unintentional shifting PoV - need help http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187 Kelly Ide Hey gang, As I'm getting further into this mystery thriller, I'm finding that my main character(girl) has now become a co-main character and the new one(guy) seems to be taking over the story... but in a good way. However, the original concept, and follow up stories, are supposed to be about her and her further adventures. Thoughts, suggestions? Thanks!!!! Sun, 27 Nov 2011 14:30:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_864935 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_864935 CAByrnes This happened to me in 2005, when my FMC discovered her first body and the man of her dreams walked into her life in the form of the police detective assigned to the case. What I've done since is to keep the FMC's point of view, but of course the MMC figures strongly in the story. In fact, they were planning their wedding this year when he got framed for arson, DWI and (soon) kidnapping leading to homicide. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 20:05:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868948 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_868948 Kelly Ide Okay, thanks! Tue, 29 Nov 2011 09:49:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_887041 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_887041 Captain Black You might find the following article useful. http://helpineedapublisher.blogspot.com/2010/01/points-of-view.html Wed, 30 Nov 2011 08:51:00 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_899826 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/mystery-thriller-suspense/threads/44187?page=1#forum_thread_comment_899826