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maggiep
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So, I had this idea pop in my head. Where it came from, I have no idea. The very depths of my brain I guess. Anywho, I saw this scene, and a story fell into place. A world where Death is a man. He knows exactly who is going to die, when, where, why, etc.... If he touches someone, they will die. So he lives a very lonely life(as in no friends, family). And then one day, walking down an alley or street, a door bangs open in front of him and a girl tumbles out. He moves out of the way just in time, a breath's space between them, so he does not touch her and kill her. She looks at him, and that's it, he falls in love. The problem, he can't touch her or she will die.

Idk, it's just this scene that keeps playing in my head.

Steampunk avi8or
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This sounds cute, like maybe the girl is kind of ditzy and really nice and fun. And Death is like, erm... he's like death. Great unlikely romance story idea. You should go for it. (I don't know what kind of response you're looking for here but I give this a thumbs up.)

maggiep
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Thanks for your thoughts, Steampunk. I laughed when I read "And Death is like, erm... he's like death." I am still letting it weave its threads.

Aria617
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I think Family Guy actually does a joke version of that :) I forget the episode, but death is in love with a pet shop owner, and actually ends up touching and killing her at the end.

I think it's a cute idea. Sort of king midas-ish.

Aria617
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Oh, and Pushing Daisies. The guy there can bring people back to life with one touch, but then they die again the next time he touches them. He brings the girl he was in love with back to life, but can't touch her ever again or she'll die irreversibly. They have a really cute romance with kissing through plastic wrap and stuff since they can't touch skin to skin. Maybe you can use some of that too in the romance part? Of course, being formerly dead she knows she'll die again if he touches her, which your other one might not, so that would be interesting to try to explain.

maggiep
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I've never seen Pushing Daisies either, but I remember reading about the story line. That is an interesting romance. And just the few things you mentioned adds some ideas to the characters. Adds a few more threads to the story.

maggiep
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Did they? I've never seen the show, so I don't know the episodes. I didn't think of the King Midas similarities, but you're right, it is.

Angryman
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You're thinking of Death Lives. Good episode. Then again, I like the episodes with Death in them.

KatiePoet
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I like it, Maggie! :) I think it could be an interesting basis for a story. Run with it!

I love those plot ideas that come from dreams/random spur of the moments. They tend to be the best.

maggiep
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Thanks Katie! I am definitely letting the idea float around and weave its threads. I'm curious to see where it will go on its own. (I like to let the story ideas plot on their own for a little bit before I set anything down on paper)

KatiePoet
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I understand! Yeah, my current novel had to "stew" for about a year before i was ready to put it down on paper at all. I need to get a feel for the characters (and then I get to know them a little too well...) and the general plot. I like to run through scenes in my head before bed at night, then I get wild dreams X-D Yay! Good thing I don't write horror... LOL! But how exciting :) I was just thinking about your idea right now, and it sent a chill down my back. Thinking about loving someone without being able to touch them... that's actually really really sad :(

maggiep
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That's what I was thinking too, about not being able to touch them. How would he rescue her, in a case where he might have to(like if she was drowning. it was just a scenerio(spelled right? hmm) that I came up with), kiss, hold hands....a definite challenge indeed.

It is a good thing you don't write horror, or you may never sleep :)

Angryman
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Isn't that what Meet Joe Black was sort of about? I've heard the movie described kind of like that. Either way, I'd go with it. I'm sure you can get a great story out of it.

maggiep
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Hmm, I'm not sure. I remember seeing a scene or two of the movie but never the whole thing, so I'm not exactly sure what it is about. But I do remember something about it having to do with death. And thanks for giving your thoughts, I appreciate everyones thoughts on it.

MrDithers
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Yup, and Meet Joe Black is based off an old black-and-white by the name of Death Takes a Holliday, inhabiting the body of another man so death can take a vacation in the living world. Only, the rich business tycoon he decides to shanghai for his guide as a beautiful daughter that death falls in love with and... well, just go see the movie.

maggiep
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Thanks, I will check out the movie.

Mikiki
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I like this idea - it would make a gold romance story. It sounds like an intriguing storyline!

maggiep
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Thanks Mikiki!

Horselover150
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It sounds so amazing, a person that you would never expect to fall in love just falls in love with a girl that he nearly killed. Hmm, not really sure how you can get them to have a nice loving relationship, but go for it! I'm sure you'll figure it out. ;)

maggiep
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Thank you. Yeah, it is a definite challenge. But if it really is meant to be a story then Death and the girl will keep bugging me :)

Angryman
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I will say that it sounds different from my story based on Death. Then again, in my story, Death is a business with multiple people. In fact, it's like The Office, only it's not Dunder-Mifflin. It's actually called Death's Door.

maggiep
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Picturing steve carrell(?) working for death makes me chuckle. Im not sure if your going for the humor part, but that was what I pictured.

Angryman
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Yep. This is supposed to be a comedy. And what little I have so far is pretty good. The head Death is Japanese, and despite having centuries of learning other languages, he still has troubles with them. He also has the worst handwriting out of everyone. "I have come to reap your... soai? What the-? Hey, you, can you read this? My boss can't write to save, or reap, a life. Soul? Oh, yes. That's it. I'm here to reap your soul."

Yeah, this could get really bizarre...

maggiep
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Lol, very nice :)

Angryman
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Thank you.

Dragon Gal
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Aww, this story sounds so cute and so... tragic!
Maggie, I would say go for it! It sounds like a great plot, and definitely something I'd read. So... amazing! Good luck with it if you do end up writing it!

maggiep
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Thanks Dragon Gal! It's nice to hear that its something people may be interested in.

Nianne
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Sounds neat!

Have you ever read "On a Pale Horse?" It's not exactly the same idea, but it is about the person of Death and he does fall in love. It's a pretty cute read if you're looking to see what's already been done (and what hasn't). I think most libraries have a copy.

Good luck with the new idea!

maggiep
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I have not read that. Thanks for the tip, I will have to check into that.

Webgoji
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Sooo . . . what happens when the ex-boyfriend shows up? This could be really fun as they try to have a "normal" romance. Meeting the parents, going on dates . . . how awkward would going to a dance club be?

maggiep
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I'm not sure about any exes, but you do bring up very good questions. It's still floating, so the details are still coming together.

Aria617
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Perhaps gloves would work? Depends on how you decide the "touch" thing works. Then you'd just get the "your boyfriend always wears gloves...that's...quirky" comments.

maggiep
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I have thought about gloves :) Yeah, I'm still thinking through the extent of what touching means.

KatiePoet
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What if Death was a woman...

Angryman
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Good point. We all imagine Death as male, or at least most people do. I think the Greek god of death, Thanatos, has something to do with it. I know that I have Deaths in my story that are women, but again, Death is a business in my story. If you want a more typical "There's only one Death", then who says it has to be a man?

...I feel like a feminist for that last sentence, and I'm a guy. Weird.

maggiep
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Lol, quite the feminist. Seriously though, that is a good point both of you bring out. I immediately thought man because, well, that is what my imagination saw. But if Death was a woman, perhaps that is why the girl stumbled out of the door so quickly, because She almost touched someone. She almost collides into the guy who sees her and becomes pulled in. But She can't touch him. *Sigh* Now you two have me thinking.... :)

Horselover150
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You know, I think that would really work. That would be so awesome! Weird and twisted, but awesome. :P

idle-dream
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I think this is a brilliant idea! I'd definitely read it if it were a book. It sounds really unique and I think you should go for it.

KatiePoet
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Changing up gender roles alters stories more than you'd think ;) Anyway! Glad I could help.

maggiep
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It definitely does. Fortunately I'm still letting this brew, so I don't have to make definite decisions yet.

finchgeam
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I like this story idea ... although I don't fairly like the western manifestation of death that much (Grim Reaper etc...) I really like Shinigami like the ones in death note ... if I remember death note had a subplot with a human/shinigami relationship...

But hey ... go nuts o.O''

Angryman
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I personally like Bleach, but that's just me. I like the uniqueness of everyone's zanpakuto.

The Hawks Eye
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What about if he traded in being Death, but the price is he can only live a year, or some small amount?
Reading books about Death being anthropomorphized is always interesting (and i probably didn't spell that right, but thats the term Terry Prachet uses.)

Angryman
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Sir Terry Pratchett uses the term anthropomorphic personification, so I think the word you are looking for is personified. Anthropomorphism, which anthropomorphic derives from, means "the attributing of human shape or characteristics to gods, objects, animals, etc."

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