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permanent facial scars from gunfire; urban crossfire

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ThompsonNM
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I need expert help on the following:

A hallmark of Mexico's narco wars are gunfights at traffic intersections. I need the driver to be killed and the front-seat passenger to suffer permanent burn scars on the left side of said passenger's face. I have in mind a scarred left cheek and missing eyelashes/eyebrows on an eye that can still see beneath its scarred but working lid while the right side of the face remains unscathed.

Help much appreciated. Thanks.

ThompsonNM

Notkieran
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I think you need to be more specific on what you want help on.

lrparks
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What do you deed to make your story work?

Fraust

Drive shot with specially made 12gauge rounds using thermite/magnesium/something.

Notkieran
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Oh. You need to know what kind of weapons?

I suggest any kind of gangbanger firearm, followed by a molotov cocktail for fun and profit.

DeathOfScythes
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For higher-ups, highly decorated 1911-pattern pistols in 38 super is something of a status symbol, other than that it's a healthy mix of whatever they can buy on the black market or steal from the millitary/police

Who is your passenger? Random civilian? Drug Lord? Gang Banger?

One idea is that the passenger in the car lets off a long string from an automatic weapon. The barrels get very hot very quickly (one person was able to cook bacon wrapped on a machine gun barrel with 150 rounds) and if his face gets pressed into the barrel that's 2nd/3rd degree burns easily.

White phosphorus grenades are rather unplesant when used on soft targets

It could be done as a punishment, the rival gang deliberatly branding your character to make a point, or just pressing his face into the still-hot engine block.

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