So I'm in a rut. I have stuff I need to write and even want to write, but it never progresses past the "type one word on paper and then check twitter for hours" stage. And like I gave myself a plot and characters and all that cool jazz but my fingers just won't work.
How do I get past this? Everything was going so well until today :-(
im on this cycle to but its check itunes on what songs coming on next check nonowrimo look at page blankly write a few lines word count deleat most of what was just typed repeat
My cycle is EXACTLY like that! What helps me sometimes is going someplace public (Panera, Starbucks, etc.) If I'm out and about on my computer I refuse to go on FB, Twitter, or any other social networking site because I am paranoid that the person I whose profile I happen to be looking at will catch me. Crazy, I know, but it helps. Also, Write or Die has been my go to website for writers block (this year and last year). It helps to get the words out and flowing and you discover something new about your character that you never realized before.
I just looked up Write or Die, because it sounded familiar but I didn't know what it was, and . . . wow. Thank you for mentioning it! Thanks to you, Miss Howes, I think I've found the tool to keep me going when my characters are boring and my plot gets stuck in the mud.
And don't worry, you're not aone; I feel similarly paranoid about going on "fun" sites like Facebook when not on at home. :-p
that is the greatest thing I've ever heard of! I just downloaded the write or die desktop and I'm already loving it. Especially since I'm so behind everyone ): I started late!
I am going in with a plan, as in write in segments, write in scriverner Trial for windows, and stick to the plan no matter how horrible it feels. I have done 2000 words today because of it, also use whatever method you see fit to get you writing it can be amazingly inspirational.
I like this plan. I was chugging along quite well until this past week, and all of a sudden the story isn't exciting, I don't know what to write next, and it feels less fun. So I think next week I will just try skipping to the good stuff and writing segments instead of worrying about writing anything resembling a coherent narrative with transitions and moving characters clearly through time and space. Maybe if I focus on some of the fun scenes it will re-energize me. I want to try Scrivener but I haven't made my way through the tutorial yet...
Write or Die is awesome! Thanks for mentioning it! I had never heard of it. I set the web app to kamikaze and wrote about 600 words in half an hour. Not bad after two days of nothing.
Thank you SO MUCH for the write or die idea. I had never heard of it. I spent a couple of hours cranking out a thousand words in a coffee shop this afternoon, but trying that out tonight, I did another thousand in 30 minutes! :D
WOW!! Thanks for the write or die mention, I had no idea it even existed! It was a nice confidence booster, the 1st time I tried using it I entered 500 words in 15mins, 17 mins later I had over 900 words! I didn't think I could get that much out in such a short time frame! Thanks again!!
I'd say that you should never delete what you write. If you don't like it, you should cross it out (Microsoft Word has a button for that) and start over. That way, you don't have to continue writing something you hate, but you can still count the words.
I can't agree with not deleting, though I do think it's something that should be done carefully, word count aside. (I'm sorry but if you are a serious writer and intent on writing something of quality, there are more important things than word count.)
When I started my novel, I absolutely hated the first page I wrote. I took a deep breath, deleted it and remember something I scribbled in a journal a week earlier. It ended up being the first page of my novel and from there, I took off running. Had I not deleted that first page, I would likely still be hating it and the novel would be a monstrous, stunted thing I would force myself to work on and my disdain for it would show.
That said, don't delete something just because it doesn't fit into something you're writing write now. Be as organized as possible. I keep each chapter in separate documents and when something doesn't fit, I copy/paste it to a new document and assign it a subject based file name, (i.e. dog pound chapter,) so I can refer back to it when I reach a point where it could be useful. Those misplaced parts often have to be either trimmed or expanded but sometimes they really do just drop nicely into another chapter.
There's a lot of argument over the virtue of editing while writing. I do it but I consider each edit carefully. If the voice of the work is somewhat stylized, it can take some experimentation to get it right. The style of my novel is abbreviated. I write a couple pages, then go back and delete extraneous words. It doesn't mean I'm killing my word count. I've checked, the loss is nominal but as far as I'm concerned, each word counts more than word count.
Don't delete. Ever. If you hate it, turn it white. If you really hate it, c/p it into a different document for glancing at later, but still count it in your word count.
Who knows? If you look at it later, it might not be nearly as bad? ^^
Use the songs to help you write something. Helps if you listen to songs that are... Closer in tone-ish to what you're writing? I mean, it's kind of difficult to find a way to USE Aqua's "Happy Boys And Girls" in a noir-crime novel that you're writing...
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That right there is my problem. :) I keep falling behind because I'm always on YouTube looking up songs that fit well with my characters and what I'm writing. It helps me get to know my characters, but I can't stop looking up more, more, more and actually WRITE them. :D The only thing that is saving me from totally loosing myself in YouTube is my slow computer. Thank heavens for my slow desktop! *hugs*
I discovered the playlists on Youtube. You can find them often in the suggestions with what you just lisened to. They often have a lot of the artist, and then some other stuff too. I would choose a playlist and sometimes play it over and over again while I write. They are the same each time, so I stop listening to the words, and just let it block everything else out. A couple years ago was Bjork, the next year Phil Collins, and a Japanese music playlist (Japanese culture was an influence). I've yet to find this year's.
I program to death metal. It took me years to discover its appropriateness for my brain. So you never know what's going to work! I suggest iTunes on random for a little while if you are going to take too much time finding it. :D
All of the songs running through my head these days are completely wrong for writing my novel. It's hopeless. ._.p
I use Pandora, so if I find a song or artist that fits, I can make a "station" based on that and it will play similar music without me having to go to youtube all the time. Sometimes it can't be helped, but usually having Pandora play "Music like the Killers" in the background works.
DON'T DELETE ANYTHING.... EVER!! Thats what editing is for... I'm serious, look at my word count for a moment. Now consider this, last year I was 30,000 word in not 20'000. I feel like I'm beating my head into a brick wall until my gray matter and little bits of skull are splattered all over said wall!! I hate my story, it's trite and cliché. I hate my characters, they are boring and average (not a mary-sue in sight thank god!) I hate it and I hate my self for writing it. BUT I'm on par and when this is all over I can go back and make it all better. Thats how NaNoWriMo works
Exactly. And that's how the writing process works (in general)...you gotta draft it all out and then revising is molding the clay. Maybe if you're writing more slowly you can take the time to consider deletions and editing as you go, but with only 30 days to churn out 50,000 words, I think energy and brain power is better spent moving the story ahead and getting it all out. A brain dump, if you will.
I had the same problem. I disconnected my main computer from the internet entirely and made my boyfriend take my laptop home with him so I wouldn't be tempted to hop on the wifi. I've also found it helps to switch your music. If you've been listening to roughly the same sort of play list for a while try something completely different, it'll change your tempo and affect your character's moods.
Music is definately the way to do it. I have lots of songs on my ipod and favorited it on youtube. So if I want to work on a certain section of my piece, like when my poor precious character gets mauled by a wolf and his bestest friend discovers him. So I try to line up the music with what I want to work on, sit and just chill. I let my mind just go with the flow of the music, the way the words weave. It's just wonderful. Just wonderful for me.
I agree with changing the music, it honestly does help. For me, I like to listen to nature sounds rather than music because I'm less tempted to sing along. (I use naturesoundsfor.me) Once I get singing it's impossible to get my fingers moving again. Also, sometimes working with a mood for your music also helps. If it's a dark stormy night, don't be listening to happy dance music. :]
Also, when I get distracted with my websites I find that it helps to keep myself logged out instead of checking the "Keep me Logged In" box. If you have to do a little bit of work to get browsing, it's easier to catch yourself.
I do this too. I LOVE the natural sounds playlists on youtube, the sound of waves gently crashing against the shore or a heavy rainfall is so relaxing. I do this for my university work, too, I even have hour long mp3s on my player :)
I listen to midnight syndicate- all instrumental. They are the creators of the "official d&d soundtrack." It may sound corny, but I found that on my husband's computer, and it is edgy and dramatic, just enough to keep you awake, but not distracting enough to take you away from your writing. There are also lots of random elements in it, like footsteps, muttered "chanting" in the background, even screams, laughing, weeping. It is great writing music! It is meant to be played in the background of dungeons and dragons games to try to keep players in character (always a futile effort), but it works much better for this!
OMG do you have the Dark Masquerade CD with Destiny Beard singing? She made lyrics to 6 songs, and is the daughter of the awesomoe fantasy artist Ed Beard Jr. [I met them] Buy it, now.
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I've been listening to the playlists on stereomood. You select the mood you are/want to be in, and there's a playlist corresponding. I love it - most of the music I've never heard before and most of it isn't mainstream and unobtrusive, if you pick the right adjective! :)
I absolutely agree with disconnecting the internet. I usually don't even run music through the computer. I've started listening to CD's again. You're very right about the choice of music affecting the work. I've been listening to a handful of careful selected albums and it's made a big difference.
Just write! Stop thinking about what you're writing. Don't worry if it all comes out wrong.
As Hemingway said: 'Get it writ... then get it right.'
You simply have to switch off your mobile phone . It's a curse of modern life (yes, it is... we always lived without them before, and plenty of people still do). As Stephen King said: 'You don't own a cell phone... the cell phone owns YOU.' But only if you let it.
Imagine that you are sitting at a job, where you can't use a mobile or iPod or the internet, and you have to do a certain amount before you can go home.
If you really are blocked... go for a walk where you won't get distracted (leave the phone at home!!!). Or read a book. You have to read in order to write. They go hand in glove. Read short stories. Read Anne Lamott's brilliant writing book 'Bird by Bird' (it's on Amazon).
Watch an inspiring DVD. 'Finding Forrester' is an excellent one. Watch that and you'll want to write!
*Sighs* I'm in a rut too. :/ It hit me like a sack of potaoes, my characters are too perfect. I cant stand them. Now i dont know what to write. I write 1 sentance stare blanky at my screen think about how i would much rather be writing the other story that has been in head.. its freakin' awesome. not so kiddy. I get lost on youtube write another sentance check word count nano forums.............. repeat *face palm* hate it.
give your characters some flaws!!! that's what i had to do. its the only way to make them interesting really,who cares about a perfect person? we love people because they are manic, emotional, and full of imperfections. :)
Or, if you really want to write the other story, introduce those characters and have them take over everything. Then, after nano, edit that earlier part out and stick it somewhere else in case you need it again.
Try the "request a character" thread in the adoption agency. Fill out the profile thingumabob, and ask for a flaw or two, that really helped me see my MC in a new light. I really suck at thinking up flaws that fit my characters, so to have someone with a different perspective come up with a few instead, was Awesome.
Rid yourself of all distractions and jump ahead in your novel -- write a scene you're really looking foreward to and set a timer for yourself. Try doing some word wars and you will get past it eventually.
I have that problem! What I do to get over it is just write, write, write. No natter how trite (unintentional rhyming) it may come out. Just write your story. Don't spend time trying to think of the most amazing way to describe how said character felt when said villain took everything... Or whatever. Once you slammed out a bunch of words at the end, go back and refine, delete, add, and have fun taking a thesaurus to the words that just don't sound right.
Also what I did to help understand my characters better is I literally wrote a monologue for each of them. From their point of view like they were telling me what's up with them.
Ex; My name is Joe. I was born, I live, I started this crazy thing called NaNo and I don't know what's going to happen... Blah blah ... Hopefully you have a better monologue than that.
I am so with you! I have a note book that i carry around to write in but i just have not even had to urge to write. then typing i am like meh, To Tumblr, twitter, facebook. We need to find ways to bribe ourselves to write! I say coffee, candy, even sleep.
I bribe myself with fanfiction, but it's a slippery slope. It helps that my laptop doesn't get internet at all, so when I write outside of the house, I don't have the distractions.
Like set yourself a drabble "two pages where these two people talk about fishing" but the two in question have nothing to do with NaNoWriMo. That can help. (shrug)
25,000+ words, I think you are doing great!!!!! Unlike some of us who are falling behind. You've done great up to this point, it's a temporary middle-muddle event. Just hang in there. :-)
Turn off the computer (or maybe just the monitor).
Create a playlist of songs that make you think of your story, your characters, etc. and let it randomize.
Pick up an old #2 pencil and write a scene on some notebook paper or, better, unlined printer paper or an old sketch pad which will give you more freedom to wriggle.
There are three reasons a different medium can help: 1. Typing looks nice on the computer; legible fonts, clean white background, and a spell checker that notifies you the instant something isn't up to par. This can break flow and make you feel like your rough draft needs to look as nice as the printing.
2. Switching to an offline medium makes it difficult to nit pick over your word count. Squiggling handwriting and uneven lines can make it difficult to even gauge where you're at. This is a positive thing because rather than pining and pushing after every individual word, you stop only when the scene finishes naturally or inspiration drifts off.
3. It's more difficult to erase your work when it's down on paper. I know, you still CAN erase things, and maybe that's for the better, but it's not nearly as easy or as tempting as the backspace bar.
I had been doing something like 500 words per day (terrible, I know). One day, I had a conversation between characters come to mind at a weird time and I ended up writing it out on scratch computer paper. I typed it up later and discovered I had written over 800 words without breaking a sweat. That's peanuts to some people, but for me it's significant improvement. The fact that it didn't FEEL like a struggle made all the difference in the world.
Handwritten is the way to go! You can get more comfortable with your work. Snuggling up with your notebook and pencil really beats sitting uncomfortably in front of a computer. Then there is the option of going outside too.
Typing is just a pain, and it is hard on the eyes.
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my rut is this: go on to mail, fb then pandora. tumbs up the song playing and go check the procrastination station look at the nanotoons write a lot. after song is done looke at next song. thumbs up/down depending. look at what ive written. rewrite. update word count. stare at the screen blankly, coming up with a name. write a few more words. get kicked off. repeat next time I get on
I try to think of this a little like homework, and promise myself a treat if I reach my word goal for the day and an extra treat if I get past it. Maybe your Internet surfings should be your treat. I, too, have encountered the 'I really WANT to write, but just can't get the words out' thing, and upon closer examination, have actually found the cause to be what I call "chronological thinking." I get all wrapped up in making my story go from beginning to end and then I get totally stuck when I reach a point in the story I'm just not that interested in writing. I have taken to writing only 'scenes' in the story, so that I'm essentially only writing the 'meat' and leaving the boring veggies at the edge of the plate for last. It seems to help.
FYI if you happen to be an iPad user, Write or Die has an app out now, and there is another fantastic app by DenVog called 'Index Card' that is great for the 'scene writing' method I talked about. Scrivener is also VERY cool if stick with a laptop or desktop.
My last suggestion--and then I promise to let you go away and write--is to grab a pen and paper and go old school. If you're not on the computer, you can't use any of those nifty trinkets and toys. However, DO NOT transcribe your own work. It'll make you incredibly susceptible to editing. Go find an unsuspecting friend or family member to transcribe for you and keep you abreast of the word count.
I change the backgroud of my word document to different colors every once in a while so i don't get bored of looking at something that is so plain. Sometimes it helps and sometimes it doesnt, but its worth a try.
It really helps me to have something really unexpected happen in the book that has nothing to do with the storyline. I haven't hit that point this year, but last year, (as morbid as this is) the main character beat something to death with a shovel (I believe it was suggested by someone to me then when I was in a rut myself). Again, I know it's dark, but sometimes, it can be just what your brain needs to reboot itself: just a mild distraction from the main story to do something fun/weird/morbid, then back to the point with a fresher outlook.
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This makes me smile, because just a few hours ago I made my MC kill someone (stabbing them in the eye, kinda) to save the guy she mutually hates. It's like a golden gem I found that makes my plot actually work. :D
One thing I've found that works well for me is to open up a separate document and write something else over there. For example, if I'm stuck on a scene where my MC is just kind of sitting around with some friends and I can't think of what I want them to say, I open another word document and work a little on that exciting fast-paced aerial battle to the death that comes in later, or maybe write down a few lines that I want to include somewhere later in the novel. That way, you're still adding to your story, just not in chronological order. when it comes time for whatever little gemstone you've been polishing in that separate document to be used, just copy and paste it into place, and tada! back on track with your riveting plot. or if your wanting a little break but are really jonsing for some words and dont have any plot bunnies hiding off in the distance, pick a page, a FULL page, you've already written and add 1-3 words to every sentence on that page. your average page will have about 4-8 paragraphs on it, the average paragraph is 100 words. Theres 400-2400 words right there, and as you add and edit, you may find some tiny detail you added subconsiously that can be a major M Night Shamalan plot twist later. And as many other people have suggested, WriteOrDie really comes in handy. Set it on something low at first, maybe 100 words in 10 minutes. Then, as you start to get more ideas forming, up the level until you're typing away furiously until you reach your daily 1667 (or more if like me, you're behind). Hope this helps!
oh cycles, how I despise thee. mine pretty much goes: write 100 words go on tumblr for an hour have mental conversation with my characters in which they yell at me for not writing tumblr. write. check word count update word count tumblr
I give myself little challenges, just something a little quirky, and then when I meet that challenge, I will reward myself by going to google+ or twitter or even to another site.
You have plenty of padding. Stop. Before you start your next session, disable your internet. I know, it is a big step and on the laptop I am using now, I am not sure how to do it. But if twitter is taking you away from such a well done word count, feed twitter to the shoulder vulture.
I am having a hard time with time. Every time I can get to the keyboard, i feel like the story writes itself.. But with work and life happening around me, I often am falling asleep by the time I can get a minute to write.
I find myself writing a scene or two as a memory of a character or a past event that I mentioned. It gets me writing again and back into the head of my character and helps me understand where they are coming from.
Don't be afraid to change POV or a scene or a chapter or a WC. Heck, sometimes I'll write in poetry for a while to get my head back into what I am writing. Also, change the place you write. I started sitting in my bed instead of at my desk and I find I reach my goal much quicker.
Just sit your little self down and start your engine. Promise yourself fifteen minutes and don't quit regardless of earthquake or flood. Then keep going and stop when you DON't want to. Always stop in the flow or words and you'll condition yourself to want more. If you quit when you're stuck, you'll always do just that.
Take two characters to a park setting. Describe all the scents, sounds and vibrations of the park. Then get the two into a major argument. Have them show their anger in body language. Get in all the details!
Then move them to a cafe to make up and add tastes and textures. Describe the crumbs on the plate and raisins in the muffin.
I was stuck and checking twitter, email, etc instead of writing. Then I found @NaNoWordSprints. It has been a lifesaver. There are short term challenges. Write about glitter getting everywhere. Add a spork to your story. Write about someone misunderstanding something the read. Each sprint is 5, 10, 15, sometimes 20 minutes and trying to include the challenge is a lot of fun. I had just started writing a character with irrational fear when the challenge was to use the word-marshmallow-. I mow have a guy who caused an accident running into the street because someone asked for cocoa with marshmallow at cafe where he was eating lunch. If checking twitter is cutting into your writing time, be sure to follow @nanoWordSprints
Write 5 words. Reread those 5 words, 10 times. Check Facebook Check NaNoWriMo Check Foursquare Reread the 5 words, again. Refresh Facebook Read CNN.com Whine about how I don't have a plot Whine about how i don't like my characters Repeat
Give yourself incentives. Close twitter and every other tab in your internet browser. Make yourself write 250 words - a nice, small number you can hit easily. Once you write those 250 words, let yourself on twitter for the duration of whatever song just started on your media player, or five minutes, or only check a certain number (say, 10) of tweets. Then go back to writing and do it again.
This is good advice. We always hear about novelists who sit in one place and forgo trips to the restroom until their novel is born, fully formed but I have yet to see any tangible of evidence of the process actually working that way. Every little bit is another little bit. I've tried setting page quotas. I'm working on two different novels. The quota is five pages for one and it seems I either exceed the quota or write nothing. The other, the language is much more demanding and if I add 500 solid words a day, I consider it a blessing.
Haha.. what I reallllyyy want to write! haha! thats a good one. I reallllyyy want to write my other story: Adrian.. ah its so freakin' awesome.. :/ thats what i want to write.
I know that feeling! My paper and ink child was stuck, and I finally figured out how to fix it... On October 31. So not fair! And I'm half way through editing my completed novel too... Then November arrived. My NaNo mess is a tangle of nonlinear narration that I've been throwing words at all month... But while Laura is dealing with boyfriend drama and growing up to be a single mom (totally boring to write!), Tiro's still stuck in a cave trying to figure out what the heck is going on, and I'm DYING to just hurry up and give him his powers so he can go save the day!
Only one problem with that, my story although preordained is changing on me. I've added a character a few chapters, put my main character in the hospital instead of hanging out and writing(important piece he needs to think about different situations). So I can't really move on to a further chapter because it's all gonna change I know it will. It's been preordained 0.o
I have to actually close the tab to Facebook to keep myself writing on my novel. If I catch myself doing something other than writing and I have the thought that I need to write--I'll tell myself on FB: Going to write. And then make sure you log off and actually open up your story and type something.
A lot of NaNo is just having the gumption to sit and write through the tough, rough, and agonizingly slow parts of the novel. But it does get better. If it's a really slow part, turn on some music. Or reward yourself with every 100 words you write, go and check twitter or some such. Or just skip the slow scenes and power through the really fun, interesting scenes that you envision your novel having.
Although, I was complaining about how much I didn't want to write a boring scene that I HAD to write, for character development purposes, when my dad (who doesn't support my NaNoWriMo writing) said, "Why not make it interesting then?" ...and now my moody contemplating character is getting snuck up on and captured (only to find out it was her guard she escaped from who decided to teach her a lesson on running away), instead of lying on the lawn moping and contemplating life.
I deactivated my FB account for the next few days so I can get through not only catching up on my NaNo word count, but also my 2 huge research papers I have due next week for school.
I changed my facebook password to something ridiculously long, then logged out. I will only allow myself to go on FB with my phone. Typing a thousand character password on the touch pad? No thanks. It's working so far lmao
Sometimes I do something that takes my mind off of the novel. I go outside and sit down peacefully and let my mind wander. It can think about whatever it wants to and I'll just follow it. Sudden inspiration is sometimes there, sometimes you gotta admit your stumped and find a dare to do (You can always erase it during December).
I also found that listening to relaxing music and doing a bubble bath gets creative juices flowing because your brain is no longer working in over drive. Also what I'd do is that I'd think of the scene you last wrote and really think about it, picture it in your mind, repeat the dialogue and who knows? You might just revise it to make it wordier. You might even be lucky enough to add another character.
Some days you just need the pressure off. Write something, even if it's just a few hundred words, and tell yourself that that's okay for just today (but just today!). Or stop looking at the word count, and think of your goal in terms of story points instead. "I'll write until MC gets out of this room," or "I'll write until the conversation's over."
Download that, install it, then set up a 15 minute timer. Press go, then write till timer goes off, reset timer, go play time wasters till timer rings, then reset and write. Rinse and repeat.
I'm in a rut too. Today, however, I am determined to write myself out of this rut, no matter how much writing it takes. I won't let myself fall behind this year!
Check out the Dare Machine on the Young Writer's Program website! (http://ywp.nanowrimo.org/) But be careful ... it's a huge time suck. :) Make a pledge to use the first dare you get.
The first Dare I got was absoloutley perfect for my novel! How lucky is that!
I thought I was doing vey well at managing my distractions. Since the start of November I have only been on Facebook for less than 15 minutes and I have not been on Tumblr at all (how on earth have I managed that!)
Hwever I am miles behind! I do not know exactly how this happened I just crept up on me. The only reason I can think of for being so far behind is the ever growing mountain of homework I am being given which I am forced to do during my writing time as I have no spare time at luchtime at school.
I was sitting there going "Nah, nah, nah...." And then this came up. We dare you to create a romance between your antagonist and your protagonist's sister. I read it twice. And then I was extremely scarred for life. She's ten. He's 40 something and a high school teacher. EWWW!
This was drawn while procrastinating on university work a few years ago, but I think it's relevant here as well. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v474/Tosaiko/writingflow.jpg
For more helpful advice: try to turn off your brain and write anyway. It doesn't matter if all that comes out is "He sat down. He looked around. There was a window. It was sunny outside." As long as you get something down there, you're moving, and building up momentum is the key to making it work again.
Alternatively, something my father once suggested is writing until you have no ideas, even if that's only one word, then stopping, thinking about the problem for a moment, and then ignoring it completely. Do a crossword puzzle. Play a game of Solitaire. Not Twitter, because that's too distracting, but something which will take up your brain for a few minutes. Don't feel guilty about it, put all thoughts that you "should" be working to one side. Once that's done, return to the writing and have another go. The theory is that your unconscious has been puzzling it out while you were otherwise occupied, reducing some of that stress which comes when you try to push yourself into it and letting the writing continue more easily.
Whatever you end up doing, best of luck! There's a lot of good advice here, and everyone wants to help you win. You can do it.
You can set up a word goal and a Timer, and it gives you a web page to write in. And if you stop writing, it does things. The easy mode brings up dialogue boxes that are very sweet, like "shouldn't you go back to writing?". The middle ground plays loud sounds when you stop. (Like Rickrolling or Babies crying. Oh god the babies.) It stops when you start writing again. The hard mode (Kamikaze mode) actually begins to erase your words if you leave it too long. It keeps me writing even when I don't want to. :D
1. Absolutely unplug from the internet and all its evils. It's worse than TV.
2. Absolutely don't bring a book or magazine or your calendar or blackberry etc/etc/etc along, if you're writing away from home.
3. Absolutely don't look at the screen while you're writing! I am working on a Neo, which is just a little word processor with a tiny screen and no internet capability. So it has no distractions, which is good. But it also has a screen that is just an inch above the keyboard, and if I look at the screen, I start editing. So I try not to even look at my fingers on the keyboard, and instead look around, look out the window, look at the wall. My fingers feel the typos as they happen, but the carrot/stick of the daily word count keeps me going. I can hit 1000 words in 30 minutes this way. Of course I usually can't do more than 30 minutes at a time this way, because it's exhausting. But even a little break can help before getting stuck in for another 30 minutes or so.
4. Absolutely don't wallow in a scene or flashback or whatever it is, if you really really really hate it or (even worse) are really really really bored with it. You can always get rid of it later, or fix it later. If you can't figure out how to change to another scene in a way that makes sense, just change it abruptly, like saying "But meanwhile, elsewhere, this other thing was happening:..." Again, you can always fix it later.
5. Absolutely just write anyway, without worrying about how to get out of the rut. I know this has been said a million times, but I swear it actually works. I can't make myself outline a plot and can barely sketch out characters ahead of time; all I started with for this month was an idea about what might happen to a certain type of character. Almost every time I approach a writing session, I have no idea what is going to happen next, and have no idea how I can move the plot along or make something interesting happen, and no idea how I might possibly get any ideas at all for the rest of my life. And every single time, the physical act of writing/typing brings the ideas out. (Does anyone else have this experience?)
6. Also -- I like the previous post about giving yourself plot point goals, like just keep writing until the end of this conversation, or until the MC leaves the room, etc.
Is it possible to weave in a subplot or two? I blazed through my outline, so I'm going back through and weaving in a few paragraphs here and there. It's turning out really well, actually, I finished writing a section yesterday and then read the next part and found it totally fit!
Take the laptop and drive out of town, somewhere you can't get internet. Put your favorite goodie on the seat next to you. Now, look at it. Drool a little. But, don't touch it until you've writting pages and pages about the torture of the longed for but just out of reach desires of your MC.
okay so far my novel is just and introduction and right now i have a character recovering from a concussion, a messy roommate and impending job interview...
Quick, throw a rattlesnake under the bed, a naked woman with amnesia in the closet, prop a shovel of death in the hall way, and then discover the MC can only get that job if he figures out how to get out of his room alive!
Don''t think - write!!!! I started off with simply a vision of a girl dreaming about her dead twin sister, and went from there... now I have vampyres (odd spelling intentional), three love interests, and a desperate search to find a missing sister... and I don't even know how it's going to end (who knows - maybe they'll all just go to the circus :P).
I just think "what should happen right NOW" and suddenly five teenagers are on a beach, talking about their futures. They didn't even live near a beach until then!!
Just write, and (hopefully) the plot with magically form it'self.... :P
One thing that has helped me is to write in chapters. I try to write a chapter each day. This way, I’m not worrying about word count or the time – I just focus on the goal of reaching the end of the chapter. Sometimes they’re 1,200 words, sometimes 2,200.
Periodically I take a legal pad to a fastfood restaurant and spend some time making a basic outline of the next 10 or 20 chapters. This is a very simple timeline that lists the main characters in the chapter and a few words about the scene. I don’t hold myself to creating the chapters in that order, but it does help me develop an overall picture of what is to come.
Sometimes I’ll have a transition chapter that is tough to write, so I start writing dialog between the characters. It is amazing how often this dialog inspires ideas of how to take that chapter to the next one.
Also, as much as possible I try to sit outside to write. This keeps me away from distractions.
Take a deep breath. If your fingers aren't moving on the keyboard or planning how to move on the keyboard, take them off. Step back, close your eyes, and breathe for a few minutes. If that doesn't clear your mind, put on some music (my recommendation: "The Old Ways" by Loreena McKennitt) kick off your shoes, and dance. Go until the end of the song, then sit down and bang out a paragraph. It can be full of purple prose or a few sparse lines of dialogue, but get it out anyway. Repeat as necessary.
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So I'm in a rut. I have stuff I need to write and even want to write, but it never progresses past the "type one word on paper and then check twitter for hours" stage. And like I gave myself a plot and characters and all that cool jazz but my fingers just won't work.
How do I get past this? Everything was going so well until today :-(
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im on this cycle to but its
check itunes on what songs coming on next
check nonowrimo
look at page blankly
write a few lines
word count
deleat most of what was just typed
repeat
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My cycle is EXACTLY like that!
What helps me sometimes is going someplace public (Panera, Starbucks, etc.) If I'm out and about on my computer I refuse to go on FB, Twitter, or any other social networking site because I am paranoid that the person I whose profile I happen to be looking at will catch me. Crazy, I know, but it helps.
Also, Write or Die has been my go to website for writers block (this year and last year). It helps to get the words out and flowing and you discover something new about your character that you never realized before.
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I just looked up Write or Die, because it sounded familiar but I didn't know what it was, and . . . wow. Thank you for mentioning it! Thanks to you, Miss Howes, I think I've found the tool to keep me going when my characters are boring and my plot gets stuck in the mud.
And don't worry, you're not aone; I feel similarly paranoid about going on "fun" sites like Facebook when not on at home. :-p
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I'd forgotten about Write or Die. THANKS SO MUCH!!!
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that is the greatest thing I've ever heard of! I just downloaded the write or die desktop and I'm already loving it. Especially since I'm so behind everyone ):
I started late!
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I don't know that I have ever heard of this site. Thanks for the tip. :)
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Oh my goodness. Write or Die helped me a lot! I was in a huge rut that I couldn't break and it definatly got me out!
Thanks again!
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I am going in with a plan, as in write in segments, write in scriverner Trial for windows, and stick to the plan no matter how horrible it feels. I have done 2000 words today because of it, also use whatever method you see fit to get you writing it can be amazingly inspirational.
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I like this plan. I was chugging along quite well until this past week, and all of a sudden the story isn't exciting, I don't know what to write next, and it feels less fun. So I think next week I will just try skipping to the good stuff and writing segments instead of worrying about writing anything resembling a coherent narrative with transitions and moving characters clearly through time and space. Maybe if I focus on some of the fun scenes it will re-energize me. I want to try Scrivener but I haven't made my way through the tutorial yet...
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Write or Die is awesome! Thanks for mentioning it! I had never heard of it. I set the web app to kamikaze and wrote about 600 words in half an hour. Not bad after two days of nothing.
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Thank you SO MUCH for the write or die idea. I had never heard of it. I spent a couple of hours cranking out a thousand words in a coffee shop this afternoon, but trying that out tonight, I did another thousand in 30 minutes! :D
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Wow, thank you! This has already helps my creative juices flow tonight! Thanks
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WOW!! Thanks for the write or die mention, I had no idea it even existed! It was a nice confidence booster, the 1st time I tried using it I entered 500 words in 15mins, 17 mins later I had over 900 words! I didn't think I could get that much out in such a short time frame! Thanks again!!
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Write or Die sounds fabulous, thank you for the tip. ANYthing to get past these lulls that can seem hopeless!
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Thanks heaps for the Write or Die idea, I just used that and pushed out 600 words in 15 minutes! Fantastic idea!
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Wow, Write or Die, what a cool tool. It was just the kick in the pants that I needed. Thanks for sharing!
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There's also Written? Kitten! if Write or Die refuses to work on your computer.
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I'd say that you should never delete what you write. If you don't like it, you should cross it out (Microsoft Word has a button for that) and start over. That way, you don't have to continue writing something you hate, but you can still count the words.
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I can't agree with not deleting, though I do think it's something that should be done carefully, word count aside. (I'm sorry but if you are a serious writer and intent on writing something of quality, there are more important things than word count.)
When I started my novel, I absolutely hated the first page I wrote. I took a deep breath, deleted it and remember something I scribbled in a journal a week earlier. It ended up being the first page of my novel and from there, I took off running. Had I not deleted that first page, I would likely still be hating it and the novel would be a monstrous, stunted thing I would force myself to work on and my disdain for it would show.
That said, don't delete something just because it doesn't fit into something you're writing write now. Be as organized as possible. I keep each chapter in separate documents and when something doesn't fit, I copy/paste it to a new document and assign it a subject based file name, (i.e. dog pound chapter,) so I can refer back to it when I reach a point where it could be useful. Those misplaced parts often have to be either trimmed or expanded but sometimes they really do just drop nicely into another chapter.
There's a lot of argument over the virtue of editing while writing. I do it but I consider each edit carefully. If the voice of the work is somewhat stylized, it can take some experimentation to get it right. The style of my novel is abbreviated. I write a couple pages, then go back and delete extraneous words. It doesn't mean I'm killing my word count. I've checked, the loss is nominal but as far as I'm concerned, each word counts more than word count.
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Don't delete. Ever. If you hate it, turn it white. If you really hate it, c/p it into a different document for glancing at later, but still count it in your word count.
Who knows? If you look at it later, it might not be nearly as bad? ^^
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I agree, NEVER delete, just write the bloody thing!
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i do the same.
first i type
then change the song on itunes
go on nanowrimo
change the song
write another hundred words
then read
update wordcount
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LOL I have that same problem but it's on the Dungeons and Dragons website. xD
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No, no, no!
NO DELETING!
Yeah I'm doing that too lmao.
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Use the songs to help you write something. Helps if you listen to songs that are... Closer in tone-ish to what you're writing?
I mean, it's kind of difficult to find a way to USE Aqua's "Happy Boys And Girls" in a noir-crime novel that you're writing...
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That right there is my problem. :) I keep falling behind because I'm always on YouTube looking up songs that fit well with my characters and what I'm writing. It helps me get to know my characters, but I can't stop looking up more, more, more and actually WRITE them. :D The only thing that is saving me from totally loosing myself in YouTube is my slow computer. Thank heavens for my slow desktop! *hugs*
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I discovered the playlists on Youtube. You can find them often in the suggestions with what you just lisened to. They often have a lot of the artist, and then some other stuff too. I would choose a playlist and sometimes play it over and over again while I write. They are the same each time, so I stop listening to the words, and just let it block everything else out.
A couple years ago was Bjork, the next year Phil Collins, and a Japanese music playlist (Japanese culture was an influence). I've yet to find this year's.
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I program to death metal. It took me years to discover its appropriateness for my brain. So you never know what's going to work! I suggest iTunes on random for a little while if you are going to take too much time finding it. :D
All of the songs running through my head these days are completely wrong for writing my novel. It's hopeless. ._.p
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I imagined by novel was a movie and then made a mix to be the soundtrack. This helped me A LOT.
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I use Pandora, so if I find a song or artist that fits, I can make a "station" based on that and it will play similar music without me having to go to youtube all the time. Sometimes it can't be helped, but usually having Pandora play "Music like the Killers" in the background works.
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stop deleting dear lomily! make it white in the color button, use the strikethough, but don't edit! delete when november is over.
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DON'T DELETE ANYTHING.... EVER!! Thats what editing is for... I'm serious, look at my word count for a moment. Now consider this, last year I was 30,000 word in not 20'000. I feel like I'm beating my head into a brick wall until my gray matter and little bits of skull are splattered all over said wall!! I hate my story, it's trite and cliché. I hate my characters, they are boring and average (not a mary-sue in sight thank god!) I hate it and I hate my self for writing it. BUT I'm on par and when this is all over I can go back and make it all better. Thats how NaNoWriMo works
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Exactly. And that's how the writing process works (in general)...you gotta draft it all out and then revising is molding the clay. Maybe if you're writing more slowly you can take the time to consider deletions and editing as you go, but with only 30 days to churn out 50,000 words, I think energy and brain power is better spent moving the story ahead and getting it all out. A brain dump, if you will.
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I had the same problem. I disconnected my main computer from the internet entirely and made my boyfriend take my laptop home with him so I wouldn't be tempted to hop on the wifi. I've also found it helps to switch your music. If you've been listening to roughly the same sort of play list for a while try something completely different, it'll change your tempo and affect your character's moods.
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Really good advice about changing music. I'll try this :)
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Totally unrelated, but I love your nano username :)
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I wholeheartedly agree. Let's just hope you won't double-cross us and leave us on the drift.
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I CONCUR ALSO
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I CONCUR
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Music is definately the way to do it. I have lots of songs on my ipod and favorited it on youtube. So if I want to work on a certain section of my piece, like when my poor precious character gets mauled by a wolf and his bestest friend discovers him. So I try to line up the music with what I want to work on, sit and just chill. I let my mind just go with the flow of the music, the way the words weave. It's just wonderful. Just wonderful for me.
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If you've disconnected yourself from the internet . . . how are you on the forums?
Hmmmmmmmm?
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I reconnect once I've finished my daily words.
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I agree with changing the music, it honestly does help. For me, I like to listen to nature sounds rather than music because I'm less tempted to sing along. (I use naturesoundsfor.me) Once I get singing it's impossible to get my fingers moving again. Also, sometimes working with a mood for your music also helps. If it's a dark stormy night, don't be listening to happy dance music. :]
Also, when I get distracted with my websites I find that it helps to keep myself logged out instead of checking the "Keep me Logged In" box. If you have to do a little bit of work to get browsing, it's easier to catch yourself.
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I do this too. I LOVE the natural sounds playlists on youtube, the sound of waves gently crashing against the shore or a heavy rainfall is so relaxing. I do this for my university work, too, I even have hour long mp3s on my player :)
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I listen to midnight syndicate- all instrumental. They are the creators of the "official d&d soundtrack." It may sound corny, but I found that on my husband's computer, and it is edgy and dramatic, just enough to keep you awake, but not distracting enough to take you away from your writing. There are also lots of random elements in it, like footsteps, muttered "chanting" in the background, even screams, laughing, weeping. It is great writing music! It is meant to be played in the background of dungeons and dragons games to try to keep players in character (always a futile effort), but it works much better for this!
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OMG do you have the Dark Masquerade CD with Destiny Beard singing?
She made lyrics to 6 songs, and is the daughter of the awesomoe fantasy artist Ed Beard Jr. [I met them]
Buy it, now.
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Sweet, I'll have to look that up!
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I've been listening to the playlists on stereomood. You select the mood you are/want to be in, and there's a playlist corresponding. I love it - most of the music I've never heard before and most of it isn't mainstream and unobtrusive, if you pick the right adjective! :)
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I absolutely agree with disconnecting the internet. I usually don't even run music through the computer. I've started listening to CD's again. You're very right about the choice of music affecting the work. I've been listening to a handful of careful selected albums and it's made a big difference.
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Just write! Stop thinking about what you're writing. Don't worry if it all comes out wrong.
As Hemingway said: 'Get it writ... then get it right.'
You simply have to switch off your mobile phone . It's a curse of modern life (yes, it is... we always lived without them before, and plenty of people still do). As Stephen King said: 'You don't own a cell phone... the cell phone owns YOU.' But only if you let it.
Imagine that you are sitting at a job, where you can't use a mobile or iPod or the internet, and you have to do a certain amount before you can go home.
If you really are blocked... go for a walk where you won't get distracted (leave the phone at home!!!). Or read a book. You have to read in order to write. They go hand in glove. Read short stories. Read Anne Lamott's brilliant writing book 'Bird by Bird' (it's on Amazon).
Watch an inspiring DVD. 'Finding Forrester' is an excellent one. Watch that and you'll want to write!
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I second Bird by Bird. Who cares how good the words are when they come out? Everyone has shitty first drafts.
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Love love love Bird by Bird - definitely a great one to read right now.
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*Sighs* I'm in a rut too. :/ It hit me like a sack of potaoes, my characters are too perfect. I cant stand them. Now i dont know what to write.
I write 1 sentance
stare blanky at my screen
think about how i would much rather be writing the other story that has been in head.. its freakin' awesome. not so kiddy.
I get lost on youtube
write another sentance
check word count
nano forums..............
repeat
*face palm* hate it.
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give your characters some flaws!!! that's what i had to do. its the only way to make them interesting really,who cares about a perfect person? we love people because they are manic, emotional, and full of imperfections. :)
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Or, if you really want to write the other story, introduce those characters and have them take over everything. Then, after nano, edit that earlier part out and stick it somewhere else in case you need it again.
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Cool! Thanks!
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Try the "request a character" thread in the adoption agency. Fill out the profile thingumabob, and ask for a flaw or two, that really helped me see my MC in a new light. I really suck at thinking up flaws that fit my characters, so to have someone with a different perspective come up with a few instead, was Awesome.
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Thanks! Good idea!
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Welcome to Week 2. :|
Rid yourself of all distractions and jump ahead in your novel -- write a scene you're really looking foreward to and set a timer for yourself. Try doing some word wars and you will get past it eventually.
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I have that problem! What I do to get over it is just write, write, write. No natter how trite (unintentional rhyming) it may come out. Just write your story. Don't spend time trying to think of the most amazing way to describe how said character felt when said villain took everything... Or whatever. Once you slammed out a bunch of words at the end, go back and refine, delete, add, and have fun taking a thesaurus to the words that just don't sound right.
Also what I did to help understand my characters better is I literally wrote a monologue for each of them. From their point of view like they were telling me what's up with them.
Ex; My name is Joe. I was born, I live, I started this crazy thing called NaNo and I don't know what's going to happen... Blah blah ... Hopefully you have a better monologue than that.
Good luck!!!
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Monologues - good idea. That'll be one of my next writing exercises. Thanks!
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Go on itunes. Set your playlist to either sad or happy. Whatever mood you're feeling like and write. That's what always gets me.
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I am so with you! I have a note book that i carry around to write in but i just have not even had to urge to write. then typing i am like meh, To Tumblr, twitter, facebook. We need to find ways to bribe ourselves to write! I say coffee, candy, even sleep.
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Sleep as a bribe works well, as long as you don't fall face down on the keyboard trying to get there.... like I do.
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I bribe myself with fanfiction, but it's a slippery slope. It helps that my laptop doesn't get internet at all, so when I write outside of the house, I don't have the distractions.
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Try starting something fresh and unrelated?
Like set yourself a drabble "two pages where these two people talk about fishing" but the two in question have nothing to do with NaNoWriMo. That can help. (shrug)
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25,000+ words, I think you are doing great!!!!! Unlike some of us who are falling behind. You've done great up to this point, it's a temporary middle-muddle event. Just hang in there.
:-)
Suggestion from an amateur: Choose another medium
Turn off the computer (or maybe just the monitor).
Create a playlist of songs that make you think of your story, your characters, etc. and let it randomize.
Pick up an old #2 pencil and write a scene on some notebook paper or, better, unlined printer paper or an old sketch pad which will give you more freedom to wriggle.
There are three reasons a different medium can help:
1. Typing looks nice on the computer; legible fonts, clean white background, and a spell checker that notifies you the instant something isn't up to par. This can break flow and make you feel like your rough draft needs to look as nice as the printing.
2. Switching to an offline medium makes it difficult to nit pick over your word count. Squiggling handwriting and uneven lines can make it difficult to even gauge where you're at. This is a positive thing because rather than pining and pushing after every individual word, you stop only when the scene finishes naturally or inspiration drifts off.
3. It's more difficult to erase your work when it's down on paper. I know, you still CAN erase things, and maybe that's for the better, but it's not nearly as easy or as tempting as the backspace bar.
I had been doing something like 500 words per day (terrible, I know). One day, I had a conversation between characters come to mind at a weird time and I ended up writing it out on scratch computer paper. I typed it up later and discovered I had written over 800 words without breaking a sweat. That's peanuts to some people, but for me it's significant improvement. The fact that it didn't FEEL like a struggle made all the difference in the world.
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That's a really good idea, I've always loved the feel of writing on paper anyways. Thanks for the tip, totally using that ^.^)=b
Now to go quit procrastinating ^.^*
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Handwritten is the way to go! You can get more comfortable with your work. Snuggling up with your notebook and pencil really beats sitting uncomfortably in front of a computer. Then there is the option of going outside too.
Typing is just a pain, and it is hard on the eyes.
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my rut is this: go on to mail, fb then pandora.
tumbs up the song playing and go check the procrastination station
look at the nanotoons
write a lot. after song is done looke at next song. thumbs up/down depending.
look at what ive written. rewrite. update word count. stare at the screen blankly, coming up with a name.
write a few more words.
get kicked off.
repeat next time I get on
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and then, never check this thread again. so the advice I get won't matter...:(
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I try to think of this a little like homework, and promise myself a treat if I reach my word goal for the day and an extra treat if I get past it. Maybe your Internet surfings should be your treat. I, too, have encountered the 'I really WANT to write, but just can't get the words out' thing, and upon closer examination, have actually found the cause to be what I call "chronological thinking." I get all wrapped up in making my story go from beginning to end and then I get totally stuck when I reach a point in the story I'm just not that interested in writing. I have taken to writing only 'scenes' in the story, so that I'm essentially only writing the 'meat' and leaving the boring veggies at the edge of the plate for last. It seems to help.
FYI if you happen to be an iPad user, Write or Die has an app out now, and there is another fantastic app by DenVog called 'Index Card' that is great for the 'scene writing' method I talked about. Scrivener is also VERY cool if stick with a laptop or desktop.
My last suggestion--and then I promise to let you go away and write--is to grab a pen and paper and go old school. If you're not on the computer, you can't use any of those nifty trinkets and toys. However, DO NOT transcribe your own work. It'll make you incredibly susceptible to editing. Go find an unsuspecting friend or family member to transcribe for you and keep you abreast of the word count.
Happy writing!
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thanks for the tips:) hey look! I checked the thread! yay for me:)
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I change the backgroud of my word document to different colors every once in a while so i don't get bored of looking at something that is so plain. Sometimes it helps and sometimes it doesnt, but its worth a try.
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It really helps me to have something really unexpected happen in the book that has nothing to do with the storyline. I haven't hit that point this year, but last year, (as morbid as this is) the main character beat something to death with a shovel (I believe it was suggested by someone to me then when I was in a rut myself). Again, I know it's dark, but sometimes, it can be just what your brain needs to reboot itself: just a mild distraction from the main story to do something fun/weird/morbid, then back to the point with a fresher outlook.
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This makes me smile, because just a few hours ago I made my MC kill someone (stabbing them in the eye, kinda) to save the guy she mutually hates. It's like a golden gem I found that makes my plot actually work. :D
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One thing I've found that works well for me is to open up a separate document and write something else over there. For example, if I'm stuck on a scene where my MC is just kind of sitting around with some friends and I can't think of what I want them to say, I open another word document and work a little on that exciting fast-paced aerial battle to the death that comes in later, or maybe write down a few lines that I want to include somewhere later in the novel. That way, you're still adding to your story, just not in chronological order. when it comes time for whatever little gemstone you've been polishing in that separate document to be used, just copy and paste it into place, and tada! back on track with your riveting plot. or if your wanting a little break but are really jonsing for some words and dont have any plot bunnies hiding off in the distance, pick a page, a FULL page, you've already written and add 1-3 words to every sentence on that page. your average page will have about 4-8 paragraphs on it, the average paragraph is 100 words. Theres 400-2400 words right there, and as you add and edit, you may find some tiny detail you added subconsiously that can be a major M Night Shamalan plot twist later. And as many other people have suggested, WriteOrDie really comes in handy. Set it on something low at first, maybe 100 words in 10 minutes. Then, as you start to get more ideas forming, up the level until you're typing away furiously until you reach your daily 1667 (or more if like me, you're behind). Hope this helps!
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oh cycles, how I despise thee.
mine pretty much goes:
write 100 words
go on tumblr for an hour
have mental conversation with my characters in which they yell at me for not writing
tumblr.
write.
check word count
update word count
tumblr
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Try getting away from your computer and writing free hand. That might help
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I give myself little challenges, just something a little quirky, and then when I meet that challenge, I will reward myself by going to google+ or twitter or even to another site.
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You have plenty of padding. Stop. Before you start your next session, disable your internet. I know, it is a big step and on the laptop I am using now, I am not sure how to do it. But if twitter is taking you away from such a well done word count, feed twitter to the shoulder vulture.
Sally
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I am having a hard time with time. Every time I can get to the keyboard, i feel like the story writes itself.. But with work and life happening around me, I often am falling asleep by the time I can get a minute to write.
The next day off.....
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figure out your most productive time of day. Mine, for example, is at 8am and 7 pm and if I'm really moving then I can work through the midnight hour.
My biggest issue is time. Working full time takes away a lot of time from writing.
Good Luck!
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I find myself writing a scene or two as a memory of a character or a past event that I mentioned. It gets me writing again and back into the head of my character and helps me understand where they are coming from.
Don't be afraid to change POV or a scene or a chapter or a WC. Heck, sometimes I'll write in poetry for a while to get my head back into what I am writing. Also, change the place you write. I started sitting in my bed instead of at my desk and I find I reach my goal much quicker.
Just experiment.
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Just sit your little self down and start your engine. Promise yourself fifteen minutes and don't quit regardless of earthquake or flood. Then keep going and stop when you DON't want to. Always stop in the flow or words and you'll condition yourself to want more. If you quit when you're stuck, you'll always do just that.
Take two characters to a park setting. Describe all the scents, sounds and vibrations of the park. Then get the two into a major argument. Have them show their anger in body language. Get in all the details!
Then move them to a cafe to make up and add tastes and textures. Describe the crumbs on the plate and raisins in the muffin.
Just do it!
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I was stuck and checking twitter, email, etc instead of writing. Then I found @NaNoWordSprints. It has been a lifesaver. There are short term challenges. Write about glitter getting everywhere. Add a spork to your story. Write about someone misunderstanding something the read. Each sprint is 5, 10, 15, sometimes 20 minutes and trying to include the challenge is a lot of fun. I had just started writing a character with irrational fear when the challenge was to use the word-marshmallow-. I mow have a guy who caused an accident running into the street because someone asked for cocoa with marshmallow at cafe where he was eating lunch. If checking twitter is cutting into your writing time, be sure to follow @nanoWordSprints
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Oh do I feel you. For me it's the following:
Write 5 words.
Reread those 5 words, 10 times.
Check Facebook
Check NaNoWriMo
Check Foursquare
Reread the 5 words, again.
Refresh Facebook
Read CNN.com
Whine about how I don't have a plot
Whine about how i don't like my characters
Repeat
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So funny. And sadly so familiar. I would add in "Play a game of Hearts."
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Ha! Yes.
And here I am again, wasting time. Because I just HAD to check this thread. *Grin*
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I'm in a rut, too. =(
Give yourself incentives. Close twitter and every other tab in your internet browser. Make yourself write 250 words - a nice, small number you can hit easily. Once you write those 250 words, let yourself on twitter for the duration of whatever song just started on your media player, or five minutes, or only check a certain number (say, 10) of tweets. Then go back to writing and do it again.
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It specially helps if you've got a biiiiiig bag of chocolate stored somewhere nearby...
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I knew I was a Muggleborn! Your icon just proved it for me. Now, where's my letter? *Looks out the window*
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Your icon made me sad.
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I *love* your icon. A lot.
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This is good advice. We always hear about novelists who sit in one place and forgo trips to the restroom until their novel is born, fully formed but I have yet to see any tangible of evidence of the process actually working that way. Every little bit is another little bit. I've tried setting page quotas. I'm working on two different novels. The quota is five pages for one and it seems I either exceed the quota or write nothing. The other, the language is much more demanding and if I add 500 solid words a day, I consider it a blessing.
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Think first about a scene/interaction/whatever you reeealllyyyy want to write. Start on that.
In five minutes get off your computer and take a short walk. Let your mind drift for a bit.
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Haha.. what I reallllyyy want to write! haha! thats a good one. I reallllyyy want to write my other story: Adrian.. ah its so freakin' awesome.. :/ thats what i want to write.
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I know that feeling! My paper and ink child was stuck, and I finally figured out how to fix it... On October 31. So not fair! And I'm half way through editing my completed novel too... Then November arrived. My NaNo mess is a tangle of nonlinear narration that I've been throwing words at all month... But while Laura is dealing with boyfriend drama and growing up to be a single mom (totally boring to write!), Tiro's still stuck in a cave trying to figure out what the heck is going on, and I'm DYING to just hurry up and give him his powers so he can go save the day!
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Only one problem with that, my story although preordained is changing on me. I've added a character a few chapters, put my main character in the hospital instead of hanging out and writing(important piece he needs to think about different situations). So I can't really move on to a further chapter because it's all gonna change I know it will. It's been preordained 0.o
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Start a ten minute word war. With yourself.
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Oh, if NaNo had a "Like" button...
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I have to actually close the tab to Facebook to keep myself writing on my novel. If I catch myself doing something other than writing and I have the thought that I need to write--I'll tell myself on FB: Going to write. And then make sure you log off and actually open up your story and type something.
A lot of NaNo is just having the gumption to sit and write through the tough, rough, and agonizingly slow parts of the novel. But it does get better. If it's a really slow part, turn on some music. Or reward yourself with every 100 words you write, go and check twitter or some such. Or just skip the slow scenes and power through the really fun, interesting scenes that you envision your novel having.
Best of Luck. I know you can do it!
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This.
Although, I was complaining about how much I didn't want to write a boring scene that I HAD to write, for character development purposes, when my dad (who doesn't support my NaNoWriMo writing) said, "Why not make it interesting then?" ...and now my moody contemplating character is getting snuck up on and captured (only to find out it was her guard she escaped from who decided to teach her a lesson on running away), instead of lying on the lawn moping and contemplating life.
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I deactivated my FB account for the next few days so I can get through not only catching up on my NaNo word count, but also my 2 huge research papers I have due next week for school.
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I changed my facebook password to something ridiculously long, then logged out. I will only allow myself to go on FB with my phone. Typing a thousand character password on the touch pad? No thanks.
It's working so far lmao
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Sometimes I do something that takes my mind off of the novel. I go outside and sit down peacefully and let my mind wander. It can think about whatever it wants to and I'll just follow it. Sudden inspiration is sometimes there, sometimes you gotta admit your stumped and find a dare to do (You can always erase it during December).
I also found that listening to relaxing music and doing a bubble bath gets creative juices flowing because your brain is no longer working in over drive. Also what I'd do is that I'd think of the scene you last wrote and really think about it, picture it in your mind, repeat the dialogue and who knows? You might just revise it to make it wordier. You might even be lucky enough to add another character.
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Water works wonders. I have a lot of novelling epiphanies in the shower or bubble bath.
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Some days you just need the pressure off. Write something, even if it's just a few hundred words, and tell yourself that that's okay for just today (but just today!). Or stop looking at the word count, and think of your goal in terms of story points instead. "I'll write until MC gets out of this room," or "I'll write until the conversation's over."
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Off-topic, but I love your display pic, robotosaur :)
Hyperbole and a Half <3
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http://download.cnet.com/windows/3055-2350_4-10034817.html?tag=pdl-redir
Download that, install it, then set up a 15 minute timer. Press go, then write till timer goes off, reset timer, go play time wasters till timer rings, then reset and write. Rinse and repeat.
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thank you! this is a wonderfully simple tool. and it works wonders.
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Make one of your characters do something horrible?
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Ah. You are wise!
You just gave me an idea that might help me push past writer's block! Thanks. :)
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I'm in a rut too. Today, however, I am determined to write myself out of this rut, no matter how much writing it takes. I won't let myself fall behind this year!
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Check out the Dare Machine on the Young Writer's Program website! (http://ywp.nanowrimo.org/) But be careful ... it's a huge time suck. :) Make a pledge to use the first dare you get.
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Hahaha! I hit the refresh button for the dare machine for like an hour. It did really help though, it completely changed my plot for the better.
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The first Dare I got was absoloutley perfect for my novel! How lucky is that!
I thought I was doing vey well at managing my distractions. Since the start of November I have only been on Facebook for less than 15 minutes and I have not been on Tumblr at all (how on earth have I managed that!)
Hwever I am miles behind! I do not know exactly how this happened I just crept up on me. The only reason I can think of for being so far behind is the ever growing mountain of homework I am being given which I am forced to do during my writing time as I have no spare time at luchtime at school.
WHY? WHY NOVEMBER OF ALL MONTHS?
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That totally works. I created three entirely new characters with that, and they've really helped move my story along.
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I was sitting there going "Nah, nah, nah...." And then this came up. We dare you to create a romance between your antagonist and your protagonist's sister. I read it twice. And then I was extremely scarred for life. She's ten. He's 40 something and a high school teacher. EWWW!
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This was drawn while procrastinating on university work a few years ago, but I think it's relevant here as well.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v474/Tosaiko/writingflow.jpg
For more helpful advice: try to turn off your brain and write anyway. It doesn't matter if all that comes out is "He sat down. He looked around. There was a window. It was sunny outside." As long as you get something down there, you're moving, and building up momentum is the key to making it work again.
Alternatively, something my father once suggested is writing until you have no ideas, even if that's only one word, then stopping, thinking about the problem for a moment, and then ignoring it completely. Do a crossword puzzle. Play a game of Solitaire. Not Twitter, because that's too distracting, but something which will take up your brain for a few minutes. Don't feel guilty about it, put all thoughts that you "should" be working to one side. Once that's done, return to the writing and have another go. The theory is that your unconscious has been puzzling it out while you were otherwise occupied, reducing some of that stress which comes when you try to push yourself into it and letting the writing continue more easily.
Whatever you end up doing, best of luck! There's a lot of good advice here, and everyone wants to help you win. You can do it.
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Use Write or Die.
You can set up a word goal and a Timer, and it gives you a web page to write in. And if you stop writing, it does things. The easy mode brings up dialogue boxes that are very sweet, like "shouldn't you go back to writing?". The middle ground plays loud sounds when you stop. (Like Rickrolling or Babies crying. Oh god the babies.) It stops when you start writing again. The hard mode (Kamikaze mode) actually begins to erase your words if you leave it too long. It keeps me writing even when I don't want to. :D
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What about Electroshock mode?
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Can you actually click that button? I've never been able to.
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I'm gonna have to try clicking that....
BUT I'M AFRAID!!!!
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1. Absolutely unplug from the internet and all its evils. It's worse than TV.
2. Absolutely don't bring a book or magazine or your calendar or blackberry etc/etc/etc along, if you're writing away from home.
3. Absolutely don't look at the screen while you're writing! I am working on a Neo, which is just a little word processor with a tiny screen and no internet capability. So it has no distractions, which is good. But it also has a screen that is just an inch above the keyboard, and if I look at the screen, I start editing. So I try not to even look at my fingers on the keyboard, and instead look around, look out the window, look at the wall. My fingers feel the typos as they happen, but the carrot/stick of the daily word count keeps me going. I can hit 1000 words in 30 minutes this way. Of course I usually can't do more than 30 minutes at a time this way, because it's exhausting. But even a little break can help before getting stuck in for another 30 minutes or so.
4. Absolutely don't wallow in a scene or flashback or whatever it is, if you really really really hate it or (even worse) are really really really bored with it. You can always get rid of it later, or fix it later. If you can't figure out how to change to another scene in a way that makes sense, just change it abruptly, like saying "But meanwhile, elsewhere, this other thing was happening:..." Again, you can always fix it later.
5. Absolutely just write anyway, without worrying about how to get out of the rut. I know this has been said a million times, but I swear it actually works. I can't make myself outline a plot and can barely sketch out characters ahead of time; all I started with for this month was an idea about what might happen to a certain type of character. Almost every time I approach a writing session, I have no idea what is going to happen next, and have no idea how I can move the plot along or make something interesting happen, and no idea how I might possibly get any ideas at all for the rest of my life. And every single time, the physical act of writing/typing brings the ideas out. (Does anyone else have this experience?)
6. Also -- I like the previous post about giving yourself plot point goals, like just keep writing until the end of this conversation, or until the MC leaves the room, etc.
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I've finished my book I'm writing and I can't think of anything else to write! I'm so stuck :(
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Is it possible to weave in a subplot or two? I blazed through my outline, so I'm going back through and weaving in a few paragraphs here and there. It's turning out really well, actually, I finished writing a section yesterday and then read the next part and found it totally fit!
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Take the laptop and drive out of town, somewhere you can't get internet. Put your favorite goodie on the seat next to you. Now, look at it. Drool a little. But, don't touch it until you've writting pages and pages about the torture of the longed for but just out of reach desires of your MC.
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that's awesome!!
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okay so far my novel is just and introduction and right now i have a character recovering from a concussion, a messy roommate and impending job interview...
Help i cant think of a plot!!1
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Quick, throw a rattlesnake under the bed, a naked woman with amnesia in the closet, prop a shovel of death in the hall way, and then discover the MC can only get that job if he figures out how to get out of his room alive!
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I actually might steal that rattlesnake idea...
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Don''t think - write!!!! I started off with simply a vision of a girl dreaming about her dead twin sister, and went from there... now I have vampyres (odd spelling intentional), three love interests, and a desperate search to find a missing sister... and I don't even know how it's going to end (who knows - maybe they'll all just go to the circus :P).
I just think "what should happen right NOW" and suddenly five teenagers are on a beach, talking about their futures. They didn't even live near a beach until then!!
Just write, and (hopefully) the plot with magically form it'self.... :P
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One thing that has helped me is to write in chapters. I try to write a chapter each day. This way, I’m not worrying about word count or the time – I just focus on the goal of reaching the end of the chapter. Sometimes they’re 1,200 words, sometimes 2,200.
Periodically I take a legal pad to a fastfood restaurant and spend some time making a basic outline of the next 10 or 20 chapters. This is a very simple timeline that lists the main characters in the chapter and a few words about the scene. I don’t hold myself to creating the chapters in that order, but it does help me develop an overall picture of what is to come.
Sometimes I’ll have a transition chapter that is tough to write, so I start writing dialog between the characters. It is amazing how often this dialog inspires ideas of how to take that chapter to the next one.
Also, as much as possible I try to sit outside to write. This keeps me away from distractions.
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Take a deep breath. If your fingers aren't moving on the keyboard or planning how to move on the keyboard, take them off. Step back, close your eyes, and breathe for a few minutes. If that doesn't clear your mind, put on some music (my recommendation: "The Old Ways" by Loreena McKennitt) kick off your shoes, and dance. Go until the end of the song, then sit down and bang out a paragraph. It can be full of purple prose or a few sparse lines of dialogue, but get it out anyway. Repeat as necessary.