The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 11:26:35 +0530

For all those of you scrambling to reach 50k/finish your novel/write a sequel/edit like mad in the month of December, this is the place for you! Come one, come all to NaNoCember! Hanabi and I have been posting over in NaNo Ate My Soul for some time now, but we figured we ought to create a place for all of us to come together and share our NaNo-Cember-ing. All you have to do is set a goal for yourself - WHATEVER you want that goal to be - and post it here! Then keep on coming back, updating everyone on your progress, and give your encouragement to all the others in the same boat. We will be each others cheerleaders, and strive hold each other (and ourselves!) accountable to our goals. I'll start us off: My goal is to continue at a pace of at least 1667 words per day until my novel is actually finished. Bonus goal - actually accomplish a complete (if very rough draft) before the 17th, when my friend (who wants a copy to read on vacation) leaves for Christmas break. So far, I'm on track and I've finished a chapter a day. Resting at about 62200 words total. What are everyone else's goals? Whatever they are, it's good to have your company! ^_^ ~Phoenix

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lil87blue — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 11:42:05 +0530

I'd also like to finish my nano novel. My goal is 80k total, probably will be making it about the same length as my first novel which was 82k. I'd like to have it written and edited by the new year!

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D.F.T.B.A — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 11:51:25 +0530

I'm hoping to get 15k words of world building done this month - a little less than 500 words a day. The main reason for this is that I totally failed at creating a habit of writing every day during NaNo, and really want to keep trying. So 500 words of world building stuff a day. Its an easy goal, but I figure the key to writing every day is not to burn yourself out. And maybe I'll raise it to 1000 words a day in January...

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speak_loud — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 11:52:32 +0530

I think I'll try for about 1,000 words a day for December... although I might not be able to be too consistent, what with finals and things. My novel is really only two-thirds finished! I'd love to finish by the end of the year.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 12:10:31 +0530

Starting with my 16106 words and continuing into however long it takes, I think at this rate, even WITH Christmas, I can get to 30k by the end of December. I'd need to write 420 words per day to do that, I think. I averaged 536 in November. Should be a breeze. Slow and steady wins the race (in February). I've drawn up a picture of a stats graph and will be drawing my totals. I'll probably have to use Google Docs's word counter, which will bump my wordcount up a bit. Or lower it. I'm not sure. It did both at various points in November. Just like with NaNo, if I can do more, I will, but I won't hold myself to it. I had been expecting to reach 20k by January 1, so 30k will be better than I thought, but I got farther along right at the end of NaNo than I thought I would. I will finish this novel, which may be over 50k when done and is probably going to be nonstandard in that I'm looking at resolutions to my epic fantasy that involve epic diplomacy rather than epic battles. Ah, what a hero of a main character I have, probably willing to at least listen to Achti's demands instead of drawing her sword. (Seriously, the situation would probably draw Savail, Athima, Jumarazh, Changvraz, Marinan and Xyrylu into a war. Those countries have a combined population of tens of millions. You're not a hero for responding to a petty insult by causing a World War, you're a hero for deciding you'll sacrifice your own honor in favor of letting millions of innocents NOT DIE.) I LIKE my 16k. I like this better than the crap I wrote the year I won! :D Guess I'm just a turtle after all. Helpful stuff: http://honorless.net/progressbar.htm User-friendly but forbidding-looking progress meter designed just for NaNo http://www.writertopia.com/toolbox Less user-friendly but fun-looking for those who thrive on that

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Dragon Gal — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 12:39:14 +0530

My goal: Finish this novel, and edit it at least a couple of times before the Createspace offer runs out (I have no idea when that is, but it'll be some time next year) I'll probably try and write the usual 1667 words per day until I finish, then try and edit a chapter a day. Then again, I usually write long chapters, so maybe it'll be five pages per day. I don't know. Something like that. And I'm currently sitting on 54,823 words.

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Hails.Q — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 13:23:14 +0530

My goal is to finish a first draft of my novel before the new year. I'm aiming for about 85k so taking into account I gave myself a little break on the first my daily goal is 1,167 I might just take it up to 1.2k. Good lucky everyone! I wish you all the best!

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Viper_Rock — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 14:21:24 +0530

Hefty rewrites followed by just as hefty revisions. I'm drastically in need of both.

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UJ — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 14:23:23 +0530

Since I got through about half of my outline, I'm hoping to do another 50K in Dec, and that could be the first draft done. So I'm aiming to do 1700 - 2000 words a day. Not that I got any done yesterday. I might have to accept that I have to let this cold run its course and then get back to it.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 14:57:04 +0530

16722.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 15:05:09 +0530

Sorry to double-post, but I wanted to share that I drew the first day's progress bar. It's ABOVE THE PAR LINE. For the first time since I started this project on November 1. Funny how awesome that feels.

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Unforgivable — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 15:39:45 +0530

my goal is a bit more humble, because I want to keep my sanity and not stress like crazy.. I've written 50K on my novel and I'm about halfway through. So my goal will be to finish writing it before the end of March. That ought to be enough time :3 After all, I did write 50.000 words in 20 days and got so stressed out that now I just want to take my time and write whenever I'm inspired ^^'

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annaspargoryan — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 15:53:52 +0530

My goal is to finish the first draft of my book by the end of my summer break (January 23). At this stage I think that will require somewhere around 75,000 words. Then I'd like to have it edited by the end of March.

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 16:12:50 +0530

My goal is to finish my novel. I have about a third left to go and reckon by the end it should be around the 85,000 word mark. My target is to have it finished by Christmas but I am pushing for a December 14th deadline. I want to keep to writing at least 1,667 words a day but more will be better. I reached 50,000 words Sunday and since then have written about 500 words. So please, please, please kick me in the ass whenever you feel it appropriate. Once finished I want to put it aside until late January next year. Then sign up for the March edit.

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Dani Marchand — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 16:22:55 +0530

I have three goals for December. 1. Edit and self-publish a collection of ghost stories by the 5th. (If anyone out there desires to be a last minute short story beta reader, please do let me know). 2. Write at least 500 words per day on a novella that is to be finished by the end of the month. I'm 9,000 words in. 3. Do. Not. Touch. The NaNo document until the 9th at the earliest. Begin editing by the 15th at the latest, and have a readable draft by the end of the month. Good luck, everyone!

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TenNoKujaku — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 16:52:49 +0530

I want to finish my novel by the end of the month. Which is hard to figure out in a concrete word count right now, but I am certain that it will be at least 50K, because I am at about the halfway point to that now, and I know my novel isn't half-finished. I would ideally like to hit 80K, just because it's a nice solid number for a novel. However, I've decided at this point to try an experiment and stop counting my words for the time being. Reason is that I feel like if I don't update every hour, I won't feel like I should slack off or stop for the day once I see a decent word count. I want to keep pounding out the words for as long as I still feel I have it in me at any given session. I should exert some discipline however, so I will make my goal at least 16 hours of writing per week, and if I can put in the hours, I will give myself a treat at the end of each week in the month. I can write between 800-1000 words per hour usually, 1200 if I really push it, so even if I go slow, I calculate that will give me about 51K of words for the month, on top of the 25K or so I have already, which is almost at the goal of 80K total. I think I can do this.

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Matuami — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 21:29:56 +0530

I switched novels halfway through the month to return to the rewrite of my NaNoWriMo novel from last year (yep, I just broke three of the rules of NaNo at once.) So for that novel, I have about 30K written. My goal is to get to 60K by the end of December. Given that I'm going to have 90% less work to do this month, and it's it should be a lot easier to match that goal. I'm really proud of what I've written so far - it's the first NaNo out of the six that I've done that I'm actually satisfied with, and don't see the need to trash and start completely over - and I want to keep on writing at a slightly slower pace so that I'll have time to not resort to randomness to get me through. My other goal is to get far enough into this that I'll have a title, which is something I have never, ever had for this project.

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the.black.prince — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 21:47:40 +0530

This thread is awesome. Last year as soon as I won NaNo, I ditched my novel and never wrote anything for 11 months. Plus I had fantastic non-NaNo plans for this Novemeber, but everything fell through. So I holed up in my room and did NaNo'11. This year too, I've won, but I want to finish the first draft on my novel. I currently have ~56k, and it should be complete at 70k. So I'm gonna go for it this month. Cheers to all us wordsmiths for a wordy December! P.S. I know we can do it :)

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newtinmpls — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 21:49:46 +0530

Well, I didn't get very far, but unlike previous "didn't make it" years, I am still interested in the story. So my commitment is to write something ... anything on it, starting today and going through the end of december (daily writing was how I managed to win the NaNo's that I did.). Dian

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phoenixgirrl — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:11:04 +0530

My goal is to finish the first draft of my novel (I'm about 2/3 done) by New Year's Day. I took a break from writing yesterday (12/1), and it felt very odd. I'd like to keep writing daily, even if it isn't 1700 words/day. My next goal will be to edit in February, and we'll see from there. I need to get my NaNo novel out of my brain before I can thing about any other writing goals.

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Bovver — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:16:08 +0530

I only have about 7K until the end of my novel (if everything goes to plan), so I just need to be done that before the 17th (because then I'm flying home for Xmas and madness will ensue!). Definitely achievable, methinks.

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ellarien — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:19:47 +0530

I finished November at 75k, and I guesstimate that I need about 15K more to finish my story and fill in a missing subplot. I'm setting myself a goal of at least 5,000 words a week until that's done. If the finishing line is where I think it is, I should be there by Christmas -- but I do not have a good history of gauging the length of stories in advance, so there may be recalculations along the way.

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PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:53:38 +0530

So good to see everyone here! I've got to admit I'm a little jealous of those of you who are so close to finishing the end of your plots already o_o I was thinking if I just managed a chapter a day (do-able, especially on my days off) that I'd be well finished before my goal of the 17th, but the chapters are becoming much longer than I'd expected. Who'd have thought my MC had so much to say during a half of the story that originally was just "Kei rides to Ornesse"?? Realistically, finishing by the end of this month shouldn't even be a problem for me at my usual November pace...but I'm really going to have to push myself for the 17th. December could end up being worse than November >< How is everyone else faring so far?

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Realta — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 00:18:45 +0530

I want to finish this book by the end of December, which hopefully is doable. I really hope I have less than 50K to go until the end, so I will keep up a pace of 2000 words a day until the end of the month. If I finish it before, I will let it sit for a week, then EDIT TIME! >3

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WoolRanch — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 01:20:52 +0530

My goal... is to keep writing every single day (which was my goal (accomplished!) in November), and hopefully finish a rough draft by the end of December. I had some really low word count days last month, but with school wrapping itself up I plan on getting a lot written :)

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MikePaulson — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 01:57:48 +0530

I love everyone's ambitious goals! I'm going to try to be equally ambitious, but my real life (or is writing my real life?) is going to get in the way this month... a lot. I'm shooting for another 50k in December, but I want to get no less than about 30k. My story wants to be told, but I'm having difficulty telling it now that there's no real goal in sight. That said though... I'm on it. I'll post replies to keep people up to date with my progress, because I'll need some moral support this month.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 03:28:29 +0530

Well, I'm at 17709 so far (and not done today), so moving along. I have a quick poll for anyone who wants to answer. I learned my lesson from my last poll (ugh, I do NOT want to code that data, but I have to) and I'm making this one multiple choice. 1. How often are you checking on this thread? a. less than once a day b. once a day c. two to four times a day d. more than four times a day 2. What aspect of NaNoWriMo do you find most helpful? a. Pep Talks b. word wars c. progress graph d. front-page news e. videos f. write-ins g. Write So Many Words If... h. being able to talk about how your novel's going i. other (please explain) 3. Which, if any, aspects of NaNo are infuriating or unhelpful? a. relentless optimism b. insistence on quantity over quality c. Pep Talks d. other (please explain) 4. How long will you be with us for? a. half of December b. all of December c. through January d. longer than that

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mystic-mayhem — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 05:09:56 +0530

My goal for December (since I completely failed in November. Not a word. Literally) is to read or write something every day; preferably both. I have a huge lists of prompts saved in Word and Google Docs as well as several prompt websites in my bookmarks, I have a shiny new Moleskine for on-the-go writing, and I'm ready to crank some things out. Preferably horror, but I've been out of the writing mindset for so long that I'll likely start off with some more personal essays/writing exercises before diving back into fiction. I will be getting my Kindle Fire on Thursday, the 8th, and I cannot wait. I'll cross at least 4 books off of my to-read list. Now, to answer the poll above! 1. c - two to four times a day 2. i - other. The adoptables thread is a lifesaver! I don't usually take ideas word for word but I find so many inspirations in there that I usually think of something to write immediately. 3. d- other. FEAR! I was so ready on November first and then the whole idea overwhelmed me and I got far too behind. 4. d- longer than that, most likely all year round!

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PeverellSister — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 05:26:48 +0530

Yay! I love surveys! 1. d I'm on it every time I sit down by a computer. That includes Music Theory class at school. 2. b, c, and h. I dunno if I'm allowed to answer three, but those are the best. 3. d. The most unhelpful thing about the site is the insane amount of distraction things like these forums bring (for example, I should be writing now... :) 4. c or d. I don't really know. I'll probably be around while I'm editing my novel and stuff, so who knows?

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Chestergirl28 — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 05:33:41 +0530

I JUST WANT TO FINISH MY NOVEL!!!!!

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Illyas James — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 06:00:48 +0530

I still have a 100k words to write before my nanovel is even finished in the first draft. After that I'll need to fix all the ugly spots. But first I'm not going to write for a week to prevent my brain to burn out. I'm going to use that time to start outlining all the other books in this series. What will help me get a better outlook on this one. Why did I think that starting with book 6 would be a good idea. Of right, I thought the story could be fun. :)

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Ghotay — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 06:14:18 +0530

I want to finish my novel. I anticipate that I'm about half way through right now (maybe a bit more), so I'm aiming to do another 20k in December, really. It might happen. Then editing and beta'ing through January and February to perhaps upload (it's a fanfiction, so I'll be putting it on a few sites) around March? If I manage this it will be: 1) The longest thing I have ever written 2) The first decent-length project I have ever finished 3) The first time I will have made a proper whack at refining a story with the love and care it will need to become truly EPIC There's a lot to do, but a lot to be gained. I want that sense of achievement, I so do!

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PeverellSister — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 07:25:28 +0530

This is the first time I've had coffee since November month. I resolved not to use it that much, and my method of staying awake involved forcing my tired brain to concentrate on the words I was writing. Now I'm HYPEERRRRRRRR!!!!! I swear my wordcount just increased a ton. I can't stop typing I'm so full of energy!!!!! This is VERRRYYY good for finishing my novel. I just wrote about 3500 words nonstop. I'm going crazy! And the bad thing is, I actually want to sleep tonight. Whoops! HYPER HYPER HYPER HYPER!!!!

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kaitlynleliel — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 07:33:40 +0530

I'm aiming to rewrite-- and this time finish-- the second draft of my novel in December. Glad to see there are others planning to work their butts off this month. :D

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Mew Knightley — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 07:58:14 +0530

Well if I get an outline done at a decent pace, I'd like to do a sequel to my NaNo Novel this month. The first one clocked in around 100k, but I think the second one might be longer....

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uncipherthis — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 08:28:02 +0530

Don't know if I'll be able to Finish by the end of December but I'll set my goal as: Write An Ending. I'll likely have to fill in some gaps before I can get to that but that's part of my goal too. Not sure what to set as wordcount goal for this month, maybe 25K more words?

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cherylmahoney — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 08:40:59 +0530

Hooray, I was looking for a place on the forums for people still writing their novel! I hit the 50,000, but still have plenty of plot to go. I can't manage quite the same level of un-distracted focus for another month (have to check back into the rest of my life...) but I'm setting a goal of 25,000 for December. I can just cut the daily word count in half (834!) and I think that will be enough to get me to the novel's actual end. I had a whole table and chart in Excel for November to help keep me on track, so I set up a new one for December. :) I will miss updating my word count on the NaNo site, though...

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JessClearwater — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 09:36:05 +0530

I want to get to 70-something-k by the end of the year. Ideally, I'd reach 80, but when I edit, I add rather than subtract, so I am not super worried about finishing at the 80 mark, as long as I'm over 70. I'm at 51 at the moment, but I needed some time off from the insanity of my last few days of NaNo.

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JellybeanP — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:03:56 +0530

Hi, I'm hoping to finish my draft this month and am setting myself a 1K/day goal. I'm still not sure, though, whether I should be writing more right now, or whether I ought to revisit what I've got first so I can tell what's needed. I may change strategies mid-month. In answer to the survey: 1. c- two to four times 2. b, c- word wars, progress bar 3. d- the regional boards; there wasn't much activity and there weren't any write-ins in my town 4. I'm not sure: I plan to stay on at least through the end of the month, but might stay longer

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:52:10 +0530

You're all so awesome ^_^ I love seeing everyone's goals and watching this thread grow. I'm at 65k at the moment - well ahead of my daily goal for words, but behind my productivity goal for chapters...I'm going to see if I can't push out another tonight while I'm still awake. Insomnia's got to be good for something, right? How are everyone else's goals coming along? :D

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hazeltwilight — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 11:32:50 +0530

Well my goal is definitely going to be finishing my Nanonovel this month! After winning the last three years (not including this one) - this is the first nano where I have something I want to finish. I'm shooting for 80k, but honestly not sure as this last 3rd-ish isn't very heavily planned. I'm going to try to shoot for 1k to 2k a day as inspiration allows. I'll probably figure out a set number as I get a better idea of what's going to happen in this last section.

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douleur — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 13:02:24 +0530

My goal is just to finish my novel. I'm not setting a breakneck pace or anything--1K a day will do for me. That should still get me done with the story within December. Up to 52.6K today. Considering that my computer hates me and I lost some words, I feel pretty good about that.

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Dawnchild — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 13:30:09 +0530

My goal is actually very simple. My friend, his dad, his mom and a couple other people and I are all self publishing. My goal is to have my second draft and filed materials done by the end of the first week of January. This becomes important because the first SALE of my book will be at the Phoenix Dark Con which happens only every two years. 2012 is the year for it. If I miss this goal I admit it will be rather disappointing. But if I succeed there is a good chance that I will sell a good 20-30 (or more) copies of my book.

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Temporal — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 13:54:13 +0530

Urk! So many high goals! Frankly, I'm just trying not to forget. Now that I think of it, I'd like to get another 40,000 words done before January. But I'm still at the first few weeks of the story, so there is much character development to be done!

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Beulah_May_Jennings — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 16:54:27 +0530

My goals for December: - Finish all those homework assignments that I ignored during Nanowrimo.... - Clean and decorate the house (trees up! My first tree of my very own!) - Write all my Christmas cards. - Start my next month's school assignment early. - Get my NaNo Novel to ~70kish. I want it to be 85Kish in the end, but during Christmas time, I'm not going to freak out if I don't get to there in December. Heck, I haven't looked at it since the 30th. I decided to sleep and spend time with my fiance who kind of got shafted a bit while I wrote *-_-*. He's gone for a week starting tomorrow, so that'll give me lots of productivity time.

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kylecwells — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 20:31:19 +0530

You know I got caught up in life (a move to Peru and a new Job) and November just didn't come together like I would have liked. So I really need this thread! So here's what I've decided to do since it's Saturday. In true Nano form, I'm goinig for a 15K day.... Anyone... ANYONE ELSE????? My rewards: 5K make cup-cakes 10K eat cup-cakes 15K I'd like to say go to a movie or go out, but let's be honest. I'll probably just fall asleep with the computer still in my lap. I know this maybe isn't that thread, but this seems like the most populated one around for continuing to write through December.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 21:11:22 +0530

Great goals, good luck everyone. As that great purveyor of wisdom Ice Cube once said: "You can do it put your back into it/ I can do it put your ass into it." Wise words I'm sure we can all agree. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6auk1TkGtVQ&ob=av2e I have hit my target for today and written just over 2,000 words. I now have over 55,000 in total. With your encouragement I hope to be able to keep up that momentum and reached my overall goal to be finished by Christmas. 55057 / 85000 (64.77%)

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JacenTheBard — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 21:20:21 +0530

I just realized that I only got about 1/3 of the way through my intended plot during NaNo, so I'm going to keep going with it until it's done. And simultaneously start on the new project that's been bugging me all month for attention. I'd love to say something like "I'm gonna finish my NaNo before 12/31!!!" but that won't happen, given how much of my plot I have to go through yet.

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mariahughes — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 02:30:06 +0530

Hi everyone, I'm on a 2 day break and am then going to keep going at 1666 a day until my novel is finished, should be by mid january. This is a great thread!!

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Kaserl — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 02:48:10 +0530

700 words a day for the rest of December, which I think will be enough to get my novel finished.... And then I'll start editing! I had to lower the word count goal though, because I have finals, a choir concert, and a belt testing this month.

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Dani Marchand — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 03:59:34 +0530

Worked all day on editing the cover image. Ugh. I use Gimp, which is like a free version of Photoshop, and the learning curve is killing me. Still, I think the results are turning out better than a lot of other Kindle published authors' self-made covers. Would anyone be willing to take a look at the two covers I have and let me know what you think?

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D.F.T.B.A — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 06:53:59 +0530

It's early December 4th here, and so far I've hit my goal of 500 words of world building a day for the 2nd and 3rd. I'm right on track to finish the month with 15k! My problem with any project I try to do, though, is consistency. Whether its writing, eating healthy, or getting more exercises I only seem to be able to stay on track for 3 days at a time before falling off the wagon (my NaNo stats say the same). I'm going to try my absolute hardest not to do that this time, but any tips would be much appreciated!

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Rensy — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 07:04:46 +0530

My goal is to reach the end of my novel before the beginning of Christmas break on the 19th. It's about two-thirds of the way done, and at the rate I'm going now, I'd say I need another 25,000 words to finish. Hoping to knock out at least 2k a day~!

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maggiep — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 07:14:54 +0530

My goal, not as high as everyone else's(I'd love to write a longer story, but have never done it)-15,000 words. So far-(and yes Im looking cuz I know longer have the word count bar to keep track for me :( I miss you word count bar :( )-2,112 words.

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akizakura — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 07:23:34 +0530

Might give this a try, but I'll probably set a lowered goal (like 25k/30k). Good luck all!

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Silverleaf28 — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 08:41:20 +0530

My goal is 20k by the end of December. It's what my Excel graph came out to with my daily goals of 250 words on schooldays, 500 on weekends, and 1000 a day over winter break. Of course, this is assuming that I had written the first two days of the month and that I'll have time to write 1k on Christmas, but I know I *can* write more than that from NaNo, so it's definitely doable. I hope to have this thing finished by next year's NaNo... I'm at 98.8k total (I had 48k before NaNo... I cheated, I know) and about a quarter of the way through my plot. I need to come up with shorter plots. :)

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maggiep — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 09:33:40 +0530

Ending the day with 2,789 words. 677 words in a few hours, not too terrible. maybe will get more in tomorrow. Would write more tonight, but Wheel of Time is calling me and I have to read more

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VikingPillager — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 10:19:14 +0530

I honestly don't have very much love for my story. While I was writing, I consoled myself with the thought that I would edit it into something that would not make me cringe with shame in December, but now I can hardly muster the energy to tear myself away from my post-NaNo consumer/nap binge. I need to turn it into something that I won't be horribly ashamed of by Christmas, because my friend and I are swapping novels then, but I haven't even finished let alone begun editing. I was really hoping to be able to relax this month, but I guess that's not happening. It's just annoying, because I'm pretty sure that no matter how much effort I put in now, I can't hide the fact that I made up the plot that I went along and wrote most of it rather late at night. Oh well, we'll see how it goes. I wish everyone luck with their goals!

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MystShadow — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 12:24:51 +0530

Ok... MUST finish this novel. The whole point of me doing NaNo in the first place was to FINISH what i started. I write all the time, but i never FINISH anything. So why is it that while i'm absolutely loving my plot and the majority of my charcters i am just... not writing? This plot has still got at a very minimum 20-30K left in it... probably more actually. I also want it to be done by Christmas. I'm not showing anyone then, i just want it finished by then. Looks like i'm pulling out WOD again. Apparently i only work under pressure.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 12:57:37 +0530

17,301 words so far-- spent five hours at functions where I couldn't write today. Will try for a couple but it's time for bed. Thank you to everyone who's answered the survey (to those who just click "last", it's on page 2, I still appreciate responses); I notice that everyone so far has answered d on question 3 and all but one person has answered c on question 2.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 14:59:38 +0530

Okay, 17489 words. Goodnight, everyone.

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ellarien — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 15:10:12 +0530

Well done, everybody! I'm now at 77,865 and into the wrap-up phase of my last chapter. (And still fiddling with the spreadsheet.)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 03:07:45 +0530

So, day four check in, everyone who's still here. :) We've all got goals, right? So my question to you is: are you on track? If you have a goal length to reach by a certain day, are you moving fast enough? Are you by any chance ahead? :) If you need help trying to figure out whether you're on track, I can help with that.

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Unforgivable — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 03:38:24 +0530

I've been completely off-track the last couple of days.. But with good reason. I've been moving into a new house so everything has been a complete mess and impossible to find time in. BUT! I've almost finished unpacking my things in my room, so I should be able to start writing 800 words a day and thereby writing the 20.000 words, I'm hoping to write this december month - My friend challenged me..... xD Anyways! I'll be back with more updates in a couple of days.

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Chibi-chan — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 03:38:25 +0530

This month i want to edit and rewrite a bit to find out what parts of my novel are still missing and what i have to take out (it is all just a horrible mess right now ;) ) I didn#t do anything the last few days due to post-nano-blues and terrible headaches, but today i actually managed to edit about 1700 words. i want to get to 50000 words, either edited or rewritten by the end of december, so i guess I'll have to work hard ;)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 04:39:28 +0530

Wow, moving is cool. Good luck, I hope you get back on track soon. 1700/day would work-- but I'd worry that you could hit a place where you have to go back and change everything all over again. Sounds like you're getting on track, though. Personally, I'm just on track, not ahead or behind.

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:49:13 +0530

Hey guys! So cool to check in after a day away and see everyone's progress! I'm well ahead of my daily word-count goals, but I'm behind where I wanted to be in the story at this point. Yesterday I had to take the day off to focus on getting my two graduate school aps out of the way (Harvard's was a b**ch), but they are now completed and ready to be sent off on the morrow. Which means back to writing! I last clocked in at 66261...though admittedly hardly any of that was written yesterday. I'm off to fencing practice in an hour, but until then, I'm going to write away! :D Keep on keepin' on folks, and keep letting us know how it's going! ^_^

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MySerenity2 — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 06:05:57 +0530

My goal is to edit what I wrote from this years NaNo in the next few days. I have several friends and family who want to read it. I've never had someone read my work before, not even my husband, and I'm a little nervous. I've been finding it hard to take the time to concentrate on editing. But I do have about an hour most evenings to work on my writing. I'm eager to finish editing my NaNo story so I can move onto the next one. I've got a dozen other ideas and there are a few in particular that are really good. My long term goal is to write throughout the year, and find out what my writing rhythm is. I would love to have the first draft of two of my story ideas completed before next years NaNo.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 06:18:08 +0530

Great! :D That's a really great goal, MySerenity2. How much do you think you'd like to write throughout the year? It works better to know how much you're aiming for. Do you want to write every day? Do you want to write a hundred words? A page? 750 words? I think I'm falling behind a little on today's writing... uh-oh. Congratulations, Phoenix. That's 5k in four days, right? That's a reasonable pace, given that you're doing other things.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Lady_Indis_Dress — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 08:30:52 +0530

I'm going to keep going through December. May not make every day because of a lot of things going on, but I'm going to try. I've only written a bit over 400 words since the end of NaNo. That's disappointing. But as long as I'm still writing...

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

darkblue627 — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 08:53:34 +0530

My goal is also to finish my NaNo novel. Preferably in December. I think the 1667 words average per day is a good target since that's the number for NaNo as well, but so far I've written basically nothing this month. In other words, I really really need to get working if I'm actually going to finish this in December.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 09:14:47 +0530

I'm back on track! But not ahead. How many words do you think the finished project will be, darkblue627? :) If it's less than 100k, you might not need to do 1667 per day.

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darkblue627 — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 09:33:20 +0530

Honestly, I'm not really sure how long it'll be. It will definitely be less than 100k, though, probably closer to 70k. I know I don't really have to do 1667 a day, but I like to have a higher word count goal. I write better if I write a lot consistently. It keeps me motivated =]

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 13:14:14 +0530

18000.

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mariahughes — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 15:59:47 +0530

Im editing and rewriting to get familiar again with my story after taking a few days break. Its great to be back writing!!

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JellybeanP — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 18:48:42 +0530

I've been doing pretty well so far---have hit my target of 1K/day every day in December.

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Vinxman — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 20:03:50 +0530

I'm reading the novels of my noveling class this month, so I'll be reading 15 novels, several of those were NaNo novels. My NaNo was 85K, but will probably get to the low 90s by the time I'm finished. I am also working on another novel that I started in September (but put on hold for November). I'm up to 46K right now, and it looks to be 80-90K, so we'll see if I get it done this month.

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Liza.M — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 21:03:06 +0530

My goal is to finish my novel. I thought it would be readable once I was done but towards the ending I've made so many changes I've got some serious rewriting to do before it makes any sense. I don't have any word count goal, just as long as it takes for it to have a neat finish and no loose ends. It'll probably lose some words during editing and gain some in other parts so it doesn't matter so much. I just want it to be a unit, to make sense as a whole and be a proper story.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

nikkianetra — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 21:37:55 +0530

My goal is to finish 1st draft of the novel in time for a writing class I am taking in January. With 55k words I'm about 60% of the way there.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Secret_Agent_Girl — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 21:42:46 +0530

Oh, this looks like a fun thread. I'm going to have to join in. At least it'll keep me motivated to finish my dang novel.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

mariahughes — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 23:51:43 +0530

Yeah my motivation is dragging but i'm pushing through, thank god. x m

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 01:11:18 +0530

Well yesterday was terrible and I wrote hardly anything. Today I did better but fell short of my target of hitting 58,000. I'm being forced to have a life tomorrow but hope that by the end of Wednesday I will have passed 60,000. Keep at it everyone. I have faith in you. 57605 / 85000 (67.77%)

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sarai.schu — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 01:19:37 +0530

Oh boy! This is exactly what I need. I'm in the throes of the climax right now, which is pretty awesome for me as that was a lot further along in the story than I thought I would be at 50k! I've been trying to write every day but I got completely stuck Friday afternoon. My characters were not happy with the set-up and were obviously trying to tell me something... so I listened and we are going in another direction. I don't think Eshkaya wanted to die... ;) Currently at 56760, hopefully I will finish this first draft by the end of Nano - Cember! Hurray for all of our lofty goals!

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thecandiedmango — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 01:59:08 +0530

I'm hoping to get another 40k this month and finish the rough draft of the plot. University commitments made NaNo way too difficult to finish, but this month I have almost three full weeks of break time and only one (or two) final exam(s) instead of the usual four or five. So excited to keep up with this. I'm hoping to get back into writing 1500+ per day but right now I'm just trying to write something---whether it's one hundred words of dialogue or five hundred of character development---just to keep moving.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

ellarien — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 03:51:37 +0530

Now at 78852, and probably as close to the "The End" as this draft is going to get for now. Next task is to fill in the missing scenes.

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.the.blue.dinosaur. — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:20:07 +0530

I just want to finish All That Is Seen and Unseen (the rewrite)! I've got about 20-30K left on it, and I want it to be done by the end of December. :)

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:51:13 +0530

Clocking in at 68.5K, and still at work. I'll check back in when I'm done for the day, hopefully one chapter further than I am now. If I can manage that, I'll be back on track for my goal!

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MySerenity2 — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 08:11:50 +0530

I've got half of my NaNo story edited. I am working on the rest and hope to have it finished in two days. I am getting my friends and family to read it so I don't want them to lose interest. As for the editing part, I'm telling myself I'm just learning how to write AND edit, so it won't be perfect. I would like to put my story away after I'm done with it and then leave it for a year or two then go back and see how far I've come. My goal for NaNo this year was to write 2000 words a day and it seemed to work for me. My goal after my editing my story is to read my favourite novel over the Christmas holidays, then to prepare an outline of one of the two novels I want to complete first drafts by next NaNo. I'm not sure if I will be able to write 2000 words a day so I'll start with 1000/day and see how it goes. My writing quality can only improve, right?

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

hazeltwilight — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 08:17:26 +0530

So this lack of graph thing is killing my writing! I need set word count goals because I have no sense of urgency going at all. I'm going to have to start punching it up. I've only written like a couple thousand. I think I'm going to have to find a graph replacement and some guilt...

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Kiaira — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 09:35:47 +0530

http://decnowrimo.chatango.com/ I created a chat room, for any of us who are still writing this month. For support, word wars and a little bit of socialization! anyone can use the chat room, and I hope it can be used by all of us who are crazy enough to continue.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 10:49:51 +0530

Thanks, Kiaira. That's a great idea.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 14:03:47 +0530

Good news and bad news. The good news is, I reached 19,007 words today (quite a sprint tonight-- and... er... ignored some homework a little). The bad news is, my hand-drawn progress graph omits December 6. I don't know how that happened. I can't fix it-- I'd have to redraw the whole par line because I'd have to change the angle. I've drawn December as a thirty-day month. I know! I'll take tomorrow off! XP I would have anyway.

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Cygfa — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 14:16:23 +0530

At the moment, my goal is just to write something each day. At the moment I manage about 300+ words each day, which is depressing after writing 1667 (nearly) every NaNo day, but at least it's something. Once theholidays start, I'll try to get to 1667 per day again. This morning I've already written 313 words, so maybe I'll manage a few hundred more when I get back home from Uni in the afternoon.

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 14:56:44 +0530

Cool about the chat room, Kiaira, I'll have to check it out! Good work, Hanabi. I think you deserve the "missing" day off ;) Cygfa, as far as I'm concerned, writing anything at all on any day makes it a good day ^_^ Keep it up! As for me, formatting troubles with the online apps for Harvard and Georgetown turned what was supposed to be a 30-minute submission endeavor into a 5-hour struggle, eating away massively at my writing time. Thus, I didn't get the second chapter today done. I did, however, manage to punch out about half of it, outline the other half, and push up about 70k total. Which I think is pretty respectable considering. (I'm worried about tomorrow though - a long work day and Glee will both kill my productivity if I'm not careful >< ) I got my lovely super-duper comfortable NaNoWriMo hoodie in the mail today, which I am currently sporting happily (especially given the 10-degree F weather outside), and it has provided me an excellent motivator. That, and cookies. What are all of you doing to stay motivated?

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Moisoha — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 15:05:56 +0530

My motivation right now is kinda silly actually. Sometime in the middle of November I was so done writing my novel but all of my friends were pretty much forcing me to keep writing. So I decided to try and shove them all into my novel just for fun. Well, I figured out where they all go in my novel, and then one of my friends in the story fell in love with my MMC. Didn't see that coming. Well I told her what had happened and she freaked out and she has been avidly keeping me going, talking to me about my novel constantly, and always asking "Does he love me back yet?" ALWAYS. She really keeps me going.

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 15:58:56 +0530

My motivation is the desire to actually finish something for once in my life. The other, bigger one is all the people that I know who have been incredibly supportive throughout November. When I started this I was expecting people to laugh the idea off. Instead most people have been excited by the idea and I've have several requests to read it. I can't let my friends down.

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Unforgivable — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 16:51:32 +0530

In my new house we have this corner with big floor-to-wall windows, where I enjoy sitting and looking out at the garden. That is what is inspiring me - but with all the mess from moving and my huge family making noise all of time, it's hard to find a time of day, where I'm alone and able to just sit down, stare out those lovely windows, and write. Hopefully, I'll be getting more time for that once everything falls into place. But really, staring at something beautiful while listening to beautiful classical or "epic" music and enjoying a cup of tea - that's one hell of a boost of inspiration. :)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

sarai.schu — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 19:03:20 +0530

Pushing my way through the last scenes... Slow and steady. There are so many pieces of the story that I need to go back and edit, but I'm doing my best to ignore them. 58129/ 65000. :) productive morning!

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Chibi-chan — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 19:52:49 +0530

I didn't reach my goal yesterday, just got about a 1000 words....well, at least i've got a reason to try harder today

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Viper_Rock — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 23:33:01 +0530

Primarily to rewrite/edit/finish November's novel. I'm also determined to pick up and start writing another piece that'll around 100k by the start of March. Just in time to give me March to set up for Frenzy. So I'll need around 30k my New Year's. Not as intensive, but on top of my rewrites/edits it may give me a fair amount of trouble. Since I also *really* need outlines and I haven't the faintest idea of *which* of my ideas to start writing first...

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 23:59:00 +0530

Attention everyone: today is Back Up Your Novel Day. That makes three so far since November 1, but you've written a lot since then. We all have. Don't lose that. Just keep what you've got in multiple media. A file on your computer, a file on a memory stick, paper, Google Docs, email it to yourself, email it to your grandma. Just pick any two of those: one for writing, one for your backup. (It occurs to me that if you write on Google Docs and back up on Gmail as an email or draft, if one goes down, you're probably losing the other, so don't do it that way.) Also, there's still a survey on page 2, if you're interested and haven't gone through all the pages so far.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Kiaira — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 00:02:08 +0530

I'm in the chat room all day if someone wants to word war! http://decnowrimo.chatango.com/

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Lilia Sparks — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 03:15:54 +0530

My goal is to write 1000 words a day and possibly finish the novel before the createspace code's expiration date in January. Wish me luck!

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Riishi — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 03:27:00 +0530

Around 49k right now and pushing for 80 (should be a finished first draft by then, I hope) by the new year. I'm really glad there are still a few active boards, I think I need the peer pressure and personal guilt of gazing at all your little winner bars to keep going. My goal is to have a finished by the end of 2012. Anyone else looking to turn their nano roughage into a finished novel eventually?

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luckyomally — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 04:39:37 +0530

My goal is to finish before I leave town in a week and a half. That way I have the whole car ride to edit and such. Must write 2k today. I'm at 52,009. Ahh! Motivation is greatly needed!

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Julia Caesaris — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 10:31:06 +0530

I have two separate writing goals: Post a new chapter of my fanfic each Sunday and write at least enough to not fall behind on that, AND finish the first draft. Currently I'm just over 50000, but I think it will easily hit 65000. Between the two, I should be writing every day.

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sarahlucielle — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 12:27:00 +0530

I'm planning to double my word count by the end of December, adding things as I go through my rewrites and edits. For example I have a lot of songs to write and mythic tales to add to the universe so I'll concentrate a lot on that. It will especially be challenging because lyrical verse is not a strong suit of mine.

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PhoenixSempai — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 14:42:18 +0530

72844. And I am SO tired.

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 14:57:03 +0530

Hello all you lovely people out there in NaNoland. If you have the time or want a brief distraction I could use a little help. I am having a very short piece I wrote (1,000 words) published. The book is about people who have emigrated and my piece is about misunderstandings with language that happened to me. Anywho, I need to provide a short (25 word max) biography and I'm a bit stuck. What would yours be? So far I have: Aspiring writer. Terrible housewife. Procrastinator extraordinaire. Currently enjoying life following her husband as he works his way around Europe. What do you think?

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sarai.schu — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 19:18:51 +0530

I am now up to 59696, and one of the words that I wrote this morning was: AFTERMATH... which means that I am so close to being done that I can TASTE IT! :) the_blue_rose: Generally I like the biography you posted above. I like the part about making your way through Europe, since it ties in nicely with what you said the piece is about. I read the author bios in short story anthologies when I actually do pick up something like that, and if I saw that I would be glad because you have experience in what you have written. Just my two cents, though.

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mutewitness — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 21:37:06 +0530

Well, after November, I started over. Right now I'm at 6,917 words, and just finished chapter 1. I'm writing everyday, but taking my time. My 50k is basically just a bunch of scenes/outlines now. I basically spent November coming up with my novel. Now I'm writing it.

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stephensdemise — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 01:02:42 +0530

My goal is to keep writing daily. I'm sticking with 1,667 as a minimum because that's what I did all Nov. ANd so far, I'm on a hot December Streak! I'm working on the rewrite I set aside for naNo. I want to finish it, so I can start work on this year's.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 01:12:04 +0530

I wanted to have reached 60,000 words by this evening. I'm about 600 short but it'll do. My new target is to have reached at least 65,000 by Sunday evening. Usually this would be reachable but all my friends who are harassing me to finish are now demanding I be sociable. What do they want me to do, dammit! 59406 / 85000 (69.89%)

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douleur — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 02:52:49 +0530

I'm at 59K, and I've just reached the major plot twist. The world-shaking, life-altering plot twist. And I am totally psyched about it. I've been looking forward to this scene for so long!

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Kiaira — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 03:16:39 +0530

My character just found otu the child she has been raising by her countries king's orders was a prince kidnapped from his own country, and she has been helping keep him hostage. She is very freaked out.

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ellarien — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 05:20:39 +0530

I was bad yesterday and didn't write anything, but today I (just) passed 80K, and I'm maybe half done with one of my missing scenes. I have whole plotlines I want to add in the rewrite, but I do want to get this draft as complete as it can be, first. I'm also wondering whether it's worth trying Scrivener, when yWriter seems to do most of what I want though not quite as prettily. I'm definitely not embarking on a new learning curve until this draft is done, though.

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Kiaira — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 06:58:01 +0530

As of today, since Dec 1st I have reached 21,326 words! Join me for a word war! http://decnowrimo.chatango.com/

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:54:17 +0530

So was anybody else excited to see that one of the winner's prizes was 5 free copies of your book in paperback form from createspace? I nearly died. Even if it wasn't a final publishable draft I would so *love* to have a real-life copy of the first novel I ever finish. Though now I find myself wondering if I should keep pushing this fast for the 17th for my friend, or just tell her to wait until Christmas when I can get her an actual hard copy of the book. Hmmm... Well either way, I'll keep pushing forward. Going to be writing a very exciting set of scenes tonight, I believe ^_^

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Deep Blue Sea — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 13:37:35 +0530

I know if I say it out loud to everyone here that my goal is to reach 40,000 words by the end of December (currently sitting on 25,511) I'm more likely to achieve it. I'll be too embarrased not to! I'm on holiday for three weeks starting Xmas. I will be travelling and staying with friends and family for part of that time but that is no excuse. It's great to see so many other people continuing in December. It has helped reduce my withdrawal from nanowrimo.

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TribalCat — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 18:33:11 +0530

I'd like to write at least another 25k in December. Part of this month I'll be busy reviewing and editing what I already have, and I've already taken the first week off from writing. Time to get busy again :)

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 13:34:50 +0530

Nothing so far today. Ugh. I blame school.

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PhoenixSempai — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 14:32:39 +0530

Ugh, Hanabi, I know how you feel. I mean, I *did* get half a chapter done, and I was on a roll and all...but then I decided it was a great idea to work on a cover in photoshop. Which I did, and I'm actually quite pleased with it...but cover will not do me any good without a completed book to put it on! Now I just don't have the energy to write any more. But - tomorrow is a new day. I'll write more, you write more, and we'll be all awesome together ;)

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 18:36:05 +0530

Yesterday was a lost day for me too. I got no further on my novel, although I did start a new short story. Unfortunately I'm at a dead end with that as well at the moment. So far today's been no better. I just don't have any inspiration. I know where I want to go but not really how to do it. My MC has to meet her dream guy, but how? Any suggestions warmly received. Also for those that remember I heard back regarding my biography. Apparently they are say I can't be an "aspiring writer" because I have neither a blog or twitter account! I understand why they might feel I should have at least one of these things, but I fail to see how not having them disqualifies me from being an aspiring writer. I haven't written anything since I left school 17 years ago and have rediscovered my passion for it just recently. If this novel is terrible when finished then I intend to start another and am working on some short stories as well. In my mind I am a writer. Seriously if a blog and/ or twitter is needed to be a writer then what are Jane Austen, Charles Dickens, Harper Lee, etc? Ok. rant over. *Deep breathes.* Thanks for reading.

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MySerenity2 — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 22:27:56 +0530

Haven't done much work on editing my NaNo novel. I have a few friends and family members who are interested in reading it, but the last few days have been busy/frustrating. I suppose it's the holiday stress. My husband is out of town overnight and the plan is to finish the editing by this evening. Followed by going to bed early and sleeping in. Ah... Right now, I've polished off a bag of hershey's kisses and tea, and I'm ready to edit my heart out!

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stephensdemise — Sat, 10 Dec 2011 04:46:27 +0530

Did 750words.com today and that was it. I have no energy, ugh. Zero work on the rewrite I'm working on. I had put it aside for NaNo. And I'm stuck on the plot right now. Muse,come back! Seriously, zero ideas. Hopefully I'll have a better day tomorrow.

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Kiaira — Sat, 10 Dec 2011 08:17:21 +0530

I'm gonna be in the chat room for another hour or so. Join me for word wars. http://decnowrimo.chatango.com/

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MySerenity2 — Sat, 10 Dec 2011 08:57:20 +0530

Just finished a basic edit of my story. Now I can focus on my other story ideas that have been poking my brain. But I think I need a little break from writing and go and read some books until the new year. :) Best of luck to all of you in your goals! I'm planning to write two story drafts before next years NaNo. I hope to have lots of writing practice in by then. I also can't wait to see how much better I will get. I'm taking my story and put it away for at least a year or more then go back and see how much I have improved.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 10 Dec 2011 15:23:40 +0530

And yesterday was another day of nothing. I wrote a paragraph. I'm hoping for a better weekend, but my life is banging on the door demanding to be let in.

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 03:56:02 +0530

So today my computer decided to shut down while I was saving and wiped over 1,000 words. My husband tried everything but they have disappeared into the ether. (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ I am now the proud owner of a new laptop but lost another day. At this rate my goal will be to finish before 2012. But I will finish. And tomorrow is another day.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 05:02:23 +0530

You'll make it, the_blue_rose. You're still moving. Unlike me. I haven't written. I've been reading-- but only the homework reading. I haven't read anything for fun in forever. (Well, I have read some. But not as much as I want to.) Maybe if I can manage to read twice as much as I already have today and finish my English homework and my Japanese homework, then after everything on Sunday that should take me till around 4 pm, I'll be free to write, if I'm not too tired! But that would require postponing some homework till the last minute. I'd better get cracking. Christmas break will come pretty soon! :D

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Kiaira — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 06:06:36 +0530

I'm gonna get behind! I have to make a whole bunch of stuff for x-mas present, finish a commission, and by the time I am done work, i am too tired to even look at anything in front of me. BOO

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AJ1961 — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 06:47:45 +0530

I have an unrelated question. Is the NANoEdMo web site related at all to the Office of Letters and Light?

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darkblue627 — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 12:33:05 +0530

So far this weekend, I have read two books and written about 3000 words. And rewatched The Fellowship of The Ring. That's my idea of a productive weekend. I'm a bit behind on my word count goal to be honest, but I'm still happy as long as I keep writing. I'm finally starting to get back into the swing of things. Although I also have an awful lot of homework that I'm leaving for tomorrow. Well, today. Hey, whatever works I suppose =]

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kctejada — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 12:50:01 +0530

I want to finish my novel by the end of the month. However, I'm not sure if that's going to happen; I'm at the halfway mark now and I'm not working as much as I was in November. Barring finishing in December, I'm aiming for the second week of January.

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MingLin-Hong — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 12:54:50 +0530

I am almost done with my novel but I can only write about 200 words per day and finals is coming up! Still, I hope to finish it by this week so I can start editing by Christmas vacation. My goal is to be able to send it out to beta readers/editors by January.

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 14:14:01 +0530

I've seen a few people posting about falling behind. So have I. Don't worry about it. Behind is still writing, just not as fast as you wanted. Keep going and I know we can all make it.

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Chibi-chan — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 17:15:04 +0530

Okay, I haven't been doing much this december, even though I had a goal. i wanted to finish my story, but yesterday I decided that I am not going to do that in december. I like the story but I just feel to blocked to continue with it and have fallen horribly behind. So yesterday I started writing a new story, based on an idea tat has been plot-bunnying me for a while now. Hope that I can go through with that :)

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IFangirlLunaLovegood — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 18:09:05 +0530

I have continued to write my NaNo-novel since the first draft is not yet finished, and my original goal was to have it finished at 75K, by December 20th. I passed 71K the other day, and there is no way that I'll finish by 75K, so my new plan is to have a finished first draft (no matter how long it'll be) by December 20th. Wish me luck! (:

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 02:40:27 +0530

The good news is I'm ahead on the killer difficult long-term assignment. The bad news is I've still got stuff to do yet today. But, you know, maybe! Oh, and the other good news is OOH BOOKS. I've got a stack of three cool ones that I'm reaching around to type this. :) So maybe some writing will get done today or maybe I'll read.

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maggiep — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 03:25:05 +0530

I didnt get to write yesterday or this morning, so trying to make up for it now. I finished the first two parts and am now getting the third together. word count is at 8,261. thats not the 1667 words a day, but Im happy.

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KatiePoet — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 05:29:00 +0530

Do you all mind if I jump in? :D All late and stuff... But actually, I've been writing through December so far. Once November finished, I had my 50K words but my novel was anything but done. So now I'm at about 78k, which means I've been averaging about 2k words per day. Some days I write more, some less... Regardless of word count, I want to be finished with my novel by the end of December. I'm glad I found this forum; for some reason, the illusion of having my goals out there really helps me! My problem is that my plot is moving too slowly... ughhhhhh! I'm a poet, so I get very tied into details/images... and then it's like, oh, oops, something actually has to happen :D ah... I'll learn. Thanks everyone! For keeping this magical stuff going. K.

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Kiaira — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 07:50:30 +0530

My writing has come to a stop....sigh I am working such long hours that by the time i get home, i crash.

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KatiePoet — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 08:26:05 +0530

Hey! Thanks Maggi, Hanabi, and douleur for the kind/encouraging words :) Yeah, this is my first attempt at a novel (since I was like fifteen but that doesn't count!). So it's definitely a learning process for me. Right now I'm just enjoying writing, and you're right -- I'll worry about the editing later. I need to be reminded of that sometimes. I'm totally in love with my characters! And now that I've started, I just can't give up the momentum. After November finished, I actually started feeling depressed. But that's not necessary, I'll just keep on going. So onward, fellow Nanocember..ers! LOL I write at work (sometimes). Shhh that's supposed to be a secret ;)

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maggiep — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 09:57:19 +0530

Ending the day with 8,597 words

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 10:11:23 +0530

19,672 so far. Well, it's something.

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Delyn — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 13:17:07 +0530

Okay, just found this thread :-/ November has been full of firsts for me. I finished my novel during Nov. but I knew that I left chunks of description out as well as several transitional parts, so I am going back now and filling in these pieces. This was my first Nano so I was pleased that I reached the 50K mark and that I actually was able to write a complete story, beginning to end. Something I have never done in over 30 years of writing. To top it off, I still like the story. I'm not bored, disgusted, or think it is a pile of dung. It just needs more work. I have taken 10 days off without any writing, just some brainstorming and well lets be honest, banging my head against my desk trying to figure out ways to improve it. Today I printed the first three chapters and as I was reading them, it clicked. The first chapter doesn't have enough barb on the hook. So now my MC starts the book hanging from a balcony. I am figuring another 30K in additional words will do the job. This 30K encompasses adding in two minor characters, an overarching plot for the series, changing a minor characters role from a walk on to a more involved role, adding more description (rereading made me realize that I never actually described one of my MCs. The picture in my head never made it to the page! Duh!), making sure I utilized all the senses and filling in a few holes. So is this considered a rewrite or an edit or is it still working on the first draft?

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 14:02:39 +0530

OMG. Sorry about being totally AWOL for the last few days, guys - and a big, hearty welcome to the new folks who have stopped in while I was gone. Glad to have you! I've been given a bunch of last-minute hours at work, which I am grateful for, and running damage control on my graduate applications (one of my letter-writers has yet to turn in his letter and won't answer emails..... >.> ), but the result is essentially no time to hang out around here. HOWEVER, fear not as I HAVE been writing! I am just over 82k as of this evening. And more awesomely, I have less than four chapters remaining until The End. If I can keep up my current pace, I'll totally have a draft for my friend like I wanted. I'm so excited! But I'll really have to push myself the next few days to keep this up, so all your love and support is appreciated as always. And you all keep up the great work too!

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 14:42:02 +0530

Well done Phoenix. Get it finished and then dance round your room like a loon! Since I lost those 1,000 words I've been having a real problem getting back into my story. It feels like everything I write is rubbish compared to what I lost and my motivation has practically disappeared. Instead I have started working on a short story for the writer's group I am a part of. I should finish that today and then it's back to my novel.

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ellarien — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 16:31:19 +0530

I'm up to 81.5K, but I've slowed down a lot over the last week and I'm technically about a thousand words behind. Filling in scenes is harder than writing blindly ahead; also, my ideas for the second draft are somewhat getting in the way of the first one, because there are characters who probably won't make it into the second and whole extra subplots that will be there. And I spent most of Saturday importing my other unfinished NaNovel into Scrivener and noticing that it seems much better written than the current effort. Sometimes I think my writing has been steadily degenerating over the last twenty years, and sometimes I just think that I have to let things sit for a while to appreciate them, but I suspect that the three years of not-writing following Nano08 didn't help.

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Kiaira — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 19:06:24 +0530

I don't work until 5:30PM tonight. I'm getting some writing done! And then two days off...which tomorrow is gonna be a lot of meetings and such. In the evening finishing my x-mas gifts, and Wednesday....my day for writing!!!! And that is final!

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glynes — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 02:24:50 +0530

My cousin (who just found me on FB after 45 years!) has offered to do the initial edit on my almost-ready 2008 novel, so this month (after allowing myself 2 couch-potato weeks) is devoted to maybe the first 1/3 rewritten/proofed/formatted to get him started. January will be for getting through the other 2/3 and get it all out the door to him. February is the first of my three 2012 personal writing challenge months, "glynowrimo", so sometime in the next 6 weeks I have to decide on a new story to work on. glynes

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stephensdemise — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 04:14:57 +0530

I did a challenge on Saturday - Full Moon Madness over on WriYe, and I wrote 10,000 words. And in the process, I think I finally have a plot nailed! Still doing 750words.com everyday, and I'm in the middle of my "work week" (I'm third shift, it really messes with me) So I haven't gotten a whole lot done other than that. I am using the 750words.com to learn to touch type, which will allow me to write faster, and it's coming along quite nicely. My fingers seem to be able to find most of the keys now and I'm gaining speed. It's a good start.

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KatiePoet — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 05:22:11 +0530

Man good to see everyone chuggin' along. Today is tough for me -- been back to back appointments at day job, and teaching my last night class of the semester tonight which means I will leave with my arms full of papers to grade. Ugh! But none the less, today I am determined to at least write 1K! I can totally do that... once I finally get home at the end of the day... around 9pm :( It sucks being a grown up. I just want to live in my little imaginary NaNo world!

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ellarien — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 05:41:19 +0530

Now that's better! I went shopping, and a completely new scene ambushed me in the bookstore. (I have most of my best ideas in bookstores.) 1500 words later, I'm very nearly caught up.

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Kiaira — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 07:51:31 +0530

I'm gonna be int he chat room for at least another two hours tonight.

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 13:43:22 +0530

Checking in for the evening, guys. 84,280. Even on a full 8hour work day (which I rarely have as a part-timer). I was admittedly hoping for a bit more, but I'll take it, all things considered. Tomorrow I have to spend some time harassing (I mean checking in on) my AWOL letter-writer, but I still only work for four hours, so I'm hoping to be fairly productive. Especially since this next chapter is planned out pretty much to the letter. Then it's just the wrap-up...getting close...... Well, and then the editing begins. But I'm not worrying over that just yet. One major goal at a time. We just found out my grandparents are surprising the family with a Christmas visit as well, so I'd really like to have a solid draft by then, just so I won't have to worry about it over Christmas.

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 14:44:27 +0530

I finished my short story yesterday and celebrated by taking the rest of the day off and eating mint chocolate. I have just shipped Ms Inner Editor off on a 2 week cruise. She will be gone just enough time to allow me to finish my first draft. Right, let's finish this baby!

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Audra Dancer — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 17:40:36 +0530

Dun du dunn. I should get my story finished. December has been my official editing and procrastinating and inspiration searching month. That shall it continue being then! The writing goes on as the story isn't finished yet.

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Mikeala — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 02:22:33 +0530

So far, I have decided to rewrite the novel mostly, but I am keeping key factors and ideas developed during November, and will write a bit slower making sure that I don't trip up on things. I know some of the things that I wrote don't necessarily match what I later wrote. I am also checking out Yarny. I am handwriting the rewrite and will go chapter by chapter.

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Kiaira — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 08:07:25 +0530

Had a really bad day. Went to the doctor. Diagnosed with a few things, and it has been emotionally draining. No Writing today. Tomorrow this will be fixed. In the chatroom all day tomorrow!

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KatiePoet — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 08:38:28 +0530

Oh no! Hope you feel better Kiaira! Sometimes a day off from writing goes a long way, to recollect the emotions. Yesterday, I got 1K down -- it was all I could muster after an endless sea of grading. Ughguhgug. Today, though, I'm up for air, 2K on my novel. Yay! I wrote a nice big character building dialogue scene for my MC's love interest. I'm so jealous of her, though... already planning ways to kill her off. LOL. I'm not as crazy as I sound, I promise.

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PhoenixSempai — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 13:57:03 +0530

86476. And on to the wrap-up - though I'm discovering it may be three chapters' worth instead of two. And I got called in for extra work tomorrow. BUT. I WILL finish on time. I WILL. (If I keep telling myself, it might be true!!) The good news is that I finally tracked down that last letter-writer and got things settled, so my graduate applications are ready to go! Just have to upload the last document. I will be so glad to get them done with. Keep writing, everyone!

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 15:40:22 +0530

Kiaira - sorry to hear that. I hope it's something treatable and that the treatment starts working very soon. KatiePoet - 1k and grading is good going. Keep at it. Phoenix - you can do it. Good luck with the applications. Good news: I managed to get back to where I was before my laptop decided to go on a deleting rampage. Bad news: that was all I managed. I am having a real motivation problem. I really enjoyed writing my short story and had hoped that the enjoyment would carry over to the novel. No such luck. I have to introduce my final new character but I can't find any enthusiasm for it. I feel like I need a break from it but know that if I do I'll never go back and finish it. If anyone needs me I'll be in the corner rocking back and forth and making burbling noises.

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Carolf — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 21:18:39 +0530

When I get stuck, or lack enthusiasm, it's usually because I don't know as much as I need to know about what it is I'm trying to write. Maybe you don't know your new character well enough, yet? Someone once gave me this idea: Take your new character to a bar and get him/her drunk - not unconscious drunk, just feeling no pain drunk. Have a conversation. See what you learn. You can do this on paper or in your head, though on paper means you've caught something you might use later. Ok. For paper, substitute: screen. Good luck!

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maggiep — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 21:20:32 +0530

I was about 8700 words in and realized, my manuscript sucked. I like the fmc, but the story was going absolutely nowhere. soooo, back to the drawing board. Ive been able to tweaked some scenes to fit in the new version. I had my mom(aka editor, and she does tell me honestly how the story is), and she told me the rewritten opening scene is Much better and caught her attention immediately. So thats the good news on that. Bad news is Im still not positive how the fmc gets to that point and why.

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Kenouni Renashin — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 22:06:58 +0530

Well, at the end of November, I finished with the amount of words displayed on the left there. I decided that I wanted to either a) reach 100k by Christmas (or the end of December at the very latest) or b) finish the plot/Seventh Year (I'm writing Harry Potter Marauder era fan fiction, and I can go on forever after Seventh Year so setting the goal for the last year seemed reasonable.) Currently, I'm on about 99,000 words and I haven't finished today's 1,700 (I've been doing 1,700 a day since November 1st) - so you can imagine how I feel right now. I think, I might just continue until I finish Seventh Year anyway after today, but relax a little bit more. Only once I've finished Seventh Year can I really figure out what I want to do with this thing - whether I just want to leave it there and move on, or whether I want to continue with the thing. So yeah, those are my NaNo goals. I have another writing goal and that's to fill up 12 notebooks with my crappy handwritten fiction before the end of the year. (I started handwriting in notebooks at the end of February this year.) I am on notebook number 12 though, but not that far through it. (I have a reason for this second goal: I have way, way too many notebooks and pens so I'm just trying to get through them at a reasonable rate. I figure one a month is a pretty good average.) Woah. Way too much detail there really. Sorry about that. ~Ken-Ren

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Kiaira — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 00:56:15 +0530

I found out I have ADD, PSD and ADHD on top of my depression that I have been treating for over a year now. So I have been put on three new meds...all of which a very, very expensive. (sigh)

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Matuami — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 09:01:51 +0530

Update so that I'll feel motivated to up my productivity: Today, I finished the short story I've been writing for fiction writing class. Done! It's not nearly what I consider 'done' because I had to rewrite half of it and revise that without any feedback, but it's not a huge deal. My actual NaNo novel (still don't have a title, I've gone through three different ones in the past two weeks) is going slower than I'd hoped, but I have a four-hour train ride on Monday so I'm going to use that to catch up. At about 39k, after starting at 29k on the first.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 09:12:10 +0530

Okay guys! So, somebody got fired at work (seriously, who is stupid enough to steal the same amount of money from the same register two days in a row??!), and of course on the week before Christmas in retail. So I'm being called in for a HUGE amount of hours between now and Christmas to pick up the slack. Which means my very last day off before Christmas is.....tomorrow. I am only three chapters from finishing, at the most. So I've decided that I'm going to pull an all-nighter if necessary, and not sleep until I'm finished!! It's all planned out, so if I'm lucky I'll get a little sleep... In any case, I'm doing the final push for this thing TONIGHT. If I finish, i'll even be beating my goal ahead of time!! So if anyone cares to join me in my one-person online write-in, I will be found in the chat room for as long as I'm awake. Feel free to join!

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 12:00:40 +0530

So. Yesterday my winner's T-shirt arrived and it gave me the boost I needed. I didn't get as much done as I would have liked but I did write something, which is an improvement on the last week. I have met my new character and I like him. For the first time since November ended I feel engaged with my story. I want to finish. I can finish. I WILL finish. 60,810 words.

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Kenouni Renashin — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 14:06:14 +0530

*cheerleads everyone along* C'mon folks, you can do it :D I hit 102,000 yesterday so I'm feeling pretty good about myself. (102k in 44 days? Go me!). And I think I hit the halfway point in notebook number 12 last night too. Double win. From this Saturday, to New Year is going to be hell though - I'm a Christmas Temp in WHSmiths and they've decided to give me ALL THE HOURS IN THE WORLD without asking because, hey, apparently I won't have plans over Christmas. That, and I'm going to be away from my PC (where I do all my best writing) from Christmas Even to Boxing Day because we're going to see my boyfriend's grandparents. Bleh. I suppose I should just thank god I have a (very old) iPad so I'll be able to use that, but I doubt I'll be able to handwrite there. No available desk or anything I think. That'll make me sad. Sorry for the rant D: ~Ken-Ren

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Hanabi no Enigma — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 14:09:07 +0530

Thanks to Phoenix, I made it to 19,896. I remember in mid-November thinking I'd like to try to make it to 20k by the end of December... in the end I made my goal 30k, but I think this milestone, though not much of a round number or anything, is worth celebrating. Phoenix, I hope to log on tomorrow and see that you've posted about your own success.

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Kiaira — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 16:46:22 +0530

yeah...me no likey these pills now. There was suppose to be a slight problem falling asleep. I went to bed at 11Pm here. and I tossed and turned until 5:30AM this morning. Not a good feeling.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 16:58:11 +0530

OMG. I DID IT GUYS. 92214 words, and I have a completed first draft of a novel for the first time ever. In exactly a month and a half. I. FEEL. AWESOME. Now come on guys, who's going to be next? :D You, too can feel awesome for keeping on with working toward your goals! And believe me, I may have met mine but I'll definitely be sticking around to see how all of you did. After I sleep first. It is 4:30 AM here, and I have not yet slept. (Totally worth it!)

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Kiaira — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 17:06:31 +0530

I am no where near close done my novel. I have done 89,889 to date. In Nov though I completed a draft of a half-done novel, a novella, and then I continued on with this new project. Only on chapter 6 now.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 19:23:02 +0530

Well done Phoenix. Carlton is dancing just for you GIFSoup

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maggiep — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 20:59:45 +0530

Well done Pheonix! Congratulations! Kiaira, I'm with you, I'm only a few chapters in also.

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stephensdemise — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 01:11:29 +0530

I came up with three count 'em three new plot lines over the last two days! *woot* work on my rewrite is slow to stop, but..I'll take my victories where I can get them.

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 02:04:45 +0530

Today has been good and bad. I lost about 1,000 words again when my darling doggie jumped on my laptop and shut Pages down. I thought I'd saved, but apparently not. I managed to rewrite what I'd lost and despite the setback have done enough to feel pleased with myself today. It's the first time in a while that I've managed to write the NaNo target of 1,667. I really hope I turned the corner and now it's full steam ahead to the finish line. 62,510 words.

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 02:42:52 +0530

A scene popped in my head earlier, the continuation of a partial scene I had typed up. I'm still trying to figure out how to get from where I am at the beginning to this scene that really gets the story going.

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Kiaira — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 04:45:36 +0530

In the chat room for the rest of the evening, if anyone wants to join me

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 01:06:47 +0530

Yay, Nano is back up. I don't know what happened, but I haven't been able to get in all day.

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Datarin — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 01:46:44 +0530

/warning: long-winded, way overdue NaNo-esque rant below. I'm still throwing ninjas into my plot in a desperate attempt to scavenge what I supposedly have planned. I'm not even sure which party is doing what now, it's just a constant barrage of temporary obstacles and the less-than-required had-it-coming important revelation that is slightly relevant to plot, including additional details about whatever I already have. ngl I'm just tired of my two characters constantly chatting to each other for over 80k words now. There's only so much narration you can add to keep the dialogue fresh without pulling a blank. I've exhausted almost every relevant adverb in both the thesaurus and my own vocab, because there is simply that ~much~ talking -- some of it obvious word padding. Then there's the utterly irrelevant, and plot-hampening relationships between my MCs. This was not what I was striving for, and it'll likely break what useless walls of text I have. I've openly considered several points-of-no-return rewrites, and have followed through up to a point where in-world logic breaks, before returning to my first draft. And due to all this, I'm around 9k words behind my 2k-per-day goal. My current word count is 85,807, to be precise. It's Saturday morning right now, I'm sleep-deprived (sleeping 4 hours in around the last 50+ hours), and I need to think of something that will last over 10k+ words. Preferably something that will finally tie the plot together and put me back on track. Since I am self-aware of my limitations (my best was 6k in one day), this weekend and the following Monday shall be my recovery. *takes a deep breath* This is not writer's block. It is my inability to write constantly, and I shall overcome it. My pride hinges on being successful with self-motivated goals, especially in long-term projects such as this. Time to return to my draft. Good luck, everyone.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 03:41:11 +0530

Not quite 2k today. Never mind I'm in a good place to pick up the story tomorrow. 64,105 words

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 03:49:00 +0530

4,865. Okay, yeah, waaaay behind. What happened!!!!

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KatiePoet — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 05:41:08 +0530

I've had the sudden urge to change everything about my story.... I love on of my minor characters, and I want to make her the MC instead of current MC... ughhhhhh why did I have to come to this realization 81K into my novel????? This will call for a complete rewrite... so I'm thinking just to slog along with current story, and then work on a rewrite next year. But motivation to finish draft is diminishing the more I think about how awesome my minor character is, and how much more interesting she is than current MC. Oh pish posh today's so very dreary. Hope everyone's writing day is going slightly more spectacular than mine.

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 06:22:48 +0530

I have come to a big gap. I have the beginning chapters typed, and know how the first part is ending, I just don't know how to connect the scenes.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 10:54:44 +0530

Hi everyone! I actually *did* try to sneak in for a bit yesterday, but the site was down. I spent the day cleaning/printing/organizing my novel into a lovely little notebook for my friend's Christmas present, then spent the evening over at her house enjoying each other's company as she leaves for break tomorrow morning. It was such a wild feeling handing over a complete novel to my first reader - even though I know she's actually just the first of many editors, and there's a lot of work to do on it before I'm happy with it. Still very cool. And thanks to all of YOU for all the congratulations. I hope my success helped to motivate a bit ;) Tonight I've an essay to write, for my last fellowship application - but I'm already thinking ahead to what to do next. Without nano (done now) and applications (done by monday) I don't know what to do with my time!! I'm thinking it's time to devote myself to my first-ever novel once again. I decided to re-do it from scratch mid-Nano, because it's been in the works for so many years that the pieces no longer fit together as they once did. So as to not go crazy, I'm not limiting myself to any particular word goals for now - just some written progress (notes, world building, character sheets count) every day. I think my goal is to have notes and outlines made so it's ready to write by Camp Nano this summer. But if it goes well, I may just start the real thing before then. We'll see. I feel so lost without my Nano novel sucking up all my time o_o

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Kenouni Renashin — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 14:43:49 +0530

Hello folks. I hit 105k last night (yay) despite the fact that I have a freakin' stinking cold. (I hate Winter and I hate working in retail). I have to go into work today too - but I managed to persuade my manager that me working five hours would be much better for me and the shop than working eight. So I get to go in at one (woo). Fingers crossed I won't be so exhausted when I get home later tonight then. They want me to work half ten to half four tomorrow too D: but hopefully it'll be fairly quiet as it'll be a Sunday and, who goes into town on a Sunday? If this weekend goes horribly, horribly wrong, then I do have all week to catch up. And to get this cold to sod off. Hmmmmmmm! I hate being ill. I see that everyone else is soldiering on; I'm (weakly) cheering for y'all :D ~Ken-Ren

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 02:28:35 +0530

Today's been a good day. I could go on but have stopped now so that tomorrow I can start a brand new chapter. My MC's friend has just asked her for advice on asking out the girl of is dreams. What she doesn't know is she is that girl. So the romantic date advice she gave him is all for her. I can't wait to see her face when she realises. 65,898 words.

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ellarien — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 05:36:24 +0530

I've been really struggling this week, and getting behind, but I had a good day today and passed 87K. More importantly, I only have a scene and a bit left to do of the ones I had planned. I think I can still finish by Wednesday, which was my original goal for December.

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Silver Fallen — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 06:45:32 +0530

Wrote about 3k today, and still trucking. I've got 3k more until I reach 50k! Yay! i'n really hoping it will make it to about 75k. Maybe 100k. I know it's definetly going to pass 50k for sure. :)

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KatiePoet — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 22:05:23 +0530

:( the only way I'm going to reach my goal of finishing my 1st draft is if I move this plot along a little quicker. With this realization... I am going to do just that! Hope to be done by 100K. I'm at 83K... doable! Let's get typing! :)

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 00:37:55 +0530

Not so good today. I wasn't really feeling it and only managed about 1,000 words. Still I wrote something, I take as a win. I hope this week will be productive. I have to clean the whole house in time for next Sunday so that's bound to make writing 100% more appealing! 67,070 words.

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KatiePoet — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 05:17:52 +0530

Woohoo! 2379 words today And I think they're actually pretty good words, too :) Most importantly, essential to the plot. Oh glorious day at the keyboard :-D 85856 words total... inching towards the finish line.

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maggiep — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 07:06:20 +0530

I just got back to the computer, the little rambunctious kid is back to her parents house, I can now breathe, and do typing. Just past 7,000 words

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maggiep — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 11:10:32 +0530

In the 4(ish) hrs of typing nonstop, I have finished part 1 at 10,490 words. YES! Woohoo. On lack of sleep and total excitement, I am now doing happy dance in chair.

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Kenouni Renashin — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 17:20:25 +0530

[quote=the_blue_rose] Poor you. Having a cold is awful. You're not ill enough to get any real sympathy, but not well enough to feel like doing anything.[/quote] Exactly! I had to work both on Saturday and on Sunday, with the sniffles (I think the cold is coming to the tail end now). And, when I get home from work, I'm too exhausted to do anything, so today, I've got at 5000 words to write if I'm going to keep up the 1700 words a day thing D: Damnit. I'm going to be playing catch up all week. Again. And I know for a fact I'm going to get sod all done this weekend too! (Working ALL DAY Christmas eve, then going straight from work to the bf's grandparents, where we're all staying until like.... the 27th or something.) I don't think I'll be allowed to be antisocial with my iPad while I try and write D: ~Ken-Ren.

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maggiep — Tue, 20 Dec 2011 08:50:23 +0530

The dreaded blank screen. it was going so well :(

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Kenouni Renashin — Tue, 20 Dec 2011 16:09:20 +0530

Plus point - feeling tons better without flu pills. I CAN BREATHE AGAIN! - Just a little snuffly now. Negative point - I'm still not caught up with the weekend yet. most I managed to write yesterday was the 1700 words I needed for that day. No more. That big number is daunting... However. I do have this little method... I write the the amount down in hundreds on a piece of paper - 100, 200 etc, until I get up to what I need. Then, I put on a DVD and open Notepad along side it. I type away to my little heart's content for an episode or so. (I watch TV series on DVD not films). Once one episode is done, I copy and paste my writing into Word to spell check and do a word count. Then I get to cross out a bunch of the numbers I wrote down earlier. Makes me feel a little more accomplished. Sort of "okay, so I didn't write X number of words today but I did write Y number of words." ~Ken-Ren

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Hanabi no Enigma — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 10:17:21 +0530

I did so much cool, awesome stuff today with cool, awesome people. None of it involved writing. Oh, well.

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maggiep — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 10:23:00 +0530

I'm at 13,400 words. 1,600 words shy of my goal.

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UJ — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 14:46:12 +0530

Back in early Dec, I figured another 50K would take me to the end of the outline I was working from. 90K words later, it looks like I need to do another 50k in Jan. And what the hell is going on with the story? The last quarter of the outline to go and I feel like I'm still at the beginning. Editing will be my salvation. I feel like I'm writing an exceptionally detailed outline and once I've done this, then I'll have a document to make a proper novel from. Aye curumba.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

ellarien — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 23:42:34 +0530

90,000 words, and I'm calling it a draft. I may start on editing/rewriting in the new year, or I may give it a rest and work on one of my other unfinished novels. Thanks everyone for the encouragement, and enjoy whatever holidays you may be celebrating!

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 02:20:53 +0530

15,095 words! I passed my goal count! Yippee!! And I'm nowhere near the end. Sweet!

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Julia Caesaris — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 03:36:41 +0530

Brand new sparkly goal: Finish the first draft by June. How is this this hard? I wrote 50,000 words in November and 0 in December. So the first 2/3 of the novel took me a month and the last third is on track to take me six. *grumbles and looks for chocolate*

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:11:33 +0530

I am seriously struggling with my motivation again. Over the last two days I've written perhaps 700 words. I'm growing bored with all my characters and just want to get to the end. I am adamant that I will finish before Jan 1st 2012 but it's getting harder. I have so much to do over the next three days that I can't see me getting much writing done. Do you think anyone will mind if I sit Christmas out this year?

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KatiePoet — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 06:16:24 +0530

I'm having some real trouble lately too, blue. I don't know if it's my motivation or what -- but I just can't seem to get focused :( I used to spend the entire day dreaming up what my MC would be doing, how he would react to this or that situation, "talking" to him while driving (yeah maybe I looked a little nuts! :) But now? Not so much. I've been pretty fruitful with my "other writing," though, so that might be the problem. Maybe I'm not such a great multi-tasker >:O Ok so it's only been two lousy days of Nano-writing and my goal of 100k by Jan. 1st is still within reach. But I can't seem to pin down any sort of direction lately with where my story is going on a mirco level. Gwah!!!

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KatiePoet — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 07:21:26 +0530

Ok! Nevermind! :D What helped me? Sketching out a new outline. Somehow, that's gotten me reinterested in the project, organized, and rearin' to go. The down side? I've just realized I'm a little over halfway through with the plot, and at 90k. Really? LOL looks like I'm going to have a lot of fun editing this summer.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 09:43:25 +0530

I just finished part 2. ended at 17,132 words. I wrote 3,732 words today. Not too shabby if I do say so myself. I hope everyone else had a great day.

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Silver Fallen — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 11:31:42 +0530

Just hit 60k :) And still trucking too! Yay!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 12:28:50 +0530

Spent half of today writhing in pain and the other half arguing with people on the internet. *sigh* I suck at time management. (To be fair, I didn't exactly DECIDE to writhe in pain. It just kind of happens to me most months.) Tomorrow. Homework. Needs done. And then writing! :D And CHRISTMAS! And homework. And Secret Santa. Any ideas to get me moving on what needs doing?

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UJ — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 14:35:40 +0530

I'm one of those nuts who likes to make lists - just so I can tick them off when they're done. I've one for each writing project. It's a lot easier meeting the word count each day for the book than it is for the more vague instruction 'finish new treatment' for the script. But sketching out that new treatment did get me back on track with that story. But then, it's a script, and a hell of a lot shorter. There are times I think I'm looking at a series of books merely told from the characters different perspective, but I really don't want to do that. That's one book. It's definitely going to come down to the editing. KatiePoet, it sounds like we're in the same boat!

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PhoenixSempai — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 00:47:59 +0530

Hi guys! Sorry I've been AWOL again >.> It's a lot harder to remember to stop by twice a day when I'm not obsessively keeping track of my progress on something. However, I check in with the positive news that I made some really cool progress on Project 2 yesterday, brainstorming while at work (am working FAR too much this week) and then came home and wrote two little mini-chapters. It's all just backstory at this point, but it's backstory that will eventually be told in the book itself - and more importantly it is helping me re-shape and re-think this whole project, which has become a bit of a clusterfuck in the years I've been developing it. Here's hoping for clearer plotlines and less blatantly obvious holes. And now, off to work once more. Keep writing, folks. I am cheering you on whether you see me or not!! ^_^

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Smartiez101 — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 01:05:06 +0530

I was going to try a little NaNoCember thing, but as I've only gotten 4,043 in total in the sequel, that wasn't happening. >.> My goal is to reach at least 10,000. Thank the good Lord that New Year's Eve is coming, lots of writing to do! I'm not even halfway there? And I have nine days? No sweat.

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 02:09:37 +0530

My writing sucks. I have done practically nothing for the last few days. I promised myself I'd have the first draft done by the end of the year, but it's looking less and less likely. I have hardly anytime until after Christmas now so unless I suddenly have a couple of 10,000 words days. I think I'm going to be writing in the new year. My new target is to reach 70,000 words by Christmas. It's not a huge target but based on how much I've written recently it almost is. If I can write more then brilliant. 68,039 words.

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Kiaira — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 05:19:15 +0530

I had that stuff that happened that made me have to stop writing. now I am baxk on track and I am continuing my novel!

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KatiePoet — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 07:42:11 +0530

had a good day at the keyboard today, over 2k. Phew! Pressing onward!

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 10:13:33 +0530

Ending the day at 18,523. Didnt get as much done as I had hoped, but had to work, and even though I did some typing there, customers kept coming and interrupting me.

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UJ — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 14:52:56 +0530

Doubt I'll get much done now with Christmas around the corner. I'll just grab a few words here and there and maybe I'll hit my target. In the mean time, Happy crimbo, seasons greetings, and good writing to everyone!

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Kenouni Renashin — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 17:01:01 +0530

FINALLY finished Fifth Year in my HP Marauder era story! Was thinking that that year would never end! Grawwr! Now onto Sixth, Seventh and beyond! ~Ken-Ren

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Kiaira — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 05:24:09 +0530

I've gotten back on track! Writing again! Now to torture Adel and Victor some more!

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 09:52:57 +0530

I passed my new goal tonight, am at 20,106. I can go to bed happy. Now I need a new goal though.

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 13:31:45 +0530

Hello NaNoCember-ers! I've had a bit of a day...yes, one of *those* days...I've been at work 10 days in a row now, retail during Christmas season, and today I woke up having caught the death-sick (as I call it) from my friend just in time for the busiest day of the year and then my two days off. My friend that I got it from informs me I likely have another 5 days of it at least. Ugh. And then my car wouldn't start. But now I am done, I have two days to myself - well, to my family functions I suppose, but not work at least - and my plans for Christmas involve rest and more rest. And then just a bit of writing to keep up with things ^_^ How is everyone faring? Christmas plans?

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 21:42:51 +0530

New goal, 25,000

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 25 Dec 2011 02:02:36 +0530

All my writing effort is going into a Secret Santa story. Ugh, haven't written any more of my NaNo in FOREVER. Oh, well. After Christmas, maybe if there are no new toys under the tree to distract me and I get all my homework done... I have to write something, read a novel and study scores of pages of biology.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sun, 25 Dec 2011 02:39:42 +0530

I am at the point where I love my characters but hate the story plot. Dangit.

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 25 Dec 2011 20:10:30 +0530

Okay, I've run out of time before dinner. Current word count is 69,522. My Christmas present to myself will be a belated one - to finish this baby. Merry Christmas. Here's hoping you all have a great day.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 26 Dec 2011 13:05:06 +0530

Well, Secret Santa's finished. That's ONE thing down... *looks at list* Seven more things to do before I can get back to NaNo... ugh.

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KatiePoet — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 04:20:50 +0530

I've been terrible these past few days, and I mean terrible. I haven't worked on a single writing project. The most head way I've made is revising my outline for my novel... good thing I have the rest of the week off from work. I'm seriously going to need it. Doesn't look like I'm going to meet my goal of finished by Jan 1st, unless some sort of miracle manifests! Good luck to everyone! We're closing in on the end of 2011!!!

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maggiep — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 06:11:37 +0530

I haven't written for 2 days, yesterday I had a wicked migraine and today Ive had no inspiration.

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JellybeanP — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 06:22:31 +0530

I've been feeling stuck, too, but am going to try to crank some words out tonight before bed.

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KatiePoet — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 23:35:30 +0530

My problem exactly, believe it or not. I'm sagging in the middle... But I reworked the ending in my head, and I'm going to just write it! Go back later and fix the flab. Maybe that can work for you, too?

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Smartiez101 — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 01:03:59 +0530

I've already accomplished my goal, so I've raised it to 15K. :3 I won't be really busy since I finished all the homework I need to turn in after break except for saxaphone. >.> Now, to return to my writing...

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 01:57:32 +0530

I've spent the last week trying to write a section of my story that I've now decided to scrap. So that was a colossal waste of 7 days, but on the plus side now I don't need to write it any more I should be able to get this finished before the end of the week. The next 3 days are going to be intense but I'm determined to be celebrating a new year and a finished novel.

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KatiePoet — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 08:18:19 +0530

Just wrote a scene that I'm totally in love with. 3400 words day. Yay! Maybe just maybe I'll have this thing up to 100k by Jan 1st. Will it be done? Nah. But close! Current Word Count: 96K, and certainly counting

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Kenouni Renashin — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 15:17:07 +0530

I wrote about 1000 words over the last four days (I hate Christmas) - i have a lot to do to catch up! Thats 7400 words to be back on tracl, and its not likeIll have the 31st to fallback on as Im working. Crap. Just crap.

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 23:28:41 +0530

Finally I'm getting somewhere. After a busy afternoon I am back on track, baby. I've just killed off my MC's grandfather. Now she has to go back home and everything can move towards the endgame. I am so excited. After the last far too many days when I've had absolutely no motivation and had lost all interest in writing it's turning around. I am looking forward to turning my laptop on tomorrow and starting that sprint to the finish. Now I want to hear all your tales of NaNoCember cheer. 71,135 words.

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maggiep — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 23:36:56 +0530

I just told my mom about the character that appeared last night(when I should have been sleeping of course. may explain my weird sleeping habits now). I think he is supposed to be the MMC, not the other guy. Im already more excited about getting this crazy story turned into something other than mush. She told me that I cannot let this story consume me. Uh....sorry, already has :)

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maggiep — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 03:55:14 +0530

I am depressed now. This story is just not working out. I don't know why. I don't know what to do to fix it. I have tried so many different scenerios and they just don't work. I've tried different time eras, and the same thing happens. Tempest is an awesome character, but so hard to figure her out. I have never had a character be so hard to write about. She has a story, yet she isn't telling me what it is. I have never had to "break up" with a story, but this may be the first one :(

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KatiePoet — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 07:48:13 +0530

2500 words today! And I've still got a bit of steam in me yet tonight. Plot's inching forward. Woot woot! at 99K. Oh! What a motivation. Tonight, I break 100K >:O

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 00:57:42 +0530

Taking the day to let the world come together. I am also catching up on some other stories. I found some I wrote on my own and with my mom from years ago, childrens stories. I have never been very good with drawing animals, people.... I am determined to turn that around. So far, Ive done a teddy bear, little girl, little boy and 2 sides of a dragon. All clearly defined. Yay!! Siamese cats, still cant do.

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KatiePoet — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 02:10:22 +0530

My next goal: Finish by midnight on the 31st! LOL. Let's see if that's even possible. I'm fired up!! I want to participate in Janowrimo to do my rewrite. But I need to get to "the end" first. I guess that means no new years eve partying for me. I'll probably be typing away until the last moment, keeping up the mad wild suspense. Ack. I prefer the company of my characters, anyway ;) Good luck everyone! We've still got time to finish this.

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KatiePoet — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 03:06:16 +0530

http://janno.ymakadomain.com/ Yeah, cept they actually have a website for it!

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 07:53:29 +0530

Apparently refusing to talk with my characters does work(at least sometimes). By ignoring their little whisperings and doing something else, they were a little bit more willing to talk today. I do not have a name for FMC, but I know her features and the names of MMC and 2 other people. Plus some fun facts about their world. Yay!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 10:04:06 +0530

*pokes head in* I'm stalled. Grr. So, now that we've almost come to the end of December, how far have you come this month? Have you written 50,000 words? Have you finished a novel? Or are you, like me, still stuck in the middle? I've done just a bit over 4k. :(

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UJ — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 15:35:01 +0530

Congrats, KatiePoet. I hit the 100K mark yesterday. Now I need to get into Scrivener. Took a peek at it once, and couldn't get to grips with it. So, new plan. Get a handle on Scrivener so come Jan 2 I can get control of the story. Not going to bother writing the next half until this first 100K has been sorted out properly. It's because the story is so complicated (or, I've just made it so, more likely) that I'm gonna try out Jan Nano thingy. I am going to force myself to write a nice simple story if it's the last thing I do.

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 22:51:33 +0530

I keep hearing about Scrivener but haven't tried it. I guess I'm still holding onto old fashioned ways of keeping track of things. Binders full of notes and info....

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 22:57:34 +0530

My goal today-Weed out the manuscript I have. See what belongs in the 1770's story, and what is supposed to be in the Fantasy story. No wonder it was a mess. Eye color changing people in the 1770's, and strange creatures popping in.

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 23:29:20 +0530

I'm steadily approaching the finish line. I only have the final scenes to write and I can put this baby to bed. I hope that I can get it finished before midnight tomorrow. However, it depends on how much I decide to write for this last bit. After that I am laying it aside and not looking at it again until February 1. I will be checking out Schrivener and using their free trial month to write some short stories. If I like it I will be using my winner's discount and buying it. 74,565 words.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 00:11:33 +0530

Hi guys!! I was, predictably, laid out for a few days with The Sick - the good news being that while my poor friend still has it, I managed to kick it away after a few days, so I'm feeling mostly better now. I then had a brief panic when I realized my last letter-writer for Harvard was going to be late with his recommendation, but the professors there working with me contacted me right away and informed me it shouldn't matter so long as he gets it to them soon-ish, so then the panic was gone. Now I'm just so relaxed I don't even know what to do with myself! Except write, which I have admittedly been slacking on a bit. Got Sims3 Pets for Christmas and the story-writer in me is having a heyday creating all my characters, but it kinda sucked up a bunch of my time. Still, work has finally slowed down (gotta love the after-Christmas retail slump) so I am using my time stuck at customer service to write, and have made some really good progress fixing the plot of Story 2. It's nowhere near the level of productivity I was reaching while writing #1, and I do feel like I'm slacking a bit when I don't write something every day; but I feel I earned the break. I figured in January I'll come up with some sort of goal list again to get myself working on a regular basis (as well as starting revisions of #1 as soon as my friend gets back mid-January). For now I"m just going to enjoy the last little bit of 2011. '12's gonna be a good year guys, I can feel it! It is just LOVELY, however, to come back here after my sick days and see all the progress everyone has made!! I'm so proud of all of you! Being a part of NaNoCember here has been very rewarding and I'm so glad all of you joined in. I know I never would have made my own goal without the support here. Keep pushing forward, we're in the home stretch!!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Lilia Sparks — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 00:46:27 +0530

I'm starting back in January after giving my novel a good long nap (believe me, it needed it) but congrats to all of you pushing through December!!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 01:42:35 +0530

I have the stories seperated. Yay! Now I can work on typing the historical while working on creating the world of the other. This is gunna be a great year.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

douleur — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 12:52:53 +0530

My goal for NaNoCember was to finish the first draft by the end of December, and I just accomplished it today! I wrapped up my story at 90K, which is 30K longer than my November 1st prediction and 15K longer than my November 30th prediction. Yes, I see significant cutting in the not-too-distant future, because really, a lot of those words are unnecessary. But first, a couple of days off from this story, just to relax, recuperate, and enjoy having a complete first draft. Keep writing, everyone!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 17:08:17 +0530

Not too good so far today. I know I can finish it, but my MC is rebelling. She knows what's coming and doesn't want it to happen. I am excited to be writing the last scenes but sad that my journey is coming to an end. Of course there are always rewrites if I deem it worthy. Still, the champagne is in the fridge ready to toast a new year and a finished first draft. Better crack on.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 21:27:49 +0530

I take back my previous post. Today has been awesome. I have just typed the most glorious two words known to all writers: The End. At just over 77k it's far longer than I ever thought I could manage. There are bits to cut out, new bits to write and a hell of a lot of details to change but for now it's over. I think I might need to add a second narrator in there to make things flow better and make more sense but that's for later. Good luck to everyone else in NaNoCember land. I promise to check in on you still and provide words of support and encouragement when I can. Now if you'll excuse me I'm off to start building my Lego Death Star and drink some well deserved champagne, although not necessarily in that order. Happy New Year everyone and a merry noveling 2012.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Singularity2003 — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 07:41:45 +0530

Just a shout-out to all of you who are still writing: today I finished Volume One of my NaNoWriMo (It wasn't originally supposed to be a two-parter... you know how these things go.) at 46 800 words. So, to anybody who's looking at their pitiful word counts at the end of November and thinking they accomplished nothing: All those people who are telling you you did great aren't lying. You got the ball rolling. And that's enormous. Happy New Year, all!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 16:18:09 +0530

Happy New Year, EVERYONE!! I am so proud of each and everyone one of you for every last word you wrote and everything you accomplished. No, seriously. You. Every last word. You are awesome for doing that!! I spent my New Year's Eve working my brand-new second job, which promises to eat up a good chunk of my time from here out. So I may not be all that active for awhile. But if YOU all will still stop by here from time to time, even though December is over, I promise to as well. Thank you, each of you, for being a part of this. <3

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Smartiez101 — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 18:20:49 +0530

in total (including my nano) for Nov. and Dec... about 70K in total (not including nano) for Dec... just over 16K xD lol, that's bad... I'll be doing a NaNoReMo (National Novel Redemption Month) during January though. :3

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Kenouni Renashin — Mon, 02 Jan 2012 16:42:00 +0530

I'm going to catch up on the words I missed due to the Christmas period and then I'm going to take a break from my NaNo novel. It's beginning to feel... Meh. Not that exciting to sit and write every day, so a break is in order; but only once I've caught up. Switching projects for a bit normally helps. ~Ken-Ren

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Thu, 05 Jan 2012 13:59:51 +0530

So, I popped in to see how you are all doing and you've all gone! What's going on? I hope that you are all busy writing and that you haven't jumped ship to a Janowrimo. If you are still wondering about in here, how are things going? Targets being reached? You guys are great so I imagine everything is under control. P.S. If you were wondering as a fan of neither Star Wars or Lego can I just say my Lego Death Star is the coolest thing ever. I now want all Lego.

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UJ — Thu, 05 Jan 2012 14:54:06 +0530

Clearly, blue-rose, a Lego Death Star must be the coolest thing ever. You should send a pic of it to John Lewis. This Christmas, the Oxford St branch had a full size - yes, they were full size! - Lego C3P0, Lego R2D2 and, of course, Lego Darth. It was frackin awesome. (If only your Death Star was full size ...) Anyway, I'm all over the place. I've decided that I need to write the next 50K before I edit the 100K I've already done. I haven't started that yet so I'm already behind. Meanwhile I'm trying to learn Scrivener with a nice easy story. It's sheer frustration, but when I finally figure something out it does seem really cool. I'm not sure if that's the sense of victory or the feature itself. And then there's the script I'm working on. I've got to get organised. But not today. I want to go to bed. No wonder I've fallen behind.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Thu, 05 Jan 2012 21:46:06 +0530

UJ, I'd settle for a Death Star that was big enough to zap one person or group of people. Hell, I'd be happy with a razor that never loses its charge and a license to use it when I wanted! You sound like you've got a lot going on there. Don't overload yourself. I find editing easier once I've written the entire thing. That way I'm not in for any nasty surprises when I finish and find that I've completely changed the path of a certain character. But what works for me may not work for you 150K is twice what I've managed to write and I don't want to think about how much padding I used. Scrivener sounds pretty cool. I read through the 'how to use me' blurb, but haven't got around to actually trying it out. I will soon, so any helpful hints are gratefully appreciated. Good luck with everything. Go to bed if you want, somedays you just need to take a break.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

KatiePoet — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 04:20:04 +0530

Hey Blue! Thanks for stopping in. Guilty -- I've gone over to Janowrimo. But the good news is I'm still writing! I've gotten 13K since December ended. So that brings my novel to about 115K. Yikes, and now I'm getting all sorts of ideas to change it. Gwahhhh! Story of my life. LOL I'll have it done by Feb 1st, I WILL have it done by Feb. 1st! Maybe.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 05:58:32 +0530

I've been working on another project in between schoolwork. Not really much on my NaNo.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 07:20:45 +0530

I am guilty with KatiePoet *putting my head down with sheepish eyes* Sorry. I didn't realize NaNoCember was still going, but I am glad it is, I like this thread :) I am still writing. Typing the Revolutionary War story and working on the world building(which is slowly, but surely, coming along. Yay)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 11:26:44 +0530

A late writing ngiht. 12:56am right now and just ended at 12,003 words. Work is gunna come too early.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 16:00:51 +0530

My day off went beautifully. Then gall stone pain hit and I got a lousy night's sleep and now I'm completely behind. I will prevail!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Sat, 07 Jan 2012 15:47:02 +0530

Things are much better, thanks. I'm even enjoying Scrivener. For now.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 08 Jan 2012 15:21:46 +0530

I've been working hard on a project I've had since before November (long before, actually), but haven't done anything on my NaNo. I still feel good, though, because in the last couple of days I've written around four or five pages.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Mon, 09 Jan 2012 16:52:29 +0530

Just dropping by. Glad to see everyone is still working hard. Whether it's NaNo or other projects you are doing something and I'm proud of you all. Since finishing my novel I've managed to write one short story. Not good enough, Blue, not good enough. I am trying to come up with my second novel idea so that I can sign up for a novel writing course with the London School of Journalism. I know I could use this novel and use the course to edit, but I want a new project. It's good to see that even while you deserted us for JaNoWriMo you haven't forgotten all about NaNoCember. Keep us updated and good luck.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 08:49:58 +0530

Thinking up creatures for a made up world is hard work. I haven't been able to come up with any :/

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 07:59:51 +0530

Just hit the 22k mark. Yay! How come it couldn't go so easily in November?

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UJ — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 14:52:10 +0530

I've had a brilliant idea. I'm starting the whole thing again! I'm going back to the basic idea. One idea within that took the whole thing in a different direction which, while fascinating (100K words worth) is far too complicated. So, after all that, I've reminded myself what the original idea was, and I'm just going to start again. The story should just fly, and I wont have to stop to think. The 100K words was all the thinking, done and dusted. Strangely I'm not upset. I'm relieved. I have the solution!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Fri, 13 Jan 2012 09:13:03 +0530

I just passed the 25k mark. At this point, I am somewhat surprised how the scene turned out. The MMC I knew got caught by the bad guy, but until now I wasnt sure when or how. I was typing and the next thing I knew, there was Bad Guy taking FMC hostage so he could get MMC. Didnt expect it that way, but I think it turned out well. And FMC finally got to use her handy branch :)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 00:17:25 +0530

I am having the hardest time writing today. I've only done a few hundred words. *sigh*

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maggiep — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 06:15:23 +0530

Just passed 28k, and my story is almost done. It's not suppose to be done for another 22k words : /

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 06:52:13 +0530

I just typed my 28,710th word, making this the longest story I have written :)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 09:42:30 +0530

Finishing the night, and the manuscript, at 31,185. Not too bad for what originally was thought to be about 25k. Now onto tweaking and adding words. After sleep.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 14:55:05 +0530

Congrats, maggiep. Enjoy the edit.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Tue, 17 Jan 2012 03:56:16 +0530

How is everyone doing? I hope you all have been doing great in your writings.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Tue, 17 Jan 2012 14:20:03 +0530

Hubby printed mine out at work yesterday. It's on one-sided A4 at the moment but I can see that once it's changed to double-sided book size it will be book thickness (does that make sense? It's too cold where I am to think properly.) My plan is this: 1) Quick read through to reacquaint myself with the plot and characters, and to see what immediately needs changing. 2) First edit. This will most likely take all of February and March. I've decided after everything it deserves at least one edit. I spent too much time on this not to give it a fighting chance. Also people want to read it and for them to do that I need to tie some things together. 3) Use my five free books I got for winning NaNo. 4) Maybe edit more. If I reach step 3 I'll be impressed.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 14:37:45 +0530

I know how you feel about reading it through, blue_rose. I'm okay reading my own work, over and over again, until I think I'm done. Then, when I go to read it knowing/believing that it's probably all fabulously done ... I don't want to start, I know it'll stink and suddenly it does and if I do like it I tell myself it's just because I was in a good mood at the time. I lose all objectivity. The best thing to do is just plough on.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 20:52:16 +0530

I expected to be stunned by how bad my novel was when it came time to do a once-through reading. I was surprised to find that I was too busy working on the story to really angst about my writing. I was full o f scenes that were missing, things that needed to be reordered -- that kind of thing. Maybe it has to do with the mindset when you approach. I was going in specifically looking for any plot holes or other things that needed shoring up -- and that's what I found.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 15:20:41 +0530

Ok new plan. I started my read through yesterday and was so traumatised by what I read that I couldn't make it past page two! I always knew that the first 10 or so pages were terrible - because I hadn't yet perfected my narrative voice - but I didn't expect them to be so bad. I saw something in every paragraph, if not the paragraph itself, that needed changing. So I have decided to just dive straight in with editing. I am aiming for five pages a day, but it that is too much will settle for three. I start tomorrow. If you hear any strange noises after that it'll be me crying in the corner whilst banging my head against the wall.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 21:47:11 +0530

Ah! The first few pages. Yeah, mine were pretty bad. But see, I rewrote the beginning about five times before I finished my first draft. My writing improved with my experience with the story. You will probably find the same thing.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 22:27:29 +0530

So, I have started my fantasy story. I have the first 6 chapters done. I'm shooting for 1k a day. I am currently stuck. I know that point a has to get to point b, but its the getting there that is being stubborn. How long I should wait to bring in the MMC, what FMC should do in the meantime....kinda stuff.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 15:42:39 +0530

Good luck Maggie. Six chapters already is good and 1k a day is a worthy target. Have you tried working back, step by step, from point B? I find that often helps. Sometimes point A is that little bit too removed, and by doing it this way you might discover some things about your FMC and how she thinks.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 12:23:04 +0530

Good to hear my suggestion did some good. Now if only I could give myself some good advice - and then stick to it. Two days into editing I have got through two pages. I suck at this. I'm finding it really hard. I know what I want to change, but not how. Then when I start writing I don't want to delete what I've already got it case on a later read it turns out to be (fools) gold. Thank Scrivener for different colour revision text. I also intend to keep an untouched copy of each draft I turn out, just in case. Now with Katie's excellent song choice rebounding round my head I'm off to see if I can get through at least two pages today. *Sings loudly and off key, whilst making up her own lyrics* "Waking up, turn on my Mac/ Tried NaNo, took my chances/ Went the distance, now I'm back at my desk/ Just a girl and her need to edit." *Cough* Sorry about that. Early mornings and (attempted) editing are doing something to my, already unstable, mental state.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 14:33:30 +0530

Lisa Simpson: I need the smartest hamster you've got. Pet Shop Owner: This one writes mysteries. Lisa: How does a hamster write mysteries? Pet Shop Owner: It starts at the end and works its way back. I was doing this just yesterday to break the structure of the new main character. After I decided to go back to the beginning it was goodbye ensemble, hello someone's POV and that changed everything about that character. (So going back tot he beginning means jumping to the end.)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

AdamJensen — Mon, 23 Jan 2012 00:08:19 +0530

Wow, I haven't checked this thread in a month and I'm pleased to see it's still very much alive. And well, I've been trying not to browse the internet too much when there's a daily writing quota to meet--1k a day through the end of January, then I go back and edit (which will take forever). Cheers to all of you who are still pounding out progress one word at a time! Just don't give up and you'll get there!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Wed, 25 Jan 2012 15:26:25 +0530

I have now managed to edit a grand total of eight pages. Only 129 left to go. I have given myself a deadline of getting my first edit done but the end of March. That will give me enough time for a quick spelling and grammar edit before using my code to get my free books. My biggest problem is me. I can edit quite a lot in one go if I just need to change little things, but when a bit of re-writing is needed I procrastinate like mad. I'm also not enjoying reading my own work, which feels like a bad sign. Must get back, keep up the good work fellow NaNoists.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

KatiePoet — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 05:25:55 +0530

Life's getting complicated for me, too. Darn... I knew this would happen. I should have finished while I was still on winter break :( Benjamin's still excited to keep pushing through! So we're working through this... in my head, anyway. Right now is the first time I sit down to write since Sunday. Between teaching and my poetry deadlines, this manuscript's taken a back seat timewise. but the story continues to evolve with every idle moment my brain can muster. Tonight -- I'm going to try for 5k to make up for the rest of the week! Tonight, it's just me and Benjamin Brutus ;-) LOL

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 14:43:20 +0530

So...I'm still on 8 pages of editing. I seem to have lost all impetus for writing recently. I want to write, but can't find any ideas or enthusiasm. I have a writing group on Thursday. Due to having written nothing they have been given the first chapter of my NaNovel to read. I hope their responses will give me the kick I need to get back to work. I have set myself the task of finishing the first edit/ rewrite by the end of March. I know I have enough time I just need to get back to it. Here's hoping all your projects are going better.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Tue, 31 Jan 2012 20:36:13 +0530

Blue Rose, we seem to be in a similar funk. I'm blaming my cold, but I don't know how honest I'm being. I just seem to have run out of steam. I'm working what was the hardest part the first time around, and is proving equally difficult the second time around. The middle of my story. Lots needs to be told, but not much happens. sigh.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Wed, 01 Feb 2012 11:22:07 +0530

I am in the same boat. I think I have run out of steam, writing constantly since November 1st. Maybe we are just hitting that crashing point and our brains are saying "NO MORE! ENOUGH! IM GETTING BURNT OUT!"

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Wed, 01 Feb 2012 15:58:57 +0530

I feel guilty for saying this, but I'm so glad it's not just me. Let's all just forget about our novels for the rest of the week. We'll relax, watch some TV (I'm thinking "Lie To Me' because I love Tim Roth), eat some chocolate and not worry about writing. Then first thing Monday morning back to work. What do you think?

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Fri, 03 Feb 2012 12:21:09 +0530

I had a revelation why I'm getting so little done. Too many projects. (No frackin' kiddin', Sherlock.) Once upon a time I used to work on one project, and that was it, and things got finished, and they were good. I fell for this idea that having additional projects kept me 'fresh' and it seemed obvious that the more projects, the more chances one would take off, if not all. Well, none of that's worked for me. And everything takes forever. So I've picked one, and if - if! - I need a break from it, that's when I'll go back to the script, and not before. It's unfortunate that one of the worst things that's ever happened to me was to emulate other writers! Enjoy your break, everyone. I feel like I've been on a break for far too long. From life, common sense ...

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Fri, 03 Feb 2012 15:31:37 +0530

I'm on a permanent break from common sense, or sense or any kind for that matter! I'm feeling a bit better about things today. I still intend to lay back until Monday but I know feel that I can go back and tackle my re-write without going insane. I got some feedback yesterday on my first chapter and it was confirmed that I have a lot of work to do. There were so many things I'd not thought about and so much research I will need to do if I ever want to take this further. On the plus side I've been ordered to get on and edit because people want to read the rest, so that's encouraging.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

KatiePoet — Sat, 04 Feb 2012 04:57:49 +0530

:( I'm a bit bummed about my progress too, everyone. What is it that's got us all in such a rut? I had a good writing session yesterday, but finding time for my novel (or any project, really) is difficult. I feel like my brain's all stuffed up, unable to focus on one thing... I think I've got a case of the busies. Real bad. Did have a good writing session yesterday, though, almost hit 3k which is magical for a weeknight. On a plus note, I've already started thinking of my sequel X-D Nanowrimo 2012? I think so! Benjamin and I (he's my MC, totally lives in my head) had a good conversation last night. He wants to resurrect his wife into a child's body. Cool, I told him, go for it. He's the mad scientist, after all. We'll see how this turns out... if I can finish this first beast!

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KatiePoet — Sat, 04 Feb 2012 08:12:44 +0530

LOL. Yeah! Let her kick their butts. ;) Nothing like a little violence to spice up a good story. Benjamin wants to have a good punching session. I don't know who he's going to punch, and he's certainly not much of a brawler so I'm almost certain he's going to get his own little butt kicked. Will he ever learn? No, no he won't.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 11:58:37 +0530

Hi guys and girls, I hope the writing, editing, fighting's been going well. It's been another week and I have done diddly squat. I just don;t seem to be able to get my motivation going these days. I am also trying to write an article for a local magazine about my NaNo experience. I know exactly what I want to write, but getting the words down on paper is so difficult. I've been writing it all week, when the length of the article means I should have finished it in one day. Oh well, back to the grindstone.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 14:10:44 +0530

I used to be able to spell potatoes until Dan Quayle. Ever since the Era of Dan, whenever I had to spell the word I had to stop and check. Otherwise I think I've thrown a Quayler. I'm trying new ways to organise myself. I just need to stop being lazy. Must do a meditation or something and remind my muscles of the days when I never had time to be lazy.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 21:57:52 +0530

I've done a few hundred words this week. Yeah, really slacking. I don't know if it's that everything is finally catching up or what, but writing every day is hard this time around. Currently I am stuck in the middle of a sentence, trying to come up with the name of a creature. I'm not good with making up those type of names.

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KatiePoet — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 03:55:22 +0530

I've had a rough week, too. My goal was to do 750 per day, even on the days I get crazy busy (Monday-Wednesday I teach in the evenings... and by the time I come home, my brain's zombified after reading all of those silly freshmen essays). But no. I couldn't get motivated. The six pack in the fridge is definitely to blame. Gwah! Yesterday I came home, went for a run, then wrote 2000 words. I was feeling on top of the world! And then I realized, wait a second... I don't need this scene... I'm padding the novel again, there's a much simplier explanation as to why Benjamin's wife leaves him. Gwahhh! So delete delete... and there goes my golden evening of writing. Tonight! Tonight! Tonight! I will resist all temptation and get through this. And my weekend is free and clear of distractions, so I'll be dedicating much time to this manuscript. Yay! Maybe someday I'll finish.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 11:27:31 +0530

Today I will finish my article. I find I can be more productive on the weekends purely because hubby is at home to keep an eye on me. He tends to notice if I slack off to play games or watch stuff on the internet. Damn him and his noticing stuff!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 14:53:51 +0530

It's frustrating having to delete but it's more frustrating going further down the wrong path. It annoys the crap out of me when I have a brilliant idea ... And realise it was actually the first idea I had and then got distracted from. It's gut inspiration.

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KatiePoet — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 04:24:36 +0530

Good idea, Blue and UJ. I ended up doing just that. I've started a new file called "scraps" for just this sort of thing. Bleh. I love making things needlessly complicated in my story. Well I had a good day at the keyboard! 3600 words, wrote three scenes, and tomorrow's scene is already planned B-) Hope everyone else is having a productive weekend, too!

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maggiep — Sun, 12 Feb 2012 07:41:50 +0530

Well, if we can count having a huge family dinner productive, them yep, very! :) My grandparents, siblings, nephews....all came over. The kids came home and we all resorted back to our childhood. It helps too when the nephews are 5 and 3, and running, jumping, yelling....is expected. I am now very, very tired.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Fri, 17 Feb 2012 15:11:57 +0530

I finally got back to my rewrite yesterday. I didn't get as much done as I'd hoped, but it did remind me that it's not as hard as I thought it was. My target was to finish the rewrite by the end of March but I may have to change this to April. I know that I have some new chapters to write and a second narrator to introduce.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Sat, 18 Feb 2012 14:32:45 +0530

I've seemed to settled down, become a bit more disciplined. It should mean I'm on target for this draft to be completed by the end of the month.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 03 Mar 2012 22:08:35 +0530

Still writing. Slowly, but writing. I finished a scene last night and my mind is working out the next scene. I have part of it, so I'll type that up and see what happens next. I'm getting into that doubting stage. Is this really worth writing? Is it a good story? Do it really make sense?.... *bangs head on desk*

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UJ — Sun, 04 Mar 2012 21:26:04 +0530

I always doubt. Always always always. It's rare for me to give up on a story though. If I doubt it's worthiness it's because I'm not doing a good job writing it, not because the idea isn't worth it. So I persevere. Meanwhile I met my deadline for finishing the first draft by the end of Feb. If it hadn't been a leap year, I just wouldn't have made it!

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 06 Mar 2012 16:56:16 +0530

Well done UJ. February is February, extra day or not. You made your target. Maggie, don't doubt, just write. Once it's all down on paper then you can go through looking for things that don't work, make sense, etc. If I worried about what made sense I would have never finished my first draft. Looking back I can see where things need to be changed to work in the context of my story, but it makes more sense than I thought when I was writing it. Get someone you trust to read it once it's done. They will be able to raise any points that don't make sense, or point out where you need to give more/ less information. My rewrite is going terribly. I have had the worse flu ever int eh history of the world for the last two weeks and haven't felt like doing anything. I have a few friends who are reading a chapter at a time as I rewrite and they are prodding me for the next bit. I mustn't disappoint my audience, so I guess I'd better get back to work.

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UJ — Wed, 07 Mar 2012 14:49:52 +0530

You're right about the doubt, blue_rose. It's why I always keep going. A little perspective always helps. And I'm always surprised by the good bits that suddenly appear. And I've been sick too this week. I've been berating myself for not getting on with any writing yesterday, as if I could control the upset stomach. But I can control how knackered I feel and I have to accept I need to get an exercise routine going again. There must be time for both writing and exercise.

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KatiePoet — Thu, 08 Mar 2012 09:24:35 +0530

I'm back people! I haven't been writing, sadly. Everything came to an enormous standstill :( Life got crazy -- went to a writer's conference, had a wonderful time, but since about a week before and now a week after, I haven't been able to write. These things are SUPPOSED to help, right? But my head's still spinning!!! I did at least do some mental reworking of my novel while driving today. I've figured out a way to simplify it, condense a few characters into one another, and generally streamline things so hopefully, when it's finally finished, it'll be of a publishable length. Good to see everyone else is still plugging away at their projects. That's some good motivation for me!

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UJ — Thu, 08 Mar 2012 14:52:52 +0530

Thanks for the tip, maggiep, but I don't even know how people read while on a machine. I tried once and it was far too much movement. I've tried standing while writing. It's okay. Once I got over the novelty I was able to focus. It does mean the top of the couch is now my new desk. I need to google for tall tables. Or something.

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maggiep — Fri, 09 Mar 2012 09:45:22 +0530

I just hit the 10k mark. 10,081 to be exact. Okay, so my plan at 1k a day for the story didnt work. It's not my fault though. The bad guys have not told me why they are after Lorena. After how many weeks, after starting this story, they still will not tell me why. It is hard to know where exactly to take the story when I'm not sure what the situation is. *Sigh* But alas!, I am not giving up. These bad dudes Will tell me what is going on. I Will get it out of them. I hope :/

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 10 Mar 2012 17:31:41 +0530

I've been known to jog on the spot whilst reading. It stops me getting bored during exercise. But I can understand why you wouldn't want to do that. Instead, why not use the time to work through your story, plan dialogue, new scenes, etc. Well done on reaching 10k, Maggie. Have you considered that maybe the bad guys don't know why they are after Lorena? Perhaps they are taking orders from someone else who is keeping them in the dark. It'll work itself out sooner or later.

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 12 Mar 2012 14:43:28 +0530

Glad to hear I could help. Don't forget me when you're writing the thanks page for your masterpiece. ;-)

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Carolf — Mon, 12 Mar 2012 21:48:33 +0530

Well, I made a major mistake. I stopped in my writing to go back to reading. And now I'm completely UNmotivated. The series I was reading was so well written, and my work in comparison is dull, dreary, dead ... not good. Help me get the oomph back in my motivation?

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Carolf — Tue, 13 Mar 2012 19:48:29 +0530

Thanks, all. I do feel a bit better. Actually, just posting made me feel ... well as if I owed it to you all to get back to it, unenthusiastic as I am. I'm not writing yet, per se, but I'm finally breaking my novel into chapters. And I was struck by my calling my draft dull. It occurs to me there are places that should be exciting and aren't. Those are the first areas for my attention!

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UJ — Thu, 15 Mar 2012 17:24:16 +0530

I've turned lazy these past couple of days. Maybe I just need a rest ... That's my story and I'm sticking to it. I'm liking standing up to work. I feel better for it. Took me a session to get used to it. Being able to walk round the room suddenly became a distraction. But buying a standing desk ain't gonna happen. Too pricey. So it's the back of the couch or piling stuff up on a table. Both work fine.

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Carolf — Thu, 15 Mar 2012 21:20:26 +0530

Maggiep, I can't blame timing -- I'm only employed part-time, so I have lots of time. I'm just not using it. I think the reading was really the kicker. So, I'm reading different stuff, now. Stuff that makes me say "I can do better that that!" It seems to be helping a little, although there is still the voice inside me saying "No you can't!" That voice gets in the way.

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 02:15:52 +0530

Finished current scene, ending at 10,750. Not sure what the next scene is, other than knowing it is the next day. My new Point A is-Lorena is with the group that she will be traveling with, Point B is-journeying to the Queen's Kingdom. I just have to figure out how to get from Point A to Point B. What happens for them to decide to (or discover they have to) go there. As Winnie the Pooh says "Think. Think. Think."

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Carolf — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 19:52:21 +0530

I finished breaking the beast into chapters! I feel a great sense of accomplishment -- I found it very difficult to do, and ended up putting it off until the very end because I just didn't know how to approach it. Whew. That's done. Now, I have to make sure all my transitions work (not all do), fix some continuity issues that arose as I broke things into chapters, and make a couple of should-be-thrilling scenes more ... thrilling. Then I think I'm finally ready for my alpha reader(s)!

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UJ — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 20:23:34 +0530

Congrats, Carolf and maggiep. Meanwhile I've just noticed that today was my deadline ... Well, let's not talk about that.

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 22:25:15 +0530

I had a dream last night about Lorena. It had some quite interesting scenes. I think I've figure out her history, why her eyes are different than her parents. And somehow she is involved with the rivalry between the king of one kingdom and the queen of the other. The questions now are-why is she involved? What does she have to do with rivaling kingdoms? Why do they both want her? And which one is really the rightful ruler? And what happened to her birth parents?

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UJ — Sat, 17 Mar 2012 13:16:22 +0530

I find remembering the original idea helps answer a lot of questions. And it keeps me on track. And it's not just books that distract me. I was going to hunker down this weekend ... but Sherlock DVDs are beckoning me. Story is story. It all counts as research and study.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 17 Mar 2012 16:31:10 +0530

I haven't done any editing for a couple of days. Sometimes I just can't deal with reading my own work and put it off. I need to get back on track, but the truth is I'm just lazy. I'm also just now starting to break mine up into chapters. When i was writing originally I didn't put any breaks in, but they are definitely needed. I have noticed that a lot of the time there are natural breaks but sometimes it's hard to tell when one chapter ends and the next begins. UJ, no watching Sherlock until you've written something. They will still be there after you done an hours work, or 500 words, or whatever target you set. And watching them will be all the sweeter for knowing you've earned it. Maggie, you need to write Lorena's history down. Even if you don't use it in the book itself you may find that by doing so you answer some of those other questions. Happy writings everyone.

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Carolf — Sun, 18 Mar 2012 00:04:48 +0530

I'm doing a final read-through on-line so I can correct the little typos and other such problems a I read. Later on, I'll hit the scenes I need to punch up, so I'll go slower when I hit that part. It's a few chapters away, yet. I'm on chapter 11 of 28. Grinding along, grinding along ...

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UJ — Sun, 18 Mar 2012 13:18:14 +0530

Oh blue_rose, it's too late. I spent all of yesterday with Sherlock (way hey!) Today there's family stuff but I'll try to get some work done. I'm much better behaved during the week. No play until I have done some work. The weekends tend to be a lot looser.

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KatiePoet — Sun, 18 Mar 2012 22:45:53 +0530

I've been a bad girl :( Had hoped to make this spring break all about finishing the novel, but no... no... I only got one decent writing session in. I don't know how I widdled away all that time, but that's my true talent sometimes. I did, however, restructure my outline, but now I'm not entirely happy with my new outline. Gosh I suck. Looks like everyone else is doing fantastic! Which, is great. I'm envious. But this is pushing me to work, if only today, on inching closer to the final scene. I'll get there, eventually, maybe...someday....

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 19 Mar 2012 15:25:21 +0530

I seem to have permanently entered the slow-down vortex. I'm supposed to be re-writing but it's moving very slowly. I think the crux of the matter is that I'm too nervous to read what I've previously written so put it off until enough people are hitting me on the head to go on. Maybe that'll change this week. Although I'd say there was more chance of TIm Roth walking out of the TV during the copious amounts of Lie To Me I've been watching and whisking me away. And after what I said to UJ about TV watching, too. I give such good advice, why can't I follow it?

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maggiep — Tue, 20 Mar 2012 00:42:27 +0530

Okay, I need butt kicking. I Must write my new ideas down. Must! It's a beautiful day, I should go outside on the hammock and write. Freddi-Go outside and write. Write!

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UJ — Tue, 20 Mar 2012 13:44:06 +0530

Lol, blue_rose. I used to call myself a dreadful hypocrite but then I had to accept I was just too good at it. It's a lovely day where I am too, maggiep. I can't let it distract me. I've got a pretty clear week ahead of me so no excuses. I must press on, and not just go wandering around for a nice walk just because the sun's out.

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 20 Mar 2012 14:35:41 +0530

My trouble is, if there were an award for procrastination I'd win it. Well, maybe next year. I'd compete this year, but, you know, I've got a Twin Peaks box set to get through. It's a lovely day here too. I love spring. Even the Netherlands gets some blue sky and sun. I'm guessing it's nicer where you are but I can't miss this opportunity. Maybe I'll take my laptop into the garden and stare at the screen in full view of my neighbours for a change.

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UJ — Wed, 21 Mar 2012 12:32:44 +0530

It started off sunny but then it got a bit dull, so there was no temptation to go for s stroll. After a mild winter it looks like a dreary English spring. So I stayed inside ... and did more work than I've done in a long time. I couldn't stop! And I stood the whole time so now my back's feeling that today. I have to be that disciplined, but maybe not so intense, from now on. In the meantime, I feel like I deserve some damn fine cherry pie.

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 21 Mar 2012 15:27:16 +0530

Damn fine coffee and cherry pie all round.

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izzyhindle — Thu, 22 Mar 2012 17:44:46 +0530

Editing is hard. D: I literally can't bring myself to even touching my draft sometimes. I've already marked up my copy of the first draft, but when I pull it out and sit down at my computer...I just can't bear to even read it. The best I can do is get through about a paragraph before I'm disgusted with myself and want to just give up. Sometimes I don't know why I'm doing this since I have no plans to publish this novel.

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Carolf — Thu, 22 Mar 2012 20:24:48 +0530

Izzy, maybe you need a break. Take a week's vacation, then come back to it and see if you feel any better about editing it. Sometimes that can help. But I agree with maggiep, it's worth finishing just for the sake of doing your best for your story.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Mar 2012 23:19:37 +0530

Yay, I have the afternoon off! It feels like summer and I have the fan on. Temptation to go outside and do something, but I resist. I am stationing myself by the window so I can still get the sun, and plan on writing til 5.

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Mar 2012 08:52:15 +0530

I wrote 1,138 words today, bringing the total to 11,888. Lorena is still in the woods, waiting to find out what is happening, and trying to figure out what to do. Tomorrow's goal-work up the plot to get from new point A- Lorena still in woods and her new friends doing investigation work, to point B- The bad guys show up and there is a little action with that. Just gotta figure out how long to wait before bringing them back in.

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UJ — Fri, 23 Mar 2012 12:48:26 +0530

I can only hope I get a chance to write today. Loads of errands and family stuff. I might not be able to get anything done until Monday. New deadline is the end of the month. That really should be more than enough time. As long as I keep going like I have this week.

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Mar 2012 20:05:00 +0530

I am on the search for a name for the king. And thinking of the king and queen made me think that eventually I have to figure out how one kingdom became two, when, and such....

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Carolf — Fri, 23 Mar 2012 20:59:26 +0530

One typical way for a kingdom to be split into two is contentious brothers. Or even non-contentious brothers who are both gifted by their king father. Or a kingdom united by marriage (Think of Ferdinand and Isabel) with no issue. Each is succeeded by their next-in-line kin, which breaks the kingdom back into two. Or ... Am I helping?

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Carolf — Fri, 23 Mar 2012 21:00:53 +0530

I DOOD IT! I've printed my FINISHED!!! novel for my first reader to take home with her tonight. I've edited it six ways to Sunday, and now await her comments before I do any more passes. There will be other readers, as well, but she is my first. I feel really good and accomplished. I also feel a bit bereft.

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 01:58:14 +0530

I have passed the 12k mark. I do not know how long this story will be. My other series is easier to figure out the length of them, but this one is harder, since this is the first and there seems to be a bit to cover.

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UJ — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 13:11:10 +0530

Congrats, Carolf! Feel bereft? That's what new projects are for!

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UJ — Fri, 30 Mar 2012 12:23:31 +0530

Met my deadline. Hurrah! Just in time for Script Frenzy. Good grief!

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Mar 2012 20:16:45 +0530

The next scene is slowly coming. I am letting it float around my head for a little while, til it is all together.

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UJ — Sat, 31 Mar 2012 13:38:26 +0530

Many thanks. I was gonna say a change will be as good as a break, but I'm off to Rome at the end of Apr so between that and Script Frenzy ... I'm so looking forward to Rome.

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UJ — Sun, 01 Apr 2012 13:17:30 +0530

Second trip. I loved it so much the first time. A week of nothing but food, walking and sun. Ahhh ...

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maggiep — Mon, 02 Apr 2012 01:46:44 +0530

My new point b is a fight Lorena gets into with the bad guys who are trying to snatch her away. Confession time- I am not good with fight scenes. I don't like getting detailed in gore or in general getting really violent. However, what would the story be if the bad guys said "we are going to kidnap you now" and Lorena said "no you're not." ?? Not very exciting. Any tips on writing a smooth fight scene but without too much violence would be greatly appreciated.

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UJ — Mon, 02 Apr 2012 13:35:48 +0530

Rome: It's the people, I think, and the atmosphere. Lorena: How about a battle of wits and psychological coercion?

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 05 Apr 2012 10:57:45 +0530

Okay, so it's been a while, but I have managed to get absolutely nothing done. I set myself the target of finishing my first edit by the end of April but have made hardly any progress. I have two main problems: 1) I am scared to read what I have written. I am convinced it will be terrible and so find any excuse not to read it. 2) I am simply feed up with the whole thing. I am now way past the 'being excited that I wrote a novel' phase and well into the 'I just never want to think about the plot, MC, or tiny details ever again' stage. What I would really like to do is write something else, but I can't. I know if I start a new project, or even short story before I have got through my re-write I will never come back to it. My plan is to finish my re-write and then let a few trusted friends finally read it. While they are doing that (and making notes on improvements) I will finally allow myself to move on to something new. Last night a friend suggested speed editing. This is where you give yourself a certain time to edit a certain amount. You don't have the time to go into great details, or get nit-picky. You simply have the time to change small things whilst being made aware of the big things that need more work. I am going to give it a try. I am going to give myself 30 minutes, or a single read-through for each chapter. I'll let you know how it works. In the meantime feel free to poke me until I finish.

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UJ — Thu, 05 Apr 2012 14:00:47 +0530

Good luck with the speed editing, blue _rose. I know it can be daunting to read ones own work. Maybe you just need a break from it. Do something else, freshen up with a new project, and then go back - yes, actually go back! - next month and read it through with fresh eyes.

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Carolf — Thu, 05 Apr 2012 20:12:47 +0530

You are assuming that it will be painful to re-read. You may be surprised. Oh, you'll see a lot of problems and places where you recognize bad writing. But you are likely to be surprised, as well, by how many times you turn a phrase particularly well, or how well the story hangs together. That said, breaking it into smaller chunks is a good idea. You're making a mountain out of the re-reading; breaking the mountain into small mole hills may be just the answer. Good luck!

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 06 Apr 2012 17:03:57 +0530

Thanks guys, I will finish this speed edit of the entire thing and then take a break. After this re-write it will be time to let somebody else read it so I can move onto something else while they do all the hard work. You're right, Carolf. Some of it is bad, but some is a pleasant surprise. It's the anticipation I can't deal with.

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maggiep — Sat, 07 Apr 2012 01:46:57 +0530

Passed 13k, and finished my fight scene. Yay! Now I can stop thinking about that and move on with the story.

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Carolf — Sat, 07 Apr 2012 21:38:47 +0530

Congratulations, maggiep! I have yet to face a fight scene. I admire you!

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Carolf — Sun, 08 Apr 2012 19:57:50 +0530

Since you write in the speculative fiction genre, I'm assuming you attend SF cons? Perhaps SCA? Both have lots of folks who do fighting for real -- safely. Maybe attend some of the sessions, ask questions of some of the fighters? They are usually happy to talk about their passion.

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maggiep — Mon, 09 Apr 2012 08:35:56 +0530

I went to a party tonight and a friend who I used to babysit but is now taller than me(darn growth spurts) told me that in his English class they had to do book reports and one of the girls in his class did a report on one of my books. I felt so honored.

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maggiep — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 06:30:54 +0530

I finished chapter 20(yep i do chapters). Lorena and the gang are on their journey now. I'm not exactly sure how they decide to go to the Queen's Kingdom yet, but they do decide that, so I have to put it in the next scene. I'm starting to wonder if this story is suppose to be in parts, part one being when she is being stalked, part two being when they are journeying to the kingdom, etc.... Fortunately this is not a must know right now thing. I can figure it out later.

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UJ — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 13:16:33 +0530

Phew! I'm officially on hols! I met my latest deadline and now, between hosting duties (two house guests) and jetting off for Rome later this month, I'm officially declaring I can do what I damn well please. For now.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 14:24:53 +0530

Way to go UJ, have a lovely time in Rome. Maggie, it is a huge ego boost for me to know that not only have I been giving advice to a published author, but that she may actually have taken some of that advice. It's also a confidence boost. I will be checking out your site later.

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Carolf — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 19:31:51 +0530

May I crow a bit? My first reader gave me her critique last night. It started when she called to tell me she would be a bit late for our scheduled dinner -- she couldn't put my book down and wanted to stay until she finished! Her critique was pure gold. She liked it, she liked it a lot, yet had some incredible insights to where I needed just a bit more depth -places where she got my intention, but would have liked more development. I knew a rewrite would be in order after I go some critiques, and she gave me useful clues as to what needs attention. I've got the thing out to two more first readers, but right now I'm floating on air!

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maggiep — Fri, 13 Apr 2012 00:20:36 +0530

Am at 14,002 now. I am to the point where I really need to know why the bad guys are after Lorena. What they want her for, and why her eyes are different, what makes her special. is she telling me? No, of course not. Not a word. Oh, she wants me to keep writing her getting away from the guys, but she won't help me out and tell me what's so special about her. And will the guys help me, even when I dangle Lorena in front of them, offering them to take her for a little while, in exchange for telling me why they want her? Nope. Ya know it's not nice when your own characters don't trust you with their secrets.

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UJ — Fri, 13 Apr 2012 13:49:30 +0530

Lol, maggiep. I take it Lorena doesn't know then! Do the bad guys know or are they just henchmen following orders? Maybe you need to meet whoever they work for. Reminding myself what the theme is helps keep me on track and finding a way through. It reminds me why this story. Crow away Carolf! And you've got a friend who really knows how to give feedback. That's a skill in itself. I wish I knew someone who knows how to focus on actual issues and not start going off on what they'd personally like to see.

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UJ — Sat, 14 Apr 2012 13:12:50 +0530

You literally did something different!

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 14 Apr 2012 14:27:40 +0530

I have been very slack recently. Naughty, naughty. So I have set myself the target of re-writing to the end of chapter 15 by the end of Sunday. So far I am on chapter 8, so that's 6 chapters to do in 3 days. And if I get to chapter 11 by tonight hubby will take me to see "The Cabin in the Woods' as a treat. (It's only showing tonight so I can't go tomorrow as a reward for reaching my target.)

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UJ — Sun, 15 Apr 2012 13:48:14 +0530

I'm scheduled to see Cabin in the Woods next week. Meanwhile, although I'm resting, I think I might dabble with something. It feels weird not working on anything. I might take a bash at my outline for next NaNo!

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 16 Apr 2012 14:03:45 +0530

I did it! I have edited upto and including chapter 15. My next target is to reach Chapter 20 by the end of Wednesday (or sooner). I might just get this thing done by the end of April after all. The Cabin in the Woods is excellent. Go see it and go see it quickly. Try to avoid finding out anything about it and definitely avoid trailers and TV ads for it. The less you know when you see it the better.

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maggiep — Mon, 16 Apr 2012 21:53:47 +0530

My plot has been floating in my head these past few days. I havent had a chance to write, which may be a good thing, as it gives me and the manuscript a break. I'm still not sure about the plot, if it is good or not, wether it works or not. I'm not sure, though, if it is because the plot really is not the right one for this story, or if it is because I have never done fantasy before, so all this stuff is new to me and my brain.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Tue, 17 Apr 2012 00:33:50 +0530

I am wondering if anyone would mind giving me feedback to my plot, if it sounds worth reading. If there are any holes or confusing parts. This is what I have now- 20 years ago- Violet eyed people live amongst color changers. As far back as known in history there have always been these "odd ones"(the violet eyes). Some fear and avoid them, some tolerate them, while others don't care about them either way. King Galin is ruler over Niteria. When he dies he has a daughter and stepson. The daughter believes that she is the rightful heir, being blood relative. The stepson believes that he is the rightful heir, being male. This results in a division of Niteria, stepson making himself king over the west and renaming it, the daughter making herself queen and claiming the north-east. A war begins for control of both over all the land. During a battle, the king gets to a village first and pillages it. He takes prisoners, including violet eyes. One violet eyed woman, pregnant, escapes. The prisoners are taken to the king's castle. An epidemic sweeps through his castle grounds. He discovers that none of the violet eyes get sick at all. Through 'tests', he finds out that they can never get sick, they have some kind of immunity to illnesses. He thinks, if he can use them, use their immunity as an antidote, he wouldnt get sick and he could take over the queen, winning the war. Meanwhile, the woman has gone into labor and a couple finds her. They help her. She gives birth to a daughter and asks the couple to protect her. The woman leaves the baby. 13 years later-_this is the prologue)-Lorena is 7 now. There are stories of violet eyed people, but she has never seen any to give proof to the stories. She knows she is different. The village is attacked and Lorena and her friend, Elex, are the only ones to escape. They figure they were attacked because of the war still raging. She knows nothing of the birth parents. Lorena stays with an older couple and Elex disappears. Now-(this is where the story starts)- Lorena works at a tavern now. Older couple is dead. 2 men late at night try to kidnap Lorena. A mysterious man saves her and they end up in the woods. The man ends up being Elex. The men are chasing her now in the woods. Elex, Lorena, and a group of homeless/gypsy people help them. They are on the run. They do not know why the men are after Lorena, who they are working for, or who to trust. They decide to travel north, toward the queen's castle. (its the destination anyway) In the story, Lorena will discover who is after her, how it is exactly that she is different, and that her parents were not her birth parents at all, resulting in her wanting to know who her parents were and why they gave her up, resulting in finding out about what happened the night she was born. So.... any thoughts? Suggestions? Confusion? :)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Tue, 17 Apr 2012 13:01:00 +0530

I have a couple of questions. If you have answers for them, but they would give away important plot details then don't worry about going into detail, but they are things I think you need to have answers for, even if they don't make it into the actual book. The King rules the west of the kingdom and the Queen the north-east. What about the rest of the country? Maybe I'm being stupid here and there is a straightforward split: north-east and west, but in my mind I imagine there being a kind of no-mans land left between the two kingdoms. If so, is this unruled territory? Do they have an allegiance to a particular side, or can they be brought? Is the illness still ravaging the country? What is it? (Symptoms, duration, does everyone who becomes ill die?) Is the violet eyes a genetic inheritance? Do violet-eyed people give birth to violet-eyed children or is it random? I assume Lorena is the child of the pregnant woman. If so, how is she different if she doesn't have violet eyes. Who is the rightful heir to the country in your opinion? Regardless of being the rightful heir, are they good or bad? Perhaps neither the King or Queen is fit to rule and there is another character who needs to reunite the country. Other than those questions (the answers to which may produce more questions) I think you've got the bones of an interesting story there. A kingdom at war with itself, a heroine searching for her destiny, a (possible) pandemic these are all things that can draw a reader in. I believe in characters leading a story and telling the author what they are going to do and why. Having said that I think it helps to have some idea of where you are headed. Perhaps a little break to give yourself a chance to work some things out is a good idea. Maybe come up with a couple of different directions and see which works better with what you are aiming for. Or concentrate on really creating the world. Draw maps, create races, animals, the history etc. Having a better idea of setting may help you with where Lorena and the plot needs to go. I hope this helps.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Tue, 17 Apr 2012 13:48:13 +0530

Love the backstory. I'd have thought all the clues you need are in there. Lorena's birth mother went where after leaving her? Is Birth Mother's current activities the reason why Lorena is now being chased? So who's Lorena's father, since Lorena has only heard of Violets and apparently not got the tell tale eye colour herself? Knowing that the King is looking for Violets, did Birth Mum or Parents change Lorena's eye colour? And is her unknown father the reason why she's being pursued? And Elex spent his missing time doing what? Has the Mad Scientist King been working on other projects beside chembio? There's no need for any of it to stay confusing. Thinking through more fully what you've got should help. The amount of times I've gone round in circles only to find I had the answer all along - if only I'd remembered my themes and looked at my original notes! D'oh!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 03:45:31 +0530

I finished writing up the plot for the story. Yay finally got it :) However, it has an ending left for a sequel. I had a feeling this was gunna happen. Not that I don't want a sequel, I just want to make sure that I have a plot for the sequel. I hate stories that have cliff-hanger endings and no sequels.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 14:07:11 +0530

Great news, Maggie. Even if the war between King and Queen is over you should have story left in the re-unification of the country. And there are always new characters who bring new stories and motives.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Fri, 20 Apr 2012 13:08:52 +0530

Fun time reading ahead then. I might need to do some work soon. This rest is stressing me out!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Fri, 20 Apr 2012 14:31:32 +0530

UJ - The trouble with resting is that there's always a little voice in the back of your mind nagging you to go do something. I have reached chapter twenty at last. And only a day past my deadline. I'm not too sure how many I have left as I'm in the processing of breaking my work into chapters now, but I reckon there are at least five more. So my new target is to re-write up to, and including, chapter twenty-five but the end of the weekend.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Fri, 20 Apr 2012 19:42:48 +0530

Good on you, Blue Rose. Keep it up!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 21 Apr 2012 01:42:36 +0530

Finished typing the first chapter, prologue actually. I am much happier with this version. And of course, the day I get on a typing roll is when we have company coming. Hmm, is hiding away in the office bad manners? Maybe if I said I had a weird sickness and shouldnt be around people....

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 21 Apr 2012 08:41:03 +0530

Finishing the night at 3,146 words. I would keep going but I have work tomorrow and it's getting late. I am leaving for Ireland in 18 days(yay!), and will be gone for about a week and a half. I am hoping to get the manuscript to where the first draft ended before I leave so I'm not working with two documents when I get back. I am also hoping that being around all those castles and the history will spark some ideas I can incorporate.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Sat, 21 Apr 2012 12:53:01 +0530

I've started tinkering with an outline for a future project. When I'm not working I think too much and I just end up having a crazy. May you handle breaks better than I do, maggiep.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 21 Apr 2012 19:42:14 +0530

Lol, I don't handle breaks well. My laptop is not speaking to me, so I am stuck typing on the desktop, and already I wish I was back in that office typing. At least the desk is by a window so I can look outside. (note to self-get that stupid-I mean, that poor-laptop fixed). My story is always following me around, the characters whispering, somtimes shouting, to me to get back to writing. Going 2 weeks without working on it? Oh good grief I'm not going to be working on it for 2 weeks! Hmm, I should bring another notebook, just in case I get scenes and have to write them down. Yeah, gotta put that on the list.

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UJ — Sun, 22 Apr 2012 14:00:56 +0530

It's just impossible to resist! And I've definitely been less crazy.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Mon, 23 Apr 2012 13:18:08 +0530

Finished! Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes. So my speed edit is done. I know that there is a lot more work to do before it's finished, but at least I now have a comprehensible plot and something that people can actually read and follow. I need to go into more detail in some places, sort out everyone's accents and bring in a second narrative voice to fill some gaps, but for now it'll do. I think I've even found some unwitting victims *cough* I mean willing volunteers to read it, although I'm not sure what I'll do if they hate it. Now for a break. My victimteers can do some work for a while. I don't want to think about this novel for the next two months. I'm so sick of it at the moment. So I shall wait for feedback before playing with it any more. Now I just need a new project to fill my time.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Mon, 23 Apr 2012 13:46:53 +0530

Applause! Applause!

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 25 Apr 2012 15:17:20 +0530

Thanks guys. You have helped keep me sane and on the right path and I hope you will continue to do so when I go back to my baby. Now back to work *cracks whip and laughs manically* Bwahahahahahahahaha!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 26 Apr 2012 06:13:42 +0530

So far today has been a great writing day. Im gunna be gone for the weekend so Im trying to get as much writing in now as possible. I was listening to music on Pandora and when I looked up, the cd cover for the song's album snatched all of my attention. It was a scene of a girl in winter, with a fur cloak, and I immediately saw her as my girl. She looked like she was ready to fight off some advancing enemy, which works very well with the plot. At the moment though, music aside, I am stuck writing further, because I do not know how tall my MMC is. Does Lorena have to tilt her head back to look up at him, or just gaze up a little? Ah these little details can be so annoying.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 03 May 2012 20:18:35 +0530

I finished combining the 2 documents. My count is a little beyond 16k. Not too terrible. I've been trying to come up with creatures. 1 type is not working for me. I want more.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Tue, 08 May 2012 14:09:09 +0530

Hi, everyone. Back from Roma - and now I have a cold! Boo hoo. Was supposed to be launching myself back into work today but that's going to have to wait til I'm one hundred percent. So, hopefully sometime this week I'll be reading through script No 1, for only then am I allowed out to see Marvel Avengers Assemble (best movie title change ever). And it's only this damn silly cold that's holding me back. Bah, humbug. (Roma was it's usual brilliant self btw. Less sun, so no danger of burning, fab food (d'uh) and spectacular sights (of course).)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Wed, 09 May 2012 12:29:28 +0530

Get better UJ. I saw The Avengers the other day. I wasn't too bothered about going, but enjoyed it. I went in wondering why everyone seems so obsessed with Tom Hiddleston and came out sort of in love with him. Now I am waiting for Dark Shadows. I know it won't be as good as it is in my mind but I can never resist Tim Burton (or Johnny Depp for that matter)! I am enjoying my break from my novel. I haven't heard back from anyone yet - not sure if that's good or bad. Are they actually reading it, or have they thrown it away in disgust and are trying to work out how best to tell me? I just wrote my first short story since January. I felt good to get back to new characters and different situations.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Wed, 09 May 2012 12:32:15 +0530

I'm just going to have to resign myself that I can't rush anything, I just have to wait for this daft cold to get out of my way. I shall spend my time with some gentle reading and watching movies and call it research.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Mon, 14 May 2012 15:31:32 +0530

Sat myself down this morning and read through the script. Still suffering from the cold but feeling much better ... Until I read the script. It is, simply, one of the least impressive thing I've ever written. I wish I could blame the cold, claim it's fogged my brian in and I have no idea what I just read really. If only I waited til next week and somehow the lack of a cold will make a massive difference to how I perceive the script. But no. I've written crap. It's as simple as that. I know I can write. I used to write brilliantly. I just haven't done it this draft. Nor, it feels, for a while now. Okay, okay. Dan Brown can't write and it hasn't hurt him - No! I will not settle for Dan Brown's level! I will not! I've written well before, I will again. This draft ... It's manure, true. And from manure great and beautiful things grow. And that's a fact. As long as next door's cat doesn't keep doing unthinkable things in my little garden. Fine. Keep the script away from the cat. It doesn't matter that I feel like I wasted a month on this draft. I've wasted a lot more time on lesser things, let me tell you. I'm going to have a nice lunch, and then it's back to work. And when I see the Avengers will be decided by when I stop coughing and sneezing like I have plague. Now pass the absinthe and let's get this baby started - as many times as it bloody well takes.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Mon, 14 May 2012 17:52:15 +0530

Okay, I've calmed down a bit now. Lunch really helped. One dodgy draft is not the be all and end all! I'm going to get back to work now and maybe I'll have some nice chocolate buttons later.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Tue, 15 May 2012 12:31:28 +0530

Cheers, Carolf. I've never had any trouble eating choccy buttons.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

UJ — Wed, 16 May 2012 13:33:37 +0530

It's full of good ideas. I just totally failed to bring them out in that draft. Which is odd because previous drafts weren't that bad. Hence the shock. Mm, Maltesers ...

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Fri, 18 May 2012 05:36:33 +0530

Just got back from Ireland. I still feel like Im on the plane. Man I wish the room would stop tilting.... Anywho, wow! Okay so I got a whole bunch of inspiration and information for stories. Time to get at it! At least, once the room stops moving.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sun, 20 May 2012 05:24:42 +0530

I had a show to do today, at a winery. I brought my books and jewelry. I sold a book, yay!! Im more excited about the one book I sold over the pieces of jewelry. I look at my jewelry business as support for writing. I also worked on my story while there. I am setting my fantasy story aside for the moment to concentrate on my Ireland stories. I wrote them last year but have kept them on hold for my trip. So not that I have new info and experiences, I want to incorporate them. So I guess this is more of a tweaking as apposed to rewrite. Tweaking sounds less intimidating.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Wed, 23 May 2012 13:19:01 +0530

Have fun with the tweaking, Maggie. I am enjoying my break from my novel. I am waiting for feedback as to whether it is worth putting the effort in to really editing it properly and doing all the research needed. At the moment my friends are taking it in turns to give me a topic for a short story and then I have two weeks to write it. I'm stuck on the latest. The theme is the butterfly effect. I have an idea, but am not very excited about it and can't get myself to write. It doesn't help that it's actually sunny outside for once.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

JenUggD — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:40:42 +0530

I'm hoping to write another 50k words in December. So far, I'm still keeping to the writing habits that always seem to work so well for me during NaNo time but ones that are too easy to let go of after. I'm sticking to my guns this year. After completing 3 consecutive NaNos, I'd better have at least one finished ms to show for it before I croak!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

xfearlesslykiki — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:55:17 +0530

I should do this... peeps come to tinychat.com/wrimo to join everyone to talk about plot (: except i'm sort of having national novel ignoring month... ugh

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 11:57:26 +0530

A good, solid goal! I'm thinking I'll be somewhere around 85k myself by the time I'm done, but I guess I'll find out! Keep us updated on your progress ^_^

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 11:59:42 +0530

That's a good way to start out if you ask me! My next project is going to involve almost a novella's worth of world-building, I'm thinking (I had about 3/4 of it done prior to losing it all in a computer crash...back up your novel, self!!). But as far as I'm concerned, story or world-building, writing is writing. I know I finally got myself into a habit during Nano, something I've been trying to do forever...and now I can't make myself stop even when I need the rest ><

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 12:00:22 +0530

I was going to go for 1000/day too until I realized I'd need a draft done halfway through the month. :/ It's a totally reasonable goal though, IMO. Go for it! You can do it!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PumpkinKing97 — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 05:31:03 +0530

Exactly what I'm planning, though, in the spirit of Nano, I'm behind on that goal already. At least I don't have to feel guilty if I don't make it each day. So it's a day later, who cares? My goal is to be finished the initial draft by Christmas. Printing that thing out to edit will be the best present ever (seriously, I can't wait to edit this thing....).

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

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Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 13:32:12 +0530

Good to see ya Hanabi! Sounds like things are progressing nicely for you! And thanks for the helpful links ^_^ So far I'm doing my progress bar by hand, but we'll see how long that lasts before I go totally nuts. 63997 words and still chugging along tonight. I'm absolutely determined to finish this chapter so I'll feel free to work on my Harvard app tomorrow instead of writing.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

JenUggD — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:34:06 +0530

These are great, Hanabi!!! Thanks so much for the links. Now, all I need is a webpage or a blog to display them on. :D

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

CDTurner — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 22:38:47 +0530

THIS!!!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:40:04 +0530

I had to force myself to a couple of 100-500 word days right after Thanksgiving after I hit 50k - trying not to kill my wrist for all of time, here >< I think you are well within your rights to take care of yourself, first. Then you can get back to 2k/day ;)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:35:36 +0530

Rock on, Hanabi! I remember the day after a whole bunch of below-par days that I finally got above the line...it felt awesome, and I never was below it again ^_^ Keep it up!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Unforgivable — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 15:41:32 +0530

Oh.. And by finishing it, I mean reaching the 100K mark xD

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:41:01 +0530

Any goal is welcome here, and I think pushing forward and writing until you finish (whenever that is) is a perfectly good one! Write away!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:42:00 +0530

*picks up by pants* *kicks....in a friendly way* Get writing, you! ;)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:43:49 +0530

You're busy O_o I'd normally be all over the beta offer, but I've got grad aps to finish this week so I'd best keep my focus on those. If you want readers at the end of the month for your novella though, I'd be happy to be of service ^_^

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:45:03 +0530

You CAN do this! Yay yay! *cheerleader mode*

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 00:57:19 +0530

Good luck with that! It would never work for me, but it does seem sensible.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:46:42 +0530

Titles can be so tricky. I finally got mine in the last week of November while listening to Coldplay on repeat...I'm sure eventually the perfect one will come to you ^_^

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:48:29 +0530

This is exactly what I'm afraid will happen with mine! o_o I'm decently happy with it so far, but even if I wasn't, I'd want to keep going until I finished a draft...I've written a ton of lengthy short stories but I've never finished a novel before, so I'll feel rather accomplished if I can push through til then. Cheers to you as well! You CAN do it :D

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:49:22 +0530

A worthy goal! Writing every day (even just a little) is one major habit I'm hoping to pick up and keep from November.

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PhoenixSempai — Fri, 02 Dec 2011 23:50:01 +0530

Easily so! Keep up the good work!!

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 01:13:20 +0530

Thanks for the kick, but a bit softer next time - I bruise easy! 1,239 words written today. Not as many as I hoped but I have reached 53,000. Tomorrow I'm aiming for 55,000.

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Dani Marchand — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 11:20:54 +0530

Thanks! I'll probably have it all cleaned up and maybe even published by then, but late beta readers are good too, since I can release updated ebook versions whenever I want. Good luck with your apps!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 01:05:59 +0530

Aww. :( I haven't done anything (at all) yet today (because I woke up a few minutes ago), but I'm optimistic about today's prospects. Sorry to hear you're having trouble meeting your goals-- but good luck getting done anyway. I hope you do manage to get it done, at least! On the bright side, characters taking over is usually a good thing, right? If you can't finish by the 17th, do you think your friend would appreciate getting however much you have and being emailed the end later when it's written?

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ellarien — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 04:46:34 +0530

Thanks for organizing this thread! So far, I think I've spent more time making a spreadsheet to track my wordcount, and then putting it on Google Docs, than actually writing, but I am just about on track for the first two days.

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Unforgivable — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 01:01:19 +0530

Woah! How did you ever manage to write 219888 words in such a short amount of time!?!? OO' I really REALLY envy you!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:34:17 +0530

Epic wordcount, Realta O_O I should think, having managed that, that you'll finish up that novel in no time! ^_^

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:32:56 +0530

Oh, I know she'll appreciate it whenever I can get it to her, and I can probably get a copy done by Christmas anyway - it just won't be a hard copy for her to take along on her travels, which is too bad. And yes, characters taking over is a good thing on the whole. This novel's theme didn't even exist before I had a good sit-down with my MC and she told me what it was going to be about. :D

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:35:24 +0530

Moral support. You got it!! That's exactly what we're here for. As for having a goal in sight, you just set one - so there it is! ;)

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ellarien — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 05:54:25 +0530

1: c 2: c, h 3: d -- I don't find the videos terribly helpful. Also the messed-up 'words per day to finish on time' stat was annoying and caused me to spend far too much time trying to work out a better way to do it. 4. a/b (I'm hoping to be done in three weeks as far as this draft goes.)

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:39:21 +0530

1. c (although as I feel semi-responsible for the thread, I do suspect I will be checking it more than that on occasion.) 2. a,c,f,h, i (camaraderie in general, and having a specific goal to work toward both daily and total, both really helped for me) 3. d. I didn't really find anything particularly infuriating, and anything I found unhelpful I just didn't use ;) 4. a/b - I hope to be done about halfway through December, but as I'm the silly organizer of all this mess, I'll stick around on the thread to cheer people on at LEAST through December!

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 14:53:22 +0530

1)c - once in the morning and again in the evening. Although if I'm stuck possibly more. 2)i - for me the most helpful part of NaNoWriMo is its very existence. I've been wanting to write a novel for years but never got further than endless re-writes of chapter 1. Then a friend told me about this. Thanks to NaNoWriMo I'm 3/5s of the way through my novel and on track to finish it by Christmas. For some strange reason the thought of letting down a load of people I've never met by not finishing worked better than self imposed deadlines and promises of shoes from hubby. 3)d - nothing was hugely irritating or unhelpful. If I didn't need something I just ignored it until I was in a procrastination vibe. I had to stay away from the forums, though, or I would never have got anything done. 4)a/b - I will have my novel finished by 24th Dec but hope to have it done by 14th, so it depends. But I'll be keeping an eye on the site and will be back again next year.

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:33:27 +0530

Aww ^_^ I'm just glad to see everyone coming together like this. It helps keep up my motivation for sure!

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:41:30 +0530

Write write write! Anything at all! No need to be afraid, because there's no pressure here. And the more you write, the easier it'll be to keep doing so ^_^

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:41:58 +0530

DO IT!!!! :D

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PeverellSister — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 07:25:45 +0530

Now that I've made a fool of myself...

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:45:07 +0530

It's NaNo. I'm pretty sure we're all fools here... ;)

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:45:51 +0530

You better believe it...I'm actually having to write MORE per day this month than I did last month, to reach my goal ><

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:47:29 +0530

That's a really cool goal! I actually had the end of mine written in my head from the time I came up with the story - the last couple of lines and everything - but it was probably easier for me, since this is essentially a prequel to a roleplay my friend and I write. So I had to have a rough idea where it was going.

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 10:48:25 +0530

I miss it too -_- And I keep looking at everyone's progress bars to see how far they've come before I remember it doesn't update anymore >.>

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Dani Marchand — Sat, 03 Dec 2011 12:39:52 +0530

Good luck with your next chapter! I'm having a rough time writing, but I found some betas for my finished work and picked out a cover image, at least.

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:30:02 +0530

Ooo, a cover? Nice! I may end up making *myself* a cover at some point, though I don't think it'll be during my beta-reading period. It's been a long time since I've drawn anything. And the chapters are proceeding nicely - thanks for the encouragement!

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:31:18 +0530

That's so cool! I'd love to even sell a single copy of my book (to someone outside my family, lol). You can do it! We're behind you!

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:35:29 +0530

November can be a tricky month. I'm usually crazy busy. It just so happened that this year was free for me. December's shaping up to be a lot busier though, which is partially why I appreciate all you lovely people here cheering each other on! I would have totally joined you for the 15k push if I'd seen, but I was finishing up my Harvard and Georgetown applications yesterday instead. I may really need it next weekend though if I'm going to finish on time. If you're up for it then, we can try together ;) And you're totally in the right spot, thread-wise! :D

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:36:07 +0530

Wise words indeed! ;) And good going on the goals! Cheering you on!!

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:36:32 +0530

Thanks! We're happy to have you as a part of it!

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:37:42 +0530

Belt testing!!! In what? I had my first taekwondo black belt exam in December too, if I remember. It was a killer.

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mzmocha — Sun, 04 Dec 2011 05:06:16 +0530

[quote=Dani Marchand] Worked all day on editing the cover image. Ugh. I use Gimp, which is like a free version of Photoshop, and the learning curve is killing me. Still, I think the results are turning out better than a lot of other Kindle published authors' self-made covers. Would anyone be willing to take a look at the two covers I have and let me know what you think? [/quote] Isn't there an artisans' thread? You could post your work there and ask for feedback. That said, I'd be happy to take a look at it - I teach Photoshop classes. My goal is to finish my novel - it's still only in the first third of the story so obviously even when it's done, I'm going to need a ton of editing. I also need to work on my own cover. I started it, but it's still only in a first draft state, just like the story ; )

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:40:01 +0530

I miss the word count bar too! :,( But worry not - no goal is any less lofty than anyone else's. Just writing at all is a noble endeavor, and we're cheering you on!

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:42:44 +0530

Write or Die saved my freaking life when I got behind the once in November. I'm thinking I may have to pull it out too - my daily word counts are fine but I'm not being as productive as I'd like. I have finishing problems too. I am going to be SO excited the day I write my last two lines (which have been set in stone from day 1 of writing) and can actually hold the "finished" (first draft) product in my hands!

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:43:22 +0530

Good work, Hanabi! Keep crankin' it out! ^_^

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 01:49:11 +0530

Congratulations! You'll be finishing today, then? :)

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ellarien — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 01:56:25 +0530

Thanks! Sunday is my day off from writing, but tomorrow for sure. Of course even when it's done, it's not done, because there's most of a subplot of scenes missing in the middle -- at least another chapter's worth.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 02:33:17 +0530

So, are you shooting for finishing this week or thereabouts? Either way, good luck! Tell us when you make it!

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ellarien — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 03:50:20 +0530

Thereabouts ;-) This thing has long chapters -- nearly 8k each on average. My original goal was an additional 15,000 words before the 21st, and I'm just keeping up with that pace so far, but if I get there sooner (in words or time) that's fine.

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 05:44:56 +0530

Wow, Ella! Great work! You may end up being the first person on the thread to reach your December goal - If I'm keeping track of everyone correctly, lol.

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Chibi-chan — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 04:52:59 +0530

Lol, Actually i think i'll have to change everything about three more times or something. The most important part is that I#m doing something, i guess, and don't just leave the file to collect virtual dust. ;) Good for you to be on track, hope you will continue like that!

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maggiep — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 07:12:30 +0530

Aw thanks. I am 2,789 words in and, can you believe, I still have absolutely no idea what the plot is? lol. The MC-Tempest-is not giving me any hints. I have a few scenes Ive typed up, but to the actually plot, she's not talking. How are we suppose to tell their stories when they won't talk to us?

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MystShadow — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 13:06:14 +0530

Tell me about it! I NEVER would have gotten as far as i am without it! I'm determined that this will be the idea that i finish because i really love it. Sure, it's not sounding too flash right now but hey it's a draft, it's allowed to do that. Oddly enough, i've had that final scene locked in my mind too and the last lines. Trouble is getting there lol. Good luck on finishing yours as well!

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maggiep — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 09:29:03 +0530

word count-3,126

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 13:14:45 +0530

It's good that you know what keeps you motivated.

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 13:46:04 +0530

"Like" ;)

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Chibi-chan — Mon, 05 Dec 2011 15:12:11 +0530

Thumbs up! Sight, i'd really like to write right now, but I'm in school -.- Stupid school is eating my life!

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:45:05 +0530

Grats! Keep up the good work!

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:46:05 +0530

Oh, we're tons of fun here. And as for motivation: WRITE WRITE WRITE!! ;)

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:47:13 +0530

You can do it, Maria! We're cheering you on! (I know how you feel though. I needed two chapters finished today to get back on track. I think I'll manage it, but every word has just been like pulling teeth.)

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:48:14 +0530

As long as each day is better than the last, you're on the right track. Perfectly respectable progress. We have faith in you too!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 06:13:55 +0530

CONGRATULATIONS!

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:42:56 +0530

Well done ellarien! Keep up the hard work ^_^

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 07:50:01 +0530

After as far as you've come already, I'm sure you can manage. Keep it up!

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ellarien — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 15:53:44 +0530

Thanks! The editing on this is going to be epic, but I'm looking forward to it.

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ellarien — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 15:51:26 +0530

Go! Go!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 08:19:10 +0530

Well, if you're new to it, improvement is the most likely thing if you keep at it and study your craft. If you write in the meantime and think some about your book, I'm sure you'll be able to do something to improve it after that time. Personally, I still don't know how to edit, but my first drafts are getting better and better.

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maggiep — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 03:10:23 +0530

word count-4,006

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sarai.schu — Tue, 06 Dec 2011 17:09:30 +0530

This is why I'm going to keep pushing. Other than one star wars fanfiction story I wrote in high school, none of my projects have ever reached that point where I can type "the end" and feel that tingle of success. I'm 26! Time to get this first draft written already! It's awesome that you have friends who Are pushing you to get it done... The closest I have to that is my husband, who seems to think of this as a time wasting Pastime that will never provide a finished manuscript. I'll show him! :)

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 14:16:21 +0530

Ah, husbands. Mine is being very supportive although that's mostly because he has visions of me making a lot of money with this novel and him being able to retire! You should make a bet with yours about finishing. Victory will be twice as sweet when you not only have a finished manuscript to rub in his face but someone else to do all the cleaning for the next two or three months.

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maggiep — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 06:04:23 +0530

word count-5,841

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luckyomally — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 04:40:13 +0530

I believe the expiration date is in June :)

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Riishi — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 03:29:19 +0530

A finished manuscript within a year is what I meant to write. No wonder I didn't hit 50k, if I'm forgetting to type half the words!

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 14:19:12 +0530

That was the idea when I started. However I'm going to wait until after I've finished and read through it again before I make the decision. If I decide it's worth the effort of editing I'm also aiming for a finish date of late 2012.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 13:50:18 +0530

What sort of story are you writing that needs that much verse? I usually sum up things like that in prose; are you trying to be particularly atmospheric or is your story about a bard or something?

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sarahlucielle — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 10:13:11 +0530

Well it's a fantasy story and instead of doing a ton of exposition about the history and cultures of the universe, I'm going to have songs and tales that my MC likes to tell his friend who is not acquainted with the part of the world he finds himself in. There's not actually going to be TONS of it, but often enough to take up large chunks of story.

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 14:47:50 +0530

But you're doing SO well. Have a little break, eat some chocolate and then come back to it fresh and raring to go. You can do it.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:43:34 +0530

Thanks, Blue ^_^ I'm trying. I'm certainly feeling refreshed today, if for no other reason that my grad applications are making me pull my hair out, so I'm just SO excited to be doing anything at all that isn't THAT. ;)

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Quarks_Uglier_Brother — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 17:05:31 +0530

The Blue Rose Sorry can i join your fight for more words. I successfully completed two nano novels during Nov, but failed to get the third done. Up and until yesterday I was bashing in the words without a care, then I was sidelined into a new story which sapped up my day's 4k of words. Hoping that I will be back on track today. I don't know if i should mention this or not, but I'm one of those writers who write every day, but barring one incident I only self publish because I hate rejection, but that's a man thing. Qub

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Hanabi no Enigma — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 00:43:42 +0530

A little choppy but I think it's a nice bio. I wonder if the first two periods couldn't be commas instead. It might help the flow. Congrats on getting published, even if it's only 1k. That makes you farther along than I am.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:44:07 +0530

I really like that bio, actually! Creative and concise.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 15:17:50 +0530

Thanks for the words of wisdom. I will stick with what I've written but sort the punctuation out.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:44:46 +0530

So close! Keep going, you're doing awesome!

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maggiep — Wed, 07 Dec 2011 23:16:23 +0530

That is how I feel, Mutewitness. I just have a bunch of scenes and am trying to put them all together. I am finding it hard to do, Im not use to a messy manuscript like this.

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ellarien — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 05:26:15 +0530

Well done! And good luck with fitting in the next 5,000 or so.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:46:02 +0530

Great job, Blue! I know what you mean about the friends though...it's like they expect us to both write AND have a life, the nerve!! ;P

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ellarien — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 05:26:42 +0530

Have fun with it!

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:46:46 +0530

I love those moments! I'm about a chapter and a half away from mine, then it's all downhill from there. Those are the most fun and energizing scenes to write, I think.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 15:16:49 +0530

I'm excited for you. My novel has managed to not really have a plot twist. The big twist will happen on the final pages and never get resolved. Now I'm jealous.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:47:12 +0530

I kind of want to read this story now XD

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JellybeanP — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 06:35:43 +0530

I started using Scrivener November 1st and have loved it.

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sarai.schu — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 09:48:13 +0530

At first I was apprehensive about using scrivener, but I have been working with the beta version for about a year and just purchased my copy of it this week. You can give it a trial run if u go to their website literatureandlatte.com (I know the windows version has trial, don't know about Mac.) I have tried one urged writing software before scrivener and I love the complete customizability, but it might not be your thing. There was a 2-3 week learning curve for it, it can be overwhelming at first but keep exploring if u give it a try. :) Ps, there are no "bad days". Sometimes you just need a break. As long as you get back into the practice the next day!

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 08:48:01 +0530

I transfered to Scrivener after November, and now I never want to use anything else ever again. True story. Though I don't know yWriter, so I may be biased.

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sarai.schu — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 09:51:52 +0530

I was excited too, although I doubt I will have any story in such a final version that I would actually want a paperback copy of it... Last year I didn't use the create space code even though I won . Gave it to my brother. Good luck with the exciting scenes! I love when I finally get to the scenes that were the reason I starting writing the story.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 12:24:47 +0530

As a non-winner, I don't get that. :( *sigh* Would be neat. Anyway, what are your exciting scenes? I'd love to know. I recently might or might not have just killed off the guy driving my whole plot (oops?), I don't even know yet whether the witch's last spell worked. Certainly tired her out a lot. And now my minor characters are breeding like rabbits and turning non-minor and what's my main character even doing in all this? Oh, and I'm up to 19,615 words.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 15:14:39 +0530

I was excited but torn. It would be cool to have actual copies but I wish I had enough time to get it properly edited first. Still I should be able to get a first edit in and seeing my work as a proper book might be the push I need to edit it properly.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 15:22:04 +0530

Yeah, i don't know that I'll ever be exactly happy with what I have, and I'm sure were I ever to officially publish someday, it would require some seriously massive re-writes first. But I think I'm going to be happy enough with it soon to show it to all the people who have been begging to read, and I figure since the copies are free, I may as well get them actual copies! (For my family and closest friends anyway.) Even if I ended up changing it a bunch later, I still think it would be a pretty neat souvenir of my first-ever Nano ;)

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 15:18:08 +0530

OMG Hanabi...I kind of love that. Complete surprises busted upon us by characters can be a huge blessing in disguise for a story. My friend who is writing the "partner" if you will to my novel had a character go from non-existant to love interest to main POV character in two days flat, and her story has never been better. I say, just go with it! Also, awesome progress ^_^ I am writing scenes at the moment where A) my characters arrive at the place where they are supposed to finally rescue the girl they've been crossing the country to help, only to find her abducted and B) my MC (who is having a massive identity crisis) comes face to face with not one but two of her brothers, and has to come to terms with who she is now in relation to her family - who, by the way, assumed she was dead for the past two years. It's pretty great. I'm clocking in at a whopping 75,716 tonight!! I got a whole chapter done in the hours after work today, and I'm feeling more like I'll finish on time now. Oh WOD, how I've missed you! And thanks to you all for your support, too, it really makes a difference on my down days. (PS Kia, I'm sorry I missed you earlier in the chat room - dog was misbehaving tonight and kept stealing my attention away. Some other day.)

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sarai.schu — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 16:54:04 +0530

Don't you love it when characters take the reins? I had a little chat wuth my characters before writing the climax and one of them told me he didn't want to die... But then after all that he pretty much put the blade in the other character's hand... It means your characters have a life of their own and they are trying to tell you something! I haven't really looked at it this year, but I know last year there was a board on nano somewhere where people give away their winners codes... If they weren't using them. I think it was in the life after nano forum... But I could be way off. :)

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Hanabi no Enigma — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 13:49:37 +0530

Hey, you've got more time (thirty-one days instead of thirty) and you already got more than halfway there in November. And you don't have school/work/whatever.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 15:12:22 +0530

[quote=Deep Blue Sea] I'm on holiday for three weeks starting Xmas. I will be travelling and staying with friends and family for part of that time but that is no excuse. [/quote] But it's an excellent excuse to get away from them if they start getting on your nerves.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 08 Dec 2011 15:19:41 +0530

Welcome! You'll find both "shaming" and support here, as requested and needed ;) Just write a little bit every day, even if it's only a few sentences. Then you can not feel like you're slacking, even on days when you're busy with friends/family/stuff. And I know what you mean about withdrawal. Seriously.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 00:40:09 +0530

Yeah, my minor characters are all turning into main POV characters, too. I've gone from one to six and now Nor's childhood friend wants to do something important. Usually characters taking the reins is nice, except that in this case, with him dead, let's look at the number one desire of every still-living major player: 1. Uvda: manipulate everyone else into a war 2. Sharim: don't let Anne (queen of Savail) get hurt 3. Anne: don't let Savail get invaded 4. William: don't let there be a war between Anne and Achti 5. George: protect his family 6. Eleanor: be awesome in battle (Hmm. Now that I've listed all those, Uvda's still got something to work with, even if her "something to work with" is an eleven-year-old who would do everything George said... or maybe not... ooh, cool!) It's great to be able to talk about these things. I hadn't even realized there was still someone around for Uvda to manipulate. A few well-placed lies to William to the effect that Anne asked Sharim to kill Achti could go a long way, too. I wouldn't want my mom to have her boyfriend kill my father, so I assume William wouldn't either. Thanks, guys! :)

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Kiaira — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 20:45:05 +0530

That is such bullshit!

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AdamJensen — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 21:14:36 +0530

[quote=the_blue_rose] Also for those that remember I heard back regarding my biography. Apparently they are say I can't be an "aspiring writer" because I have neither a blog or twitter account![/quote] Yeah, that's totally untrue. Both blogs and twitter are means for marketing/self-promotion so I can see how it might be inferred that a serious 'aspiring writer' should be using them (and any other means at their disposal) but they are hardly required for success. Granted, once you start submitting to agents and publishers it would be wise to have a little website telling about yourself and your work, but you don't need a blog. Many successful authors don't have one.

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 14:08:58 +0530

As far as I am concerned, "aspiring writer" simply means that you want to be a writer. Bonus points if you are actually, actively writing something. Frankly, the fact that you are being published at all may put you past "aspiring writer" and into "actual current author" territory, twitter or no. But seriously. My English major has not taught me nothing - "aspiring" means "wants to be". So if they say otherwise, I think they're the ones who aren't taking their writing seriously enough - they need a dictionary :P

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maggiep — Sat, 10 Dec 2011 09:13:48 +0530

what Kiaira said.

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douleur — Sat, 10 Dec 2011 23:36:19 +0530

A paragraph isn't "nothing." Every word is another word closer!

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 14:12:28 +0530

I feel your pain. I lost about...oh, 50 pages' (and several months') worth of a story I've been working on since high school to a computer crash earlier this year, and I was so devastated I wrote nothing until NaNo. Even when it's only 1000 words, it can just be crushing... But it just means another chance to start anew. In fact, once this novel is over, I'm going back to that last project - I'm taking the computer crash as a message from the Writing Gods that I needed some massive re-organization anyway, and will be starting from scratch...completely wiping years' worth of work, and the entirety of currently-written Part 1. I honestly feel that the story will be better for it though...so maybe the crash was a blessing in disguise. Keep it up, though. We still believe in you ^_^

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 14:11:21 +0530

That's 2 books, 3,000 words and 1 film more than I've done this weekend! That sounds very productive, well done. Now do your homework.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 02:42:23 +0530

How's your new story going? I hope it works better for you. What do you think's wrong with the old one? Seems like an awful lot of work already done to suddenly get blocked at 100k! Did you make a wrong turn somewhere in the last few thousand words?

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maggiep — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 06:17:49 +0530

My first book I was very detailed, so I understand you with that. And don't worry, with each new story you learn something new. I've learned that how much detail is given depends on the story, not so much in stories in general, but what the current one is. For example, I wrote two set in Ireland. I really wanted my readers to see Ireland, so details were important. Another story I wrote, it was important just sticking with the story and not giving as much attention to the details. So it really depends on the story. Congratulations for getting to 78k, that is awesome! And dont worry about wondering if the plot is too slow, just write. Figuring that out is part of editing, reading it and seeing what needs more and what needs less.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 06:57:34 +0530

Welcome to NaNoCember. :)

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douleur — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 08:08:24 +0530

Welcome! There's no such thing as too late--the important thing is that you're writing! I know how it feels to have a story that's just too long. One novel I wrote, the first draft was 200K. I know how frustrating it can be to have a plot that just won't move. But don't worry about length right now. Just write. You can edit it down later. Again--the important thing is that you're writing!

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maggiep — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 07:58:23 +0530

Aw bummer. That darn work, it just cuts into such important things.... :)

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 14:05:37 +0530

I KNOW THE FEELING. Ugh. I worked the last six days and again tomorrow. By the time I get home I'm so tired...if I wasn't totally determined to get a draft done for my friend (and able to write at least a page while at work, normally) I would have stopped too. But you'll get the time eventually. Hang in there!

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maggiep — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 08:12:27 +0530

Wow 200k. That is impressive.

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maggiep — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 08:48:05 +0530

It's always good to be able to "get along" with your characters. Mine are keeping alot from me and Im still not sure what exactly they want to say. *sigh* I also was bummed when november ended, but Im glad there are still ones continuing through this month. Dont worry, I won't tell your boss. I do the same thing :)

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 12 Dec 2011 14:04:05 +0530

I totally write at work too ;) My bosses know though - they don't mind as long as we don't have any customers and all my cleaning gets done before I leave, LOL! And welcome, by the way ^_^

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maggiep — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 01:35:25 +0530

That's definitely something, congratulations!

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 13:38:35 +0530

Remember the NaNo creed - we don't care if it's crap right now, as long as we're writing!!! ;) I know it's hard, but it's what I tell myself on my down days, and it generally seems to help. Just cuz it's not November anymore, doesn't mean that the inner editor gets to come out to play just yet!

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PhoenixSempai — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 13:39:19 +0530

Yay! Write away! I knew you'd find the time ^_^

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ellarien — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 05:44:57 +0530

Sounds like a lot of progress to me! And 10,000 words without being able to touch type is impressive. (I'm a sort of six-fingered, 60 wpm typist who mostly doesn't look at the keyboard, and 5k in a day is about my limit.)

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PhoenixSempai — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 14:01:34 +0530

That's awful...but I find, in general, that once the initial shock is over with things like that, it's best that you at least have a diagnosis. If you know what's wrong, you can start to deal with it. (I was really sick for about 4 months last year, was seriously underweight before they could figure it out. Once they did, the medicine made me sicker at first - but it helped in the end. After so long I was just grateful for an answer.) We're supporting and cheering you on, though. And I hope you start to feel better! Also, I work all day tomorrow, but I may drop by the chatroom Thursday if you're there, while I'm doing my *hopefully* last-minute edits ^_^

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 09:17:45 +0530

May I join you in that corner? I normally work a 19 hour week max. This next 1.5 weeks I am A) submitting applications to Harvard and Georgetown, B) completing a new essay for a Harvard fellowship, C) sending off materials via post office (always fun during holiday season), D) completing an entire first draft of my novel, adding an appendix, finishing the cover and having an entire completed copy printed for my friend to copy-edit on break, and D) covering for the fired person at work, thus working 40 hours a week with zero warning. I *will* be going insane here. Very shortly. (Keep it up though. When my motivation is at it's lowest, I'm learning to tell myself to just write anyway. Normally once I get started, it starts going a little bit better.)

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 11:54:42 +0530

Carolf - thanks for the advice. Turns out the new guy was a jerk. He got drunk really quickly and tried to start a bar fight. I decided to ditch him and snuck out when his back was turned. In my haste to get away I left my bag at the bar but luckily for me someone noticed and ran after me with it. He's just the type of guy I need to move the story along. And I used the same method to introduce him to my MC.

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maggiep — Wed, 14 Dec 2011 22:30:28 +0530

Wow, congrats on 99,000 words. That's awesome! And you've given me a good idea about the notebooks. I have a shelf of them, because, come on, they are pretty(I cannot pass up pretty), and they are such great deals(I cannot pass up great deals). I also have a drawful of pencils. I like the idea of a story in a notebook. I think I will try that next year. Today, I am just trying to figure out what the heck my plot is. I got majorly of trail with the story and am trying to get back on. Trying to figure out why my fmc is leaving her house in the dead of night, during winter, during the revolution war, with indian raids happening everywhere. What is she thinking?!

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Kenouni Renashin — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 14:01:25 +0530

Thanks! I, too, am like you in regards to pretty notebooks and great deals. And when you get both of those in a notebook? Yoink! My notebook now! I have at least 50 notebooks of various sizes, though mostly A5 designs and whatnot in a box under my bed, and about ten to 15 on the bookshelf near my desk. As for pens... *looks at the four pencil cases full of the things* - and we won't talk about how many fountain pens and ink cartridges I have either, although I use those for letter writing. I just haven't had many letters to write recently :( ~Ken-Ren

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 09:08:27 +0530

Blargh, that sucks! (About the meds and them being expensive anyway.) I understand to a degree; I've got an anxiety disorder which also tends to range into depression when things get rough - the two are really closely related so it actually took a long time for them to correctly diagnose me. When the anxiety is somewhat minor, it tends to make me really jumpy and take away my focus. But the good news is that for me anyway, once they diagnosed me correctly and put me on (three separate) medications, I got a lot better. I even rarely have to be on the meds anymore. So hopefully now that you know, this will help you a lot. And with ADHD treated you may even find it easier to write?! ;)

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Kiaira — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 09:15:07 +0530

Well, i was worried that it was going to hurt my writing at first. because it was suppose to stop me from day-dreaming, which is my main source for inspiration besides dreaming at night. So far the ADHD med kicked in really good, and i was able to write 119 words in half an hour, and the rest of the day was spend working on bracelets that I have been putting off making for weeks now. So that was alright, but for long term I am still worried about the day dreaming.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 09:18:20 +0530

Ooh very tempting. Where is the chat room? I've seen mention of it but havent found it.(im probably just being really blind and its right in front of me, as tends to happen)

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 11:56:18 +0530

Phoenix - everybody is welcome in the corner. Except Baby, obviously. I hope to stop by later to see you've finished. I'm cheering for you. Then when it's all done you can use the extra money to buy something nice for yourself - you'll have deserved it.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 14:35:06 +0530

http://decnowrimo.chatango.com/ I've been in and out all night ;)

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Carolf — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 21:40:39 +0530

[quote=the_blue_rose] Carolf - thanks for the advice. Turns out the new guy was a jerk. He got drunk really quickly and tried to start a bar fight. I decided to ditch him and snuck out when his back was turned. In my haste to get away I left my bag at the bar but luckily for me someone noticed and ran after me with it. He's just the type of guy I need to move the story along. And I used the same method to introduce him to my MC. [/quote] :-) You're welcome! Glad it worked.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 20:55:55 +0530

You are doing great! You can keep going, you can do it. I am cheering you on.

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 00:41:11 +0530

Okay, I think you have more notebooks than me, just a few more :) I went to Barnes and Noble Monday and left with a notebook. They were on sale, plus the member discount. Not getting it just was not an option. Isn't it sad how letter writing has become "so old fashioned"? There is just something about getting a handwritten letter in the mail. It seems much more special than email.

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PhoenixSempai — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 14:42:15 +0530

Our word war was fun! And helped jump-start me for the evening too. I'd be happy to do more with you later, even if it ends up being on a different project than my Nano one ;) Checking in at 88932. About halfway done with my writing for the evening, but feeling good about it. May write-or-die my way through the rest. Phew! Back to work!! Thanks for all the cheering on, everyone - it's really keeping me going tonight ^_^

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 00:29:27 +0530

Sod reaching round numbers. You've nearly reached 20k, of course it's worth celebrating. See Carlton down below us? He may be doing a victory dance for Phoenix, but a bit of it's for you as well. And you've still got time to reach 30k by the end of the year. Go, Hanabi, Go!

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maggiep — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 20:54:45 +0530

I am so so sorry PheonixSempai. Shortly after posting that my computer decided to freak out on me. It decided to freeze up and refused to do anything. Thanks for the site, hopefully I can check it out without my "dear, wonderful" computer freaking out again.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 00:09:55 +0530

:( Aw.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 00:10:49 +0530

Yay! :)

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ellarien — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 02:04:16 +0530

Yay!

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 02:38:22 +0530

WOOHOO!!!! You should feel awesome!

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KatiePoet — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 09:26:15 +0530

Congrats Phoenix! Thanks for the inspiration to keep on trucking along. That's awesome!!! I'm finding it hard to be motivated these past few days... I WAS using my grades as an excuse but now those are posted... and I'm excuseless. It's just me and the blank white page.... and a Disaronno on the rocks ;)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

PhoenixSempai — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 00:58:19 +0530

This is the most awesome thing ever :D I kind of want him to follow me around for whenever I do something this awesome. (Which, granted, is not likely to be very often XD )

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Kenouni Renashin — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 01:46:02 +0530

"Not getting it was not an option" - and that alone is why I have so many XD I am getting through them at a slow and steady pace though! I'm with you on the letter writing thing though. I love it (even though my handwriting isn't great) - and I have so many pretty inks I like to use! It's a bit sad I haven't heard from my pen pals in a little while :( Then again, I just love receiving post :D ~Ken-Ren

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 02:08:05 +0530

It would be awesome if everyone could have their own personal Carlton to dance for them whenever they did something deserving. Maybe one day we will have the technology. Until then bookmark this page.

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 01:14:47 +0530

Awesome. I love when I get new plot lines. Hope they go well.

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 02:13:16 +0530

Oh no! I'm glad you were able to retype them and then some, good job. Aren't pets something? My cat likes getting on the desk and rubbing against the keys. I guess she likes to add her thoughts to the story, lol. 62,510 words is awesome! You're doing great!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Fri, 16 Dec 2011 05:39:40 +0530

Hey, over 62k means over 10k so far this month! Yay! :D At this rate you'll be up to 70k before New Year's! Go TBR!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Kenouni Renashin — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 01:51:31 +0530

O.O Honey, I think you might just need to get some sleep first. Everything might make sense after that. Or you'll have an inspiring dream. Maybe. Take care of yourself, and then your brain can take care of your words. ~Ken-Ren

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 02:19:08 +0530

I was also on a 2k daily word goal ad was aiming to be done by Christmas. Then last week happened. I lost stuff that I written and my motivation went with it. I didn't write anything for a week and then for a few days could only manage 500 words at the most. I began to think I'd never get my novel finished. To get past it I took a couple of days off from the novel and did something else. I wrote a short story, completely different characters, completely different world. I remembered that I could write and that it could be fun. It worked wonders. The last 2 days I've been back to the NaNo daily word count and feel inspired again. Sure I had to push my target back to finishing by New Year but I know I can do it. Take a day off and don't worry about it. Give yourself a break. Your MCs aren't going anywhere. And if they do they might take the plot forward in new ways you never thought possible. If I can do it, you can do it.

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Datarin — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 01:54:31 +0530

7AM, dad's sick with fever, grandma's potentially coming over because of it so I don't see any chance of decent sleep anytime soon. I stayed up the last two nights following the livestream of SOPA's debates; timezones screwup. I slept plenty last week, and slugged for around 100 words per day, so this sleep-deprived state may be what I need. :)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Kenouni Renashin — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 14:38:47 +0530

Ouchies... Well, if you think you can, good luck! Just make sure to keep an eye on yourself; if you see an opportunity to nap or something, grab it with both hands. Wouldn't want you getting sick or really ill or something ~Ken-Ren x

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Datarin — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 02:54:07 +0530

I did think of making a new oneshot (or of similar length) for the exact same purpose earlier on, but the creative spark died before it even arrived. So I returned to my story, and wrote in the xmas plush teddy bear I saw at the supermarket around an hour ago at the time. And kept throwing ninjas in, reaching a pinnacle of an actual subplot-finishing-scene. I did slog through last week solely because of that teddy bear, but it could've been streamlined/cut out completely if I edited; and I didn't meet the goals, I just pushed out a few hundred words per day. Every inspiring idea I see I first mentally attempt to adapt it to my current story's world, and discard if it doesn't fit. Other main plots, other-worldly MCs are shoved out before I even give them a chance. I keep a folder of plot bunnies I come up with while working on projects; there's been none since mid-November. tl;dr I've created my own jailer, and it is my draft.

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 04:37:15 +0530

it's always good to be able to leave off at a place that's easy to pick up at. It helps keep it flowing. You're doing great blue rose.

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 06:20:40 +0530

Don't ya just hate when that happens. But then you think about how much better the story will be to switch the mc. Could you continue the story with the new MC, then go back and switch the rest when the draft is done? Or would that totally mess things up?

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KatiePoet — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 07:39:08 +0530

Right? That thought is crossing my mind as well. About 20K into my original draft I did something similar -- I was switching POVs btw. male MC and female MC... and then I decided to just tell it from the male's POV and forget the girl since she was irritating me. This story needs such heavy revision. I was doing a little bit of rereading tonight, just to kind of re-evaluate... and I'm liking what I have too. LOL I just wish novels were born whole... and that I wasn't so seat of the pants about writing this monster.

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Carolf — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 20:11:54 +0530

[quote=maggiep] I have come to a big gap. I have the beginning chapters typed, and know how the first part is ending, I just don't know how to connect the scenes. [/quote] Can you just write the scenes, and worry about the connections when you're done. Once you reach the end, you'll know more than you do now about things that have to be introduced as you go along, and that information might form some of the connections. Just a suggestion.

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 07:43:11 +0530

Lol. How much of the story do you think you have left to write?

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KatiePoet — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 08:30:45 +0530

Gwah lol the way I've been writing... I think I'll get this beast up to about 120K before the story's done. I'm wayyy wayyyy wayyyy too detailed with my writing. I know a good half of it is going to be chucked away in revisions.

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 08:42:12 +0530

Wow, that is amazing. So many words. I am jealous :) I am at 5,400 right now(I had a major off track, Had to fix to keep going, incidance, plus some computer trouble, so lost some words). I love details too. I am always battling with myself "is this too much detail? not enough?", so when in doubt, I add more.

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KatiePoet — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 08:52:17 +0530

Don't be jealous of my wordiness! :) I don't think it's a good thing. I need to pare down this novel, but maybe that can be done later, much later. It's going to be so painful to chop chop chop. I don't think people are going to care how raindrops bead on my MC's car, and how their slipping to the pavement signifies his slipping memories of his late wife. Ughghghghghggh lol... this all sounds so corny ::fighting urge to throw USB drive into toilet in emo rage:: :-D Let's keep plugging away, being sure that our words actually add something to the plot. That plot, dammit! :-P :-P ah such pesky things... I'm going back to poetry when this novel's through.

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 09:05:42 +0530

I like the description of the raindrop beads and the significance with his late wife. It's the details that help me see the story clearly. And sometimes you just have to bring the raindrops to the readers attention. Don't throw the USB in the toilet. Yelling at it is fine, but don't flush it. I am hoping for a late night, won't get much writing done this weekend so want to get as close to the end of part 1 as possible.

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Carolf — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 20:14:33 +0530

[quote=KatiePoet] Let's keep plugging away, being sure that our words actually add something to the plot. That plot, dammit! :-P :-P ah such pesky things... I'm going back to poetry when this novel's through. [/quote] Keep in mind that wordage also goes to creating setting and character, not just plot. Obviously, the setting and the characters also have to fit in with the plot, but they deserve development in their own right. IMO

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 02:34:01 +0530

Poor you. Having a cold is awful. You're not ill enough to get any real sympathy, but not well enough to feel like doing anything. I recommend tea with honey, cadburys and trashy movies. When you get home form work tomorrow have a night off writing and relax. At least the football might mean less people are out.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 23:02:03 +0530

I actually did write the scenes. I have them in a seperate file so I can write what comes to me in the actual draft, and see how the ending scenes could fit. I've sorta been working forward and backwards. It's actually kinda working, Im happy to say.

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KatiePoet — Sat, 17 Dec 2011 23:40:35 +0530

That's an interesting idea.... might work for me, also :) Thanks for sharing and good luck!

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maggiep — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 00:19:07 +0530

You too!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 13:19:50 +0530

Yay! :) You're, like, THIS close! You and Phoenix are our first winners, I think. I'm in this for the long haul, I think, but I wrote 404 words today, bringing me up to 20,300! That's OVER 20 THOUSAND! Which means that at one point in November I was hoping to reach this point by the end of December. I may have overshot my revised goal, but I still sailed past this one easily. (Still behind, though. Little hope of getting back on track at this rate.) Anyway, yay for everyone. Phoenix is done, you're almost there, I've just passed a real milestone, everyone's keeping on keeping on.

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the_blue_rose — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 13:40:02 +0530

Go Ellarien! You can do it.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 18 Dec 2011 13:20:42 +0530

That's a good milestone. I'm proud of you! It'll feel good when you hit it even if it's not all the way through. Get there and keep going! :)

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 06:29:28 +0530

Hanabi! You got past 20k while I was gone for a day? I'm so proud of you, YAAAAY! You too, Ella, keep it up!! So close!

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 00:35:25 +0530

That's the beauty of a first draft. You can add things to it. If when you reread it you feel you need more detail you have the chance to add it. 100k's an admirable target. Good luck.

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 06:32:34 +0530

1000 words is still more than I got done yesterday! I think I have a pretty good excuse - to celebrate my "winning" I went out and hung at a local bar/club with a good friend, and she got me a badly-needed second job while I was there. So I spent the night celebrating and generally living it up. Still, I need to be wary before I fall into the habit of writing nothing... And Blue, isn't it wonderful how having something else to procrastinate makes the first procrastinated thing sound so much more appealing??

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PhoenixSempai — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 06:33:00 +0530

Well done, Katie! Glad the new plan of attack is going well.

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maggiep — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 07:04:17 +0530

Good job! Hope you keep having a glorious day

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ellarien — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 16:21:51 +0530

Great!

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 15:38:17 +0530

But you're finished you don't need to write another word. A day of two off to recuperate and sleep is allowed. If you're worried about not writing anything why not do what I do. I always, alway, always have a notebook and pen with me so if I get any ideas for stories, characters, dialogue I can write them down. Most of the time they never go anywhere, but it's nice to have them. I'm hoping to procrastinate the housework for long enough that hubby does it for me. He's been very supportive throughout the whole NaNo thing and is still cheerleading me along.

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 15:32:53 +0530

Well done. Happy dance earned.

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ellarien — Mon, 19 Dec 2011 16:21:19 +0530

Well done!

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PhoenixSempai — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 00:41:44 +0530

Oh, it's true that I don't *need* to. But within the first week after finishing I only wrote anything down once, and that's my next worry - I don't want to get out of the habit. I mean, writing crazy 2k+ amounts each day? I don't need to do that when I'm not on a Nano-challenge...but I do want to write. Every single day. So last night I made myself sit down and write again. Only about 800 words all told, but you know what? It felt great. I'd forgotten how *good* for me it's been to have a regular writing project.

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maggiep — Tue, 20 Dec 2011 01:29:19 +0530

Thank you, Blue Rose and Ellarien. I took the morning off to re-energize my brain, and now have a few hours to type before dance class. Hoping to at least get the first chapter of part 2 done before class.

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 20 Dec 2011 13:15:02 +0530

That was my yesterday, too. Don't worry. Take a break, lots of deep breaths and remember - tomorrow is another day.

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maggiep — Tue, 20 Dec 2011 21:27:59 +0530

I love that book :) Actually reading it now. I got a little done then went to bed. Figured when all else fails-sleep. Dreams have a way of fitting into my stories. I had a pretty interesting one, doesnt go with this story, but might be the basis of a different one. Anywho, ready to get back to writing.

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maggiep — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 01:06:38 +0530

Glad you're starting to feel better. And it sounds like you have a pretty good method down, that's great. Even being sick, you've accomplished a lot.

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Kenouni Renashin — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:07:51 +0530

Thank you :D It seems to work really well once - I actually get started. ~Ken-Ren

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 01:47:52 +0530

It sounds like you had fun though, and that's good.

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ellarien — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 23:40:26 +0530

Nearly there!

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maggiep — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 23:07:49 +0530

Maybe your story is supposed to be a series.

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maggiep — Wed, 21 Dec 2011 23:50:53 +0530

I just passed the 14k mark. I might, just might, reach 15 today. How are you doing?

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:03:27 +0530

Well done you. Now don't look at it for at least a month. You'll get a better perspective on what you've written that way.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 12:25:37 +0530

CONGRATULATIONS!

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PhoenixSempai — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 00:43:16 +0530

Grats! So proud of you! And you ended up right around my final wordcount for a draft too ^_^

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ellarien — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:00:32 +0530

I'm done! Just hit the 90K I was aiming for, and I'm calling it a draft. A very, very rough draft.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:06:41 +0530

Oops, I just saw you posted that, sorry I didnt see it. Congratulations! The first draft is always very, very rough. I know I have to do major tweaking in the first part but I keep yelling at my inner editor to shut up. It's not time for her to come out yet.

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ellarien — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:19:21 +0530

Thanks! I'm used to doing somewhat more polished first drafts, but not in two months -- my previous speed record was about eight months for 100K words, and that was nearly twenty years ago.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:25:35 +0530

That's pretty good, so for what you've done in these two months is amazing.

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ellarien — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 03:34:08 +0530

Yay! Time for another goal, or are you taking a break for the holidays?

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PhoenixSempai — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 00:43:54 +0530

Yay! Way to go! It's great to see everybody starting to hit major goals!!

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 03:50:19 +0530

Oh I can't stop. I'm addicted :) My new goal-20k. I think I can get there. My FMC and MMC are still on the run, they have not reached their safe destination yet, so there is still a lot to write.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 04:29:05 +0530

Enjoy the chocolate. You can definitely do it.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:08:00 +0530

I now that feeling. I've written about 10,000 this month and have 5 day stretches with no motivation. Set yourself smaller goals like 500 words a day or 5,000 a week. See if that works. And don't forget to reward yourself for reaching a goal. Also don't beat yourself up if you don't write anything for a few days. What you've achieved so far is awesome.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:23:53 +0530

Sometimes, too, its good to take a break for a llittle bit. Gives your imagination time to rest and regroup ideas and come up with new ones.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:04:51 +0530

Well done on reaching 15k. 20k is an achievable goal, you can do it.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:19:45 +0530

I have always had the hardest time walking away from the draft after its finished. I always want to go back and read it and edit right away.

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ellarien — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:46:49 +0530

Thanks! Probably a good idea. I did just run it through spell check to tidy up the after-effects of doing most of the writing in basic full-screen editors with no autocorrect, but that's all I'll do to it for a while.

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ellarien — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:51:58 +0530

Also, I'm rather tickled that I finished my draft on the same day that Brandon Sanderson finished his. I suspect rather more people want to read his (last volume of the Wheel of Time series) than mine.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:22:32 +0530

Definitely. Im already pass the 16k mark and they are still on their journey. Today I have gotten a lot of writing done. Just finished a chapter so I'm gunna rest, eat dinner, watch Charlie's Angels(the original show), then come back to it later. I already have the next scene lined up.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 05:26:49 +0530

Aw I hope the motivation comes back soon. Are you close to the end? 700 words is still good though. It's 700 more than what you had. I hate when I start feeling bored, its usually a sign to take a break. Can you throw in random ninjas? or a monkey? :)

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 11:37:47 +0530

Fairly near the end. I'd say about 4/5 through. I know where I'm going but I can;t be bothered to write the bit that gets me to the place where I can write the final scenes. Maybe a flying purple hippo would respire my interest!

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 11:34:22 +0530

[quote=KatiePoet] I'm having some real trouble lately too, blue. I don't know if it's my motivation or what -- but I just can't seem to get focused :( [/quote] Focussing is a bugbear. I have an extremely low boredom threshold and constantly go off to do something more 'interesting'. Still hubby is now off from work and here to keep an eye on me. It's harder to procrastinate when i have someone asking me every hour how much work I've done.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 07:39:11 +0530

Glad it got figured out. Sounds like its gunna be long, but I bet itll be good :)

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 11:39:32 +0530

Sometime novels are just that long. Wait until editing before you decide how much needs to be cut. A sequel sounds like it might be a good idea.

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KatiePoet — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 08:04:04 +0530

Oh, well -- I'm going to cut a lot a lot out :) My end goal is to have the entire piece edited down to a much more reasonable 75K. But... that's a very long term goal.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 08:56:07 +0530

I'm sure you can do it. If not, you could always make a sequel with the extra chapters(maybe?)

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 20:57:47 +0530

Congrats, Silver Fallen, that's great!

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 20:56:18 +0530

Ooh a flying purple hippo. I dont think that would be expected, ninjas yes, flying purple hippo would be a surprise :)

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ellarien — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 14:47:45 +0530

Thanks!

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 00:28:07 +0530

I do lists to. Seeing something checked or crossed out feels like I accomplished something, seeing it on paper. Does that make sense? I think I'm confusing myself. I hope your editing goes well.

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ellarien — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 02:14:25 +0530

Thanks!

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 02:35:57 +0530

You can do it Blue Rose! I have faith in you :)

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 08:13:54 +0530

That's great, congrats.

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KatiePoet — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 10:59:27 +0530

Hey every word is a tiny victory in and of itself! But yeah, totally relate. My "customers" aka my students, kept bugging me with last minute scheduling questions ::glare!!:: gotta love off season advising duties. good thing i'm finally on christmas vaycay, out of the office for at least a week before heading back. Will I get more writing done? Well, that's yet to be determined :D

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 21:48:12 +0530

I love the glare. I should try that. Although that may not work so well with paying customers at a store. Pretty sure thatd go under the "rude" catagory. Maybe if I tell them Im writing the next big one, the novel of all novels, theyll let me keep writing. Maybe. possibly. *big sigh* Doubt it.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 03:20:57 +0530

YAY! Congrats. You're more than halfway done now, right?

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 13:28:09 +0530

Hooray!!!! I love when I come back from work and check in to see success :D

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KatiePoet — Fri, 23 Dec 2011 23:16:19 +0530

The glare doesn't really keep them away... maybe if I add a growl? :D LOL. Noveling makes me one strange beast. Hope I get this draft finished soon, so I can go back to being my old sappy poet self. Oh wait, no... next comes the rewrites! And editing... shopping for an agent (ok, begging agents), trying to publish, marketing... gawahhhh! Someone remind me why I'm doing this craziness X-P

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 02:25:39 +0530

Ooh growling may add help. Or may end your job. its a 50/50 chance. I tend to lock myself away. a party invite? No, Jamie is about to be killed and Tempest is trying to save him. sorry, cant make it. Maybe after the rewrites. Oh wait, another story is forming. That's basically my life. Even at peoples houses and, well, anywhere, I'm constantly joting scenes down. I've gotten the "look" a few times, but those usually just add to my story. Oh hold that pose, that'd be a great face for my evil character. :) Last week my cousin was getting on my nerves, so finally I told him that if he didnt stop, Id put him in my story and do terrible, horrible things to him. He did not find that funny. I did! :D

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 06:27:16 +0530

Poor Adele and Victor. Whatever did they do to deserve such horribleness??

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 06:27:32 +0530

*adel

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Kiaira — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 07:00:06 +0530

Oh, its tamwe compared to what I have planned in the next book for them!

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 07:06:42 +0530

Oh, well, in that case.... Lol

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PhoenixSempai — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 13:29:02 +0530

GRATS!! Just keep picking goals as you reach them - the biggest goal of all is to always be happy with what you've done, but never be *quite* satisfied ;)

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 20:38:30 +0530

Thanks. I went to bed not sure still if my FMC and MMC fall in love(which halfway through the story I should know this by now :) ), or if the MMC dies at the end or not. At about 1:30 it hit me that yes, of course they fall in love, they have to. And then I got the ending, the VERY LAST scene in my head. So I wrote that down. Doesn't help me with my current spot but it does tell me where it is leading, which that helps.

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ellarien — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 15:32:54 +0530

Ugh! I hope being sick doesn't spoil your holiday too badly! I celebrated finishing my 2011 draft by using my Scrivener coupon, and I've been poking at my 2008 unfinished NaNovel. Currently it consists of 28K words and a very sketchy outline, and I hope to flesh out the outline enough over the next week to continue writing in the new year. As for Christmas -- a quiet afternoon and leisurely-cooked Sunday dinner with my mother, followed by Doctor Who and Downton Abbey specials on TV. Today I clean all the things and bake scones.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 24 Dec 2011 21:27:04 +0530

Get better Phoenix - being ill at Christmas is not allowed. Writing has practically come to a standstill. My goal to reach 70,000 by tomorrow looks impossible to achieve. We are Christmasing with friends and their parents. I have spent today in the kitchen making truffles and cheesecake, and will be back in their soon to make dinner. Merry Christmas to everyone on here. Have a great day.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 25 Dec 2011 02:00:23 +0530

Get well soon!

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maggiep — Mon, 26 Dec 2011 00:10:41 +0530

You're doing good Blue Rose!

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KatiePoet — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 08:01:12 +0530

Maggie and Jellybean -- LET'S DO THIS!! >:O ::Cue Sandstorm::

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maggiep — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 22:19:02 +0530

I'm trying. Im where I start doubting the story is good, so its getting hard to keep going

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Hanabi no Enigma — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 04:34:11 +0530

Remember that while a story might actually be bad, thinking it's bad when you're halfway through is not evidence of that. You feel like every story is horrible halfway through, even if it's the next Great American Novel. If it still seems bad when you get to the end, then you can worry.

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KatiePoet — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 05:28:01 +0530

Phew, this is actually a bit of a relief to read. Thanks for posting. I went for a run this afternoon to clear my head of all things noveling, and during my run I had a sudden urge to add in a "murder mystery" element to my already ridiculously complex sci-fi novel to keep it interesting. LOL. You know what I think my REAL problem is? Subconsciously not wanting to finish this beast.

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maggiep — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 06:46:09 +0530

That does make sense. I read the manuscript and Ive noticed a lot of plot holes, which I think probably explains feeling of lack of story. And they're not just things, they are important parts to the story now that ive gotten a bit into it. I do want to save this story, so Im trying to salvage what I have. I was talking with my mom(after my "heated discussion" with the characters, threatening to break up with them), and she said that maybe it's not so much the FMC, as it is the setting. Maybe she belongs at a different time or place. That got me thinking, maybe she does.

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maggiep — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 08:21:21 +0530

Yay!! Good for you!

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maggiep — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 23:34:44 +0530

Great going, Blue Rose! You are almost there!

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KatiePoet — Wed, 28 Dec 2011 23:40:54 +0530

Great to hear, Blue! So far this morning, I've only worked on editing for another project... but this afternoon/evening, I vow to write at least 2k words and push my plot forward. I think it's the impending New Year on the horizon that's got me all excited and ready to finish off this beast. Will we make it? :D You betcha!

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KatiePoet — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 07:47:02 +0530

Oh! Maybe you just need a break, Maggie? To figure everything out? LOL it sounds so much like a relationship, doesn't it? But that's definitely how our stories seem sometimes. I needed a break from my story, too. It took me about four days to get fired up about it again -- and I did have to undergo some structural changes. So don't give up yet! But maybe, just take a break and work on something new :) To get all your creative juices flowing again. That's often what I have to do with my poems, too.

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maggiep — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 08:01:42 +0530

I ended up sitting in a chair, in the unlit room, staring at the wood pile outside(lol, what an afternoon :) ) I was thinking about the story, just floating through the scenes, and what came to me was this- No time period I drop her in works. She seems to go with any era, but does not fit in any eras of our world. And that's when I realized, to FMC's satisfaction that I finally figured it out(like she couldnt have helped me out a little?), that the reason she does not "get along" in any era, is because she does not belong in those eras. She comes from another time, another place. OMW my story is a fantasy! EEK!

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maggiep — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 08:02:14 +0530

WOO HOO! :D

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KatiePoet — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 10:43:25 +0530

I did it! 100K words! I think this story's got about 20K left. Onward!!

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KatiePoet — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 09:30:19 +0530

Fantasies are fun! Cool! Glad you got it figured out. How freeing to be able to create your own world :) :) :)

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 15:24:15 +0530

Fingers crossed that this is the turnaround you need. It's horrible when you feel your story's not working out. My feet dragging recently was because I was trying to write something I thought should be included but didn't like. Eventually I realised I didn't like it because it didn't fit. IT's just a shame that sometimes it takes so long to work these things out. Fantasy always seems so scary to me too. I'm jealous of those of you that can create an entire world. On the plus side now you can mould everything to fit your needs rather than being constrained by our laws of physics. Name something cool after me :-)

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maggiep — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 09:42:58 +0530

freeing, and nervewracking. I have Never attempted a fantasy before. I have always stuck with my series. Same modern people, different historical people and plots. Doing a fantasy, not having my usual modern people, feels like I'm cheating on them(I'm not. Really. I still love all you guys.). And did I say nervewracking? I don't know why I'm so nervous to write a fantasy story.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 15:19:23 +0530

Well done you. 100k is impressive.

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maggiep — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 21:58:08 +0530

*Where are the darn emoticons??* Well, just picture one with a bright party hat and blowing confetti all over. YAY you did it!!!!

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maggiep — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 21:54:56 +0530

I need to name a tavern. How about the Blue Rose Tavern? :)

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 03:11:38 +0530

Love it. My husband wants to name a pub after me. I guess my reputation precedes me!

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 02:44:05 +0530

Is Janowrimo the same as Nanocember?

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 03:52:12 +0530

oh cool. thanks for the site, ill check it out.

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 06:39:05 +0530

Because it just sounds so cool :)

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KatiePoet — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 20:49:02 +0530

In December, so far, I've written 46,187 words. Not bad. And it's still not over. I will get to 50K before midnight tomorrow, I can promise. I'm actually surprised because this month, though I've written nearly as much as I did in November, feels much more relaxed. Maybe it's the fact that I'm really not "racing" anyone. I haven't finished my novel, though. The end is near; I can taste it! I'm not sure if I'll be there by the end of December, unless I have some sort of a breakthrough today, and give up any hope of doing something other than sitting at my netbook AND staring at my outline. This month, the outline's been my savior. Without it, I found myself wanting to go in and change things about the plot, about the characters. But it's time to FINISH this beast. And she is a beast indeed. New ideas? I think those just might be for the next novel :) :) :) or, if my dashing MC just can't live without them, well, then with revisions. Phew. It's been quite the wild ride. Have I ever mentioned -- this is the first time I attempt to write fiction (if we don't count writing I did when I was 15? lol). I'm a poet -- so just getting over the hurdle of not feeling comfortable in this genre and being ok with that, well, for me that's been the biggest triumph of all. And now I'm hooked on writing novels, though... I'm still a poet first.

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KatiePoet — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 20:50:38 +0530

Thanks! Yeah, I've heard about Scrivener. I might have to try it myself. Onward to Jano! I can so do this all year long ::heh...heh....heh...:::

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 04:38:25 +0530

Wow. Does writing poetry give you any practice on the skills you need to write prose? That is, is it easier to switch from one to the other than to start writing with no practice at all? So either way, you're almost there. I'm happy for you.

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 23:35:26 +0530

[quote=maggiep] Eye color changing people in the 1770's, and strange creatures popping in. [/quote] Maybe it's a 18th Century version of steampunk.

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 23:58:01 +0530

If the 1770's story was not part of a current series in print, I would definitely try it :) But alas, it does not fit with the "normal", everyday events and plots. I am excited about doing a Fantasy though. Never thoguht it would be something I'd want to do, but now I do.

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 00:07:35 +0530

*thought Oh boy, good thing there is a spellcheck for documents :)

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 05:05:54 +0530

It's good that you're healthy and relaxed. I'm not being too hard on myself for slacking off on Christmas break-- after all, I have been getting all that vacation homework done, too. So we can both be nice and relaxed. Don't feel guilty for taking some time off if you know you're going to get right back to it in January. So yesterday, after posting that I was just totally stuck, I wrote a little over 400 words, but I don't know what I'm doing. I mean, I sort of know what's happening, but aside from the battle tomorrow, nothing interesting will happen for another couple of weeks. Oh, wait. There's still Uvda and I still need to decide whether I let Achti die for real or... something worse. Now I know what's going on, sort of, and I'll even get back to my main character when whatever poor pitiful person survives tomorrow makes it back to tell her what happened. Mwahahahaha! Thanks for listening to all that. :) Anyway, what's your next writing project?

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 17:10:53 +0530

Sometimes a break is what you need. Good luck and keep us informed. Even when I've finished I will probably still be dropping in here and I want to hear tales of your success.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 17:09:42 +0530

Go Maggie, you can do it.

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 07:34:40 +0530

Sounds like you got some of it figured out now :) I am working on creating a world. I have no name for said world, or any names for places yet. But they'll come eventually. If not, Ill just call them "planet" and "place" and "here".... :)

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PhoenixSempai — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 16:15:41 +0530

My next project is actually an old one, Hanabi. It's called The Phoenix Child and I've been working on it for oh...6-8 years now, I've kinda lost track. But I'm starting from scratch with it now and re-working as I go, and I'm finally please with how it's shaping up. My main goal right now is to have it ready to draft for Camp Nano this summer, which I should in theory be able to manage. If I'm too bored, then I might get to work on it sooner. We shall see.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 08:11:07 +0530

Fun. :) If you haven't got any names yet, you could try figuring out what sounds are in the languages they speak in those places and then stringing a few of those together. That way they'll sound consistent, and, like in the real world, you can guess what places are where by how they're named. (I mean, you can tell, to use real-world examples, that Sao Paulo and Rio de Janeiro are in the same country, and Eyjafjallajokul is somewhere else.)

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 08:28:11 +0530

Lol, true. Good point. I am still not sure on the different languages. I just started creating "planet" a few days ago. My FMC's name came to me last night, after a few other character's names came. They are easy to pronounce, not totally out there, but still odd enough. Other than english, I don't have any other languages yet. As I said, just starting to get it together. I don't want to force the info or it may sound weird in the "she was obviously trying too hard to make it sound like another world"

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 09:10:05 +0530

I see. Do you need any worldbuilding info or are you good on that?

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 09:34:21 +0530

Admitting, this is my very first time writing a Fantasy, so, other than glimpses of what Ive figured out from Star Wars and the 1st Wheel of Time book, I don't really know anything, to be totally honest. I am just starting out as fresh with the genre as can get.

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 09:35:20 +0530

So, to answer your question, if you have any tips or info you don't mind sharing, I would gladly appreciate it.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 12:31:49 +0530

Okay. First one, that you may not like, is that it does pay to read widely in your own genre. But aside from that. Worldbuilding is something you can never have too much of. However, there is a grain of truth to it when people say you can. You need to worldbuild. You also need to live in a clean house, but if you always decide to clean whenever you think of writing, you'll never get anything written. It can be the same way; don't use it to procrastinate, but don't listen to anyone who tells you that it's unnecessary. DO know which parts are truly necessary and which are just gravy, though. What I can think of for that is: 1. Know what kind of names are common in the civilization(s) you're writing in. 2. Be able to bandy around specifics where they fit. This is different from expospeak-- don't throw in random in-depth descriptions, but DO know whatever you need to describe things how your characters actually think of them. (The tailor doesn't just see "a dress"; she sees "a dishabille" or something, and the ranger sees "an oak" rather than "a tree". Conversely, the tailor sees a tree and the ranger sees a dress.) 3. Know travel times wherever your characters need to travel using whatever mode of transportation they use. Down the street? Down the hall? Across the country? Horseback? Walking? Teleporting? It's okay to eyeball it if it's not too important, but if there's a lot of travel, be SOLID on distance and speed. 4. Be intimately familiar with every place you'll actually be setting part of the action. Better know what paves the streets and how the houses are built in the city your characters live in; don't worry about the one halfway around the globe that's a throwaway reference. 5. Know what's in your characters' experience to compare things to. If you have eyes like two pools of chocolate, you've implied the world has chocolate, and that your characters have seen it. So know if your characters are familiar with fishing or hunting or politics. 6. You never, ever need to know ANY more of ANY constructed language than its available sounds. You can, and you can use it judiciously-- but no story ever failed because the author wasn't fluent in the Tongue of the Obscure Kingdom of the Dwarven Elvish Whatevers. (I say this as someone who really, really LIKES conlanging-- making languages-- for fantasy worlds.) 7. Have a general idea of the numbers involved. Hint: your population of a thousand? Does not support nine hundred priests. Just as an extreme example. :) Know how much land supports how many peasants support how many nobles support how many knights support how many blacksmiths. I'll give you a link to a calculator for this stuff. Here's a list of links to sets of questions about worldbuilding, but DON'T make it your first reference. http://www.sfwa.org/2009/08/fantasy-worldbuilding-questions/ And if you DO use it, it's to provoke thought, not a list of things you must know. One useful type of thing to use is references for what the real world was like in comparable periods. http://www.novelguide.com/a/discover/rens_03/rens_03_00377.html This is the real population of medieval Europe. You won't really need it, and it's easier for you to know what you need than for me to guess, so when you need facts, google and if that doesn't work, ask. http://www.castles-of-britain.com/castlelearningcenter.htm But you might very well need this. Castles! :) Common in fantasy, so I figure you'll probably deal with one at some point. http://history.wisc.edu/sommerville/123/123%2013%20Society.htm Also a real-world reference for demographics. Anyway, that's the last of the real-world references. You know which ones you need better than I do. On to the most useful (and more general and fantasy-ish) stuff. http://hiddenway.tripod.com/world/ A list of links-- one must be useful, surely http://www.rpglibrary.org/utils/meddemog/ The demographic calculator I promised. Just punch in the size and climate (you'll need to do a little research on that one) and you'll be able to get all the stats you want. http://www.progonos.com/furuti/MapProj/Normal/CartHow/cartHow.html An explanation of some map projections, in case you're drawing a world map. http://limyaael.insanejournal.com/tag/ Check out whatever seems relevant to you. Scroll down for the worldbuilding-related tags. Earlier posts were made on LiveJournal under the same name and have long comment threads there if you go looking; newer posts have their comments here. http://www.web-writer.net/fantasy/days/index.html Here's a how-to-create-a-world thing. (You're not setting out to do that. You're setting out to tell a story. Don't feel bad if you don't want to create every part of your world.) http://hollylisle.com/worldbuilding-rollicking-rules-of-ecosystems/ Worldbuilding advice from the author of the Secret Texts trilogy, which is beautifully worldbuilt. http://hollylisle.com/how-much-of-my-world-do-i-build/ An article by the same person about how much to worldbuild. I suggest that you also research a little geology and stuff. Tips I can think of: 1. Deserts mostly appear at specific latitudes a little above and a little below the equator. 2. If a humid wind runs into mountains, it leaves its moisture behind as it crosses, creating a desert. 3. Currents go essentially in circles disturbed by the continents. 4. Mountains come in ranges. Ranges can be very wide. 5. Rivers start in high areas and travel downhill. Don't start your rivers in the lowlands. Ever. Also, try to be consistent. It helps to write down your worldbuilding. Also, back up your notes like you do your novel. On paper is good, on the computer is good, on both is better. What you worldbuild really depends on what your story is. For one project, I had to come up with how an entire city functioned and create a different culture and part of two languages. For another, I decided "ah, screw it, it's medieval Europe" for the climate and food and society and clothing, but had to create unbelievable genealogies and legends. (Actually, the genealogies are believable because of all the work I put in. You just won't believe how much I did. Suggestion here: Family Tree Maker! Do not do it on paper unless you're willing to sacrifice sanity. I did it on paper, so I know what I'm talking about here.) If you have a magical creature, know what it eats and know what eats it. (It's okay if the answer to either of those is "nothing"-- plants, in general, don't eat. And humans aren't eaten by other creatures because they're apex predators. Wolves can also be apex predators.) And if you create an ecosystem, make it a pyramid. Have a bunch of plants. Then a much smaller number of herbivores. Then a very small number of predators and just a tiny handful of apex predators. Know how different varieties of creatures will differ based on the climate they originate from, if you're creating an ecosystem. And that's all I can think of.

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 23:01:17 +0530

First-wow, what have I gotten myself into, lol. But I am up to the challenge. Thanks for the links and all of the advice and tips. I have already started getting notes together, on paper and computer. I did not think abut a Family Tree Maker, but I should have. I do that with my other stories.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 17:09:18 +0530

Well done. Now walk away and don't look at it for at least a fortnight.

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 23:02:40 +0530

Thanks. Last night, when I should have been sleeping(this darn new sleeping pattern), I was making a list of names of people and places. Making up words is fun :)

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Dec 2011 23:06:27 +0530

YAY Blue Rose, you did it!!!! Enjoy that champagne and Death Star building :)

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ellarien — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 00:14:49 +0530

Congratulations, and happy new year!

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douleur — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 01:38:40 +0530

Congrats on finishing! A toast to you. Enjoy your Legos and champagne--you deserve it!

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 02:18:04 +0530

Congrats!

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KatiePoet — Mon, 02 Jan 2012 11:24:50 +0530

Congrats Blue! I'm so happy for you! :) Yay!! I unfortunately didn't make it. Eh. That's what January's for, right? 108,000 and certainly counting

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the_blue_rose — Mon, 02 Jan 2012 15:29:31 +0530

Thanks everyone. See I'm still here waiting to hear news of your continuing success. You can all do it. I managed it, so I know you can. You all rock.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 02:08:46 +0530

Remember, how much you need depends on the story you're writing. If all your characters are orphans of unknown parentage, I wouldn't bother with Family Tree Maker. Only reason I bothered with doing that on one project was to keep track of how my various noble families were all related to each other-- who is whose first, second or seventh cousin, etc. It can be really challenging, but there ARE ways to gloss over parts that don't matter. :) But good for you, jumping right in. In my opinion, it's the most fun part of writing. ;)

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maggiep — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 02:54:55 +0530

Right. As of now, I don't need the family tree, but I did jot that down for reminder if family members start showing up. My FMC and MMC both happen to be orphans, but as to extended family, don't know about them yet. Right now I', just working on getting to know the characters and what they look like. I have the beginning of the story, but Im still working on the main plot. This story may be next November's novel. Fortunately about that, I have ten months to get it together :)

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maggiep — Sun, 01 Jan 2012 08:50:30 +0530

Congratulations! What a way to end the year :)

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maggiep — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 11:27:24 +0530

*night(hopefully the manuscript doesnt have such blunders)

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maggiep — Fri, 06 Jan 2012 23:29:48 +0530

Darn gall stone! You can prevail! Don't let it beat you!

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maggiep — Sat, 07 Jan 2012 20:47:45 +0530

That's good, glad things better

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Hanabi no Enigma — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 14:02:42 +0530

You may not feel like it's good enough, but you're far and away better than I am. I'm impressed. Keep up the good work.

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Hanabi no Enigma — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 14:03:37 +0530

How have you been going about it? What else do you know about the world-- is it like Earth? Are there mostly normal creatures or are you making up the whole ecosystem?

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 14:19:29 +0530

I do not envy you that task at all. Would you like to borrow my flying purple hippo? I haven't found a good use for him yet.

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maggiep — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 21:04:05 +0530

It is basically earth, medieval feel, but with added fantasy things. I would not be able to make up an entire new world with its own ecosystem. I know one area is completely winter, always. So, I am researching what types of animals can live in such conditions, to see what types of creatures I can put there. I would like to keep things somewhat familiar for readers(if I ever think its ok enough for people to read), but with little stretches to them. For instance, there are flowers-blue roses for one(which as far as I know, someone correct me if I am wrong, there are no actual blue roses in our world, not unless they are dyed)

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maggiep — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 21:05:19 +0530

Flying purple hippo sounds fun :), but I think that is a bit for my story. I appreciate the offer though. Maybe he would be good for a children's story?

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 11 Jan 2012 02:31:27 +0530

Woo-hoo blue roses! They have been genetically engineered, but do not exist in nature. The fact that they do not exist is used in some cultures to suggest that anyone who finds one will have their wishes granted.

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maggiep — Wed, 11 Jan 2012 03:04:07 +0530

I thought you might like that :) I thought, blue roses, I like it, strange, yet not totally out there. As regards winter creatures, Ive only been able to come up with polar bears and the Abominable Snowman. But the snowman is a bit much. Polar Bears, possible, if I can rework them. Maybe.

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 16:26:41 +0530

Well done Maggie

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the_blue_rose — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 16:27:51 +0530

If you're feeling good about it, then everything's fine. Maybe the 100k of thinking can be used for another story.

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KatiePoet — Fri, 13 Jan 2012 08:05:43 +0530

This is actually a good idea, and something I might need to consider, also :D My story's up to 130K, which is ridiculous considering I'm not even close to done. LOL. Fun fun fun.

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maggiep — Thu, 12 Jan 2012 21:50:46 +0530

Thank you. My goal today is to get to 25. I have a little less than 2k to go. How are you doing?

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 13 Jan 2012 14:32:23 +0530

The first draft is finished. I am sitting on it for another week before giving it a read through and deciding if it's worth an edit.

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maggiep — Fri, 13 Jan 2012 21:25:17 +0530

Congrats on getting to The End! Oh, I hope it's worth editing! All the hard work, something has to come out of it.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 21:02:18 +0530

Well done Maggie. You should wait at least a week before tweaking. It will give you a chance to look at it with fresh eyes.

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maggiep — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 20:25:20 +0530

Thanks, UJ!

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maggiep — Sat, 14 Jan 2012 22:14:59 +0530

Thank you Blue Rose. And thanks for the tip, I usually dive right in, but waiting a little bit is probably a good idea. I will try very hard to not tweak for at least a week. Ill try :)

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KatiePoet — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 10:14:28 +0530

For me, not so good! Yesterday I wrote measly 1600 words, and today, well, I'm not going to get anything done. :( Tomorrow, busy busy day so probably no writing either. But... there's always the weekend, right? :-/ That's if my characters forgive me for abandoning them. On a positive note -- I did a bunch of editing today on another project, so that's off to editor. Yay! So hopefully I'm able to focus on the Nano now... that's my theory, anyway... IF Benjamin cooperates (and if not, he's getting a swift kick in the imaginary gonads... oh, Benjamin's my MC X-D)

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maggiep — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 06:32:13 +0530

Yeah, i understand it :) Congrats on getting it to the next step. The actual manuscript in your hands. Isn't it an awesome feeling? I hope the edits go well.

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KatiePoet — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 10:15:15 +0530

Oh that must feel amazing, Blue! Can't wait to get there myself. Good luck!

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 12:15:29 +0530

I'm too scared to even read it! Every time I sit down to start I discover something infinitely more interesting to do, such as staring at the wall. Must read at least 20 pages today.

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maggiep — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 21:03:15 +0530

You are still getting some form of writing done, that's good. 1600 words is still really good. Better than 1599 :) Eh, give Benjamin a kick if you have to. It might actually cause him to do something interesting in the story :)

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 12:18:38 +0530

1,600 words isn't measly - it the NaNo daily average. Don't beat yourself up for what you haven't done; congratulate yourself on what you have. Well done on editing your other project. And tell Benjamin that is he doesn't co-operate I'll be over to sort him out ;-)

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maggiep — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 21:00:27 +0530

You can do it, don't let it intimidate you. You are the creator of this masterpiece

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KatiePoet — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 11:13:32 +0530

ah so Benjamin got kicked today... and now he's curled up in a ball refusing to do anything except sulk. tomorrow tomorrow... we'll sort this out tomorrow.

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maggiep — Fri, 20 Jan 2012 09:13:07 +0530

Oh man, I hate when the characters sulk. It really puts a bummer on the writing(or lack thereof). I hope he gets over it soon. If only he'd realize things would go better if he just cooperated to begin with. I understand the lack of info. I was going great, then bam! Now Im stuck :/ Havent written at all today, and barely anything yesterday.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 21 Jan 2012 15:39:13 +0530

I hope so. I think it took me a while to get my narrative voice right. It does;t help that it starts with third person narrative and then goes to first person. I should probably change it, but I know that I need to add a second narrative and that will be third person so, hopefully, it should work.

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maggiep — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 01:05:01 +0530

The story is based on a series of dreams I had(like a miniseries movie as dreams. it was awesome. i actually looked forward to sleep :} ), so Ive been thinking about the the scenes and the missing links to them. I have gotten to point b now. I thought about the scene and what exactly happens, which helped me to figure out what should happen before it. Basically I did as you suggested-worked backwards :) I think it worked out. I didn't want to drag the beginning scenes out too long, waiting to bring in MMC, but I still wanted him to wait a little bit. After I established FMC and her position and the little needed facts, I just threw in some extra parts, and bam-in walked MMC. Good timing :)

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KatiePoet — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 01:12:45 +0530

You know, Blue... I think I'm going to try back writing, because I'm at a real awkward part in my story that's really got me draggin' my writerly feet. Hopefully this gets my juices going again... I'm starting to lose interest in finishing! And I'm so close...

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maggiep — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 01:53:13 +0530

Sometimes back writing gets rid of that block or whatever is causing the lack of writing or less writing. I hope it helps you.

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KatiePoet — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 03:48:06 +0530

Thanks Maggie! Actually, instead I ended up redoing my outline. And it's helped! For the first time in... oh... 4 days... I'm back to working on this manuscript. Yay! Benjamin's talking to me again! X-D Even though we only got through 1100 words today, I feel a renewed sense of inspiration. Let's finish this beast!!! ::cue eye of the tiger::

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maggiep — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 03:56:50 +0530

I'm happy Benjamin is talking again. And 100 words is still pretty good. I can hear the song-what motivation! :D

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KatiePoet — Sun, 22 Jan 2012 23:30:45 +0530

Oh let's not begin to talk about fragile mental states, Blue. This manuscript's got me doing all sorts of things that make me seem like a crazy. Nature of the beast? Perhaps, perhaps. I've gotta get me some Scrivener.... it sounds like that might help me with my poetry editing, too. Yeah, keep those drafts. All too often I find myself going back to the original (or maybe 2nd draft, say, instead of Nth draft) because with heavy editing, sometimes emotional intensity can get lost. In poetry. I assume it can be the same for noveling, but I'm yet to figure that bit out X-D

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maggiep — Thu, 26 Jan 2012 05:31:52 +0530

Yay for 8 pages down! Keep it going!

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maggiep — Fri, 03 Feb 2012 08:46:37 +0530

Sounds good. I spent some time with my grandma this week, and tomorrow night is girls night-just me, mom, and a movie. And of course tater tots cuz they are essential :) I might have to add chocolate to the list now that I saw that :) Monday morning I will get my writing butt in gear and get back to typing.

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maggiep — Sat, 04 Feb 2012 07:53:48 +0530

I'm glad to hear you had a good night. And that things are going well with Benjamin. I am now working on getting the next scene figured out. I have to get myself back on track. I can't continue to leave Lorena in the woods with 2 Wanderers that have shown up. Poor girl, all alone. Not that I don't have confidence she can kick their butts good, but still. What kind of writer am I? Leaving my characters alone? Tsk tsk.

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maggiep — Sun, 05 Feb 2012 00:44:19 +0530

The part of the dream I had of this scene, she does defend herself pretty well, beats up the biggest guy before he gets her at the knees and throws her over his shoulders like a sake of potatos(potatoes? I can never figure that word out). It was a comical fight, which I am hoping to get across in writing.

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 12:01:43 +0530

It's potatoes. Most nouns ending in O have an ES plural. Although, for some reason I have never found a decent answer for, while the plural of tomato is tomatoes, tomatos is also an acceptable spelling.

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maggiep — Fri, 10 Feb 2012 21:55:34 +0530

Thanks Blue Rose for the little tidbit.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 11:25:18 +0530

I remember that. Even as a Brit it threw me for a while. Then I spent four years living in Germany. They love their potatoes there and I needed to use the word so often I relearnt it.

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 11 Feb 2012 11:23:17 +0530

You may not have needed the scene, but you did write 2,000 words. That's something to be proud of. Rather than deleting everything you decided you don't need set up a second file and move it to there. That way later if you change your mind again, you have the scene to hand.

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maggiep — Fri, 17 Feb 2012 20:40:52 +0530

April is still a good goal. I'm glad it is going well for you.

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maggiep — Sun, 04 Mar 2012 23:38:53 +0530

Congrats UJ! And yay to the leap day, it was served well :) I started getting another scene together so I was typing that up when a character not planned showed up. Hello unexpected person. She is very nice though, I like her, so she is staying. I don't know how long she is staying around, but she and FMC are getting along well, so I hope she stays.

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maggiep — Tue, 06 Mar 2012 20:39:22 +0530

Sorry to hear youve been sick. Hope you are on the mend now. This winter seems to be really bad for people getting sick. There are a lot more sick, it seems. It's good to hear your friends want to read more, that's a good sign :) I have the day off(beside a little paperwork), so I am planning to get more writing done.

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maggiep — Thu, 08 Mar 2012 04:01:12 +0530

I read of an author who attached a laptop to her treadmill, she somehow rigged a flat surface. She'd turn it to the lowest speed, which she said was like a snail, but at least it gave her exercise, safely, while still typing.

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maggiep — Fri, 09 Mar 2012 09:39:56 +0530

Good to hear from you Katie. It sounds like the writers conference was fun. I've never been to any, but I've heard they are helpful. Mental work is still work on the manuscript. It's something. You have to think of the rewrite, so I think it is all part of the writing process.

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maggiep — Thu, 08 Mar 2012 20:49:09 +0530

I was wondering how she does it, too. I'd get so into writing I'd forget to move my feet. Not that moving at a snail's pace would bring great damage, but still.

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KatiePoet — Sat, 10 Mar 2012 07:19:02 +0530

I actually like to read and exercise at the same time. It helps me a lot. I get my Kindle and go to town on the stair machine. Like that, I can exercise for a good hour and not realize how much time's past. Now if only I could WRITE while on the stair machine... that would be amazing.

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KatiePoet — Sat, 10 Mar 2012 07:17:57 +0530

It WAS helpful :) If nothing else, it's nice to be in the company of so many writers. There were 10,000 people registered! It was pretty cool... I live in a fairly isolated area and there aren't too many serious writers. So every year, I like to go to some kind of conference, retreat, or workshop. This one was a little overwhelming for me, though. My brain's finally settling in and I've gotten some writing done today, though no on my novel, not yet anyway. I think I'll probably be up late working on it. Ben's been whispering sweet nothings in my ear all day today :-P About the plot, that is LoL. Next week's spring break, which I'm really looking forward to. My plans include reading at least two books, writing as much poetry as I can muster, working on my Nano daily (to get back in the groove, 750 words per day), meeting with my writer's group, and doing one public reading at a local restaurant (nervous!!!). Oh, and grading an armful of essays. No beach. I'm too nerdy and pale skinned for the beach!

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KatiePoet — Sat, 10 Mar 2012 07:20:46 +0530

NICE! Yeah, sometimes characters can be fickle like that. I'm sure those bad guys will come around. Sometimes, I like to act out scenes when I'm at my house, alone of course. It helps me to really get to understand my characters, and then I can kind of see their motivations better. Anyway, that works for me when they go silent, which, inevitably, they do. Oh, or do dialogue while driving. I love doing that! But hmm... recently I almost took out my fence I got too distracted. So maybe that's not the soundest of advice.

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maggiep — Sat, 10 Mar 2012 07:33:58 +0530

I'm glad today is going well for you. It's always nice when the character's whisper in our ears. Sounds like next week, though a break, will be pretty busy.

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maggiep — Sat, 10 Mar 2012 07:39:44 +0530

Lol. At least it was an "almost took out". I do the same thing, acting out the scenes, that is. I do that to better describe facial expressions and emotions, dance moves, etc.... I'm sure if a hidden camera was in the room, whoever saw me would think I'm crazy.

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maggiep — Sat, 10 Mar 2012 23:05:17 +0530

Oh. Huh. Hmm, now that is a thought. If they are just pawns to the True Bad Guy/Girl, then maybe that person doesn't give details to Pawns. They just give them commands. The Pawns(thatll be their group name now), just do as theyre told, because if they dont, they will, as pawns often do, become "casualities". Ooh! Like in a book I just read. Some of the bad guys did what they did, not so much because they were bad(although technically they were), but because it kept them alive. And some, to find out, are actually not bad at all, like the soldiers the wicked witch of the west had. Once she was dead, come to find out, some soldiers were just trying to stay alive. Ooh, and once Lorena discovers this, then maybe one of them becomes openly good and helps her. OMW Blue Rose I love you! You have just unleashed a whole new part of the story for me. Thank you So much!!!!!!!! :D

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maggiep — Tue, 13 Mar 2012 01:45:33 +0530

Ah, the reading dilemma. Yeah, I've had that happen. But remember, those books are finished. At one point the author felt just as you do, unmotivated and thoughts their story was dull.... But keep writing it and working on it. And this is what editing is for, to turn the dull into daring!

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KatiePoet — Tue, 13 Mar 2012 10:03:12 +0530

Maggie's right! Your first draft is going to stink. That's why we do rewrites, edits, edit some more, edit some more, fix fix fix... Whoever said "first draft, best draft" was dead wrong X-D Wait, wasn't that Kerouac? Ah well, I guess we're no Kerouac, and that's completely ok! Anyway, yeah, a finished product is going to be much different than our drafts. Keep up the reading, though; there really is no better way to sharpen your own writing skills.

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the_blue_rose — Tue, 13 Mar 2012 15:27:04 +0530

I could suggest reading a certain popular series of books that shall remain nameless. They are terribly written and your work should be a masterpiece in comparison. I haven't read a book since I started this project in November because I was worried about the same thing. But I can't not read for any longer. It's hard, but don't compare your writing to others. We all have different styles. Instead think about what it was you really liked about the book and if there is any way to emulate it. Also, don't forget that you are writing a different book to that author. Even if they are the same genre, they are not the same book. Maggie and Katie are right, though. It's all about the editing. If you have a friend that you trust, ask them to read your work and give honest, but positive feedback. Learn what your strengths are and then concentrate on the that for a while. Then, when you're feeling better about your writing go back and work on the rest. Good luck. You can do it.

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maggiep — Wed, 14 Mar 2012 07:54:01 +0530

Congrats on getting the chapters broken up. That's a good step in the rewrite. And it's good you know where you have to work, itll help get you motivated. Sometimes, too, at least with me, I find that I do want to write, but by the time I get the time to sit and bring the document up, I tired from the day and Im ready to just go to bed or play a mindless round of Mahjong. Maybe timing is getting in the way for you? Everything else taking over?

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maggiep — Thu, 15 Mar 2012 23:52:26 +0530

Duct tape that voice shut and throw it in the corner :) Reading does tend to weasle its way into other thing's time. Its so easy to justify it though. Its a book, it helps to expand writing creativity, gives ideas, suggestions. Reading is sorta like research, homework.... Its such a subtle distraction

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 20:06:33 +0530

Sweet! Congratulations Carolf!

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 22:20:37 +0530

Evil word. I try not to use it. It brings on too much stress. Unless its November, then bring it on :)

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maggiep — Fri, 16 Mar 2012 22:21:09 +0530

Not that Ive won NaNo yet :)

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maggiep — Sat, 17 Mar 2012 19:35:27 +0530

Chapter breaking is still work on the story, has to be done eventually. I hope it goes well. As I type this, I am also writing Lorena's history down. I have this huge blue binder with I don't know how many pages now of paper filled with information. I found those dividers with tabs on the edge, which have been helpful. I've been able to organize my information by catagory-people, creatures, places, abilities.... It has been a lot easier to work with than index cards and little notes like I use for my other series(which is just adventure/mystery stories set in modern time) I have an hour and a half this morning to work on the story.

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maggiep — Sun, 18 Mar 2012 01:23:03 +0530

Doing good Carolf!

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maggiep — Sun, 18 Mar 2012 23:39:05 +0530

You do not suck. Every now and then, a person has a slow-down moment. They can be annoying, but try to remember(as I have been telling myself a lot lately) we need the slow down moments or we burn out. Slowing down gives our imaginations time to recoop and plant new ideas.

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KatiePoet — Mon, 19 Mar 2012 08:06:27 +0530

Plant new ideas! I love that thought :) Yeah, that's true. I have been able to take a step back from my novel, and do a little work on making my characters more... realistic, I guess? Anyway! Today was a good day at the keyboard. Got 2500 words. Yesterday? 1800. I'm back! B-D

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maggiep — Mon, 19 Mar 2012 08:33:23 +0530

Awesome!! I am very jealous now :) Realistic characters is something I'm always working on. I hate reading of people that sound so, robot-like. I hope that work on your characters goes well.

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maggiep — Thu, 22 Mar 2012 20:14:20 +0530

Don't give up Izzy. Editing can be very hard and frustrating, but a necessity. Perhaps there is someone you trust to read it as is to give their thoughts? A close friend? I have found that to be helpful. My mom has become my editor/tweaker. I know she will give her honest opinion in a kind manner. Even if a scene does not make sense, she will find the good in it and we work to get the scene right. Editing is something you have to detach yourself a little and be a bit strict. As for not publishing the novel- that does not mean you should still give it your best. Even if a few read it, or just yourself, it is such an accomplishment to write it and see the final edited copy. To look at it, read it, and know that these are your words. This is your story. Don't give up. Even if it takes you a year, or more, to edit, you will be happy you did it and you will have this novel to treasure always.

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maggiep — Fri, 23 Mar 2012 19:05:41 +0530

Maybe someday technology will become so much like Star Trek and Star Wars that all we have to do is think about our manuscript and we instantly become connected with it through brain waves. Then no matter where we are we can work on it. That would be kinda creepy, but a little cool too.

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 00:24:45 +0530

Yes, you are helping. The thought of rivaling siblings has been floating in my head. The idea of an unwed woman ruling a kingdom is unusual, so perhaps the brother is the rightful heir and sister thought she should get to rule and a civil war began, splitting the kingdom in two. OR, she is the rightful heir, as the blood heir, and brother is the stepbrother, but feels that since he is a male, he should be the rightful ruler and thus he made himself king, splitting the kindom in two, causing a civil war. Wasnt there something sorta similar like that between king stephen and queen maud? Hmm, will have to do some research

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maggiep — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 00:18:21 +0530

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!! I am clapping to your awesomely sweet victory!

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the_blue_rose — Sat, 24 Mar 2012 15:41:52 +0530

Congratulations. I am doing a victory dance for you. You will need to imagine it but it's awesome nonetheless.

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the_blue_rose — Fri, 30 Mar 2012 14:00:05 +0530

Congratulations. And good luck with Script Frenzy. After that I'd say you deserve a little break.

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maggiep — Fri, 30 Mar 2012 20:15:35 +0530

I second the congratulations, and agree with the break

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maggiep — Sat, 31 Mar 2012 23:12:13 +0530

Ooh, nice. Is this your first trip to Rome?

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maggiep — Mon, 02 Apr 2012 00:35:26 +0530

Nice. Ive been there twice and would not be disagreeable to a third trip. There is just something about that city(and I'm not much of a city girl).

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Tue, 03 Apr 2012 01:28:05 +0530

Hmm, I did not think about that. That could be interesting. I will have to play with that idea. Thanks!

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maggiep — Sun, 08 Apr 2012 02:02:50 +0530

Thanks! It was one of my toughest scenes to write. This story will have a few so I better get used to them. I just have to remember not to make them all the same :)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sun, 08 Apr 2012 23:04:39 +0530

I have not attended any writing conferences of any kind.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Mon, 09 Apr 2012 19:19:48 +0530

SFf cons aren't really writing conferences, although many have a hefty writing track. SF conventions are fan gatherings. Some center around the literature, some around the media, some both. There are also costuming interests and music. It's a chance for fans to gather, invite some pros, and enjoy speculative fiction and fandom. There's usually a regional con near you at least several times a year. In the midwest, it's possible to go to a convention per month, if you have the interest. We don't go as often as we used to -- life gets in the way -- but when my husband and I go, we go for fun. I usually attend some of the writing panels. I have seen the fight demonstrations, although I've never sat through one. I may take my own advice at my next con.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Mon, 09 Apr 2012 19:20:25 +0530

[quote=maggiep] I went to a party tonight and a friend who I used to babysit but is now taller than me(darn growth spurts) told me that in his English class they had to do book reports and one of the girls in his class did a report on one of my books. I felt so honored. [/quote] Wow! What an ego-boo!

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the_blue_rose — Wed, 11 Apr 2012 14:12:45 +0530

That's very cool. Of course it leads to the question: Am I being incredibly thick, or are you telling me I have been giving advice to a published author? Titles please.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 03:29:17 +0530

Thanks Carolf. Lol, yes you have been giving advice to a published author. Much appreciated advice :) Being published has nothing to do with needing advice and encouragement when writing a new story. I do have a website- www.kymberlibriggs.com It has my books listed. But for quick info- Pressed Flowers- Maggie, 11 yrs old, moves into a new house and has a mysterious, ancient old neighbor. Maggie finds a box in the attic that gives insight into the family that lived in the house before Maggie's, linking her answers to the neighbor. The Key in the Coffin- Maggie, 13, helps her mom dig a flower garden in the backyard. She figures the day will be long and boring, until they find a child's coffin buried in the backyard.... Poor Elizabeth- Maggie is now 14. She is heading home from an evening of hanging out with her friends when she walks by the village cemetery. A headstone catches her attention- "Poor Elizabeth Only 19". Maggie becomes curious as to who Elizabeth was and what happened to her. This one switches back and forth from 2002 to 1863

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maggiep — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 18:37:17 +0530

Congrats on meeting the deadline! You definitely deserve to do whatever you want. For now :)

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maggiep — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 18:42:27 +0530

I figure that I can always improve on my writing, and being in NaNo where there are other writers who can give advice and encouragement, has been fun for me. Writing can be a solitary thing, but at least there is this community that everyone writes, whatever the style or genre. It is nice knowing there are a lot of writers still out there, helping each other and being encouraging. I have greatly appreciated it. Especially with Lorena's story. I never in my life thought of writing something other than a YA mystery/adventure, but NaNo and family have given me the encouragement to try something new. So, thank you.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 12 Apr 2012 20:08:15 +0530

Most certainly crow! I am glad to hear the first reader could not put it down. That is a very good sign! Enjoy the floating :)

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maggiep — Fri, 13 Apr 2012 19:14:36 +0530

Nope, she does not know. But, I put on my thinking cap yesterday(my ears were cold so I found a hat I had stashed away{the type with the braids on the sides}, and put it on for warmth) but wouldnt ya know, shortly after putting it on, ideas started coming, wether from fellow NaNos helping out, or my own imagination. Between the two, I have figured it out! Thanks NaNos! (And now that hat has officially become my thinking cap :) )

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maggiep — Sat, 14 Apr 2012 18:41:58 +0530

yep. as goofy as i look, the hat is staying!

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maggiep — Mon, 16 Apr 2012 21:50:48 +0530

Yay, congratulations! I'm sure you can get that manuscript done this month.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Wed, 18 Apr 2012 14:44:46 +0530

I had a couple more thought this morning. I expect that you have already got answers for these too, but if not they might be worth thinking about. [quote=maggiep] There are stories of violet eyed people, but she has never seen any to give proof to the stories. [/quote] If Lorena has violet eyes then surely that would be proof enough. Or does she think she is the only one left? Is it co-incidende that Elex is there the night Lorena is attacked? Or has he been keeping an eye on her the whole time? Why do they decide to travel to the Queen? Is it a group decision, or the decision of one person? Perhaps, that one person is working for the Queen and has been hired to get Lorena to her. Perhaps that person is Elex. Finally, I remember from previous posts that you've had an issue getting Lorena to tell you what her powers are/why she is different. Maybe the reason she hasn't told you is that she doesn't know and is waiting for you to give her the answer. It might be that her power(s) will remain a mystery until she has a need to use them. Maybe she can heal people, but won't know until someone in the party is injured. Or she is a great fighter, but that won't be shown until she needs to fight. It might be that her power is something smaller. Perhaps she is the only one who will recognise the true ruler of the country. Or maybe she can sense people's real motives and thoughts. This could be a power she gradually learns to use; it could start off that she gets the feeling when people are lying to her and grow from there.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Tue, 17 Apr 2012 21:22:18 +0530

There is a section of old Niteria that is not being ruled, including Lorena's village and woods. These parts have not been claimed by either the queen or king, yet anyway. The war is still raging. I have not yet given thought to these parts, as to where their allegiance lays. In Lorena's village, there are those who have their ideas of who should rule them, some feel they should be left alone.... The illness that caused the king to realize what the Violet eyed people are capable to do is over. I just figured it to be a sort of scarlet fever type thing. The time period being a reneseince(i know i spelled that wrong) era feel, they would not have medicine for something like that. If they are color changers, they catch illnesses. Some die, a few with good immune systems survive, but illnesses tear down their immunity. Violet eyes are a genetic inheritance, so Lorena does have violet eyes, being her parents were violet eyed. I know who is the rightful heir, but that would give even more away, but yes I know. And I know their true nature. I am working on the worldbuilding today. I drew up a map this morning. Will be working on the other things too. Thanks for your thoughts! :)

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maggiep — Tue, 17 Apr 2012 21:30:35 +0530

The birth mother(i suppose I should give her a name. note to self-give birth mom a name) is working with one of the rulers as a soldier spy. And she has violet eyes. Lorena's father also has violet eyes. Yes, Lorena has violet eyes(sorry I forgot to put that in the info). Birth mom escaped and ran when the village was under attack because she didnt want her baby to be a prisoner. Elex wanted to know who had attacked their village. He went on his own mission to find out. He grew up in the woods with the Wanderers. Hmm, it would make sense for the king to work on other stuff, I just havent figured that out.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Wed, 18 Apr 2012 20:31:52 +0530

1- Good point. Okay, so she's been told the stories, and as a little girl believed the stories to be real, but has yet to actually see any other violet eyed people. After a while, growing up, the stories become just that and she thinks she is the only violet eyed person. That her mother told her those stories to make her feel better. (make sense?) 2- Elex has been wandering around the area these 13 years. He knew she was at the farmhouse with the older couple but did not know she was working at the tavern. Elex has the ability to hear extremely well. This is how he found out she is working at the tavern, someone was talking about the 'violet eyed girl' from afar and he overheard them. When he is at the tavern, he again overhears someone talking about their plan to kidnap Lorena. 3- As a matter of fact, :) , there is someone in the group working for the queen and knows she is good. They persuade the group to go to her. 4- Lorena has the ability to not get sick-colds, epidemics, etc.... Her body can still be injured, but cannot catch an illness. (this, anyway, is what i have come up with. im still not sure how this could be useful to the bad king) (oh, and all violet eyed people never get sick) (and, im not 100% sold on this ability. maybe if i had more solid info on it, it would sound better to me. i dont know)

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 14:03:45 +0530

Point 1 makes perfect sense, it's exactly the kind of thins a mother would do to help her little girl feel less different. I think that the idea of violet eyed people not getting sick could work, but you need to be convinced. It might be a good idea to spend some time working on this idea before you go much further. You should know how and why this happens and the effects. If you're not convinced it will be harder for any readers to accept the idea. Maybe this is only one of the violet-eyed peoples powers and is linked to their other abilities.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Thu, 19 Apr 2012 19:48:54 +0530

That's what I was thinking. There is a huge part of the territory that I have not filled in, so if another journey is needed, there are plenty of unknown places to make up. I was figuring the ending of the war and 'cleaning up' would take time, plus, at the end of book 1, Lorena has discovered that her parents were not her birth parents at all, so she wants to find her birth mother. I'm working on all the possible plots I can come up with. I also want to check out some fantasy books, maybe get some inspiration to creatures and such. I want to see how I can spread my wings.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Sat, 21 Apr 2012 01:40:48 +0530

You're doing great Blue Rose!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Mon, 23 Apr 2012 19:32:11 +0530

[quote=the_blue_rose] Finished! Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes. [/quote] Huzzah! You've earned the break!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Mon, 23 Apr 2012 19:56:04 +0530

Woohoo! Awesome Blue Rose!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

maggiep — Wed, 25 Apr 2012 21:18:19 +0530

With you all the way!

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maggiep — Tue, 08 May 2012 20:35:26 +0530

Welcome back UJ! Rome sounds like it was fabulous. Take care of yourself so you can see Avengers. I saw that Saturday and loved it.

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

Carolf — Mon, 14 May 2012 20:18:24 +0530

[quote=UJ] Okay, I've calmed down a bit now. Lunch really helped. One dodgy draft is not the be all and end all! I'm going to get back to work now and maybe I'll have some nice chocolate buttons later. [/quote] Way to go. You can do it!

Re: The Semi-Official NaNoCember Thread

the_blue_rose — Tue, 15 May 2012 19:08:17 +0530

I had a small case of the Tuesday blues, but your comment mad me smile. And remind me that I have a pack of Maltesers in the cupboard. Keep up the positive attitude about your script. Nothing can be all bad, there's got to be one good idea in there. In fact, lots of interesting ideas, well written lines of dialogue, good bits of direction. If the first read through felt that bad then there's no way any further read throughs can be as disappointing. Remember: a pessimist is never disappointed, and often pleasantly surprised.