WWI Slang--to annoy the X out of someone
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WWI Slang--to annoy the X out of someone
So, man just back from WWI talking to a woman. He's not mad at her, but is saying to her (about her and another person), "You bug the life out of each other." I don't feel like this works very well, but I feel like, "bug the crap out of each other" is pretty modern. Other contributions?
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Ooh, that's a good question, and I'm kind of wondering the answer to it myself. I definitely think crap is a bit modern - my best guess would be "you bug the hell out of each other," or possibly "you bug the living daylights out of each other." Still both of those still sound a little too modern to me. I suppose in context they might slip past the reader, though.
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"Crap" has been in use since the 19th century, so I don't see a problem with that. But "bug" is newer--I think it dates to the 1950s.
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in that more genteel time
"You annoy the stuffing out of each other" may be more realistic
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Do you know how much WWI soldiers swore?
About the f-word:
"It became so common that an effective way for the soldier to express this emotion was to omit this word. Thus if a sergeant said, 'Get your ----ing rifles!' it was understood as a matter of routine. But if he said 'Get your rifles!' there was an immediate implication of urgency and danger. [John Brophy, "Songs and Slang of the British Soldier: 1914-1918," pub. 1930]" (http://www.etymonline.com/index.php?allowed_in_frame=0&search=fuck&searchmode=none)
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there is...
how much soldiers swear around each other
how much soldiers swear around their families
how much soldiers swear around women
not always the same, like it seems to be now.
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"bejesus"?
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Shit.
It's a common saying here (England) at least... To annoy the shit out of someone.
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i would rephrase and have something like "Stop pushing nettles up each other's dresses."
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Well, I'm still just not sure. I'm not going to have him swear, especially in front of a woman. You didn't swear in front of women. Plus, I promised my father when I was thirteen-years-old that my characters would never say something I wouldn't, and I don't swear ever, even in extreme situations.
I could rephrase it, but it isn't even really a reprimand. It's kind of just a statement of fact. Context:
"Well, worrying about people is fairly normal, you know," Tom teased Melanie. "It doesn't phase me that you worry about him."
Melanie nodded, having to admit that much, but she still wasn't satisfied. "It’s just that...I don’t know. I worried about you, but not the same way that I do about Matthew. And I can’t explain why," she explained.
There was a pause as a slight smile drew across Tom’s face. “I think I can,” he said after awhile.
"Why?"
"You're in love with him, Melanie," Tom laughed, acting much like the boy he had been before the war.
"I am not," Melanie insisted childishly.
"Yes you are."
"Oh, come on, Melanie,” Tom said finally with a smile, through a short cough. “There’s no shame in it. You’re a woman, he’s a man, you spent a lot of time around each other, you annoy the living daylights out of each other, it was bound to happen.”
I just don't know what to do.
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What's wrong with what you've got? It seems to be "in voice" for the character.
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completely unsolicited and only tangentially related advice
part of being a fiction writer is creating worlds of different people who have different opinions and different goals and different views of the world and how those clash and or can be worked out.
Limiting your characters to "those who sound like me" is a good recipe for creating bland stories with banal interactions between cardboard cookie cutter characters. let your characters express "themselves" like they would, dont limit them to how you would express yourself.
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Agreed. They don't have to swear if you're not comfortable with it, but if their character is one who would swear, it would be odd for them not to...
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My characters express ideas I never would all the time. They treat other people ways I never would all the time. But my father once told me (and he's a man I greatly respect), "It's really easy to make people feel bad. It's not so easy to make them feel good. So, which is better art? That which is hard, or that which is easy?" If it's something that I need to invoke compassion, pity or concern, that's completely different. But I know I feel uncomfortable when I hear or read excessive swearing. So, I never said you can't write it, but I just never will. Because I believe in it, and because I believe in the very out-of-date practice of keeping promises.
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even more unsolicited and off topic commentary that you are completely free to ignore.
There are reasons that thirteen year olds are not allowed to sign legally binding contracts.
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oops - hit submit instead of preview.
but if as an adult writer you have determined that you can write the stories and characters that you want without swearing, that's perfectly possible and has produced many successful and interesting works throughout history.
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(OP is 20 if you look at her page. She promised her dad when she wast 13, not is 13)
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I'm not sure that that particular usage of faze would have been common then.
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Good thought. I'll have to think about that.