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POV- First Person x 4 - Am I crazy?

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xlsmith
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I have four MC's who's stories all intertwine. I have chosen to write in first person...for all four of them. Each chapter is a different character in her voice(ie 1-Noel, 2-Beth, 3-Lynn, 4-Rivers, and then continues in that order). I feel like this is a risk but for this story I can't imagine doing it differently.
What do you all think?

Kelly The Red
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I'm doing the same thing with three characters, three sisters. I find it helps make the point that all three have the same problem. I did it last year with three apprentices in my fantasy novel and my readers say it worked great and was not confusing at all once they realized one of the characters was a female disguised as a boy. And if you hate it, it's easy enough to change in the second draft. Go for it. Rather than go chapter by chapter, I am switching a lot more often. The trick is a strong and obvious transition. I suggest naming each chapter with the character's name. Noel at Work, Beth and the Cat, Lynn Runs...

xlsmith
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Each chapter is listed with the the character and title so there's a definitive break between voices.
Noel- Life's a Ditch
Beth- Hell's Kitchen with an Apron
Lynn- Day Breaking News
Rivers- Too Much Mail
etc...

KimGM
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I say go for it. As long as you can make each voice distinct it shouldn't be a problem. Take the risk! :)

StaceyDisterhof
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Look at Alisa Valdes-Rodgrigez's "Dirty Girls Social Club"—she had SIX different MC in first person. If you've never read it, XL, I HIGHLY encourage you to do so. Not just because it's a good way to see how someone does the multi-person first person POV, but also because it's a cute story.

xlsmith
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Thanks for the support!

aaliona
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Jodi Picolti does it in My Sister's Keeper. She just labled each chapter with the character instead of a name.

Bella Bonnie
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Barbary Kingsolver does it x 5 in the Poison Wood Bible and it works beautifully.Go for it!

StaceyM
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Jodi Picoult does it with virtually ever book I've read of hers. Sometimes it's three or four characters, sometimes it's just two. My first book (not published - nowhere near ready for submitting it anywhere) is written from many many different POV (Esme, Brian, Elizabeth, Julie, Dr Bailey, Alex, Peggy, Marge, Stewart, Lottie and another Brian). OK - Esme, Elizabeth, Peggy, Marge and Lottie are all the same person, just at different stages of her life, but even so....some are 3rd person but I'd say 3/4s is first person. Not easy!

Just stay clear in your head about who is talking in the scene you're writing. Make a list of little phrases each of them might use, for instance, and do a search to make sure they appear ONLY in that particular character's chapters. I'd recommend never writing from more than one POV in any one day. You could even write all of one characters POV for the whole book, then go back to the start with your second character etc. If you're really good, you can do what Freya North did and split the same basic story over 4 books - one from each POV (Pip, Cat and "the other sister I can never remember the name of because I've not read her one")

xlsmith
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I can definitely see each character branching off into her own book for sequels. But for the first book I feel it needs to be all of them together. I'm not particularly worried about losing their voices because I know them. Not just as characters but as people. The four MCs are based on four real women who I have known for many years and that has definitely helped me to keep their personalities true and distinct. Thank you for support in the multiple first person POV. It's been something that has made me a bit nervous for the objections I may face come query and editing time.

StaceyM
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I think multi-POV stories are becoming more accepted so just go for it!

Butterfly
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I'm glad this thread's getting such positive feedbacks as I'm doing the same accidentally. :) Only 3 characters though. But thoroughly enjoying it!

Red Mosquito
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I did it with my 2nd NaNo - 4 characters in first person. I found it worked great with NaNo cause if you got bored with one of them you could switch to another one. Three were guys, one was a girl. That worked great too.

Not published yet, but it will be. I hope.

jjsigford
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This is my first NaNo and I'm writing in 8 POVs so... yeah, don't worry you've got this ;)

Kelly The Red
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8!? Wow. how do you keep them all straight? Do they interact alot? if so, do you write the same scene from different POV or just one? I am having a hard time with that as the characters start out in different parts of the continent and all end up in the same hospital room. After that they interact so much, their distinctions blur. The one with kids gets a dog, the one with too many pets gets married and the one with too many ex husbands has a baby.

jjsigford
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Yes, 8 :) And my characters do all interact (they are from the same family) but when they are all together it is told from the POV of my, er, MAIN main character (Marla). When I switch POV though neither Marla or any of the other characters are present and it focuses on that one character. My novel has a series of short stories that happened in the past and they are all connected through Marla's experience in the present. It does get kind of confusing, but I did a lot of character development and so far their voices are strong enough that I'm not having a hard time keeping them distinct.

Blakesley
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Jennifer Weiner does it in her chick lit novels and it works great....

jrebj00
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Sarah Mlynowski does this with her characters a lot too and I think it keeps things fresh. She did it with Monkey Business and Fishbowl and I love both of those books. The fresh voices helps you flesh out the characters and to see the issues from the perspective of all of the characters.

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