Finish the sentence. http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757 Whispell905 I need a smart-a@@ comment for the character in my book. I was writing, and I got stopped from writing a blank. Deven wakes up in the Hospital. Hayden: Deven? Deven: (groggy) What happened? Jade: Overdose B*tch. Deven: From? Hayden: Depressant. Jade: And before you start going on with the who, what, when, where, why questions, you were ______________. And I don't know how to finish that. Tue, 31 Jan 2012 18:19:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106046 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106046 keolah It would help if we knew what the situation actually was. Tue, 31 Jan 2012 19:04:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106204 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106204 Whispell905 My story has an event before the beginning. It starts with his dream and he wake sup in the Hospital after. He overdosed from drepression after his frenemie died. Tue, 31 Jan 2012 19:52:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106361 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106361 aaalllyyysssaaaaa Umm what is it that he is trying to say with his witty sentence? Wed, 01 Feb 2012 00:43:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106996 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1106996 Whispell905 That's what I can't figure out. :-/ Wed, 01 Feb 2012 08:48:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107332 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107332 Itzika ...holding the bottle in your hand, so don't try pretending it wasn't deliberate. As I understand it, this character just attempted suicide by overdose on his antidepressants because an acquaintance died. So what I would expect the guy to say would be something along the lines of "you did it on purpose, and don't try to pretend otherwise." Wed, 01 Feb 2012 08:59:23 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107343 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107343 Whispell905 You're right about the situation. :-) I prob can use that sentence. It sounds about right to fill in. Wed, 01 Feb 2012 10:44:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107517 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107517 Dan Diego ... a hundred milligrams from mission accomplished. ... ten minutes from joining Kurt Cobain. ... one pill short of a ride with no sirens. Wed, 01 Feb 2012 14:05:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107730 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1107730 Whispell905 I like those. :-) Wed, 01 Feb 2012 18:59:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1108379 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/plot-doctoring/threads/49757?page=1#forum_thread_comment_1108379