfic territory, which I could see myself doing), but there's also fictionalized accounts of real superheros. Since saving the world from alien invasions and crazed maniacs doesn't exactly draw a salary, a lot of heros license their image and draw income that way.
Also, comics in my world are a lot more mainstream. Since the superheros are real, people treat them a lot like celebrities (hence the secret identities). There are still nerds, of course. Nerds are the ones that read about the fictional superheros.
I could go on (I've spent a lot of time thinking about this), but this post is already long enough that no one's going to bother reading it. XD
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My story chronicles the real world (or, my own fictionalized version of the real world) suddenly being cataclysmically changed, wherein all persons are granted some powers. As such, I'm planning on retaining all the normal elements of modern life where they fit into the story. So my universe will technically have superhero comics, but I haven't yet decided whether any of the characters will or will not read them or regularly reference them. I guess that's just something I'll have to wait on the Muses to tell me.
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Oh yeah, I would like my story to be kinda like a deconstruction of superhero stories, so there is going to be many references to DC and Marvel heroes. Like Zinnith, I want to use the the knowledge of fictional superheroes as kind of a comic relief. After all, my MC yearns to date a superhero and his roommate warns him, mentioning that most lovers of superheroes get kidnapped and sometimes killed. Fun times.
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My story is definitely set in the same world as fictional superheroes. My MC is probably almost guaranteed to make some kind of remark about Wolverine, given the nature of her abilities. (She has super-healing, but unfortunately no metal skeleton, so broken bones definitely slow her down.) I don't think any 'real' superheroes exist in the setting, just people with powers-- and I think most of those are trained for covert ops or villainry instead of heroism.
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I'm not doing it for Nano since I already started but I'm doing a rewrite of my first story. It's a young adult superhero/coming of age story about a girl named Haley, a Marvel and DC comic book fan who lives in a world where superpowers exist but are rare, and people do wear tights to commit or stop crimes. Everybody who does this has a secret identity, an important plot point. But nobody calls them "heroes" or "villains," because it sounds too much like fiction. Everybody calls them costumes or capes.
While at the general store in July, Haley nearly gets killed by some lava (long story) but is saved by a costume named Arctana and she decides she wants to be part of the "costume community." Like any superhero story there's some resentment of that part of town. That's the prologue. The rest of the story is set during her school year where her school gets attacked and she realizes someone at her school must be a costume so she tries to solve the mystery. Soon after, she discovers the secret identities of two of her heroic classmates, Clara Fernandez and Patrick . . . something. I'm still deciding. She makes Clara let her help solve the mystery, but along the way she comes to find that things aren't so black and white (even if she technically knew that from reading comics) but that costumes, even the "heroic" types have shades of gray and that powers don't really make the hero.
I know, lame and uninspiring idea.
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It's not lame and uninspiring unless you make it that way! As long as you love what you're writing, it'll turn out just fine. ;) I mean, I'm doing a superhero high school plot (I know, gag me, it's been done to death), but I don't care because it's going to be fun to write!
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I agree with ClueBadger. No idea is really new, it's the author that brings something different to the table. It's the author who really makes the story. I'm doing a hero in high school story as well, covering her discovery and first big villain. However, I can guarantee that the two will be night and day, they already sound that way. A story is only lame and uninspiring if the writer makes it that way. Be proud of your story and don't ever say it's lame and uninspiring because then it might fall prey to the dreaded GRAVEYARD OF STORIES!!! (ghostly howling oOohh)
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Thanks, both of you. I'll keep it in mind. So far despite it being a rewrite I've made major changes and am writing in the first-person present tense, neither of which I write in much, so it's a challenge. But . . . it's FUN. I love writing it. I'm on the fifth chapter and the more I write Haley and her world, the more I love it.
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Well I just spend a couple of hours exploring Superhero Nation, and I have some new insights for Nick's character, and I'm trying to make my tech details for his equipment. I'm adding a little problem with fuel cells as a limiter, and difficulty in re-charging and replacing them here on Earth. Which is the primary reason his day job is as the personal assistant for tech millionaire businesswoman Jordan Harris, it gives him access to Harris Industries for equipment.
And I've mentally tweaked his boss Jordan's personality, she's still a hard-charging self-made millionaire businesswoman, but I've thrown some weekend party-hard on top of it. This was inspired by:
Who else has seen the new Avengers movie trailer? Looks like it'll be good, even though God only knows when it'll be at the theater here in Italy.
Has anybody decided who if anyone knows their hero's secret identity if he has one? Jordan will eventually, at first she knows Atlal and about his mission and the Rishan Empire, she won't find out until later that he's also her put-upon personal assistant. I think I can easily do this without forcing Jordan to be stupid, which she definitely isn't.
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I think I have to check out Superhero Nation. Looks interesting...
My heores don't have secret identities as such even though most people with superpowers try to keep them secret. The only people who knows about my MC Theo's powers as the novel starts are his mom and his best friend and roommate Prue. I suppose you could say that he does have sort of a secret identity at first, even if it only consists of a black sweatshirt and a ski mask...
(OMG, the Avengers trailer! Steve and Tony butting heads! Hawkeye! I've lost count of how many times I've watched it already! I want it to be May NOW!)