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Tresa Cho
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Here it is, folks. The place where you can ask if your novel is science fiction or not. We all know the lines are a little blurred, but that is why we have awesome people every year who frequent this thread to help you sort out your genre woes. All you need to do is post a short description of your story, and our scifi gurus will help you sort it into the proper genre.

Sight of the Blind
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So basically the story is about a girl who has visions, and after she moves to a new town the visions start becoming more and more deranged; through a series of events she is led on a journey to discover the secret behind her visions. A major part of the plot has to do with time travel, aliens, space portals and ancient cultures.

I'm not sure if it could be considered fantasy, but I don't think its completely sci-fi either. Any opinions would be greatly appreciated(:

keolah
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Sight of the Blind - Well, you could call it science fantasy, but honestly, "psychic powers" like her visions can go in nicely with straight scifi of the softer sort. In my experience, scifi can get away with "magic" if it calls it "psychic powers" or the like.

Sight of the Blind
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keolah- thank you ^_^

SandyGunfox
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Science fantasy? When you have elements of both scifi and fantasy?

For example, Star Wars has spaceships and lightsabers and the like - and they have the Force, which is just outright magic, or at least beyond the bounds of in-universe science. So I'd call Star Wars science fantasy. Meanwhile, if you're familiar with Mass Effect, they have telekinetics, but their powers are caused by a (fictional) element and a lot of pseudoscience, so it's just soft scifi.

Basically the rule of thumb I've always used is: If a phenomenon has a scientific explanation in-universe, it's sci-fi (and hard or soft depends on how realistic and researched that scientific explanation is), but if it doesn't have a scientific explanation in-universe, it's fantasy. Note that the characters don't need to KNOW the scientific explanation if it's a new phenomenon or well hidden or something, just if it HAS one or not.

Jacqueline Rochow
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Couldn't you therefore argue that any internally consistent magical story is scifi, even in traditional high fantasy stories?

Dretzle
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Depends where the magic is coming from? There could be a natural explanation to The Wheel of Time's "True Source", but it's treated in a very religious way. I guess it depends on the tone of your story, as well? Is Star Wars still strictly science fiction now that they have "midi chlorians" to explain where the Force comes from? I don't think so. The Jedis are still quite a spiritual group.

Genie
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Ok, so my story is about an archaeologist that actually finds skeletal remains of a cyclops and a fairy (little humanoid with actual wings) and reaizes that mythology was in fact history, and the impact that has on the world and everything we beleived about it. It is based roughly on the ancient astronaut theory, but with definitive proof. Sci-fi? I am a little confused, because it involves characters previously viewed as fantasy, but now they are scientific fact and much more to be worked out during writing.

keolah
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Genie - Well, Pern is scifi, and that involves genetically engineered dragons, so why not?

Genie
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cool, thanks.

Chickwit
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So this is a bit far fetched but I'm going for different and still trying to use my two favorite topics together. Werewolves and Conspiracy Theories with Aliens running the Government.

My story involves the current economic/social crisis occuring globally with The Federal Reserve being puppeted by an Alien race who has been behind the scene's pushing the world (more specifically the US) into bankruptcy. Once collapsed the United States comes down to a small group of Apocalyptic survivalists who have been preparing for this day. A serious "tin foil hat" researcher adoptd a child who over time develops odd habits, dreams often come true, has uncanny physical strength during the full moon (A werewolf tie in), an d an affinity for wolves.

The central focus is on the family members as they are forced to realize that life as they know it is about to end and the prevailing fall of society. The major population is too focused on their technological losses and the loss of every day conveniences to care what's really happening. They just want their Government to "fix it" or to "give them" what they need, only the Government as we know it no longer exists.

Gryphon-kl
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Chickwit: Except for the werewolf, it sounds like science fiction to me, and there could be a scientific-sounding explanation for that part (alien experimentation, for example). Or you could just call it science fantasy if you'd prefer a more traditional werewolf.

EelKat
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I'm thinking it'd be pointless for me to ask if my novel is sci-fi yet or not, seeing as, I don't know what I'm going to write! LOL! One I idea I had though, is sci-fi in that it's aliens invade a beach front amuesment park...but no idea other than that what I might write.

:)

Annaissocoollike
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I would best describe my book as Sci-Fi, Horror, and Romance. An unlikely combination, I know.
My main character, Ivy, and eleven other children are taken from orphanages at young ages. They are put into a government program that uses injections into their brain. The injections link the left and right sides so that thought and action are blurred. When the children think of things happening, the other side of the brain makes it happen. The injections also alter their appearance slightly and make their brains extremely unstable. They have permanent emotional and physical damage from this drug. After years and years, the children are in their teens. Funding stops. They have to move to a large city and cope with life. Ivy meets a boy and begins to grow fond of him. The ending can only be described as horror.

It starts off Sci-Fi, moves into Romance, and ends in Horror. I really don't know what to put it in.

raider.titan
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So, I know my novel is SciFi, since it takes place AGES into the future, but I'm not sure what sub-genre it may fall into. Basically, it's a story of a school in the future and drama that goes down, of course. There are space ships, colonies on satellites, and robots, but no aliens, or really anything that is generally associated with SciFi by anyone that I know, other than the space ships. Can anyone help me?

raider.titan
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Oh, and it does have a utopian (or is it?) society sub-plot, if that may help with classifying it...

SegoLily.311
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I am fairly certain that my novel and book series are Sci-fi however does my book have a sub genre?

My first novel (almost done publishing) is about a girl who can manipulate time. She goes blind in the story and must learn to cope with that ontop of controlling her power. My second novel (the one I am writing with NaNoWriMo this year) is about a shapeshifter who goes through painful transformations and must find a way to remain human instead of becoming a monster.

What do you think? It is The Gifted Series so I guess it is similar to superhero but they don't wear costumes or anything like that. It's not futuristic and there are no aliens but I still feel it is definitely Sci-fi even if it has some signs of a fantasy novel.

Dreamway
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Time, okay. But lightly, as in science fantasy, since the hard-sci types hate psychic powers (my nano for this year is scify). But someone who alters their physical form notably in a period less than days or weeks--fantasy. I once tried to work out the physics and bio of a transformation taking hours and it required too much phlebotinium.

Kurt McFry
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Instead of sci-fi, I guess that would make it.... psy-fi? *chortles to self*

SegoLily.311
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Haha, good one Kurt McFry ;) I still feel like my over all series is sci-fi not fantasy fiction. So maybe I could call it "Science Fantasy" but that isn't a genre that I can actually use when selling or promoting. Typically I tell people it is Sci-fi/Fantasy because it is a little bit of both. Thank you Dreamway and Kurt McFry for your input. Hopefully the genre name won't effect the overall opinion of my series.

PrayForAidan
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Sci-Fantasy sometimes gets lumped into the same molds as *punk.

My novel this year is a cross between sci-fi (dystopian society, aliens, etc.) and supernatural (psychic/superhero-esque abilities). I put it into the sci-fi group only because of the aliens.

SegoLily.311
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I can see why you would classify that as Sci-fi. Aliens are definitely not what is pictured as fantasy. The more I outline my book I have realized it is fantasy so I'm going to role with it in that direction. Thank you for posting your replies. They have been really helpful!

thebangzats
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My story involves quantum mechanics and its two most famous interpretations, the Many-Worlds and the Copenhagen.

The Copenhagen Interpretation says that (in a nutshell) parallel universes are created when the subject is observed by a sentient being. Before observation that subject is superimposed with all its possible states, and only force to pick one state as it is observed.

The Many-World Interpretation takes the power away from the observer, stating that parallel universes are constantly being generated, one for each possible state.

A bigger rule to both these is, they only happen in events involving the pure 50:50 chance of quantum events. My novel breaks that rule. Non-quantum events break off into parallels because something unknown has happened to the universes, causing a sudden outburst of parallels.

So the question here is, if it breaks the rule (and barely explains how), does it count as sci-fi?
(I'm thinking yes, but just to be sure)

Dreamway
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Think of all the sf using TL travel. Then remember most of that, especially wormholes, is exaggerated into hogwash. I think you're okay. Most of it is, do you take a sf attitude?

Dreamway
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That should be FTL travel.

thebangzats
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Okay, I just needed someone to confirm it :D
And yeah I went with the science fiction way to telling the story, intellectual and scientific explanations slipped into lots of scenes.

EFBQ
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What makes you say they only happen when there's a pure 50:50 chance? That's not my understanding at all. The basic mistake most people make when dealing with quantum universes is that they should only happen with quantum states, not with macroscopic events. Choices and history have nothing to do with it (if you're really aiming for hard SF).... but it doesn't make for good story, so it's generally ignored.

AccoSpoot
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I'm thinking of writing a New Weird this year, this means; though it does take some stakes from Sci Fi, it tosses out the idea of genre altogether. So can this work? A Sci-Fi that refuses to be called a Sci-Fi?

Some very very rough plot details, if that matters; The Universe is about bless upon its inhabitants an inspiring and powerful gift, the story follows a group of people as they age with constant interaction with the universe from around the globe, whilst it ends at some point in the near future it doesn't take any Aliens, FTL, Ray-Guns, Space Travel (much) Extra terrestrial colonialism, etc.

Dreamway
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Could be sf or fantasy or magic realism at this level of vagueness. Sounds a bit Vonnegut but he often was not sf.

BACKDROPsilhouette
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Mine will be a futuristic novel, involving heavy focus on advancement in, and lack thereof, technology.

I've never paid any mind to genres, I've always just written what comes to mind without trying to put a label on it, but my Google skills tell me Science Fiction is the right ballpark.

If not, I accept impression of stupidity.

Gryphon-kl
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This definitely sounds like science fiction to me.

irreverent_writer
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I hope that yours is Sci-Fi because my novel is similar in theme. 500+ years in the future, the vast majority of the population live off of earth (but not in space. They occupy gigantic "facilities" that are erected high in the sky but still in the Earth's atmosphere). There are no aliens and no special powers. Technology is advanced, obviously. But the heart of the story will be on the characters. I am calling it Sci-Fi, mostly for lack of a better term!

keolah
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irreverent_writer - Relax. That is most definitely, certainly, 100% science fiction. ;) And not just "for lack of a better term". Speculating on what may or may not happen in the future is the heart and soul of scifi.

irreverent_writer
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:D Thanks!

tally1302
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So my question is, what if it's only 20 years or so in the future and all the scientific advancement etc is stuff that's already underway now... no aliens, no spaceships a robot army like those being constructed at the moment....

I think my problem is 10 years ago my story would have been sci-fi. Now real life is catching up with sci-fi so I'm not sure :P

one_flew
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Mine is similar to this. It is sort of an exaggeration of the uses of our current (or near future) technology. I am calling mine Scifi for now, but it is probably 40% LitFic.

I would imagine my story taking place 10 to 20 years in the future as well. It has to do with virtual reality.

theshapeshifter
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Is steampunk living in Sci-Fi this year? I seem to remember last year the steampunk-related threads were scattered between Sci-Fi and Fantasy.

KatRobbins
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Was just wondering the same thing, shapeshifter. I've started up a [subgenre] thread here in SciFi in case there are others writing Steampunk more of the SciFi bent this year. Hoping to have some company, so if it fits your novel, c'mon over and tell us what your story will be about.

Jacqueline Rochow
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I think it depends on what your story's like. If you're going with "this is here because it looks really cool and I love the feel," you're probably straddling science fantasy. If you're going for "for [implied or explained reason], modern tech looks like steampunk stuff, here's how it works/the social implications thereof/whatever", it's scifi.

MzHartz
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I've been having a hard time figuring out what genre to put my novel in. Someone told me she thought it was Sci-Fi, but I don't think so.

Chocolate is illegal. The story is about a woman's life while she comes to terms with her addiction. It's not set in the past or future, it's on earth, and there's nothing different about chocolate than it exists in real life. She gets married, gets divorced, loses her job, sleeps around, falls in love, and gets arrested, but nothing supernatural happens. It's not meant to be humorous. It's just a hypothetical story of, "What If?"

I don't think it's even fantasy. Modern Fiction?

Lord Darkstorm
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You say chocolate is illegal, which from some perspective would be a different reality. Maybe that is what they are thinking. If the only thing different is that Chocolate is illegal, then you just need to come up with some believable reason someone would pass a law to make it so, then you are just in the normal fiction realm.

Itzika
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Once you come up with a reason, you're in "Alternate History" territory, which is generally classed under sci-fi, in my experience. But it can go either way.

Cassandra432
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Honestly, I don't know where this idea goes. Could be a lot of things. The initial idea was to talk about different types of death and how it determines their story in the afterlife. The story would focus more on what happens after they die. I have it where upon their death they go into an afterlife much like their death. They must learn something to move forward on their journey. Here they will meet those with opposite deaths, they will have to learn and understand each other, and help each other move forward. There they will meet people with other deaths and together they have to learn something to move forward. Eventually they will end up in my idea of where we ALL eventually go when we die and after we've achieved some sort of transformation. For example, I have a Holocaust victim (they had a forced death) paired off with a suicide victim (who chose their own death). I was also thinking about pairing poison and illness together and making that the first book. The fact that this involves death and that the people will be of different eras is confusing, along with the overall theme of transformation, which could be religious. Could someone help me? Otherwise, I'll just chose "other".

Kurt McFry
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I'd say that would fit most neatly into Supernatural, since it's about the afterlife. It could also possibly be Fantasy? Don't see why it'd be sci-fi.

EFBQ
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I'd think it would go best in Religious, Spiritual and New Age, because you're focusing on themes of spirituality and the eventual disposition of the soul. Take a look at that forum and see if it looks like it will have useful discussion... :)

50percentDakini
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Still in the concept-formulation stage, but here goes: setting is Mars in the far (post-Apocalyptic?) future, there is a heavy mystical/magical component to the plot, and there may or may not be aliens, but there certainly will be angels and demons. Mars is at least partially terraformed and there's obviously future-tech, space travel, and the like, but also magic, psychics, and probably faeries. So what is this? Futuristic fantasy? Sci fi? Where do I belong???

Wickedly
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Well, I'm not the only one about what genre my novel is. Sorry for bothering, but I can't figure which genre my novel fits in. Seems to me that Sci-Fi and Fantasy would both work.

Here it goes : it takes place in an underground city, built underneath an actual one. Setting is nowadays, but the people trapped inside the underground place have no clue than something else even exists.
I did put in some Angels and demons, however they're pretty much extraterrestrial who took refuge on Earth, creating the human race in the process.
But I still put some elements that would be probably considered as fantasy, such as "magic" (ability to inhabit other bodies, necromancy, ability to read people's memories...).

So, in all this beautiful mess, where does that leave me ? Sci-fi, or something else entirely ?

Lord Darkstorm
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Extraterrestrials fit in scifi, and the abilities of these aliens, are the based in magic, or just abilities beyond a human? If the beings are energy based in nature, lacking a physical form, then possessing a body wouldn't be magic, just something they could do. Really comes down to the abilities and if they are possible without some form of magic. Zombies have been done over and over without a necromancer to raise them...they are loosely in the realm of scifi based on most are virus based.

Wickedly
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Sorry, I didn't see your post sooner.

Actually, the zombie part was pretty much an image. It's more like a virus that "kills" everything human inside the person, and makes him or her ready for the Angel to inhabit his/her body.
The alien abilities are just their own, they needed something to inhabit Earth and created the human race as shells that they possess. So it is something they could do.
The magic idea pretty much comes in with those who are part human - part alien, or the aliens who have unsettling abilities for their kind - such as switching body-form, or having the capacity to inhabit another body while having a main host.

Lord Darkstorm
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Aliens fall into the realm of scifi, most of what you are describing 'could' be loosely science based, so it can be scifi.

Elorithryn
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I'm pretty sure my Novel is, though it never hurts to check. I'm also wodnering where it might be placed in a sub genre, is any.


I've been building my universe for almost 3 years now. It involves things like:

- memory blocks done by hypnosis (typically a temporary block that allows the person to slowly process a tramatic event) and chemical (which is supposed to cause a permenant block)

- werewolves, except they aren't your typical fantasey type. transformation takes at least 5 days and they don't look like wolves. Rather, their hair and nails and teeth grow (and then fall out/breack off) and the hormone inbalance gives them two 'phases' on either side of the transformation -agressive and armourus. I'm basing their cycle on animal breeding cycles. And the onlyw ay to become 'Nueri' is to be born that way as it's a birth defect caused by the mother consuming a certain plant from a specific planet (or if both parents are Nueri, as it's a gentic mutation).

- space ships with FTL drives. I had fun designing those and then creating a speeadsheet for looking at air supply, food and water supply, speed, and fuel consumption for determining just how far a ship can go (hydroponics, provides supplemental fresh food and 'atmosphere').

- multiple planets, some which are like earth, others that have been terra formed, and others were sheilding is required

- cyborgs, or at least the begining of experimentation with placing human brains into machines

- deep sleep, which is not quite cryogenic freezing, but rather puts the body into a hybernative state, slowing the aging process down and allowing people to sleep away long space flights. I'm looking into what the side effects might be.


The plot is actually going to focus around the people (one half-Nueri, two Nueri, one human, and one cyborg) not necessarily the technology, but the technology has obviously shaped these people into what they are and I fully intend for them to visit multiple planets. *grin*

Thanks,
:} Elorithryn

Kariel Lateef
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50percentdakini and Wickedly, many novels fall into that region of being both SciFi AND Fantasy, I think both of your proposed stories fit that mold. Most Steampunk stories tend to go this way also with the mixing of tech with a bit of magic or alchemy.

50percentDakini
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So where do we belong for NaNoWriMo purposes? Do we hang out here or in fantasy or are doomed to wander in the shadowy world in between the two genres?

keolah
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What shadowy world? Do what I do -- I tend to hang out here, in fantasy, _and_ in other genres. There's nothing saying you have to stick to a single genre lounge ever. ;)

Tresa Cho
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Yehaaaa welcome back keolah! Nice to see you again this year. :D

Tresa Cho
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50%, you can hang out in BOTH. Or either, or neither! If you want to, you could go hang out in Romance all November. There are no rules to say that you must only chill in the forums your story is. I wrote fantasy the last three years, but spent all my time in SciFi. We are super inclusive.

The genres exist so that if you get stuck in your story, you can find help that will immediately relate to your novel. So, if you need help building an elf culture, then you can check Fantasy. If you need help with how a space ship could be built, you have the resources of Science Fiction. It's just for ease of writing that we break them up.

Have fun!

50percentDakini
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That makes a lot of sense - thanks for the explanation and for the inclusive welcome! I'm getting pumped to write.

Wickedly
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Thanks for the precision!

ElizaWyatt
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Steampunk non-earth world.

Mad-science resurrection. Guns. Airships. Mechanical monsters. Bio-genetic-engineering in labs with not-quite sentient plants and weird chemistry backdrops. A horribly inefficient postal service that really, really needs to be redesigned.

Not sure what to call this one. I don't think there's going to be a drop of magic. So...?

Lord Darkstorm
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Sounds like fun to me. Almost makes me want to rethink mine....but alas, not enough time.

Cydnorg
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My novel uses newly developed technology (that my main characters dad has been working on in his basement for 13 or so years and finally found the answer to inserting foreign DNA into a quickly catching Virus like HIV and letting the new virus infect the person. This, in my book, causes a decently quick transformation (a couple of weeks). The main character goes through several of these, some by accident mutation (because the virus quickly goes through mitosis to infect quicker).

Supernatural / horror or Sci-fi?

keolah
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Cydnorg - Things like Alien and Resident Evil are quite definitely scifi horror. With horror, the main point with it is the tone and whatnot. Is it intended to be scary, creepy, etc? From your description, it can easily be either scifi horror, or just plain science fiction, depending on how it's written.

Cydnorg
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Mine's defintely torture, incest and terrible, terrible mutations c:

And this all came to me during Geometry! (obviously has issues here...huehuehue)

Trixter
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I intentionally threw some fantasy elements into my sci-fi setting, partly to Be Different and partly because a secondary major character is a bit of a wizard archetype and I didn't want to completely strip him of that. I don't think the end result is any more fantasy than Star Wars, but I'm happy to submit to opinions on which forum I should be posting to!

The world of Viridia was cut off from the rest of human civilization nearly 300 years ago. They have knowledge of high technology, but they lack the resources to build anything in large quantities. Computers and cybernetic implants exist, but they are artisan-crafted, with schematics and user manuals protected like religious artifacts.

What the planet lacks in resources it makes up for in a power called "gaia", the cumulative life-force of everything on the globe which can be channeled by any living creature - including the immigrant humans. Gaia and the study of it are the only reasons a human colony was even built on the resource-scarce planet, and with trade channels cut off the descendants of those colonists have had to learn to make due with what they have. Gaiamancy has become a common way to heal sickness and grow crops. For the most part it's a very practical, pagan magic.

The one major city on Viridia is run by the remnants of the corporation that founded the original colony, and within that corporation is a powerful organization called Arandee. Here they conduct research ostensibly for the good of the public, but this includes some questionable practices, including cloning humans for research purposes. The story focuses on a castoff clone from a failed experiment and his relationship to the leftover technology of this world, as well as his feelings of alienation from the world as a whole since he was cloned from someone born off-world before they lost contact.

I tend to think that, when the lines are blurred, the themes of a story become the best way to place it. There's a magical element, yes, but the themes are more typical of a sci-fi story so I'm content to post here but still call it science fantasy. What do y'all think? :)

Kurt McFry
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Hmm... pretty sure my novel is sci-fi, but it's so soft that I do wonder about it sometimes.

-Far future, looming apocalypse by time stopping across the universe (softsoftsoft!~).
-Plasma guns, implant-based comm. devices that fit over the eye like a monocle (or a DBZ "scanner" if you're that way inclined, though I don't know much about the show)
-Time machine, looks like a supercomputer hooked up to an array of weird-looking mirrors that "totally internally reflect tachyons and chronons, bending and twisting them" (Yes. I created fibre optic time travel.) The machine itself doesn't just drop them off though, it needs to hold them there, they return when the machine is powered down. Also if the machine's power supply cuts out, they disintegrate. (Plot-driven decisions, but I reverse-engineered/technobabbled that the machine compensates for any changes they make to the past while they're there.)
-Mentions of contact with aliens, never seen on-screen and is told that nothing came of it because both parties gave up trying to find a means of communicating.
-Steampunk power at one era in the past.

Um... can't think of anything else, think that's it. Sci-fi? Or too squishy?

Kurt McFry
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Oh! Just remembered! Also, humans in the year 1 million are all slender and extremely intelligent but not very physically strong (due to many factors, such as increased oxygen level in the atmosphere, vegetation-only diet (I don't know how this contributes...) higher emphasis on education etc), and by the year 4 billion when time is dying they've lost that and devolved into a form that is more stereotypically like us, except they're very long-lived and don't age quickly, and also above average for height.

.... just realised most of these perks sound very Elvish. But yeah, with that aswell taken into account? :O

keolah
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Kurt McFry - Scifi does not, to the disappointment of certain parties, have a minimum required "hardness". So long as you figuratively paint over your "magic" with scifi trappings, it's scifi enough for me at least. ;)

Jacqueline Rochow
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Scifi doesn't have to be hard. You're a lot harder than The Hitchhiker's Guide to The Galaxy, which is undoubtedly scifi. Some people might quibble over whether you've got science fiction or science fantasy but that's just normal differences in perspective, you can easily call that scifi.

afie
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I definitely consider my story sci-fi, though i am not sure if it's "pure" sci-fi or if it should be sub-genre:d. It takes place in a dystopian future ( i am imagining a "Big Brother is watching your EVERY MOVE" kinda society- ish) and there's technology for people to get "upgraded" as in get implants to improve various abilities/skills/etc, though it's extremely expensive and only available to a select few.
The focus is on the dystopian thing- the tech bit is a bit in the background, though important since my secondary character (who might become a second main character depending on) has had these enhancements made. With the exception for the rich people it's a kinda basic world and where the "normal" people pretty much do what they can to survive and they have very little tech to help them.
So anyone have any thoughts?

afie
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Oh, and maybe i should mention that the story will take place amongst the wealthy in this society, so we won't see much of the "normal" people.

keolah
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What's "pure" scifi? :) And I'd generally consider dystopian to be a sub-genre, yes. An awfully popular one these days, from what I've seen... I wouldn't say it matters who or what aspect the focus is on. Genre definitions depend on the plot or setting, not the main characters, generally.

Jacqueline Rochow
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Sounds like unambigious scifi to me. Scifi doesn't have to be strictly about technology and how it works. Social implications of technology as a focus are a well-established scifi theme (in my opinion, they make up the most interesting science fiction).

in my spare time
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Okay, here goes. Cade is an actor whose been imprisoned and tortured (sleep deprivation) for participating in a gay pride march in a culture where LGBT rights are non-existent. He's rescued by Drew, a doctor at the facility, who spirits them both to an alternate universe where there is no such persecution. Cade suffers from the obvious fallout of his ordeal, but Drew shows more subtle signs of not living his real life (he left a wife, was completely in the closet). This new universe is set under a dome (the atmosphere still sports remnants of radiation from previous conflicts) so there is no rainfall, a continually temperate environment, albeit offering both men their freedom. Cade gets involved with a nurse, Annie, while Drew falls for Bill, a technician where the refugees landed. Cade can't sleep, which interferes with his and Annie's relationship, while Drew has a hard time with the openness of this new society. Both men react to their new-found liberties, unable to leave their ordeals in the past. When Drew cracks, it's Cade to bring him back from the brink, but Cade's footing is just as slippery. Annie and Bill aren't sure their partners can cope with their adopted surroundings, not just living under a dome but the freedom.

So, is this sci-fi? Overt and subtle forms of torture and oppression will be explored, as well as accepting life in new realm, alongside the notion neither man will ever return home. I'm more of a lit-fiction soul, plenty of angst, but I like to dabble in sci-fi (DS9 is one of my all time fave series, plenty of Doctor Who as well) so I'm just wanting to know where this belongs. Thanks!

keolah
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in my spare time - Certainly sounds like scifi to me. You've got a dystopian setting, as well as alternate universes.

in my spare time
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Great! Thanks for the feedback.

thegreatescape2014
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Alternate history stories? Mine is based off of "what if hitler never fell." Sci-f? Or not...

PrayForAidan
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In a way, you are implying an alternate timeline or maybe even a parallel universe. That screams Yes to me.

MaryJeddoreBlakney
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Yes, it's sci-fi, but can you help me with sub-genre?

Pyte: Set in the present. Well, technically, the present is an elusive non-linear point in time, but it's set in our contemporary time period.

Part One: Jade

-There's a man in Jade's back yard, dressed in a ridiculous sci-fi-con alien suit and claiming to be from another planet. His name, supposedly, is Zukk Gevv. Jade doesn't believe in interstellar travel. When he steps into an apparently-very-real spaceship and disappears, Jade is compelled to understand what really happened. She does research, she enlists the help of UFO investigators, she searches her soul. With the help of her family, she finally comes to the conclusion that her experience didn't happen in the physical world: it was a vision.

-Subplots include the story of how Jade's town was founded and developed to the current day, and how she meets and gets close to her boyfriend. There's romance there, but her romantic girlfriend-love never gets any more attention than her family-love for her daughter, mother, sister and nephews, or her platonic love for her best friend.

-The two feelings that I expect will pervade in Part One are:
Jade's struggles with questions such as: Am I going crazy? Are the laws of physics nothing but an illusion (and hence, do I need to worry a monster will eat me or the floor will disappear)? Maybe a lot of people would just shrug that off, but it shakes Jade deeply.
The many emotions of the characters' relationships. Not sappy, not gritty, but a realistic in-between.

-Just when Jade has finally decided her experience is a vision and found peace with herself, she gets an email from a woman who says, "You're not crazy. I had the same experience myself. Can we meet?" So Jade and her boyfriend jump in the car and drive 16 hours to meet her--only to find that she's just a crazy lady, blurting out things that make no sense at all.

Part Two: Piper

-Piper wakes up in a desert on an alien planet, dying of thirst. Some people rescue her and keep her as a pet. It takes them a while to figure out what to feed her. Her first approach is to try to teach them English and all the other things they need to know. After a while she realizes she's the one who's different: she's the one who needs to learn. It takes time to learn a language, and as desperate as she is to tell them where she's from and demand a ride home, she has no choice but to wait. She finds herself in a close-knit community with a rich culture, surrounded by selfless friends who save her life repeatedly, risk themselves for her sake. But she doesn't notice because she's too consumed by her indignation at being held there against her will.

-As she acquires communication skills, Piper learns that occasionally, objects and animals from other planets appear at the edge of the village, and she's one of those animals. They think it's a side effect of something they're doing in a nearby research center, and nobody really knows where any of the things come from. Finally, one day, she succeeds in communicating to her owners that she really, really needs a ride home. She draws a diagram of our solar system, marks the third planet as the destination. They understand, they're enthusiastic about finding Piper's home star in the maps. Then they find it, and Piper is ecstatic: she's going home!

-But they tell her no; that's not the way we handle first contacts with alien worlds; you'll have to stay here. Piper argues, but they just laugh at her like she's cute, like they did back when she tried to teach them English. Just then her owners' son, who up to now has been a tadpole, metamorphoses and crawls out of his pool and walks into the room. Piper looks at the child and says in English, "You're my hope. I'm going to be so nice to you that you're going to love me, and when you're old enough, you'll get me home." In keeping with tradition, one of the parents tells the little boy his name, officially welcoming him to the community of air-breathing, walking people. "Your name," says the parent, "is Zukk Gevv."

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