Found some great advice on constructive criticism http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/newbies/threads/47935 gigadrive08 http://penny-arcade.com/patv/episode/playtesting I know this is meant to be about playtesting video games, but I think it can be taken in a broader sense about any kind of art. I like the idea that what the person is saying is not so much important as what order they will say it. Whatever they choose to mention first is probably something you need to look at more closely. Also, the idea of using little kids (but probably not too little, maybe 10-13) is wonderful. Even more than others, they'll be sure to point out if something is confusing or needs more elaboration. Thu, 15 Dec 2011 06:08:57 +1100 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/newbies/threads/47935?page=1#forum_thread_comment_972724 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/newbies/threads/47935?page=1#forum_thread_comment_972724