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Please share advice for my ebook cover?

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Lisa.Vail
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I just finished making the cover for Moon's Insanity, which will be a free Kindle download. I made it on Paint.net, using a photo I had taken and editing the moon into it, messing with the lighting and adding text. But I could really do with knowing whether or not it's any good. Could any artisans recommend improvements, or is this okay for a free ebook? It's my first attempt at making a cover, so it might just be terrible!

Link ---- http://ljsimpkins.deviantart.com/art/Moon-s-Insanity-Cover-283662441

Lisa.Vail
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Oh, here's a thumbnail if it helps any ^^

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Crimml
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I like it. It's simple and quite striking, and for an e-book cover, it's effective ^^ I'm assuming it'll be in b&w on the kindle, right?

Lisa.Vail
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Yeah, unless someone's using the new one, then it might be in colour :)
Thanks!

Mistb0rn
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I don't know, if I saw that book cover...something about it just screams "amateur". \
If it were up to me me, I'd probably make the sky darker and the moon bright, and maybe use a different font (though typography has always been my weak point so I'm not sure what I would replace it with, just that it could use replacing.)

A couple of quick examples of what I mean (just tweaked the brightness/contrast of the background, one layer darker and one brighter for the moon; I didn't do anything with the words)

Lisa.Vail
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Thanks! The edits look really nice, but I'm worried that the sky is too dark, which makes the trees hard to see. My idea was to make the moon look a natural part of the picture, so I didn't want to add that much contrast... but I do agree! If I darken the sky a little and make the moon glow more, it might stand out better! What a great idea!
About the font, I'll be honest, I just flicked through until I came across this one. Out of my (limited) number of fonts, this was probably the only one that wasn't curly and reminiscent of calligraphy.
What great ideas! :D

Darkenedavo
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I'd move the words away from the edges and corners. And geez not a fan of that font, mainly that ' (I can't spell today).

Juanitaaa
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I'd recommend going on dafont.com, there's a lot of free fonts on there which are nicer than what you've got.

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