What is the last line you wrote? http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727 Rarity Mine so far today was... He was on the dock now, his footsteps thudded under his feet. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 16:50:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364471 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364471 rainstorm. [quote] She was a strange, eccentric little lady. that was for sure. [/quote] o___o Tue, 01 Nov 2011 16:55:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364656 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364656 oazan <em>To the left was the master bathroom, with a full tub and shower combo.</em> ... nothing like describing a new house to really help rev up your word count... Tue, 01 Nov 2011 16:57:00 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364699 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364699 J.E.Blackworth <em>Speaking of which, she'd have to prepare a dinner for her family.</em> Tue, 01 Nov 2011 17:05:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364980 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_364980 Feral “I guess if a murderer can get picked, a poor chimney sweep has at least a slim chance. I’ll see you at the Calling.” Tue, 01 Nov 2011 17:07:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365067 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365067 J.Rush She was a little like Joan Crawford, demanding and a hot kettle to boot. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 17:10:59 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365203 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365203 miss.madeleine She moved silently, cat like, to the dock and the boats and salvation. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 17:13:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365313 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365313 HarlequinDream "Congratulations, Acting-Lieutenant Burr." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 17:19:09 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365559 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365559 Anne-Elisabeth Likewise, Annie would find she had not the slightest idea of what Jimmy would endure in his own life over the course of the year to come. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 17:22:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365660 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_365660 codex213 There were times when he wasn't sure how he got through the academy, let alone a position with the Meridian Police Department. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 18:35:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_368240 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_368240 schmiss “Adhara will be here in a moment, and I’m sure the rest of the group will want to see you as well.” [argh, looking at that, "in a moment" looks clumsier than "soon", and "wants" would be so much better than "will want" -- but that'd mean losing words! Must... not... edit.] Tue, 01 Nov 2011 18:35:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_368258 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_368258 LiberatorOfThem "So he was not very pleased when he woke up standing in the middle of a deserted city road, excluding himself and the homeless man leaning against a store and smoking a cigarette." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 18:58:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_369041 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_369041 ronsmyhero There is always tomorrow for her to silently slip away, most preferably during a time when the other two are still sleeping and when she'd had enough time to loot her fair share of their rations. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 19:25:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_369950 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_369950 Apiecalypse CRAZY. ------ Oh Howard, stop being so mean to yourself. You're not crazy, you're just a witch. On second thought, this can't be the last word I write today, I can't just leave him like this. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 19:26:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_369996 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_369996 Void-Auron "And right now I'm risking starvation." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 19:30:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370112 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370112 Joselyn Bridgit took a few more steps into the room and plopped down into the loveseat sofa. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 19:33:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370240 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370240 SSPost "Not as quick." Not even sort of grammatically correct, but the 1st-person character here is kind of a frantic fellow. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 19:35:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370323 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370323 Angelynx And Lady Koi would know what to do. She always did. (I guess "She always did." is technically THE last line, but it doesn't make much sense alone.=) Tue, 01 Nov 2011 19:36:16 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370360 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370360 Angelynx Oo, I do want to know what happens next. =) Tue, 01 Nov 2011 19:37:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370399 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_370399 Amethyst Star His logic circuits surged as he sought to ascertain what his directive would now be. Oh robots... you so silly... or not. :P Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:14:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_371737 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_371737 Apiecalypse That’s when he realized they weren’t alone. ----- There, that's a little less self-hating, isn't it? Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:15:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_371794 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_371794 mirandakane After they got done talking to his friend she would bring up what Owen said about moving in with him and Rebekah. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:15:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_371797 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_371797 FilteredSunlight She wished this day would end. She felt too off to be normal, too wrong to be human, and too hopeless to just be a teenage girl. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:22:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372019 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372019 tayjae2012 Some of the most iconic pictures from the first battle against the undead come from highways. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:27:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372190 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372190 fluidstatic My name is Miranda Lawson. It is nearly dawn on the red-eye bus line out of town. I am stepping off of a cliff, and I’m scared as hell. But I am not alone in my heart. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:28:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372236 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372236 floe239 “Move.” I shove him out the way and he nearly full on knocks over an entire shelf of maintenance supplies. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:30:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372318 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372318 lizo27 "The General's looking for you." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:33:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372409 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372409 kizicarabbit It was ineffable, yet undeniable: Ethan was different now. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:43:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372820 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372820 Lightxx Shogo found himself trapped, half-existing when he longed to die. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:43:59 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372830 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372830 kizicarabbit I like this so much! It instantly makes me want to know more. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:44:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372858 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_372858 FlameRaven Currently: "The wind outside had picked up and it was beginning to snow again, sprinkling another layer of powder on top of the thin drifts from the previous evening." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:49:20 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373002 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373002 ninjaobsessor Mal’s face reappeared, and it was solemn. ... Mal has the power of invisibility, so parts of his body randomly go invisible. He doesn't randomly lose and regenerate his head all the time. Although that would be pretty freaking awesome. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:55:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373216 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373216 Kairi_Riku_Sora_Roxas “Yes,” I whispered, trying to keep my voice from cracking, “A permanent vacation.” Tue, 01 Nov 2011 20:58:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373310 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373310 Broken-Glass-Butterfly The woman shuddered, then hurriedly got off the bus, wanting to put the experiences behind her as quickly as possible. ..Sounds cliche and unexciting. I do believe I'm eager to get to bed. xD Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:02:03 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373438 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373438 AlyRuth For some hunter-gather bands, a kill not honored deserved the murder of its hunter; Kiko was unsure if the Fijuu were so strict. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:02:03 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373439 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373439 AnarchySparky "Well, that's unfortunate. But she's adorable. Keep her away from this mess, though." The cop returned to his car and drove away, his lights and sirens off. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:15:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373868 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373868 lepi19 "Hey," he said, extending his hand. Yup, noveling gold right there Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:15:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373879 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_373879 AlyRuth [quote=lepi19] "Hey," he said, extending his hand. Yup, noveling gold right there [/quote] Get a copyright notice pending, 'cause we got innovation, deviation, and variation up in hurrrrr. :) Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:25:23 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374205 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374205 MaliceForAlice She fell, only her home slipping away above her, and seeing only the color green lie below her. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:28:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374312 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374312 aftersh0cks “That’s cool,” said Shane. Suddenly the mysterious glint I’d seen in his eyes when I had first met him came back full force. “Pranks. I can see us being great, great friends sometime soon.” Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:32:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374415 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374415 dothrevenge "The pleasure is all mine." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:33:53 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374467 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374467 Hezzi Unable to keep hitting the beast anymore, she curled up in the middle of the boat, quite ready to give up. Yes Aretha... great time to give up... In a fishing boat surrounded by sea serpents &gt;.&lt; Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:36:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374581 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374581 IOwnSarcasm “I love it,” I say without even thinking. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:41:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374732 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374732 PhoenixFyre “A mystery,” Kat grinned, tucking her knees under her and snuggling deeper into the mountain of pillows. “I love it.” Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:43:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374797 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=2#forum_thread_comment_374797 Bob12345 A tear fell on Jodi's face, as Sarah mourned over her in anguish. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 21:45:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_374858 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_374858 Rennire She noticed that his forehead was bleeding be she couldn't think of why. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:09:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_375696 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_375696 Emerald_Ferret "Every worker was informed of this decision-making process via a series of rather candid memos." Very exciting stuff, I know. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:13:03 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_375805 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_375805 DalanieBeach I spent the remainder of the hour with the Health teacher in the hall, being lectured on the proper use of the words ‘retarded,’ and ‘crap.’ But saying, ‘Boy am I gonna kill however put that unwise piece of poop on my desk!’ just isn’t the same. lol :P Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:19:59 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376074 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376074 cafeofthedamned "The man was a true ghost, completely taken over by a Sent’s personality and run down to bare bones in its attempt to escape." Ah, nothing like good old scifi. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:29:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376408 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376408 abscg613 It was the end of the strange day, but it was only the beginning of Mari’s adventure. Cliche, anyone? But still enjoying myself immensely :D Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:34:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376621 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376621 Mstar “Excellent,” he said. “If you’re right then this firm is about to make a lot of money.” Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:38:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376763 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376763 WentToManderleyAgain The last few lines, just because it sounds better: "You're breaking into a police station?" "Yes. Are you coming?" She paused for a second. "Just let me grab my coat." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:38:58 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376773 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376773 fitz <em>Lay on, MacDuff</em>, thought Jenna, but just said, "Sure." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:39:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376810 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376810 PennyS "It wasn’t the first time I’d let my imagination get to me." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:43:15 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376933 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376933 fumbleweeds [quote]What I can spiritually see... When I try to think like this, I feel like I should be giving tarot readings out of my house, with neon lights in the windows in the shape of a crescent moon.[/quote] Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:43:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376944 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_376944 SarahNicole “You aren’t planning on sitting in front of the computer, are you?” Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:46:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377030 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377030 tummer The slender woman bent down and kissed the man’s rough cheek. “Follow me into the ally and I’ll tell you, and maybe you’ll get something more.” Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:48:05 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377100 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377100 Faeiri "Okay, then show me where you parked the flying boat." Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:56:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377379 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377379 reckless.tenacity "You said you could fly this thing?" He asked desperately. She grinned at him. "Like a boss." She promised. Tue, 01 Nov 2011 22:57:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377398 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_377398 Drenmar Amyril "Babe, you'd be amazed how well he listens when it's important..." ...I'd say that that line is far more suggestive than it should be, but given the character speaking... At least I know that character is a bit one (heh heh, that's actually funnier than anything in my novel), and is likely to end up dead before I'm done. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 00:37:01 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_379877 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_379877 MusicalRaven He could do this. He had to. Had to add the second to last line, cause by itself, my last line makes little sense. Actually, it still makes little sense. *Shrugs* Eh, oh well. at least I know what I'm talking about. ;) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 00:43:07 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380008 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380008 RisaIsis “We don't even know what we're looking for!” she rolled her eyes, glaring at me once more. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 01:00:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380366 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380366 Apiecalypse The term would have been amusing if he couldn’t still feel the stranger's slimy tendrils of thought burning in his mind. ------ Oh- couldn't help myself, so I wrote more. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 01:09:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_380580 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_380580 Leevee Still, Elsrick was carrying on a bit much. (Which he tends to do quite often...) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 01:16:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380710 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380710 almostalice He was aware that Tannaz was having an affair with Voldermort, and he was pretty okay with that. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 01:20:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380808 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=3#forum_thread_comment_380808 Kiaira Yuni has been suffering from depression for such a long time, and in so many ways, Kiaira was really the last thread of her sanity. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 01:27:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_380940 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_380940 maxride003 He brushed out one arm, hitting Flynn in the chest and sending the thief stumbling back a couple steps and into the edge of a nearby table. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:02:13 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_381603 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_381603 Wheelsgr "You tricky little mind of mine. How do I stop you from running amok with my happiness?" Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:23:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_381948 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_381948 Twenty Thousand Eyes “Damn straight.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:35:33 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382144 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382144 Garyn01 "We take the train to [port] and take a ship over," Tam mumbled distractedly. Yes my port city is called "[port]" for now... actually I have a feeling most of my cities/countries will be called that for awhile &gt;.&gt; Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:39:19 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382202 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382202 Wheelsgr [quote=Garyn01] "We take the train to [port] and take a ship over," Tam mumbled distractedly. Yes my port city is called "[port]" for now... actually I have a feeling most of my cities/countries will be called that for awhile &gt;.&gt; [/quote] Crethnia? Haverdale? Welpole? Gornia? Buerne? Vermeerdishire? Tornmouth? Picknish? Cresthole? Clove? Rondunton? Fatherine? Dunne? Livery? Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:47:15 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382326 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382326 ChoKiba <em>Sitting up, I rubbed my eyes and looked around to see light dripping through the diamond panes of paper and glass.</em> I really like that line actually. I don't know why but there is just something about it that draws me in. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:48:00 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382339 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382339 kristelholly <em>He had only a flash of an image of it in his head, but it was enough: six legs arched like a scorpion’s, with a body slung between them the size of an iron warship. </em> Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:54:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382440 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382440 TribalCat “It’s always nice to be of service.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 02:56:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382486 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382486 samneve "and when these foundations finally broke away from under them, she would be there to clean up the mess, to retrieve the pieces of their equally insignificant lives from the rubble, to collect these pieces in files and arrange them in the correct chronological order to be sent out and studied by sympathetic men. she sat behind her desk with the posture of a dictator." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 03:00:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382530 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382530 slrphebos Being a jerk is a sign of inward pain. Got to love arguments XD Wed, 02 Nov 2011 03:02:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382576 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382576 mirandakane At least for now. oh man what a way to end a chapter for me lol. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 03:03:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382593 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382593 Emma Rosloff "Genie looked away from him, and down the tunnel uncertainly. It was dry, at least, and cool." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 03:07:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382649 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382649 MystShadow [quote] Melissa stared at the empty space in horror, her home had been there only moments ago… how could it be gone? [/quote] Heh, sounds better by itself than it does in the paragraph. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 03:10:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382695 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382695 desertxsnow "Glancing at the crank quickly, Teris gave the order for two of the strongest men to turn the crank and begin lifting the portcullis." I've been learning about castles this morning, and I'm glad I did. Found out that the metal gates had a proper name: a portcullis. Thank you, Wikipedia. :) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 03:15:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382766 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_382766 NaNo_Bot The door splintered, beams went flying and bolts clattered on the floor. The dust cleared to reveal ... Wed, 02 Nov 2011 04:02:06 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383354 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383354 Culuxi “Or what? You'll code me to death?” She retorted. Her phone went off in her room and she scurried off to answer it. :D Wed, 02 Nov 2011 04:04:58 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383400 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383400 zanitas It was just a boy and his horse; free. ^^ Wed, 02 Nov 2011 04:13:16 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383511 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383511 Chillibean Visere had taught him a variety of thrusts, twists and parries, of all of which he needed to perfect. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 04:32:24 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383736 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383736 Chillibean Aww, that's a brilliant line ^^ Wed, 02 Nov 2011 04:32:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383740 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383740 wintertulip The mothering was adequate, but could not be called loving. Jao-Lin picked up Hwa and played with her as though she were the only interesting object in a very boring room – in the same way as she passively stared at game shows on the television (how can they possibly have a television? It’s far too early) simply because there was no better alternative available at the time. Oh dear. My inner editor popped out mid-sentence ^^ Wed, 02 Nov 2011 04:38:37 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383799 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383799 Staysee "Ana it is then" He nodded Wed, 02 Nov 2011 04:38:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383801 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_383801 gyrus "I still had no idea when to use the subjunctive, but that's what revision's for, right?" Wed, 02 Nov 2011 05:21:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_384428 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_384428 hanshotfirst "Leave your problems here. There's no baggage in the afterlife, physical or emotional." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 05:36:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_384644 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_384644 MouseyCat It's hard. Being a kid and losing your friends. It's hard and nobody understands. Except they do, but you have to lead this band of dumbfucks so you can't let them see you cry. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 05:56:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_384957 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_384957 Maestro_74 "He didn't mind that Jarii hadn't done any of the loading himself; the old man was getting on in years and it was a small price to pay to secure passage to the journey of his lifetime." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 07:36:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_386660 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_386660 DeaMaxwell “I find out – via gossip and speculation – that my brother, my twin – my <em>King</em>, no matter where I am – is ill, is dying, and that nobody knows why... How could anyone expect me to keep away?” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 08:13:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_387365 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_387365 eml898 "Well, we ARE running the Universe." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 08:40:20 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_387956 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_387956 Miikaan “I’ll make you proud. I promise.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 08:50:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_388205 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_388205 Rubyfruit "Please calm down," Stella said, "We won't get caught, Nicole. Right?" Nicole frowned. "Ha." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 09:25:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389077 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389077 yamikuronue Police would be here momentarily, but all they'd find was a dead dog; I'd be long gone, riding the trains to freedom. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 09:27:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389139 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389139 Brentagon “Do you think she poses a threat to us?” “No, I don’t... We don’t yet have enough to power up the device. We will continue to do as planned.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 09:29:51 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389195 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389195 Kitty Taylor This isn't my last line, since I don't have that with me. It's the last line of an except I posted online, though: <em>I shuddered, my hand involuntarily going to my mouth.</em> Wed, 02 Nov 2011 09:33:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389284 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_389284 Philtrum "You're like a virgin, man. I'm not gonna send you into the bathroom with a carrot and expect you to come out an expert." Not nearly as dirty as it sounds out of context, cross my heart. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:24:48 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390638 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390638 DeaMaxwell “Six years is a long time,” she replied, feeling a blush spreading across her cheeks. Oh lawd, this sounds terrible out of context. ALMOST CERTAINLY NOT WHAT YOU'RE THINKING. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:30:54 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390799 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390799 Sunerun And there were a lot of them... not like in small town Middleburg. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:31:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390810 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390810 taivasblue "To come for my counting. One must proclaimed to the Queen when one turns a century." Ferenc responded. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:32:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390847 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390847 IFangirlLunaLovegood Eventually we left the kitchen. And I don't know how to carry on from this point! Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:32:32 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390855 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390855 Silenia Let me show to you what happened during the early days of the Great Rebellion. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:33:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390901 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_390901 AceyCamui He dropped the bag he'd started to pack. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:41:06 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_391109 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_391109 ShinyOne Lucifer clearly believed this, believed that this ‘second chance’ was nothing more than an illusion, a trick, something dangled above his head far too high for him to ever reach. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:50:01 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_391374 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_391374 Lowehart Her eyes abruptly opened fully, an expression of pure shock. There was nothing but complete blackness around her. There was no sensation bar the empty, frozen feeling that encompassed her entire body. She was chilled to her core, every extremity numb down to the bone. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:58:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_391633 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=5#forum_thread_comment_391633 TewiInaba Some were also covered with red spots, which sent shivers up the blonde's spine. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 10:59:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_391658 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_391658 Riibu Then she set out in her original direction again. Wow, that sounds boring. I guess I should add that she is a troll who just finished eating a shrieking squirrel. (except the tail, of course.) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:29:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_392484 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_392484 wade-newb "He chuckled casually at her helplessness." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:30:01 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_392517 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_392517 Ladypamela He had almost forgotten what his mother had looked like-- his father too for that matter-- but every once in a while something would trigger a memory that brought them to mind. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:38:59 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_392790 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_392790 SHourahine “Unless you want to get a gun shoved up your nose by the guards on floor 13a?” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:48:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393072 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393072 Miss Amyzing "What are you doing here?" the low voice asked. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:49:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393100 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393100 HisDarkMaterialsrox So far: "The Imperial Alliance must not get ahold of the Stone. " I don't mean to rain on anyone's parade, but doesn't this thread belong in the Shoutouts forum? Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:52:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393182 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393182 nomoreillusions I think G-d left us long ago. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 11:54:53 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393263 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393263 CharliGirl "Lets get these witches in the van and get them seen to." sounds a little filthy out of context... :S Wed, 02 Nov 2011 12:00:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393422 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393422 Sydaliance "The elevator doors clanged shut." Out of context, that sounds like such a boring sentence... &gt;.&gt; Wed, 02 Nov 2011 12:10:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393733 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393733 likealullaby For whether you’ve been with me since the first entry, in a cold student flat in September a lifetime away from here, or have only read one post, you know as well as I do that when I write Dear Dublin, what I really mean. Is Dear Mike. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 12:17:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393925 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_393925 BenCrome Chapter Four The Importance of Seeing Ernest I didn't want to forget my punny chapter title. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 12:33:13 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_394391 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_394391 JennyJenn "He might set fire to something or lose his gun but he managed to come through for her every time she needed him." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 12:56:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395123 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395123 Doris_Delorea "Thanks for that, too. Glad you're so happy about our survival." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 12:58:13 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395177 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395177 Fred E. Alex "Thoughts of what he could have done differently raced through his troubled and tired mind." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 12:59:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395214 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395214 Iago Grey "A child barrelled into him at that moment, and he stumbled sideways." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 13:08:58 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395499 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395499 truthfulxlies "We are destruction, as well as creation. We play god, when we have no right to do so. " Wed, 02 Nov 2011 13:22:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395918 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_395918 heather_rawriee “Not if I see you first. Catch you later, Val.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 13:24:39 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_396008 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_396008 Tin Robot “Welcome to the Colonial Marine Corps.” He made a knife-hand gesture at the door behind him. “Through there to get sworn. Next!” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 13:27:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_396103 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_396103 zandila "Then she hid the Ouija board back in the box of old napkins and set to work organizing the backstock." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 13:35:46 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_396370 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=6#forum_thread_comment_396370 ninjaobsessor "We’re going to get through this." I love Mal. &lt;3 Wed, 02 Nov 2011 13:43:00 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_396569 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_396569 hamlet_ophelia_xoxo "I want name." (end chapter) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 14:43:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_398504 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_398504 Kookyness At this point, I wanted to die. A bit weird but y'know xD Wed, 02 Nov 2011 14:48:51 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_398692 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_398692 s3rndpt Soaen stepped into the loose straps of his pack, which tightened around him and settled comfortably to his back as he changed to his wolf form, and loped after his aunt. Okay, cliche fantasy, But it's what I love, so give me a break ;) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 15:04:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399260 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399260 kat716 "And now I believe I will retire to the infirmary for some ice packs and aspirin." (He just took a saucepan to the back of the head, then hit his forehead on the table.) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 15:14:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399605 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399605 Picc Jack, you don’t have to do this. Leave great quests for hero’s and kings, for people like us isn’t it enough to survive. To which Jack will have a witty rejoinder as soon as I get back from the dentists. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 15:17:57 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399713 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399713 MissMaro I do feel safer with him nearby, at least while Ethan is not in jail. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 15:22:20 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_399867 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_399867 Geesafaire "That Catherine O'Leary, being a Catholic and an immigrant, was just a scapegoat, and that her cow, much like Billy Joel, didn’t start the fire? Is that what you were going to point out?" Wed, 02 Nov 2011 15:25:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399978 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_399978 ChoKiba But that was not the reality that I had woken up to. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 15:43:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_400684 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_400684 Spuggey “Jasira! We’re gonna break the door in!” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:28:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_401952 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_401952 rayne_448 Except me and you ain't anorexic. I mean seriously. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:29:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_401974 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_401974 DeaMaxwell “If you would please come with me immediately... Your Majesty.” The last line in a chapter, spoken to a man who is, if you asked anyone, only a [i]prince[/i]. DUN DUN DUNNNN. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:31:14 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402040 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402040 GillyF If this was the maverick - no wonder Kitty was entranced. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:32:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402087 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402087 booboobear . Her small Suzuki Swift did not have the werewithal to withstand that kind of impact, and while her airbags did deploy, they also exploded as the cars motor came rushing towards her after rupturing the firewall. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:38:07 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402306 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402306 September Garland One thing the crows did not take into account when attempting what seemed to be an easy task of stealing bits of a wild man's scrumptious apple pies was the stubbornness and territorial nature of this wild man in particular. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:43:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402526 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402526 TheFool He wondered where his head had ended up, then he sank back down and away from even the barest trace of thought. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:44:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402550 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402550 iymcool Breathing deeply the nun stepped forward. “Render unto Caesar.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:44:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402567 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402567 DalanieBeach This definitely wasn’t its first major blood stain my carpeting had endured. He he. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 16:54:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402893 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_402893 brandnewriot3 “Oh yeah, that,” Phoebe lied. “So?” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:03:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_403247 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_403247 LilacLex The Watcher picked up his cell, feeling the complete opposite of eager, that he had to inform his boss of the new - albeit minor- development. Finished my most recent chapter with that. I think my brain is fried. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:13:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_403598 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_403598 hdnelson13 She shook her head twice and sniffed once. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:15:25 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_403670 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_403670 rinkatur As Evan relaxed, sagging as sleep claimed him, he mumbled inexplicably, “So worth it.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:16:26 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_403712 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_403712 spooks101 And just like that, he was silenced. For a while anyway. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:16:32 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_403717 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_403717 InClaraVoce “Perhaps, after I turn in my forms.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:25:09 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_404043 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_404043 LilacLex Lol love that ;P Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:25:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_404057 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=7#forum_thread_comment_404057 Ydenne Michael smiled and pulled the ragged, slightly damp, green bill out of the glass. It had her number written on it. Technically two lines, but they were written as one. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:30:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_404219 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_404219 Valyawen Elf She spent the rest of the lunch break on edge, glancing around for whatever was staring at her. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 17:40:59 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_404626 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_404626 Taekwondodo The last I wrote was the title for the next chapter: Chapter Three: In which our female protagonist has a really weird dream, with cookies, but of course she will not remember it when she wakes up. I'm also trying to type it up as I go and the last line I typed was: The look of calm detachment on her face showed she was probably as engrossed in her task as I had been, I had probably been wearing exactly the same expression. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:04:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405526 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405526 Rarity “Find those kids. Make them talk. You can’t let them get away with murder, Louis.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:07:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405639 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405639 Scott Gardener Ooh... I left off at a nice moment... [quote]Besides, once you feel the body of a wolf, you might find it more comfortable, more normal than you think.[/quote] Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:12:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405836 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405836 Scott Gardener quick clarification: the character was talking about [i]becoming[/i] a wolf. It was not intended to mean a certain other interpretation that came to mind when I read my post! Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:14:09 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405909 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_405909 J.Rush Glinting off a pitcher of stirred vodka martinis swimming in ice, the flickering candle matched the moonlight streaming through the window, matched it and amplified it, showing off a table loaded with victuals served up in glass trays, silver platters, tiered relish dishes, chaffing wells all stacked one on the other, the modern cornucopia--the cornucopia of the 50s that is. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:17:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406040 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406040 munkylover "Get some proper shoes, child!" Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:23:53 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406255 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406255 olivia catherine Until that night, when Darcy had long since gone to his own room after watching Letterman and I lay awake, staring at the ceiling wondering why she had put so much emphasis on the word "me". Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:23:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406260 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406260 emmyjoe. And no one else had found their hiding place and if they did, they stayed clear of it anyway in fear of its occupants. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:27:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406384 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406384 maxride003 “That’s more than enough, thank you, sir,” Kyome said after he recovered from his shock, his twin echoing the thanks quietly, as it seemed more than appropriate at the moment. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:33:09 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406607 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406607 writethewrong It seemed to work, no one paid any attention. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:39:54 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406883 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_406883 Zukdeen Jared picked Tyrone up and carried him on arms running to his bedroom, so it was just Jess and me. My parents were working, and they wouldn't come back until the evening. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 18:56:48 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407482 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407482 Zeichwolf Conveniently, I just finished up the last paragraph of my Introduction chapter... “Why… we’re just going to go about business as usual. We won’t let this Effigy get away…” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:02:33 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407676 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407676 Tiapn "She had died soon after, and besides his religious convictions he also felt obligated to wear the cross in her memory, even if he had been very young and they had only met for a short time." Mikhail's fiddling with his cross necklace. Bad idea, Mika, you don't know it yet but that's the trigger to the headaches and the nightmares! :o Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:07:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407858 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407858 flyawaybefree It wouldn’t do much good if they would run away before they could take messages, would it? Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:09:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407955 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407955 RedPanda11 "We have a deal." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:10:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407973 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=8#forum_thread_comment_407973 JettaBaby Jessa was a bit afraid that she would only make a fool of herself. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:32:32 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_408809 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_408809 miss_dede Humans were fickle creatures, and their thought were <em>delicious</em>. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:32:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_408817 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_408817 bhudfops It wasn't until she was out of his line of sight that she realized her heart was beating a mile a minute. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:32:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_408818 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_408818 RobertSnozers Still, he did not believe it was conducive to discipline for one so young and inexperienced to be displaying initiative. Initiative, he reflected, is for post-rank. Until that time a man would do well to confine himself to obeying orders, efficiently and without question. He would have a word with the First Lieutenant about it. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:39:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409125 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409125 RobertSnozers Ooh, I like Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:40:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409158 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409158 jenkatclaire He would live to see the Rose Throne Fall. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:41:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_409170 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_409170 Heranje When Miriam woke up, she was in her bed. (Wouldn't be that surprising, except she was in a grey market tent drinking narcotic tea in the previous scene) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:44:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409316 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409316 Heranje That's fantastic. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:45:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409351 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409351 doctor confidence That was the first time I ever met Via. I had no idea what I was getting myself into. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:51:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409603 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409603 PrettyPoppy Isobel didn't know what he wanted or who he was, and now that her faculties were starting to return, it finally occured to her that, perhaps, she should be wary of the stranger who had brought her into his home. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:54:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409702 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409702 Jessari Ezekiel Morrow was an honest man, as honest as the dirt he plowed, but a man just couldn't tell his neighbors that his daughter had to leave because she'd been cursed. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 19:55:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409730 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_409730 MouseyCat [quote]Without thinking you scream, long and loud and high enough to hurt your own ears; the dog person - Jack Noir, it has to be, even though he's dead it <em>has to be</em> - stumbles back in shock and pain but you've lost your balance and you're falling - then you hit the water, and it's so cold it <em>burns</em> and your scream's cut off by the shock.[/quote] I'm writing in second person and I don't even care. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 20:06:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410139 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410139 bissybear “Okay B, whatever you say,” said Noah. ...very exciting, I know :D Wed, 02 Nov 2011 20:20:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410661 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410661 Nixosia "Mildly disappointed to find that there wasn’t any medical tape to hold it down with, she pulled out several bandaids and taped it down with that." Yay for boys walking into a zombie invasion moderately unprepared! Wed, 02 Nov 2011 20:25:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410838 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410838 imextremelyfamous “That was definitely not a tree.” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 20:26:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410865 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410865 AudeS All my fault, Ronan thought. Mama has left, and Daddy is sad, all because of me. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 20:28:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410924 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_410924 Marie.94 "She slammed the door behind her and buried herself under the covers." Yup, that's my boring and not so well written line. *Hits inner editor on the head* Shut up! You're not allowed to complain about how well written my sentences are yet!!! Wed, 02 Nov 2011 20:33:20 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_411123 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_411123 Toasty. Their thoughts were louder than their footsteps against the road. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 20:57:25 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412010 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412010 French Muse It was a sort of unplanned pact they had formed as expats in a non-anglophone setting. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:08:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412370 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412370 nerrdygrrl15 "Ha! We’ll get all you extras, you won’t stand a chance! And then we’ll come back for you-” April cuts the speaker off, a blond boy. “Shut up." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:21:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412790 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412790 Mirrorakay "My eyes burned with the threat of tears, but I choked them down; that salty fog would only keep me from seeing that kind, soft heart that those brown eyes bore in them." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:23:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412866 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_412866 roxaslover1693 that made Near shiver like no other. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:28:46 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_413044 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_413044 DarkAutumn "She was too irritated and worn out to care about getting comfortable, which was all for the better, since all she had to lean against were tree roots." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:32:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_413159 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_413159 Vincentus "Welcome to Warlocking, ladies and gentlemen. You're in for a trip." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:32:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413167 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413167 flounce Her husband was a punctual man. hehe. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:38:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413346 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413346 IOwnSarcasm The stars are out, and the sky is a deep sapphire blue. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:40:13 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413422 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413422 sweet pandamonium I leaned up and placed my hand on his face, my lips softly and chastely pressing to his cheek. “I love you too." Yay for fluffy scenes. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:43:33 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413542 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413542 whargdfa Yet however whimsical he may have appeared, the gestalt of his form was in no conflict with the surrounding ruin. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:45:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413629 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413629 16nire61 “I mean, if the misty smell came off of it like we think it did, we should be able to get a whiff from a distance and know what to look for, right?” Using cats is turning out to be even more fun than I thought. :3 Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:46:07 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413637 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413637 catlark I love this. it makes me thing of Mrs. Bridge. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:47:03 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413677 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413677 morgo7kc I went to sleep. This may seem kind of boring out of context, but I swear i's not! Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:49:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413769 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413769 LilithDee Lila Apple’s best option right now would be to run, and run far. But she doesn’t know that and that makes her mine. Kinda creepy. o.o Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:52:19 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413869 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413869 samalane The green eyes stuck with him though, and for the first time Brennan felt apprehensive about what lay ahead of him. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:52:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413885 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413885 sacherjj “How in the hell am I getting out of this?” Wed, 02 Nov 2011 21:54:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413935 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_413935 nationalcool 'However, this proved a bad decision on her part for she slipped on something slippery that coated the area on which she was standing, causing her to fall backward and hit her head against the short wooden wall and knocking her out instantly.' Wed, 02 Nov 2011 22:30:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415193 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415193 angel2161 Crap. (yes that was my last line. nothing like ending your day with cursing) Wed, 02 Nov 2011 22:31:59 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415267 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415267 RWBmovies Upon hearing his name, the boy sighed, and solemnly waved goodbye. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 22:38:54 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415524 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415524 W.E.D. Though every time I saw her, I just remembered that obnoxious girl interrogating Jonathan and Johanna on the first day--- I stopped there, I like to leave things open ended so that I HAVE to come back to it or else it will kill me. lol Wed, 02 Nov 2011 22:47:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415774 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415774 abscg613 "It was a moment that would have lived infamy in the department, had the department lasted." dun dun dun! *laughs at own ridiculousness* Wed, 02 Nov 2011 22:49:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415841 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415841 seanlanefuller He walked on. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 22:51:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415903 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415903 Serena Darrin She looks familiar. Elric thought. Like I’ve seen her before. But I’ve never seen her. I know that. There is more -- I'm in the middle of a prohpetic vision. But I'm stuck so I'm going to switch scenes. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 22:53:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415957 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_415957 buddhaha Just because you die don’t mean you don’t still have birthdays. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 23:01:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_416211 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_416211 lifelessmind I reached a good stopping point for the day with this line: "Don't be ridiculous," she scoffed, pulling her helmet on to her head. "He's trying to kill me." Wed, 02 Nov 2011 23:07:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_416436 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_416436 catsrnice “All right” Mr. Clarke said and steered the sub toward the treasure chest. lol Wed, 02 Nov 2011 23:08:01 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_416447 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=10#forum_thread_comment_416447 TheGreatCurve And that was only the first stanza. Wed, 02 Nov 2011 23:14:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_416641 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_416641 Destiny515 She could handle this. She would handle it. With no one the wiser to her inner fears and demons. Now I want to know what comes next. So I'll have to show up on the page tomorrow. :) Great sentences everyone. I'm intrigued! Wed, 02 Nov 2011 23:17:09 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_416734 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_416734 author-person “My Freddie,” he said, though whether he was reminiscing to himself or offering an explanation, Sean had no way of knowing. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:05:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418028 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418028 Seera "No duh, Silas. A military proposition is bound to put me into a very dangerous situation and I was not about to accept it lightly. Now if I could just switch to being a chef, I would do it. But we both know that isn't going to happen." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:22:53 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418426 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418426 Realta ".... If you say so." Meissa almost hit himself in the head, he hand't meant to sound sullen of all things. "I do think the gods are interesting." he was somewhat defensive in his tone of voice. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:25:06 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418479 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418479 helios90 She held a leather bound notebook clasped tightly to her chest - in white cursive it read "The Order of Echoes." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:29:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418578 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418578 kyahpearl "Don't sass me, do what I say! Pour the hot water in the tub then fill up those pots and place them back on the stove. I'm going to need to soak in a hot bath if I have to tangle with a tenant's drunk husband." She patted the railroad spike sitting out of her dress pocket and started down the stairs. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:33:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418697 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418697 aftersh0cks And it was the week before college was about to start. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:34:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418727 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418727 Wild_Child “We will hold a council tomorrow, first thing in the morning. We must decide where we go from here.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:44:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418957 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_418957 Final_Precipice I find thread like this really interesting :3 “Why in the world did it take us this long to even think about doing this, I mean what is with that, how in the world does it compute that I had to be dying for us to finally spend this time together?” Now I need to come up with a just as dramatic response.... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:49:57 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419071 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419071 detailsofthewar Once I was sure that the kids were out of earshot, I broke down. I cried until there weren't any tears left. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 00:52:24 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419133 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419133 supersinger473 "What are you looking at Chekhov, I’m not some dumb little girl who can be swooned by a sexy accent and a kind deed. Stop looking at me like that!” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 01:13:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419582 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419582 Nziz She ran across the rooftops of the city with news of sabotage and thievery to report. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 01:13:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419588 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419588 blue_days Ransom left him to his thoughts. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 01:14:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419600 helios90 Haha this one sounds awesome! Thu, 03 Nov 2011 01:20:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419707 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419707 aftersh0cks I was struck by Karen, yes, but the one thing I didn’t know back then was that this girl, this one coffee shop girl I had met … she would be the girl to turn my life around, and for the best. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 01:28:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419865 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_419865 MaxieKabi "Only the sound of their footsteps filled the air, well, along of the smell of sweat and marijuana that came off Patrick’s clothes." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 01:41:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420052 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420052 KedaseDerragar [quote]He laughed nervously. “S**t, I'm lucky they didn't try to get into my head.”[/quote] I like it. It's right in the middle of a scene that I'm about to pick back up and keep working on. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 02:05:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420411 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420411 Shaz-a-Fraz "The thought of marrying him and having children with him seemed so outside the realm of possibility, but the more Yelle thought about it, the more sense it made. In fact, it seemed like Malko was really her best match." I think it's a good leaving place and I'm excited to pick back up on it later today. :) Thu, 03 Nov 2011 02:12:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420510 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420510 miss_dede Thanks! I'm creeping myself out writing this character, he's so skeezy! Thu, 03 Nov 2011 02:13:33 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_420518 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=9#forum_thread_comment_420518 Desert.Moon But she took the old man’s lesson, and hoped his heart would not ache too dearly when he awoke to find his granddaughter gone again. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 02:14:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420531 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420531 Skyuni123 Mine was: "She sauntered across the room and lay down on the couch to wait for Damien." Yeah.. yesterday's was much more exciting. I can't actually remember it though, and I'm too tired to actually go back on Word and look it up... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 02:16:48 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420569 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=11#forum_thread_comment_420569 Katherine Pearl The stairway seemed much higher and darker than it had before. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 02:35:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_420809 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_420809 thing "and I shot a sparrow from a branch with Brush’s air pistol" Well, you did ask! But what I wanted to say is this is beginning to be such fun - despite it being only day three. And don't get me wrong - I'm still struggling, like this morning I've not met my target yet - but I guess I'm beGINning to relax a bit, and letting the story start to go where it wants rather than writing what I had planned. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 03:03:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421135 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421135 Lana "I hope that you find what you're looking for." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 03:21:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421349 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421349 Raben Il che voleva dire guai. (Which meant troubles.) Thu, 03 Nov 2011 03:51:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421674 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421674 whoiscraig "Yes, I'm just... I guess I'm still in disbelief. We've wanted this for so long... to finally see the two lines on the stick was... shocking." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 03:55:57 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421719 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421719 DeborahObrien I imagined my mother waiting fruitlessly at the cafe for my arrival, and I felt hot tears welling in my eyes. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 04:05:16 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421831 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_421831 wintertulip Thus the day was one last day of pretence before they were set free. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 04:52:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_422372 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_422372 AngelicaS She was in one of those ‘fuck-the-the-world’ moods where nothing and no one existed. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 05:14:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_422616 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_422616 zanitas thank you ^^ Thu, 03 Nov 2011 06:35:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_423593 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=4#forum_thread_comment_423593 delphii "She watched out her window." There's something off in the grammar, there... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 06:36:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_423614 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_423614 Papa Poe "The plough trundled behind him, cutting reluctantly through the hard earth." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 06:40:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_423672 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_423672 Papa Poe That is probably the least that's happened so far! LOL Thu, 03 Nov 2011 06:47:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_423776 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_423776 Pikapi Pikachu "Would she ever see it again?" Just now XD Depressing, isn't it? Thu, 03 Nov 2011 07:07:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_424048 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_424048 Driftwings She was the Chosen Queen, we were unable to do anything to stand against her until your arrival. ^_~ Thu, 03 Nov 2011 07:30:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_424389 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_424389 Raeka A thought about possibly being claustrophobic drifted through her head, but she brushed it away for another days thinking. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 07:44:06 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_424624 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_424624 Lisa.Vail She reached out her hand and, careful to only touch his wrist, began walking back toward the manorhouse. Yeah.... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 08:24:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_425398 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_425398 ThePurpleTrombone "I’m not sure how Charlotte expects us to get food while we’re in the Labyrinth, but I don’t think that there’s an abundance of McDonald’s drive throughs belowground." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 09:10:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_426357 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_426357 columbibueno "...Those who worship idols: Nazi Blackshirts, death, repeating reels, choose which whore pleases the most.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 09:46:00 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_427233 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_427233 patriciarakel She didn’t even know if her sister – my mother – was alive. So exciting! Not really... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 09:50:16 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_427330 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_427330 DreamerOfStories Ducking back in she closes the door and ushers the girls into the Thu, 03 Nov 2011 09:58:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_427519 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_427519 Ithinktoomuch " But nothing in the world was going to make me move him." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 10:23:54 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_428128 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_428128 RachelInnes1st 'And the man catcher has arrived,' Tom muttered, and Zoe raised her hand and swore at him across the table. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 10:27:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_428239 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_428239 ThePQ4 Aw, I wish I had seen this sooner... My latest "last line" isn't very exciting: “Well, I have been living as a girl for almost a year now.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 11:14:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_429446 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_429446 thing thought-provoking enough, though. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 11:31:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_429872 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_429872 thing ...well (if it bothers you) over here we would have said "out OF the window" Thu, 03 Nov 2011 11:33:58 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_429933 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=12#forum_thread_comment_429933 hknamida Oh, crap… Well, here it is: “Yes.” My latest non-dialogue line reads thus: He brought his gaze up to eye height, thinking it more proper than staring at her feet—fine feet though they were, he added to himself. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 11:44:05 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430207 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430207 AlyRuth "“Kiko!” squealed Loe, “You keep stepping on my foot!" My MC had to dance with the local queer. :) Thu, 03 Nov 2011 11:50:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430364 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430364 zendifferential Mine is depressing: The rent hike they’d gotten in January had soaked up all discretionary spending cash, including savings. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 11:59:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430602 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430602 sonneh-starrr " But, with my luck, he's snoring away a few moments later and I find myself softly laughing and curling up against him, sleep moments away." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 11:59:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430613 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430613 cchapman84 The last one I wrote (about 2 minutes ago) was: ' “Damn,” she said aloud as she opened the valve to let excess steam escape from the old engine.' Thu, 03 Nov 2011 12:00:40 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430646 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430646 WShakespeare What Harold found even more surprising, however, was that Victor, now sporting a shiny new black eye, was led out of the room a few a minutes later. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 12:08:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430837 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_430837 Red Mosquito I love reading all of these together, it's like someone should put them in a book - sort of fantasy, romance, mystery - it's pretty fun. My last line so far today (kind of boring) - "Which room should they get at the Hotel Andaluz?" Thu, 03 Nov 2011 12:51:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432030 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432030 Writer Al "Bye, little one. Talk to you soon." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 12:53:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432064 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432064 Iago Grey Alfred was clinging to his horse as if it was about to rear up, Nicholas was about fall off his horse because it transpired he hadn’t slept for two days, and Rhys was trying to erase the last three hours from memory. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 13:11:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432565 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432565 KJG003 "As he trudged towards the surgeons through the sucking mud, he saw the faint outline of the towers through the pouring rain and wondered if the city had ever seen a sunny day." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 13:23:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432922 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_432922 callistos_angel "It was this promise that had lead to their first picnic out in the wide gardens, Rosalinde taking Daisy out for a long ride to the furthest edges of the gardens and finding a nice tree in the centre of a bank of hedges to shelter them from the wind and any possible prying eyes. " ... I slightly love this line. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 13:28:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_433051 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_433051 AHopefulRomantic I have totally done the same thing. My lead character bought her first house and describing her new decor was not only a great boost to word count, but also an interesting view into her style and personality. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 13:30:33 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_433115 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_433115 AHopefulRomantic "I like it down there this time of year since it isn’t covered in tourists and the weather hasn’t gotten totally inhospitable." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 13:32:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_433161 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_433161 Koriat Cyredanthem “Will you… help me name him?” Leo asked, voice cracking again. Don blinked and stared into the river, watching the baby's ashes swirl away with the current. “Of course, Leo.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 13:58:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_433848 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_433848 Kelucia I was trying to be civil, but obviously that wasn't going to work. Ah, the joys of FMC meeting MMC. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 14:03:39 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434005 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434005 Labman "He knew from past experience that crying would just earn him another jaw-shattering backhand from his older brother." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 14:13:32 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434252 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434252 SimbaDarling "Got any coffee?" Ironic for NaNo much? Thu, 03 Nov 2011 14:16:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434361 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434361 angiegoboom "God help me." he thought to himself. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 14:28:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434717 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434717 TamChronin You won’t win me just because you say it’s going to be so. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 14:36:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434974 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_434974 callistos_angel "It had taken Dr. Clarkson, Sarah, Rosalinde and Isobel to safely return Cora to bed, Sarah the only one to stay with Cora as she needed rest, although she would need waking every hour to see she was still responsive and able to see. " Wow, I'm mean... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 14:58:13 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_435677 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=13#forum_thread_comment_435677 Mr. Z הוא עשה את שלו; הוא לא הולך לרוץ אחרי יריבו. And that's the most difficult-to-translate thing I've ever written. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 15:10:26 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_436067 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_436067 thehealthyalternative And I really hope Libby doesn't somehow ruin it. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 15:16:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_436257 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_436257 .Cypher. "An unforgettable sound... and the last sound the Greene family heard." Woo for car accidents! Thu, 03 Nov 2011 15:26:15 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_436541 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_436541 avantgardea Today's my first day of not-totally-devoted-to-stream of consciousness-stuff, so here goes: "The last time she’d read something in bed, her mother had set fire to it." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 16:06:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_437906 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_437906 Brussel Sprout "And there would be more." A weirdly Nano-propriate thought.... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 16:09:06 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_438010 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_438010 Zozz "[...]There are greater powers at play here than you understand.” Haha, pretty good summary of my novel. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 16:19:25 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_438393 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_438393 Bleistift_B For today it was: Down here, away from the rest of the world, Malik at least hoped, that he would find some inner peace - at least for a few short hours. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 16:27:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_438704 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_438704 WhitNate Gertrude wordlessly led the way. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:19:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440448 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440448 AlchemyAndWaffles Deaf to its crying, she told her, 'Hurry up and get smashing those bottles, we need plenty of broken glass.' Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:24:48 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440626 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440626 writeandknow He was working on getting up on his knees when he saw the door slam shut. Well, so much for that escape route. (Okay, it's two sentences, but hey!) Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:33:40 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440945 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440945 Jraine But it never came, even so it took Adam a full half an hour to retreat from the relative safety of his sofa. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:34:46 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440990 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_440990 LilacLex No one else would know of this.... Didn't realize how ominous that sounded until I typed it here - lol! Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:35:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441014 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441014 missyujin But here was this proud, self-absorbed nymph, and she knew Edward for who he was and knew he was alive. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:39:14 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441141 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441141 xXDeaths_AngelXx [quote] Did I tell you the story about the time that June was convinced our dog Missy had melted?"[/quote] ... xD Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:40:39 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441196 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441196 Watyrfall The moment their feet touched the inner deck, Payton yelled, "We're safe," into her comm. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 17:44:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441322 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441322 rainbowcrash96 At least I had some friends; I considered myself fortunate for that reason. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:02:26 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441896 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_441896 Don't Push The Red Button King Efon sat at the head of the table, and the light coming in from the window opposite him made his large crown shine in his grey hair. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:08:24 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_442102 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_442102 MashaBGD “He wants me to take care of the newbie. God, can you imagine?” Yes, Hilton, she can imagine. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:13:39 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_442276 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_442276 brandnewriot3 “Nope,” she said, trying to keep her smile in place. “Just me.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:26:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_442717 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_442717 adklib "It pisses off the grumpy people.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:35:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_443026 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=14#forum_thread_comment_443026 hoperoseeve Now, to find a job. Umm... okay. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:43:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443292 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443292 rainbowroach But they were already long gone, hidden by the darkness of the otherwise silent night. It sounds much cooler than it actually was. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:43:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443309 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443309 IOwnSarcasm "I slip my shoes off by the door and hope no one notices how dirty they are." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:44:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443330 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443330 Silver_ocean “You'll be safe now. I'm here to take you home,” she heard the man say in a voice that seemed to calm for what he had just done. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:45:19 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443353 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443353 Brian83 He couldn't be alone for the rest of his life. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:55:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443659 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443659 tlb713 She fell to the ground clutching her head. wow, out of context that seems really random... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:56:57 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443735 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443735 BELLSPROUT They moved at full speed in whatever direction he wanted, at least he had gained the ability to bring them to a stop with his practise. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:57:02 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443739 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443739 apocalemon “How many did you try?” Michael asked quietly. She slowly raised her head and looked up at him with an expression that was almost pity. “All of them.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 18:57:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443753 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_443753 Arcana [quote] Both of us were silent, until eventually everything stopped, and the cat daringly let out a loud, warning meow. [/quote] My character has a strange cat for a companion at the moment... Thu, 03 Nov 2011 19:34:53 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_444863 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_444863 GallifreyGirl I tiptoed over to the stack of plastic crates and rooted through the mess for a minute before coming across a candy bar that looked edible. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 19:45:00 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_445152 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_445152 J.Rush It was a thing of the Dimmen Murk, an entity of the Outer Darkness and its dread principalities, something driven by gluttony, an avatar of malice itself. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 20:02:40 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_445667 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_445667 Marie.94 Daughter of James and Marilyn or not, Raine didn’t seem to know anything useful to them. Now Amos just had to explain that to him. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 20:04:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_445712 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_445712 Hezzi He wiped his face dry and then sat at the larger table to eat. Epic... just epic &gt;.&lt; Thu, 03 Nov 2011 20:32:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_446559 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_446559 Nikki909909 "Dexter had planned to hold the door open for Holly, yet as he saw how the frail elderly woman perilously tottered from the weak support of the cane, he let the door start to ease itself shut as he let go of it, quickly stepping forward to grab her bony elbow. " Thu, 03 Nov 2011 20:38:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_446740 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_446740 R_C_LandPsMommy05 The second dream ended with me questioning which ones I should fear and which I should be okay with. That was Caden, a boy who just figured out he can see and talk to his dead mother. He's more than a little freaked about this. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 20:43:05 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_446885 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_446885 phnx "'Naturally, we didn't find you, but we did find a group of people like those we saw on the ship, except worse—and decaying!'" Thu, 03 Nov 2011 20:43:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_446887 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_446887 LilithDee She stands in the doorway, staring at me like she’s never seen a grown man cry before. She probably hasn’t. I’m fucking pathetic. Yay Cory being a whiny self-loathing child who's so full of angst I'm drowning in it. YAY! Thu, 03 Nov 2011 21:00:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_447413 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_447413 There's a Panda on the Internet The sky was still its morning gray color, with the sun just barely peeking out over the tops of the Floridian palm trees and various skyscrapers on the horizon. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 21:33:09 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_448410 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_448410 Ruadhan_ They paused, cheeks flushed with the energetic aura that only Autumn instills. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 21:49:26 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_448927 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_448927 Apiecalypse "I can't anymore" Thu, 03 Nov 2011 21:49:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_448933 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_448933 AlyRuth "The two were masters of emotional evasion." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 22:19:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_449797 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_449797 Playerh8rsk8r16 “In a sec!” he calls down, his mat of blonde hair poking out through the rungs of the ladder. “Gotta fix my hair. This shit takes time.” I can’t imagine what about Comet’s perfect hair could possibly need to be fixed, but I let it slide and continue down to the floor. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 22:29:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_450115 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_450115 .izzy21. "Now that she was finally able to see where she was going, Axel sat down at the desk and placed the candle at her side." Thu, 03 Nov 2011 22:53:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_450797 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=15#forum_thread_comment_450797 a_prettywar “Right away, sir.” A longer pause. “It’s been a long time since I have been called to a scene like that and… frankly, I don’t know how anyone survived. They are pretty goddamn lucky.” “Well, they’re not out of the woods yet. We’ll do everything we can.” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 22:56:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_450868 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_450868 Zinerith Mine was the very end og chapter 2 :P (I need to write today's quota of words still! :O) It's: Mark felt a chill spread across his back. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 22:59:33 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_450963 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_450963 fumbleweeds [quote]I'm disturbed, and it suddenly feels much colder.[/quote] SUPER dull out of context! Thu, 03 Nov 2011 23:22:40 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_451618 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_451618 Burnt Sushi “Actually, I call it my Travelling Shovel of Death. And I use it to decap zombies.” The woman wiped her palm along her denim-clad thigh and looked up. “Are you still here?” Thu, 03 Nov 2011 23:49:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452268 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452268 mariop715 The bartender finally refilled Jacob's whiskey. As he slopped it, Jacob acknowledged the ease in obliterating Eddie Sanchez's essence. But, without Marie to consecrate that liberation, the victory seemed nugatory. Anyway, he only had sixteen bullets, and they all insisted on real estate on the wall amongst the patchwork cubism of Jacob's scattered parietal lobe – whenever that would be. Thu, 03 Nov 2011 23:55:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452400 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452400 ChoKiba I took it feeling my stomach twist with anxiety as I read the writing on the front. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 00:06:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452620 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452620 shockvaluecola He worried about her when she got drunk like this. She spent a lot of her life mildly buzzed, but she only got fucked-in-half, knock-down-drag-out hammered like this when something was going wrong in her life. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 00:07:01 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452641 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_452641 iWrite23 Michelle was so excited, and by the time the doorbell rang for the first time, she was surprised to find she hadn’t thought once about universities or Scott all day. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 00:34:58 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_453178 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_453178 tchaikovsky This is the last thing I wrote and I'm like dancing with my cats right now: [quote]Uprighting in an instant, the man hurdled toward Merlin once more, extending a hand out for a shake. “Hello, hello. Wow, this is—this is quite the honor. I—I—I—wow.” A high pitched squeal escaped from his lips. “I’m the Doctor.” Merlin shook his hand. “Hello, the Doctor.” He laughed breathlessly. “No, no. Just Doctor.” “Sorry,” said Merlin. "Erm, hello, Doctor." [/quote] Fri, 04 Nov 2011 01:25:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454066 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454066 TrueLoveWaits116 He wishes she knew what he was feeling at that moment, but knows its best she doesn’t. She has too much to deal with. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 01:26:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454071 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454071 TrueLoveWaits116 Refering to Doctor Who? :) [quote=tchaikovsky] This is the last thing I wrote and I'm like dancing with my cats right now: [quote]Uprighting in an instant, the man hurdled toward Merlin once more, extending a hand out for a shake. “Hello, hello. Wow, this is—this is quite the honor. I—I—I—wow.” A high pitched squeal escaped from his lips. “I’m the Doctor.” Merlin shook his hand. “Hello, the Doctor.” He laughed breathlessly. “No, no. Just Doctor.” “Sorry,” said Merlin. "Erm, hello, Doctor." [/quote] [/quote] Fri, 04 Nov 2011 01:27:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454093 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454093 Hezzi One step at a time, and Aretha would be healed again. She would make sure of it. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 01:37:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454252 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454252 tchaikovsky Yep xD It's a Merlin/Doctor Who crossover! Fri, 04 Nov 2011 01:46:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454370 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454370 Seera "I'll give you guys a few days to get used to Prometheus and then we'll start the training. I'll let Bethany show you guys to your quarters so you guys can get settled in." [Keturah] Fri, 04 Nov 2011 01:51:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454446 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_454446 Rachie615 He closed his good eye and tried to look at her, but he found only white light and shadows where he knew she was sitting. "What do you want me to ask you?" He said and lowered his hand back to his side. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 03:19:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_455485 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_455485 MysteriousFlower Kate’s voice was solemn but her blue eyes still remained passionate. “Because I think I have enough to create a profile” Fri, 04 Nov 2011 03:27:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_455575 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_455575 Lucien Jay Forgetting to utter an apology, he quickly ran out of the room, down the stairs, and out of the brothel, never looking back in case he would see Jack’s face mocking him through the doorway. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 03:45:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_455767 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_455767 shockvaluecola So that last line I posted got thrown out, but I got to use this a few pages later: Gary let himself out and somehow, the girls navigated to Joy's bed. Just in time, too; Joy basically collapsed onto her bed and said something unintelligible into the pillow. Jesus. This girl was fucked-in-half, knock-down-drag-out hammered. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 05:09:07 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_456590 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_456590 Seren “No, Mister Fleming. I expect you to die.” Mortimus shouted the last word in Ian’s face before stepping out of the room. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 05:18:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_456682 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_456682 HunteroTheGreat I was standing on the back of an air- breathing anglerfish the size of a helicopter, and it was rising out of the sand for the sole purpose of ruining my day. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 05:26:14 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_456757 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_456757 J.E.Blackworth But the more she tried to think of a last memory, the more slippery it became and slipped through her fingers like water. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 05:52:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_457041 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_457041 thesunscreen Once April had finished preparing the food we each sat down with what was left of the water and ate the meal. Justice was the first to comment, "Lion is a much better cook." Fri, 04 Nov 2011 06:06:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_457169 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_457169 knaffhauser But I think we're on a path to a brighter and a blonder tomorrow, don't you, Jack? Oh, yes, Denise, I think so. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 06:20:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_457332 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_457332 poi_son_joy He stayed out there until the bell rang, then had to run to his next class. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 06:26:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_457381 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_457381 NaNo_Bot But the tide would turn. In R’lyeh, the tide always turned. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 08:14:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_458897 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_458897 Gitel She knelt on the bed and pushed his jacket off his shoulders. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 08:59:24 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_459715 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_459715 Espenoah I couldn’t put my finger on it at the time, but the word I was looking for to describe her was “human.” Fri, 04 Nov 2011 09:54:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_460882 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_460882 atrumsolsolis “I need to go inside. They're going to need these dishes for dinner tonight.” Natasha said abruptly. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 09:57:24 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_460944 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_460944 fuuhase “To the best possible kind of crazy, huh? Cheers.” Fri, 04 Nov 2011 09:57:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_460951 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_460951 Marion Morico Lady Svandia blinked in confusion when Fyra, looking back over her shoulder, harshly stated: "I don't require any alms from you - or anyone else." Fri, 04 Nov 2011 10:08:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_461171 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_461171 R_C_LandPsMommy05 Two lines, technically, but I think it makes more sense with the first being there: She told me I was normal and so did my mom. And I was glad…until Mom died. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 11:25:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_462913 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_462913 doggy Just breaking 13,000 words written today, for my finale, was this line: He felt, above his crown chakra, his chi expanding - ACTIVELY expanding, getting bigger with each breath, which, believe it, was straight up CONSCIOUS - and as his chi expanded, expanded, expanded, it went up through the roof, breifly defended itself against some bombardment as it encountered strong magneto-psycho waves from radio stations and cell towers and big metal buildings nearby - they slid off his aura like a buttery wet seal on a waterslide - and kept expanding up, briefly tickling as it passed through the ionosphere and the ozone layer, and then began to "dissolve outward" as it made contact with the chi of heaven - the chi of the universe - which felt exactly identical to his Infinite Imagination that he'd felt on polka dot powder, except this was very chilled out, coming in cool trickles and rivulets of organic energy, rather than last night, which was like having chi rammed through a pressure washer in every nadi of his 46,000~ or so channels, especially his eyes, which reanimated every lost color in his previous spectrum. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 12:14:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_463977 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_463977 bricemaiurro She says hi to Henry. Henry says hi back. It's funny how out of context that sounds like See Spot. See Spot run, but in the story it makes perfect sense. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 12:23:21 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_464163 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_464163 Rarity “Answer the question.” Fri, 04 Nov 2011 12:26:19 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_464240 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_464240 Inkspattered_ "Tell you what, you use your passticket to buy us both stamps- with my money of course- and that way we BOTH win." Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:17:27 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_468563 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_468563 kainoliero Truth is also that the Under-the-Ground humans begun the next stage of the war – and ended it just as well. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:19:56 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_468649 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_468649 FairytaleHero <em>Maybe this night would go better than I’d hoped. </em> Oh Charlie, so naive. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:34:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469065 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469065 DonPasquale Kynnedy managed to spit out a, “Lovely.” Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:35:44 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469113 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469113 FairytaleHero That sounds so awesome. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:37:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_469179 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=16#forum_thread_comment_469179 xxCoFxx "While Devan and Carla stood in the hall, watching the chaos, Warren walked over to Evynne and tried to talk to her." Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:41:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469299 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469299 emmyjoe. "Her mind was obviously in a place so far away that it would take a spaceship to get it back to earth where her body stood. " Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:44:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469397 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469397 MusingRandomly Mine was this: The only problem was how she would pull off the part of seductress. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 15:50:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469569 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_469569 petite_boleyn This is mine: "I will spend the rest of my life wishing it were not so, my Charlotte." Pretty funny because the character writing this is delusional, and he and Charlotte are pretty much in no way together. Oh, PTSD, how strangely you manifest yourself in my novel. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 16:13:04 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_470267 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_470267 qwertz A practiced expression, to be sure! Fri, 04 Nov 2011 16:49:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_471414 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=17#forum_thread_comment_471414 Renica Green "It dinnae change the fact that yeh’re runnin’.” Giving one of my two leads a thick accent may not prove to be such a good idea. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 17:53:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_473372 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_473372 R.Watson Sipsey grabbed a rope halter from the cart and they slipped it over Jack's head and jumped on him double. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 19:02:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_474983 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_474983 jenkatclaire Theobold had never even recognised the child. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 19:20:05 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_475478 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_475478 Odeena Outsiders like myself knew only what monarchy-sanctioned documentaries let show, and the image they projected usually focused on either technological achievements or military strength. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 19:23:14 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_475571 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_475571 miniwriter He had his own things to worry about, and he didn't need to add some girl off the street to that list. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 19:33:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_475840 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_475840 Mandy Noble Almost more interesting than the flowers was the stone well in the center of the room, a bubbling fountain gurgling happily. “This is attached to the river through pipes underground. There are two of them, one bringing water in, the other taking water out. They flow continually, making watering the plants an enjoyable experience. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 19:48:40 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476198 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476198 wodieskodie "Fair enough." Fri, 04 Nov 2011 20:18:33 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476531 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476531 Mungolian Entwining their hands together, they turned to stare at the abyss. And with that, my first short story of the month is over. I feel like I could cry. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 20:19:24 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476556 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476556 reba-land “I … guess not,” he said and instantly, his shoulders melted into some sort of resolve. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 20:24:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476673 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476673 happyfish “Awake at the dawn, your other life gone. Silvery trees, befriended by me. The Shifting Clock chimes, the end of good times.” Fri, 04 Nov 2011 20:36:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476974 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_476974 andadobeslabs “Just go to bed, Ellen.” Fri, 04 Nov 2011 20:37:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_477011 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_477011 Blackboxstar It frustrated Egg that she had known him for a full day and had yet to learn more than that he was curt, strange, and full of secrets. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 20:44:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_477172 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_477172 J.Rush Somewhere in Ravor there was an earthen jar sealed shut with a thin layer of mucous, and fluttering in that jar, buried in the fecund mud at the bottom of that lake, beat his stolen heart. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 21:08:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_477881 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_477881 AnAgelessTime “No, it had a spiked mutant being attacked by a phantom lesbian,” Sarah said as Kinsey rolled on the ground crying for help as Fisher attempted to put her bloody tongue against that sweet straight-girl tongue. It makes sense in context. No, it doesn't. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 21:21:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_478274 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_478274 Lacey Fay "The deck of cards was lifted, unnoticed, from her hands, and she stared resolutely at the unmoving deck." Fri, 04 Nov 2011 21:43:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479055 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479055 MCHoffman2692 God, could Leo even still call her Mom after this? Fri, 04 Nov 2011 21:45:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479138 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479138 Seera She [Miranda] looked at the others' targets and saw that most of them shot pretty darn well, with Kamaria and Gabe doing the best. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 21:59:01 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479556 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479556 C.J. Sandiego A fragment: "Just an old brochure to a hotel that used to be a mansion..." Fri, 04 Nov 2011 22:09:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479913 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_479913 Dante_Van_Lutz "Heaving his body at the man, Alejandro donkey punched him in the back of the head." Best sentence ever! Fri, 04 Nov 2011 22:22:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_480320 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_480320 Alix T. Should I get a physician? Fri, 04 Nov 2011 22:51:16 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_481152 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=18#forum_thread_comment_481152 janessaMichell Inside she thought, don’t write off boys just yet. Someday, you’ll see them differently. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:09:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_481647 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_481647 Dani Marchand “They've tried and failed before,” Moriendi says cryptically, cutting himself off and closing his mouth so quickly that Cecilia wonders if he has revealed information he didn't intend to. (this is really fun to read as if it's a big story made of disjointed sentences!) Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:20:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_481974 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_481974 mutewitness He took out some small packets, and poured them into the machine. It then began letting out little steam puffs. It didn't take long till it was done, and he pressed a button pouring the liquid into the glasses. He walked over to Louisa, handing her one, in which she thanked him. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:25:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482109 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482109 TeaLights Not that he is particularly well sculpted, but he certainly isn't bad to look at either. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:26:57 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482146 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482146 nationalcool The last thing she had eaten was the vegetarian dish at the resort hotel, an event that seemed so distant and unreal to her now. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:33:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482322 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482322 Icarus "I gave you immortality," Owen said, brow furrowing, "and you think that you owe me nothing?" Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:38:10 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482427 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482427 Lupus753 -Serya even breathed a sigh of relief or Koryae's safety.- I think these two might get together one day. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:47:17 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482645 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482645 Lupus753 I meant FOR Koryae's safety. I should preview more often. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:48:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482681 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482681 emilymayhem Noah had tried to make sure she was okay, but she had remained in denial for so long about their future that she had allowed herself to be blindsided. Fri, 04 Nov 2011 23:56:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482890 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_482890 Linchy <em>He found shelter under their grandmother’s bubbly, bursting personality that never aged. </em> Sat, 05 Nov 2011 01:38:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_484847 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_484847 Michelle Kidwell I knew soon a chapter of my life would be closing, a chapter I could never reopen. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 01:47:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_484994 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_484994 Dragon Gate I think this line is really well done! If it was the quote from the book on the back cover, I'd want to read it or at least know more about it. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 03:44:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_486252 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_486252 Dragon Gate A lot of these lines are really quite good! Here's mine: 'Letting you go was the most stupid thing I've ever done.' she told herself, not for the first time. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 03:47:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_486273 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_486273 wynnie.the.poooh "They are vicious and considerably larger. I'm going with the rats." -in comparison to spiders... My first main character is apparently scared of rats, and my other main character desperately needs to pee... This is what my story has come to... But it actually means something to the plot, which is more concerning... Sat, 05 Nov 2011 06:24:30 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487595 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487595 violetgateway She ignored the rest of the world and tried to fade into oblivion. I think it sound rather awesome, it'll probably have to be the end of a chapter (I haven't sorted it into chapter, I'm just writing) Oh and this is like just after she went through a major hallucination, it seems Primrose decided she wanted to jump off the deep end at some point Sat, 05 Nov 2011 06:25:45 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487607 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487607 purplepostit He sat down on his bed and traced imaginary lines on the covers, flicking on the television for some white noise while he began to flicker through image after image in his head. What was in that book? Sat, 05 Nov 2011 06:30:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487658 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487658 DreamerOfStories She ignores him, rocking back and forth, running her fingers through her sisters long hair, whispering words he couldn’t hear. yeah had some action since my last 'last' line ;) Sat, 05 Nov 2011 06:42:47 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487798 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487798 qwertz Bump into a bewildered Professor Sinistra for the third time. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 06:54:40 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487938 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_487938 DigitalAir Maybe it's stupid, but seeing our names together like that made it seem like we really were something. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 08:51:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_489426 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_489426 lvngbooks "The cat's out of the bag now. She knows." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 10:12:05 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_490825 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_490825 Iago Grey She looked vaguely amused, and raised a shaky sinewy hand to point to herself in a similar fashion. “Gwyn,” she said, “Gwynedd.” Sat, 05 Nov 2011 10:16:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_490908 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_490908 SkidPuppet "<em>Surprised</em>, maybe, but for all we know he didn’t kill us because he was too thrown off and weirded out by the little campfire circle time we just attempted with him,” I said, motioning towards the ground where we had just been sitting. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 10:53:32 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_491647 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=19#forum_thread_comment_491647 Kid Cassandra Guess you’re right, I thought back at her, then turned to survey the rest of my four-man team—John McGilli, who ate his meals alone and who wore special gloves to allow him to better control the release of the paralyzing neurotoxins he secreted from his fingertips; and Eddie Matthews, the bitchy kid from earlier, whose nine football trophies from his previous normal-kid high school totally weren’t entirely due to his superspeed. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 10:55:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491688 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491688 Indianna Lynn “I don’t have anything to say about it Samuel - so if you could just not bring it up I would be glad.” Sat, 05 Nov 2011 10:56:32 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491714 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491714 Burnt Sushi From somewhere, Delilah heard the sound of a baby farting, and looked around, confused ; there was no way for Del to know it was the author’s daughter, with her awesome shotgun farts of wonder that smelled like a cross between dead cats and last week’s mystery meal still sitting in the unhappy container in the fridge, way back where it can’t be reached without knowing what you’re reachign for and even then, would you really want to given tha it’s been there for a week and probably has its own fur coat by now? I may need to go take a cigarette break and slap myself into being a better writer than that. Shame one me. Shame, I say! Sat, 05 Nov 2011 10:57:13 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491727 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491727 PamelaScott I keep screaming and sobbing, trying to break free but she holds me tightly, whispering 'don't look sweetheart' over and over until go limp in her arms. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 11:02:25 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491822 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_491822 Gracefully The bird flapped its mighty wings, and they drifted upwards into the ocean of the sky. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 11:20:05 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_492183 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_492183 autodeist “We hid like cowards.” Shyian said simply, and more than a little apologetically Sat, 05 Nov 2011 12:04:14 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_493190 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_493190 autodeist I like it! Sat, 05 Nov 2011 12:05:09 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_493212 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_493212 sovay The rise and fall of his chest became the only movement in the still, stifled air of the kitchen. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 12:26:35 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_493745 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_493745 El Santo "Uh!" said Cecily, looking at the vaguely fishlike face on the totem pole. "That's hideous! What is that?" Lady Talio smiled wryly. "That, my dear, is my husband." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 12:36:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_493972 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_493972 sisterswallow I felt vaguely unsettled by her words. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 12:39:34 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_494046 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_494046 Always-Abby "Figured it was time to get rid of the light show," he replied. He shrugged on his jacket and nodded toward the door. "Come on. We've got places to go." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 12:56:53 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_494481 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_494481 One Piece Girl "He pushed the heavy door wide open and stepped inside, silently hoping that his mother would still be sleeping so that he could think through what he was going to say with a little more care." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 15:19:00 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_498085 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_498085 Bleistift_B "He came past the third oasis and Malik decided that it was time for a little break" Sat, 05 Nov 2011 15:34:25 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_498489 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_498489 love-bugg Harrison leaned down to whisper in her ear, laughter in his words, "If we don't get caught." Ooh, finally caught me on a good line. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 15:49:12 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_498890 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_498890 Almond She pressed her face hard into her hands and tried her level best to get a grip. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 15:54:41 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_499044 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_499044 Gitel A very wonderful part, but it was all in the past. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 15:58:40 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_499155 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_499155 elixireleven Swallowing, Fell admitted, “Whatever’s left you might come back to finish the job, and quite frankly, the sight of your neck squirting every so often makes me a little queasy.” Sat, 05 Nov 2011 16:39:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_500386 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_500386 kat716 There was nothing like the thrill of a good chase. Especially one with the promise of a beating at the end of it. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 16:40:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_500411 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_500411 GotReins There was almost munity when my mom said we couldn’t have dinner until we were showered and clean. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 16:44:16 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_500535 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_500535 FlameRaven "At least no one was peppering her with questions there, or asking the same thing over and over, trying to get her to trip up or change her response." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 18:16:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_503187 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_503187 callmeIndigo [quote]And with that, the diminutive woman turned and walked off into another room, leaving Rebecca to stare after her for a few moments before shaking her head and making her way toward the mysteries.[/quote] She's staring because the woman has just told her that she keeps confusing signposts up for the sake of some ghosts that live in the bookstore, who apparently need them to find their way around. Weirdest walk-on I have ever written. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 18:22:18 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_503348 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_503348 potatocubed “Let me introduce you to someone,” Mary said. “He knows something about monsters, and he hates these things even more than I get the impression you do. Someone to hide in a corner and talk shop with would make his day.” [My heroine is at a posh soiree and feeling very out of place. Mary is trying to make her feel better.] Sat, 05 Nov 2011 18:25:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_503452 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=20#forum_thread_comment_503452 Jayne2 I would find out in the future. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 18:28:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_503525 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_503525 tamara_the_muse Serafina was not the only one to look skeptical at this pronouncement. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 18:29:42 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_503550 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_503550 CassMorris “However tempted I may be by the prospect,” he said, “I will not tumble you in Gnaeus Autronius’s garden.” His teeth nipped lightly at her neck. “At least not for our first go." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 18:46:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_504035 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_504035 Red Mosquito Be smart, go ring some church bells. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 18:52:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_504209 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_504209 AnmlBri "With this, she managed to wince out a little smile through her painful grimace." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 19:59:49 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_506098 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_506098 dr-barno "These are your tasks," He said. "For reasons of security these will not leave the room. Any needed materials will be delivered to you tomorrow, that is all." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 20:23:06 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_506803 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_506803 Kitty Taylor “If you liked that, you should try sex.” Emmeline took the cigarette back and put it between her lips. “Seriously. It’s amazing. That tea - it’s god.” Sat, 05 Nov 2011 20:23:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_506824 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_506824 booboobear . His face was in the mud, and if you peered down real close you could see the surprised look of a man who had always gotten his own way and had never suspected anything or anyone would get the better of him in any kind of fight. For Jed, life was over. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 20:59:29 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_507878 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_507878 candycornisdelicious "And you know what," he said. "When I have a slave army, I might promote you all to captains! If you're good and obedient, I mean.” (Oh. This sounds strange out of context. This sounds strange IN context.) Sat, 05 Nov 2011 21:48:19 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509285 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509285 steelhawk27 Christina raised an eyebrow. “I like ghost stories.” Hehe, as you can guess, my story is a horror/thriller. Christina is talking to her ex-boyfriend Sam over the phone about an old legend surrounding her new house (this sounds a lot like The Ring to me... without the haunted video, and I haven't decided if Sam dies yet.) Sat, 05 Nov 2011 21:51:53 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509384 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509384 Emz_Sophie My father kidnaps them when they are around my age, which I find both disgusting and disturbing but he told me I would understand when I’m older. I may be young, but for some reason I doubt that. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 21:54:54 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509461 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509461 Accio_Plot A frigid wind sweeps up from the cavernous overhang of ice. It’s falling, falling, falling, yet trapped in time, as if someone took a still photograph of a waterfall and framed it with winter. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 22:03:51 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509715 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_509715 booboobear [quote=Accio_Plot] A frigid wind sweeps up from the cavernous overhang of ice. It’s falling, falling, falling, yet trapped in time, as if someone took a still photograph of a waterfall and framed it with winter. [/quote] I love 'someone took a still photograph of a waterfall and framed it with winter' beautiful. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 22:50:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511069 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511069 xxCoFxx “I feel like the timing is too perfect. Things are coming together as if they were scripted!” Sat, 05 Nov 2011 22:58:55 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511307 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511307 Literary Lime "I guess in Paris they were more used to seeing random couples snogging in random places." Er... yeah. This makes much more sense in context. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 23:03:48 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511438 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511438 ChoKiba It was thicker this time but with the same slightly squarish handwriting sprawled across the front proclaiming me as the recipient of the letter. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 23:04:52 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511473 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511473 encantado "We were safe, and we were free." (Oh no, you're not, but you don't need to know that for a while yet!) Sat, 05 Nov 2011 23:14:48 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511728 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511728 Shawn A Last sentence for the fifth of November: "She conceded that if a warrior mage could throw fire and ice at will, there were probably mages that could control the weather." I guess it doesn't make sense but I'm at the part where I explain magick's place in my Steampunk novel. I'm switching between writing four main characters (five if you include the one guy's best friend), which is a pain when I only planned on doing one. Sat, 05 Nov 2011 23:18:14 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511817 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511817 Erecura "Fine." Reyna sighed and sat back, resting her neck in the headrest. "I won't tell them. Yet." Sat, 05 Nov 2011 23:23:50 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511968 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_511968 phantressoftheopera "It reminded her of things she would never have again." oh, but you will have them again, Morgan. You will have them again in spades. And it will cause you no end of trouble for it &lt;3 Sun, 06 Nov 2011 00:04:43 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_512915 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_512915 neverwinterrains I was going to find my father. My father. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 00:09:51 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_513029 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_513029 Shinkoryu14 “You need not worry for me, Miss Anya. Rest, and I shall see you this evening.” She need not worry for him, eh? So he thinks. &gt;=3 Bwahahaha~ Sun, 06 Nov 2011 00:14:00 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_513116 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_513116 smornge Jude wasn’t sure what “pervy” meant, or what Daisy had been implying when she accused Ralph of being it, or who Ralph was talking about when he said that “they” hadn’t visited in a long time, but this was no time to question such things. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 00:16:46 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_513184 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_513184 lifelessmind Of course, there were ways to get blood that didn’t require sex, but most of them weren’t as enjoyable, and I was a terrible fighter. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:40:36 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_514844 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_514844 mandiiminx In all honestly, Alek found it all rather arbitrary and unnecessary, but he remembered Jessica commenting upon how she had wanted a big, beautiful wedding since she was a little girl, and really, what made Jessica happy was all that mattered, so he would go along with the wedding plans, and with whatever Jessica wanted, quite happily. Not my most eloquent line. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:45:28 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_514928 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_514928 Charles Cunning My last line for was not as lyrical as I typically like, but it was suitably epic, I'm proud to say. "There was at least twenty, and they all had swords." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:50:11 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515017 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515017 quilled "It's not that I think you're lying, but how are you even still alive? How did you walk away with just a few scrapes and a hurt foot?" I challenge him, gripping the steering wheel a little tighter now. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:51:38 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515035 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515035 BelginJabbers "He didn’t want to have to start disliking the kid for being one of those creepy followers of the oldest god who were a little too excited by corpses... in either sense of the word." XD Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:06:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515271 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515271 C.J. Sandiego He met other retainers, he didn’t think they made them like Perrin anymore, at least not on this side of the pond. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:14:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515360 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515360 Rensy “Let's go, “ he said, grabbed his bag, and Rena's hand, and practically ran off the train. Not all that eventful, really. I: Sun, 06 Nov 2011 01:46:11 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515707 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515707 Slussen Ninja Man looks at me as though I'm a particularly dim-witted child. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 02:06:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515921 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_515921 Sforzie So when Mugendie teleported to the fire god’s palace, letting himself in directly in one of the hallways, the servant that he appeared in front of, though alarmed, did not seem entirely all that surprised to find the death god suddenly intruding where he wasn’t wanted. (Extreme rambling. How am I supposed to pick up from there...) Sun, 06 Nov 2011 02:44:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516291 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516291 ChoKiba <em>I find myself wishing to take time from the sea which I so love and to spend such time walking at your side and listening to you tell me of your history and home.</em> Yeah a line from a letter &gt;.&gt; Sun, 06 Nov 2011 02:54:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516370 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516370 Mnemophage At least the gin helped. Josh is such a necessary character. Everyone should write a Texan into their novels somewhere. You guys really help move the story forward. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 02:55:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516383 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516383 MagpieBeff Their species had spent centuries removing themselves from the world around them and immersing themselves in learning and machinery. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 03:57:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516988 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_516988 hokuokekai Sam took the opportunity to grab Dean's shoulder and stop him from talking. "Dean... it's not him. It's Jimmy." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 05:59:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_518135 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_518135 hoblaph "Then, as she hit send, telling them not to worry, the gun blazed again." Ending the fifth chapter. Relatively pleasd with it, considering teh character turned out compleetly different than I had planned. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 07:55:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_519714 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_519714 Naffy She plaited it quickly and tied the end with a ribbon from her pocket. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 07:58:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_519749 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_519749 Soleil Compeau Even if these humans were strangers, they were humans after all. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 08:37:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_520386 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_520386 leurz "She hucked a pistol down at him." I was tired last night. So was my MC Sun, 06 Nov 2011 08:50:42 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_520614 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_520614 TheRiffie It was as if the stress of the past few weeks had suddenly caught up with him now that he had stayed still long enough for it to reach him and all the exhaustion he had been avoiding – or, more accurately, ignoring – now washed over his body, his muscles relaxing and his eyes closing. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 09:03:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_520844 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=22#forum_thread_comment_520844 lechatbleu Slowly, the night in New York faded into the back of her mind, but still came to her sometimes as she was falling asleep. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 09:31:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_521342 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_521342 Calista.Artemis [quote] We had started walking again, but with more of a hop in our step, our footfalls just a tad bit lighter. Our voices just one pitch happier. [/quote] Sun, 06 Nov 2011 09:39:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_521506 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_521506 originalgradk Gabriella Windsor Muse for Ralph Lauren Princess Eugenie Princess Annabelle Angela Missoni Missoni Designer Joan Burstein Owner of Browns South Molton Street Prince Harry Prince Charles Sun, 06 Nov 2011 09:51:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_521718 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_521718 originalgradk Nothing like generating High Society Dining Lists to generate word count either!! Sun, 06 Nov 2011 09:51:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_521728 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_521728 Subpixels The seer got up and walked a bit warily over to her calender she kept near her bedside, checking the date and checking to see if there were any important dates coming up. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 10:04:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_521987 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_521987 Wassail I’m standing up in the U District, right near the landmark Grand Illusion Theater just off of 15th Ave., and there’s a small crowd of peers and near-peers gathered around the fringes of this little sort of half-moon alcove made where the windows of a department store curve inward. High BPMs slice through the night in schizophrenic wobbles and beeps and buzzes and tack-a-tack 8-bit percussion from the blaring loudspeakers of a duo of chip-musicians finger-fucking old-school Gameboys and stomping around on a mass of tangled pedals like one might see a guitarist using. Behind them is a table littered with the battered Bakelite bodies of archetypical electronic toys of the Eighties. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 10:18:26 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_522281 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_522281 I Am Cole He was going to get himself killed, with how reckless he was being right now. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 11:18:11 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_523607 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_523607 kat716 Siri is teaching Chrome how to kiss. "Come over here and I'll teach you how to knock your boys right off their feet." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 11:32:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_523935 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_523935 ArtisticViewpoint But there were things she kept to herself- secret things she’d never talk about. I could see it in the way she walked. The way she talked. The way she promised the world to men, yet would always back off at the last minute. I knew the signs, I knew what they meant. But still, I did nothing. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 11:42:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_524160 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_524160 Magic-fan The last line I wrote, and the last line of a chapter, is: “You did not think you had found all of us, did you?” Sun, 06 Nov 2011 11:51:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_524404 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_524404 Wassail Nice. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 11:56:23 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_524492 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=21#forum_thread_comment_524492 katiehmbl I haven't written yet today...I should probably get to that. Last night the last sentence was: I did not want to face another night in the freezing temperatures or risk a thunderstorm without shelter. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 12:19:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_524987 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_524987 Apiecalypse "It hadn’t rained the night before either, so he had no qualms camping for a while more, until he could straighten things out." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 15:01:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_529325 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_529325 words rising Tyra’s voice rose with the flames and traveled with the wind to the moonlit mountain tops. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 15:16:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_529757 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_529757 Odeena "I mean... we've already ascertained that he obviously knows his way around the Code, and we were thinking a rogue agent, but with the motivations you've given-" ...he gets interrupted mid-line ^_^; Sun, 06 Nov 2011 15:24:09 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_529974 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_529974 Wassail If it's an interruption, make sure you're using a dash (--) and not a hyphen (-). Sun, 06 Nov 2011 15:33:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_530250 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_530250 Emz_Sophie Which means that if you move your arm in your sleep, you might wake up to it sizzling. Always a fun experience, right? Sun, 06 Nov 2011 15:38:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_530407 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_530407 Tune_ [...] “Oh, and the dolls. Them too...” I added with a solemn smile that didn't quite reach my eyes. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 16:24:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_531662 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_531662 Tip ‘Mum wouldn’t have left by choice,’ she sniffed. She shrugged his arm off and exited the room before he saw her cry. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 17:05:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_532847 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_532847 Ruliya The thing that really worried Sophie was that she had heard of gang ‘questionings’ especially those done by the Blood Angels. The large blood stains behind her and the damage to the door attested to that, so why by the Rings of Sarnoth were they being so...so nice to her? Sun, 06 Nov 2011 17:28:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_533430 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_533430 aiuku But she left the building without turning back. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 17:39:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_533698 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_533698 akmm Two weeks later, she confirmed she was pregnant. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 18:03:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_534285 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_534285 nerrdygrrl15 In between bouts of giggling, March wheezes out, "We told you we'd open up if you knocked!" Sun, 06 Nov 2011 18:05:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_534348 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_534348 Red Mosquito I love this one because unless you've read the chapter, it makes no sense at all. "Maybe not as satisfying as a candied yam, but you never know." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 18:17:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_534675 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=23#forum_thread_comment_534675 euterpe42 “Don't be an idiot when you're so brilliant and sexy, Lilith. That's a definitely, not a hopefully.” Sun, 06 Nov 2011 18:38:33 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_535262 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_535262 kat716 "Okay, we'll get your too-tall, scrawny, boobless body into an outfit, teach you some moves, and see what you can do." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 18:42:01 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_535356 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_535356 Ishara "Sabela and Andrasté, holding onto Taima were able to watch from their window as the bodies of their family, covered in shrouds, were carried into the royal tomb beneath the palace temple." And the happier stuff won't be coming for a while yet. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 21:08:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539407 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539407 sb8 It was such a pathetic display of his social ineptitude that it made him feel like he deserved to be alone forever. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 21:15:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539587 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539587 MissElphaba.x "I finally looked back at him." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 21:19:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539720 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539720 dralisto Emery and Liz sat in silence for a moment wondering who would speak first. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 21:24:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539819 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_539819 tsukkuyomi_kokuryuu (my last line is four words so I put the last two lines) "It took them three tries together, Tsukkuyomi gritting her teeth through the pain as it shot through her arm and head, when finally the hinges gave in and came down, revealing to them the inside of the room. And a horrid sight." Sun, 06 Nov 2011 21:39:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_540230 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_540230 Lightshow Mandy took a deep breath, turned her eyes away from the body and started to climb down, her arms and legs still trembling. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 22:44:01 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_541770 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_541770 Hoosiervic She brought the glass to her lips, took a long sip and relished the tang of the orange juice and smooth fire of the vodka as it went down her throat. Then Ellie settled back on the couch, and let the voices on the radio carry her gently away from her fears. Sun, 06 Nov 2011 23:12:00 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_542437 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_542437 autophilia He wasn’t above dealing her a quick elbow to the jaw if she got any silly ideas about playing up and tried to cause a scene. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 06:32:00 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_547397 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_547397 Sciolet I was therefore cordially invited to visit Walker's house. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 06:47:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_547577 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_547577 Lynnielois He laughs. “All I want is for you to be healthy,” “You don’t think I want to be healthy?” I ask, laughing. “Seriously?” he asks. “Yeah, seriously,” I say. “Why don’t you think I want to be healthy?” “You’ve sort of given up, haven’t you?” he asks. “I haven’t given up any more than you have.” “You still seem sort of resigned to it, though,” he says. “No more resigned than you!” I say. “You’re the one who had me write out a bucket list,” “I’m just trying to help!” he says, pulling into a nail salon’s parking lot. “So am I,” I say, tears in my eyes. “I’m trying to help everyone else get all the Caileigh time they need, because, news flash! I am about to die.” I had to put it all so it would make sense in context. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 12:25:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_552319 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_552319 xxCoFxx So far it's: [quote] “I’m not as concerned about the individual as I am with growing trends in society,” she admitted. [/quote] Mon, 07 Nov 2011 12:29:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_552392 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_552392 ChoKiba As that is the situation we find ourselves in, I would have the answer from you. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 12:56:00 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_552980 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_552980 EilonwyG It was a more than a little irritating. My MMC's feelings toward dealing with a wizard he was meeting. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 15:37:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_556931 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_556931 littlewisp They would blossom and wither, or would burst into life when she would have sworn them fallow. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 15:46:13 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_557169 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_557169 silverflash101 The urge to go and look now, even if it was the night, overtook her, and she kept herself barefoot, and walked over to the door. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 15:49:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_557250 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_557250 LordMoogi I could see tears welling up in Abbey’s eyes. I looked straight up at her. “This is it,” she whispered. “This is how it is all going to end.” Such a cheerful place to leave things for the night. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 16:29:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_558266 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_558266 hoblaph "And then, total darkness he couldn’t even, wasn’t even able to, make anything out within it." Mon, 07 Nov 2011 16:38:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_558482 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_558482 Joselyn Lee, maybe. ...that's the whole line :) Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:00:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_559023 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_559023 Lynnielois “And you, what do you want to do when you grow up? After you graduate and everything,” Such a quintessentially ‘mature’ adult question feels weird coming from the guy giving me a manicure, but I answer him anyway so I'm not being rude. “I’ve already graduated,” I say, “I’m way too sick to be in school,” “Well then, that’s one step down,” he winks. “What do you want to be when you grow up, honey?” he asks. “Alive,” Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:06:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_559175 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=24#forum_thread_comment_559175 LilacLex Just finished my chapter with: Yeah. Needless to say, he really hated his boss sometimes. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:13:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559317 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559317 LilacLex Technically 2 lines but pfft. They're on the same 'line' of page though ;) Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:13:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559328 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559328 Kelucia “A half-breed is higher than a bastard, which obviously you are, as you act like one.” GO NAYELI. &lt;3 /capslock feminist fest. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:28:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559654 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559654 ChoKiba I had worked on every other room as I had been ordered. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:30:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559715 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559715 Yaz_Pistachio I kept working on my report while Angela typed at her desk, and the day was rather uneventful. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:35:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559844 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_559844 potatocubed “Not flattered? Well, look on the bright side – no one’s going to recognise you from their description. According to the sheet I read, you’re seven feet tall and made of steel.” Charity trailed off into a yawn. “Please excuse me, it was a late night.” [Amelia is about 5'4" and made of the same bits as everyone else. The news is reporting her as a 'naked warrior-goddess' which is about as accurate as the rest.] Mon, 07 Nov 2011 17:59:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_560444 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_560444 Hello, Dollface The coffee sat abandoned for a few minutes as she let it cool, not knowing that once she reached the bottom of the cup, her whole world was going to change. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 18:34:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_561183 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_561183 Lexie-chan As soon as they were in orbit of the planet, Nova jammed in Quirisil's coordinates, which she knew for memory, and set the ship into the highest level of autopilot. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 19:28:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_562525 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_562525 ChoKiba Odette bounced at me as soon as I had the door opened, wrapping her arms around my legs. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 22:14:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_566898 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_566898 Rithene “Justine, I think your daughter has an eleven-year head start on being a teenager,” Des laughed, sitting on the bed and pulling off her boots and jacket. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 22:16:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_566952 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_566952 katjevanloon "Her voice had a bit more power now, and she was starting to feel better — even if she still couldn’t feel her arm and it was damn unnerving." Mon, 07 Nov 2011 22:36:23 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_567348 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_567348 nosferaustin "I was parched and it was so soothing, brought such swift relief but then my stomach contracted in knots and I vomited again; the bloody liquid ran down her blouse as she held me in her arms. I was ashamed." Mon, 07 Nov 2011 22:42:29 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_567485 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_567485 nerrdygrrl15 Plus, he thinks, Spiral staircases are awesome. Mon, 07 Nov 2011 23:09:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_567998 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_567998 Seth D. Michaels "You'll do none of us any good in your condition. There are more hills to climb yet." Mon, 07 Nov 2011 23:26:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568287 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568287 HecticZ I raise my hands in defense. “Hey, sorry to break it to you, but I don’t roll that way!” Mon, 07 Nov 2011 23:29:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568338 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568338 theknittingnerd "I'm starting anew, I'm terrified, and... I'm here." Mon, 07 Nov 2011 23:47:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568696 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568696 aiuku "Now," she said, "we wait till nightfall." Mon, 07 Nov 2011 23:50:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568729 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_568729 kat17 “Then you can understand a little, can’t you?” she pleaded tearfully, “You can understand how you would just want to trust him, to let your guard down for good?” Tue, 08 Nov 2011 01:10:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_569835 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_569835 Sforzie The Undertaker had merely smiled knowingly and said that she knew they would. And then she had made them cover her bill. Neither could find it in their heart to mind. (Ah. I missed writing my vampires.) Tue, 08 Nov 2011 01:17:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_569915 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_569915 ptanzey We have two pots one is mild for us Nebraskans and the other will make steam come out of your ears,” she says and laughs. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 01:31:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_570054 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_570054 Piper the Perfect "A river and a slew of small boat lined up." Tue, 08 Nov 2011 01:32:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_570064 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=25#forum_thread_comment_570064 Icarus Though there was still a good deal of worry swimming through his mind—especially when he thought about all of the procedures he would have to put into place to ensure that both his family and his community were sufficiently protected—but as he turned off the light in the foyer and climbed the stairs to the cozy room he shared with his husband, he decided all of that could wait until tomorrow. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 04:22:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_571349 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_571349 Reaven 'Can't you read?' Tue, 08 Nov 2011 08:56:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_574007 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_574007 J.E.Blackworth Nastasya closed her eyes and decided to let her tired brain sleep. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 11:12:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576402 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576402 TheOneTheyCallSushi He averted his gaze as his mouth filled with foul, acidic sick and bile. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 11:20:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576539 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576539 Lokemele "In approximate terms, a solar year in 2147 is 365 days of 24 hours, while a solar year back here is 374 days of 23.4 hours.” Tue, 08 Nov 2011 11:20:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576543 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576543 Quiltmage Matt did the same, moving the feather above the four objects. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 11:24:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576596 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_576596 xxCoFxx My last line was part of what a character was thinking about another character's driving: [quote] Gives you a heart attack but a good rush at the same time and your chances of dying are about the same, too. [/quote] Tue, 08 Nov 2011 11:58:23 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_577229 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_577229 lifegoeson [quote]I had never had to break this sort of news to anyone before, and it was an odd feeling, almost as if I knew I should be excited to inflict this amount of pain on my biggest rival, but couldn’t bring myself to see the pleasure in it anymore. [/quote] Tue, 08 Nov 2011 13:48:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_579427 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_579427 YourDestiny He met my gaze. "That is why I think you are the Raven." Tue, 08 Nov 2011 15:50:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_582213 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_582213 Sefton "Mr. Marco, I'm a magic hunter." Said him, calmly finishing his drink. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 16:31:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_583249 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_583249 Mistress Alice This was the first time she had met Nikolas, but, she knew the reason why his girlfriend had broken up with him, that just made it all awkward, Nicole was almost willing to run and actually speak to Cossette, even though she vowed that she wouldn’t. That's just a weird line out of context. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 16:56:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_583762 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_583762 ibnick9812 Erik tried to be as truthful with her as possible without bringing up his growing fears and doubts of himself. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 16:58:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_583798 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_583798 R_C_LandPsMommy05 I don’t tell Charley any of this. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 17:28:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584476 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584476 MusingRandomly [quote] Noticing the change in behavior, Garrett cautiously approached her from the front.[/quote] Tue, 08 Nov 2011 17:30:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584521 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584521 tigerlilygem [quote=YourDestiny] He met my gaze. "That is why I think you are the Raven." [/quote] In my head that was said by Raven from the CBBC show in his awesome Scottish accent :) Tue, 08 Nov 2011 17:39:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584676 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584676 tigerlilygem 'There was nothing like the feeling of going places and finding things that you had never seen before and doing things that you never dreamed you would do, but knowing that there was always someone there to watch you, to laugh with you, to delight in your discoveries.' What's annoying is that that is the only optimistic sentence I've written so far, and it's the complete opposite of the tone of the whole thing. Danggggg :P Tue, 08 Nov 2011 17:40:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584720 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_584720 Johan "Two large exit wounds were dripping the last of the gas on to the thirsty ground beneath the jeep." Not the most exciting I guess. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 18:44:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_586042 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_586042 aurora17 On the walk home, she traversed a foreign city Tue, 08 Nov 2011 18:51:29 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_586183 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_586183 Lynx_Tiger The words were scrawled in black ink. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 20:08:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_587744 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_587744 KelsiQuinton Vomit spills from me, an acidic yellow that burns my throat and seeps through the cracks in the ancient floor. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 20:25:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_588109 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_588109 lovelycatgirlmew “No matter what, please don’t ever, ever forget me” It just had to be a super mushy line XD Tue, 08 Nov 2011 21:15:26 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_589148 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=26#forum_thread_comment_589148 Obscurite_Asile 'Hell, I don’t think I studied this much when I was your age’ What a great thing for a teacher to say. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 21:38:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589731 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589731 novia Lucian, not wanting to feel out of place as he was scolded for it before, would daintily hug his cup of mead with two hands and shrivel up into his chair, barely touching the foul liquid to his lips without making a face. -- Yeah, it doesn't make much sense, but we'll leave the editing for another month. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 21:44:27 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589856 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589856 Achama "the thought someone was taking care of the child and Lumi looked like this was a rather horrifiying prospect." Tue, 08 Nov 2011 21:45:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589886 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589886 4thAce [Quoth the mutant] “General Toessl, we are in the process of securing the human now. Pickup will be in one minute.” Rich Tue, 08 Nov 2011 21:47:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589941 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_589941 Willow. “YOU HAD TO GO AND JINX IT, DIDN’T YOU? JUST HAD TO!” Tue, 08 Nov 2011 22:13:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_590410 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_590410 Ecchymoticism 'He was falling pray to logic.' Tue, 08 Nov 2011 23:04:13 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591407 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591407 Ecchymoticism ^prey, damn it I can't spell anything during NaNo. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 23:04:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591423 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591423 As.Is I'm currently writing the scene for the first day of school where my MC is teaching for the first time. Looking at them quickly, she realized it was the finalized list of students for her four classes for the day. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 23:06:05 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591449 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591449 ChoKiba "As you so kindly pointed out before, this is my fault and thus that makes you and your sisters, my responsibility." Oh Ashley, I am so not falling in love with that jerk &gt;.&gt; Tue, 08 Nov 2011 23:23:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591807 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591807 Aurelia.Imako No one should have to morn thier own death Twice. Tue, 08 Nov 2011 23:25:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591849 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591849 samalane ‘Well,’ she thought wryly. ‘If Elenor can’t get me the kingdom, at least Caledon has provided me with the crown,’ Tue, 08 Nov 2011 23:31:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591930 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_591930 Blankenship24 Neena vows to make it up to the little guy when they get to Ireland. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 00:14:01 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_592602 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_592602 MissElizabethBennet Muireall smiled blankly and assured him that he would be the first person she would come too in case of any trouble or difficulty. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 00:59:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_593229 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_593229 Seera Kamaria realized he was right. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 01:25:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_593518 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_593518 Obscurite_Asile Ryan knelt down on the damp grass, his fingers shaking as they traced over the carved stone. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 06:10:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_595584 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_595584 RunningWolf "After closing the bottle and helping Nevada lay back down, Phil succumbed to the despair he had been trying to quench ever since his companion had collapsed almost twelve hours ago." Wed, 09 Nov 2011 09:51:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_597982 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_597982 xemmawhyx “You would hate me, I know that - if you knew what I was going to tell you, then you would most certainly hate me. I would never blame you for that, how could I? I simply want to prolong the waiting, so that day is as far away as it can be...” Wed, 09 Nov 2011 13:15:49 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_601473 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_601473 qwertz I resemble that remark! Wed, 09 Nov 2011 14:05:26 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_602400 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_602400 pocketsoul1127 "I never directly said to him 'you are a liar,' and if he said I did, he's just proving my point." Wed, 09 Nov 2011 14:08:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_602462 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_602462 Storytellers Shadow “Nod your head if I’m right but, did you think what I think you did and not actually say what I’m talking about, that you did out loud?” Mera crossed her arms and tilted her head to the side in bewilderment. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 14:10:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_602502 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=27#forum_thread_comment_602502 ~TempesT~ He turns his hand under hers to squeeze back. “I know,” he says. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 14:50:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_603283 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_603283 originalgradk To persuade he had some other answer to the problems. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 16:59:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_605519 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_605519 tkrehbiel "Alright everyone get something to eat." Wed, 09 Nov 2011 17:45:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_606517 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_606517 aime Nellie is shocked that Andrew is shocked. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 17:49:01 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_606599 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_606599 Mnemophage It was what led them there to begin with, and it seemed to radiate from the barred brick construction like a sonic sun. (drums, lots and lots of drums. Kind of vague, but I'm liking 'sonic sun'.) Wed, 09 Nov 2011 18:04:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_606915 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_606915 ninjaobsessor “I’ve just got a baby face.” I swear, every time I come in this thread, my last lines get weirder and weirder. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 18:33:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_607551 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_607551 Mitchels Lorcán regretted his words instantly when David adopted a sad smile and turned away. He wanted nothing more than to wipe that sad expression off his face and replace it with a real smile, before he forced himself not to care. He didn’t care. He couldn’t. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 18:47:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_607834 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_607834 littlelummox "The fewer the people," Oliver finished. It sounds dumb even in context, but that's nano for ya. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 19:19:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_608450 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_608450 Always-Abby But what I couldn't figure out was why I was as upset as I was in the first place. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 20:32:10 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_609848 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_609848 ChoKiba he two men bowed to Mistress Horowitz and I before Lord de Lauren took a seat in one of the chairs, leaning back as he surveyed everything around him while Captain Arkwright stood near the entrance one arm held behind his back while the other rested at his side. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 20:47:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_610130 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_610130 painofwhiteclaudia I don't how else to describe what was in front me... other than a giant space starfish with a pod body. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 21:04:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_610441 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_610441 HannaGrace I hope you will learn to live with the pain and it was ebb away from you like the tide under the bridge. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 22:37:27 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612164 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612164 I am the bookwyrm . Leadenly, I left the room and began walking down the hallway. Wed, 09 Nov 2011 22:51:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612366 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612366 Ladypamela Ryleigh led them across the open field to the cottage at the far end. ‘Welcome to Meadowsong. Wipe your feet.’ Wed, 09 Nov 2011 22:53:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612383 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612383 ALynnL07 "You never cease to amaze me." Wed, 09 Nov 2011 23:01:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612515 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_612515 Hanabi no Enigma Silently, he prayed for peace. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 00:07:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_613632 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_613632 littlewisp The woman gathered up the silvery strands and handed them to Diampha with a sudden, cheerless grin. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 00:11:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_613687 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_613687 Renee_Archer After all, how does one explain a nightmare king following one around, even if you happen to be a Dark Master? Thu, 10 Nov 2011 00:59:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_614213 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_614213 AvatarSatsuki “There, can’t have you ruining all our fun, can I?” She tapped the tip of his nose and giggled before starting to remove the needles. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 01:49:13 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_614752 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_614752 AMKoenig ::raises hand:: I volunteer to be a beta reader! :-D Thu, 10 Nov 2011 02:01:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_614872 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_614872 Walt3rd Today? (okay, day 9, let's put it that way) it was "Then turning around and walking back along the Hoheweg to the West Bahnhof, and finally turning right at the station and taking the Aareckstrasse along the river and the tracks to Marktgasse and back to the hotel. " I'm describing my main character's daily walking route in Interlaken, Switzerland. I do so love Google Maps. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 02:03:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_614897 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_614897 AMKoenig Okay... I only just found this thread... how fun to watch the novels grow this way..... here is my most recent... Sleep proved illusive, or so I thought, but the Sword Justice had a task and I was crucial to its completion, so asleep or not, we wandered once again among white pebbled paths Thu, 10 Nov 2011 02:04:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_614906 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_614906 jlforcey A blur of conversation and emotion splashed into something that seemed surreal the next morning, as if Dali used watercolors instead of oils and somebody spilled their drink on it. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 02:11:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_614981 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_614981 jlforcey Yes! Thu, 10 Nov 2011 02:14:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_615008 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_615008 Hanabi no Enigma "Shut up," Achti said. "I need quiet." Thu, 10 Nov 2011 02:40:29 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_615202 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=28#forum_thread_comment_615202 RedAutumn Jordan numbly followed, clutching the pot of honey as if it might save her. From what she wasn't quite sure. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 06:40:32 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_616774 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_616774 Piper the Perfect "Nothing." That's literally the line. One word. "Nothing." Thu, 10 Nov 2011 07:05:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_617001 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_617001 rage-chan Drawing in a ragged breath, he got to his feet, realizing that the coffee he had poured for himself at the start of the recount had gone stone cold and he had barely taken more than a few sips. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 07:08:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_617026 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_617026 Piper the Perfect Rage-chan what's your ultimate word goal? Just curious. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 07:11:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_617060 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_617060 yoctophone Taemin's kiss tastes like a fucking ice cube. [This guy actually wasn't supposed to kiss anyone this early in the novel. No, scratch that, he actually wasn't supposed to kiss anyone <em>at all.</em> x____x] Thu, 10 Nov 2011 10:10:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_619162 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_619162 kat716 "Chip, I will give you one hundred dollars if you will shave off that abomination" (This is a cameo starring Chip the lab assistant from NCIS. If you've seen the episode, you know about the... thing.) Thu, 10 Nov 2011 11:49:27 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_620786 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_620786 painofwhiteclaudia Ezra let out a might battle cry before slamming into the brick of a cultist with so much force that the man went through the window. Reaching out to stop him following his target, I violently pulled his jacket towards me and fell on my ass. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 12:29:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_621435 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_621435 KaityGirl "I'm a shapeshifter! Changing my face is pretty much the name of the game!" Thu, 10 Nov 2011 13:01:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_622015 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_622015 DigitalAir "I guess I never really noticed how pretty she is. Cow." Thu, 10 Nov 2011 13:36:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_622618 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_622618 lifegoeson [quote]That was truly the icing on the cake of my despair. [/quote] Thu, 10 Nov 2011 15:17:11 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_624573 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_624573 mrawrites A loud crash of thunder resounded through the city, and the man rushed over to the curtain, throwing it open with an equally thunderous fury and standing before the might of the storm, now raging fully again outside, shouting defiance, blow, winds, and crack your cheeks, rage, blow; here I stand your slave, a poor, infirm, weak, and despised old man; I am a man more sinned against than sinning! King Lear reference, for the win. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 17:41:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_627351 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_627351 Lynx_Tiger It faded but the glow at the end of the stick still caused the shadows to look dramatic. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 19:57:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_629801 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_629801 DeasVail They were simply glad to be back and alive, but none of the men could forget their comrades they had left behind on Earth Parallel. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 20:34:01 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_630385 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_630385 1031jh Here's mine. "He looks over to his parents speechless faces, and smirks humorlessly. “Yeah, that's right. Chew on that while I go talk to my baby brother.”" Thu, 10 Nov 2011 21:24:42 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_631327 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_631327 Chillibean “I am a professional with years of experience. There are many signals.” Thu, 10 Nov 2011 21:44:13 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_631708 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_631708 unashamed.love She stopped. Her eyes were teary too. Thu, 10 Nov 2011 22:38:01 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_632621 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_632621 love-bugg It sauntered forward, long tail curling behind its body, twisting and writhing in the air like a snake. "Leaving so soon, dear? We've yet begun to play." Thu, 10 Nov 2011 22:41:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_632687 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_632687 R_C_LandPsMommy05 Her secret was pretty big, at least it was in her mind. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 00:12:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_633964 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_633964 littlewisp Hahaha, finished writing for the night and when I checked back to see what the last line was I chuckled a bit. It's really not that funny, but I'm in my own special lala writer land. Without further ado: The whole thing was ridiculous. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 00:17:16 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_634023 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_634023 EilonwyG Here's yesterday's. I'm pretty proud of it. "So if you’re concerned whether I’ll end up burning down the forest, don’t. I’ve spent my whole life learning about and mastering the element, although no one can ever truly master the raw energy of fire. Trust me when I say I have no intentions of using it unwisely." My MC Kilian to his rather dubious new druid friend, Dreric. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 00:17:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_634032 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=29#forum_thread_comment_634032 bhudfops He didn't have time to say anything cute, angry, or threatening; he could only stare in confusion as she finally remembered to breathe and pulled the trigger. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 00:22:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_634082 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_634082 ChoKiba The men can come along on their own. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 02:07:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_635109 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_635109 shufflewriter George disappeared back into the bedroom with envelop in hand. Claire spent the next 10 minutes doing a sweep of the unit; bathroom cupboards, kitchen cupboards and laundry cupboards. Nothing. A quick check of the lounge room, sideboard, book shelf, under the couch. Still nothing. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 05:04:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_636334 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_636334 thing I could go on about Martin, how he doesn’t seem to have any real self-respect or ambition, but he’s a lovely guy. I shouldn’t complain – we have little Daphne now, and we’ve got the cottage, and I’ve got my Mom and my Nan and there are the dogs. - not exactly a line. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 06:18:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_636812 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_636812 J.E.Blackworth Today's and tomorrow's last line-- I know I won't write tomorrow; When the night darkened and it was finally eight in the evening, the audience had already rolled in and waited anxiously for the big show that had been promised. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 07:20:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_637290 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_637290 sovay But I had met the elusive Laura Sanger - a part of the evasive fabric of all the things we tried to hold on to. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 07:38:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_637442 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_637442 clynn07 "And you two, you better share those marshmallows with us.” ^this makes sense in context, I promise xD Fri, 11 Nov 2011 09:27:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_638612 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_638612 Kiki.Mirage And, most worryingly of all, the sickening crackle of starting flames. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 11:20:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_640326 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_640326 CassMorris Just broke 20k! -- “You are forgiven,” Alhena said, and then, in her queer, unemotional way, “I’m quite pleased you’re not dead. It would have troubled Latona so much.” Fri, 11 Nov 2011 11:38:49 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_640662 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_640662 angiegoboom "Okay, we're sorry! Please let us go." said Kara. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 12:23:11 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_641345 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_641345 Laura E. Andrews "The biting air hit him full in the chest, and he took deep breaths of clean, icy air." Department of Redundancy Department? This should probably go in the NaNoisms thread, too. But cut me some slack! It was 11:40 at night when I wrote that! Fri, 11 Nov 2011 13:17:33 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_642243 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_642243 Appelsina I looked at the area between the well and the bucket, and the grass there was no longer a healthy green, but rather a dead color of tan and a hint of pink. They were poisoned. -- Bleh, it is not the best line I have written, but that is what I last wrote. c: Fri, 11 Nov 2011 13:33:16 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_642482 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_642482 lizerbeth "Erin watched the sun go down until the sun was down behind the trees and she couldn’t see the sun any longer." The editor in me wants to go back and get rid of the repetition of the word sun, but then I realize I don't have time to edit. It is novel writing time. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 13:49:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_642759 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_642759 Red86 Love it! Fri, 11 Nov 2011 14:08:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_643079 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_643079 Red86 In the meantime, Hill enjoyed the perks of the new promotion, the senator's right hand man by all accounts, never complaining and always getting on with the job at hand. And also taking notes, making observations and constantly trying to find the source of the stink surrounding senator goodwall. I have no idea what I'm doing but I'm loving it!!! Fri, 11 Nov 2011 14:16:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_643215 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_643215 ChoKiba I could not say what those rumors would hold, but they were bound to become far more interesting than they likely already were by the end of the night. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 15:01:57 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_644080 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_644080 annaspargoryan <em>Hugh, we need to talk.</em> Jane’s message burned him like acid. <em>It’s important.</em> He deleted it. Whatever Jane needed could wait. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 15:52:20 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_645074 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_645074 hknamida Dr. Adams had some trouble keeping up; the man was rather faster than his build would suggest. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 15:58:49 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_645196 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_645196 xxCoFxx So far: “But I’m sure if I either drive around or look online I can find something.” Fri, 11 Nov 2011 16:10:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_645441 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_645441 littlewonder "Well, let's just let them sweat it out for a little longer, okay?" said Andrea. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 20:05:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_648964 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_648964 Kookaburra17 “Then get warmed up and something to eat before I feed you something myself; you’re shivering like a hairless ice-fawn...” -The end of the second chapter and incredibly random out of context. xD Fri, 11 Nov 2011 20:09:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_649044 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=30#forum_thread_comment_649044 R_C_LandPsMommy05 Sam and Charley sipped through straws. They are eating breakfast ^^^. That's about all I can really say. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 20:33:32 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_649397 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_649397 Julia VV Into his shoulder, I breathe, “I hate it.” But that doesn’t mean I don’t love this: his arms around me, my head resting on his shoulder. I don’t know how long we stay this way, but it doesn’t matter. Nothing matters anymore. Would've sounded way too unoriginal if I hadn't included the whole little paragraph :) Fri, 11 Nov 2011 22:14:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_651222 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_651222 muppetcrayz Or anything at all; sometimes she was known to go wandering about the city, trying to find people that would give her stuff for free- that never went well, as no one hands out stuff for free to established addicts. My.. book's... about... drugs? Fri, 11 Nov 2011 22:44:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_651805 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_651805 Tashie Micah grinned to himself, obviously proud to have remembered her name. Fri, 11 Nov 2011 23:20:00 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_652368 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_652368 tsukkuyomi_kokuryuu From the mouth of the usually swearing Kazuya: “Or much of a liar; he sucks at poker,” Kazuya said, “He’s our real alibi; if it was just me and Tsuki, it would still be suspicious, but it wasn’t. And Kiyoshi agrees that we were with him, and he’s horrible at poker faces.” Sat, 12 Nov 2011 00:27:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653267 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653267 Cophi Side by side, they watched the sun disappear over the horizon, watched as the lights of the city twinkled on, the magical street lamps glowing, light filtering through myriad windows of stained glass. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 00:35:05 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653397 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653397 booboobear Albert Johnson, whose body had already submerged due to his old lungs inhaling the muddy water and his feeble arms being unable to keep him afloat at the same time as choking out the water that drowned him. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 00:55:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653709 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653709 Obscurite_Asile “How do you even know about High School Musical? Aren’t you like, 40 something?” Sat, 12 Nov 2011 00:59:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653764 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_653764 mixeduppainter In reference to a knife that was almost used in a killing (or at least mild stabbing) the FMC observed: She wasn't sure if she'd ever be able to carve a roast with it again. XD Yep. You see someone almost get stabbed (the MMC has the knife in hand) and the first thing you think of is a roast. That's my FMC for ya. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 01:54:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_654197 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_654197 SquiddySophi How complicated this was. Vampire conference attended by winged and human people, hosted by a pregnant winged lady, hooray! :D Sat, 12 Nov 2011 06:33:10 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_655688 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_655688 CadetRemi "Overall he was a good looking boy, as his brother was, but, there was something different about him. Probably just he wasn’t from her time." Sat, 12 Nov 2011 07:06:53 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_655898 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_655898 novia Lucian nodded and felt himself pale a bit, unaware of the intensity of the battle he was about to face. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 08:47:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_656690 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_656690 thing Whatever. As Olivia might say. [Eric Downey [that schoolteacher, whose suit is too tight] at the Hallowe’en party]. At the party we can get to meet most of the characters, and Eric can maybe tell us about them in his pompous way. [Louis needs to take on a definite Wagnerian megalo-obsessiveless as he grows older and queerer] - I know this is not one line, but it seemed interesting enough to post [the bits in square brackets are notes to self - my novel is full of them] Sat, 12 Nov 2011 08:49:13 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_656702 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_656702 HannaGrace Her voice trailed off into things that didn’t yet concern us. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 09:41:57 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_657235 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_657235 TotalNerd An assassination attempt was called for here, and I was the one to hatch it. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 09:48:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_657311 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_657311 Void-Auron Sententia bit her lip in shock, then went back to ignoring Gaza's presence the best she could. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 10:12:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_657592 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_657592 intrikate “What have you seen, child?” Nenna asked him. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 10:52:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_658065 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_658065 Red Lulu 'Ceinwen was woken up by the harp at the end of her bed falling on top of her.' I have to say that I like this line. Mostly because I googled my FMC (just like a forum thread told me too) and it came up with a harpist named Ceinwen. So a harp had to be included somewhere. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 16:57:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_663968 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_663968 amayanieva Flexing my muscles before drifting away, I knew that I was strong, and that the pain had just made me stronger. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 17:45:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_664784 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_664784 HunteroTheGreat Zinc-y water is an interesting taste. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 17:46:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_664793 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=31#forum_thread_comment_664793 Angelynx eew, creepy cool. A zombie story? Sat, 12 Nov 2011 18:05:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_665086 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=1#forum_thread_comment_665086 Angelynx "And the thing he had not told Komori hung like a sword in his soul, as they ran into the forest." Hmm, may not need that comma there.... Sat, 12 Nov 2011 18:06:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_665107 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_665107 spygurl You know if someone says no offense you know that they're going to actually offend you. I'd been trying pretty darn hard. I was just as much of a victim of my circumstances as she was. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 19:51:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_666837 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_666837 lindsey1295 I'll explain the nose later, but I promise it's not so strange. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 20:14:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_667226 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_667226 aftersh0cks Then I wiped it on my pants. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 21:22:10 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_668315 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_668315 Laura E. Andrews "So, I see you found him, Kale," said Marthos. "I thank you for doing what those soldiers could not." Sat, 12 Nov 2011 21:43:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_668673 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_668673 ALynnL07 "Let's got have a bite to eat. We'll all feel better." Spoken by Dylan, my awesome gunslinger. After a couple of ambushes, my group has just gotten worn out, so they get a small reprieve. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 21:49:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_668786 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_668786 AmbiguouslyMe "Without hesitation, Celia threw the mirror across the room, watching the glass shatter as it hit the wall, destroying it." Probably will edit out the 'destroying it' when edit time comes around. From a story perspective - uh oh. That was the only portal between worlds that I'd established. So either my MCs are stuck flipped, or they have to figure out another way. Better get to it, ladies. Sat, 12 Nov 2011 22:39:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_669720 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_669720 Kate_Cassidy ‘Oh! It’s just freezing your wings and slowing your heart, isn’t it?’ Sat, 12 Nov 2011 23:31:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_670574 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_670574 Blankenship24 I’ll be using this tonight Neena declares with a large smile. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 03:17:53 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_672833 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_672833 BenAlexander I sobbed without control over any of it; Evelyn was as good as dead. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 03:25:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_672893 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_672893 roseart94 And so she walked with her son to the edge of Albany, her black heels clicking against the pavement and echoing off of the silent roads and into the silent sky. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 11:54:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_675955 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_675955 meggie358 There was a snowball’s chance in hell that she was actually enjoying the feeling Tobias’s kiss gave her…right? Sun, 13 Nov 2011 14:18:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_677478 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_677478 ChoKiba I wanted his love. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 15:04:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_678307 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_678307 cat_lady I’m afraid your days of being ladylike are over. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 15:30:05 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_678793 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_678793 ninjaobsessor “Well, I don’t know about the rest of the world, Mal, but I care enough to listen.” Sun, 13 Nov 2011 15:39:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_678962 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_678962 Unit7 She closed the curtains and disappeared Sun, 13 Nov 2011 17:32:29 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_680827 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_680827 pocketsoul1127 "Okay," Ner said, then turned to Hasen. "I can see why you think she's powerful." Sun, 13 Nov 2011 19:39:01 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_683010 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_683010 ceciliaMasimo I wanted to heal him. But it was my place to. He was his own Healer and I had to accept that. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 21:03:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_684454 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_684454 Doodles13 "Fear the wrath of the angry fangirl." Sun, 13 Nov 2011 21:13:45 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_684627 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_684627 ceciliaMasimo [quote=ceciliaMasimo] I wanted to heal him. But it was my place to. He was his own Healer and I had to accept that. [/quote] awkward writing strikes again! I meant: I wanted to heal him but it was not my place to. He was his own Healer and I had to accept that. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 21:28:06 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_684897 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_684897 nome_de_plume The music kept going as she showed him a little bit of that oneness she had been talking about earlier. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 23:07:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_686743 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_686743 Dairenna "This is your final mission," Ha, that can be taken in so many different directions. Mwahaha. It's also the final line of the "big reveal" and now all the muck is about to hit the ceiling spinny device. Craziness and character death is around the corner and I can't wait. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 23:42:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_687295 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=32#forum_thread_comment_687295 cohr “It’s almost as if the opaque fog and dark clouds coupled with unusual rain patterns is foreshadowing an event that will undermine our success and have a generally negative effect on our adventure.” Sun, 13 Nov 2011 23:48:00 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687368 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687368 xLisaAnnx And so she was at another stalemate; so willing to die, but so unwilling to stop struggling towards the horizon. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 23:49:26 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687393 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687393 Rarity “I’m a servant.” He said curling his lip at her. “I don’t sit at the table when there is company.” He turned his head to Ivan. “And she thinks we don’t know proper etiquette.” Gaius shook his head as he limped over to his bed and sat down. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 23:53:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687444 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687444 Kiki.Mirage With that they were off, ready for whatever came their way. Sun, 13 Nov 2011 23:59:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687529 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687529 Joselyn Its smoke-like fingers reached out towards them, grasping, blending into each other with the movement. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 00:00:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687534 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687534 Rarity "A pound of flesh for every line spoken, should I be lying.” Mon, 14 Nov 2011 00:29:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687828 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687828 W.E.D. "I vomited into the street gutter. It was one part hangover, three parts the memory of my face." Mon, 14 Nov 2011 00:31:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687843 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687843 Rarity Love that. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 00:46:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687970 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687970 Kat Dakuu They backed up and hid behind the corner as one agent spoke with hurried whispers into the phone, words like found him and backup filtering through the almost incomprehensible spewage of words. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 00:47:13 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687974 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_687974 ADuvall You had to have a good intuition when it came to the people around you, otherwise you’d be killed in a heartbeat. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 01:08:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_688195 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_688195 rebeccaryuu The last sentence I wrote this morning: "Thank you," she whispered against his skin. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 02:15:20 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_688804 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_688804 ThraeElddim We were having a moment, I realized. One of those times that writers like Tolkien would devote a whole paragraph or page to, with their flowery script. (Had to put some story to it, so the last sentence would make sense.) Mon, 14 Nov 2011 02:27:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_688874 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_688874 Chillibean “Maybe it was an actual attempt by him, just badly planned and pathetic?” Klyte suggested. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 03:53:45 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_689362 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_689362 Chillibean Oooh, I like this :) Mon, 14 Nov 2011 03:54:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_689365 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_689365 wingsoflight “Y-Yes, Dad!” he cried, voice sound hoarse. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 15:09:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_695823 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_695823 littlewisp Wow. I know it was late last night and I pretty much fell asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow, but still: Almost sneaking, as if she chased – or was chased? – prey. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 15:13:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_695900 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_695900 CavvieCat Last line that I wrote last night: It was surely one he would remember for many years to come. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 16:00:29 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_696704 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_696704 ChoKiba I was so proud of Vera in this moment <em>I wondered, but I honestly could not bring myself to care.</em> Mon, 14 Nov 2011 16:54:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_697651 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_697651 Lucy_Pryde Well, it's technically two lines, but they go together! "We're stealing a car," Alicat commented mildly. As Atticus listened to the smattering of nonchalant agreements, he realized that his friends had the moral thread-count of a burlap sack. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 18:25:20 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699143 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699143 xXDeaths_AngelXx "Name's Jay Hook and might I say that you've got a lovely pair of legs," he leaned in close so his lips hovered close to my ear, "What time do they open?" Mon, 14 Nov 2011 18:30:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699220 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699220 Blithley Nosh Her life could be made into a book, he thought- My Life as a Teenaged Arsonist. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 18:32:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699242 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699242 AnAgelessTime Trisha laughed in such a coquettish way with her hand over her mouth that she could have easily gotten the whole table pregnant. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 18:35:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699286 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_699286 mertzenicha “Yeah, but I'm not much for police anyway,” said Tony, pulling them toward the door. “Let's go.” Mon, 14 Nov 2011 18:40:57 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_699354 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_699354 AmosTFairchild End of Novel - Vampire Planet... lol “Welcome to Vampire Planet, my friends,” he then said with a smile. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 20:15:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_700691 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_700691 littlewisp She stepped past it, watching it as she moved, and found the straight path she'd come out of had turned crooked, and lead to a four way split that she definitely did not recall. Mon, 14 Nov 2011 20:25:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_700868 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_700868 heysamantha “I’m just worried.” I admitted. “I don’t want even more people I love to get hurt because of something I did. First my dad, and now you…” Mon, 14 Nov 2011 20:44:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_701214 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_701214 SignoraPsycheZenobia “Oh, it’s just that he’s stupid, clumsy, and self-sacrificing. The boy’s a ticking time bomb, but there’s nothing inherently wrong with him.” Mon, 14 Nov 2011 22:02:20 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_702566 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_702566 ParadoxOfTime It was a summer of childhood innocence, which was renewed and lost, that all the Untrained—even Luke, who wanted so badly to be viewed as a mature adult—desperately tried to cling to. ...I honestly don't know where my novel is heading. :) Mon, 14 Nov 2011 22:41:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_703201 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_703201 W.E.D. Thank you, I like yours too! Though I was unable to come back to this forum to post so having until recently been very occupied. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 00:10:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_704476 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=33#forum_thread_comment_704476 tchaikovsky He headed toward a desk situation in a far corner, lol Tue, 15 Nov 2011 00:56:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_704888 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_704888 Cyphir I didn't know how right I was. It loses its punctuation without the last line, but there you go. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 01:17:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_705049 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_705049 TotalNerd "Can anybody here read the damn thing?" Tue, 15 Nov 2011 14:30:53 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_712189 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_712189 SweetJuly My ears caught the sound of the clock on the wall, and I turned around and saw it, its copper tongue swinging forth and back, ticking condescendingly at me. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 15:03:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_712725 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_712725 Beael "Her first trainee had to spend two hours in meditation before he even reached the darkness and then another to see the light." It sounds like she's using them to practice murdering. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 15:16:29 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_712999 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_712999 W.E.D. Jeez, that has my mind preoccupied on your novel now. lol Tue, 15 Nov 2011 15:32:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713265 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713265 W.E.D. "The word document only had the word 'Happiness' with a center alignment. To this day, it's one of the best things I've ever written." Tue, 15 Nov 2011 15:33:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713286 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713286 elwrites "The speaker nodded towards the Stand-In, who pressed a button at the signal." Well, that was a boring sentence. Damn you, me, why you no write interesting sentences like these other nice people? Gained: incentive to pass this point... Tue, 15 Nov 2011 15:36:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713348 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713348 Rain-chan "... You are -never- going to take me.” This novel is causing me no end of trouble, but I admit, it's got some fun scenes. This is from one of them. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 15:51:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713610 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713610 Senny "Amused, he raised his hands above his head, and that was about the moment that it all metaphorically went to hell." Main antagonist, I hate you for making me love you ;-; Tue, 15 Nov 2011 16:14:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713995 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_713995 Philosopher "Okay it's open. On the count of three you run for the car and get in. Don't stop. Don't look back. You understand?" Tue, 15 Nov 2011 17:05:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_714932 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_714932 kss27 He finished cooking dinner, picked up James, and the rest of the night, with the exception of the argument he’d had with Maddy which had culminated in her running to her room and slamming the door, was fairly peaceful and silent. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 18:48:32 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_716574 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_716574 ChoKiba He did not seem to care about the chaos of the moment of love between two people. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 19:16:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_717007 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_717007 Eilorae We just got a confused look from Valael," ok? Well the results are in and you are not going to like it..." Great! Can these days get any worse? Knowing my life they are. Tue, 15 Nov 2011 19:24:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_717135 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_717135 .izzy21. "Alcina could almost see it perched there in front of him on a silver platter." Tue, 15 Nov 2011 21:47:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_718630 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=34#forum_thread_comment_718630 J.E.Blackworth It could have been the cool weather, and not fear at all, but nonetheless she wasn't willing to be stung by any animals. Wed, 16 Nov 2011 08:57:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_724218 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_724218 melwrites312 I don't remember exactly what I did but it was one of those things when a parent instinctively yells like when the child puts their hand to a hot stove. Wed, 16 Nov 2011 09:04:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_724269 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_724269 munkylover "Stations always made her nostalgic, and she could never work out why. She supposed that going places always reminds you of all the places you’ve been." I rather liked that line. :) Wed, 16 Nov 2011 10:29:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_725214 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_725214 Beael "Don't hit me anywhere it hurts!" Aw, Shamus &lt;3 Wed, 16 Nov 2011 15:04:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_728838 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_728838 TypingKira “Yes,” he nodded. Totally not ambiguous. Wed, 16 Nov 2011 15:09:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_728929 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_728929 kainoliero “Damien”, it finally said aloud, “tell me about humans.” Wed, 16 Nov 2011 15:32:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_729288 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_729288 Papa Poe "Water at that height is not so soft." Wed, 16 Nov 2011 16:41:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_730329 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_730329 Sakuraloli "Marcus will know." Do you how mysterious that sounds when he's talking about how Marcus will know what he's going to order for lunch??? Yeah, doesn't sound so mysterious now, does it??? Wed, 16 Nov 2011 19:29:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_732804 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_732804 W.E.D. "Enzo. Enzo St.Pierre is my name." This character came out of nowhere but I like him a lot already, hopefully he'll be comedy relief, everything has been dark and then he shows up stealing my MC's top hat. lol Wed, 16 Nov 2011 19:41:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_732988 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_732988 coloredimage "...You are not touching my Mini, Wirth.” Bree grumbled. Wed, 16 Nov 2011 20:53:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_733795 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_733795 Burnt Sushi At 23, she was socially awkward enough to be incapable of taking to a party, but just odd enough to make her adorable, in the kind of way that baby seals with a concussion are cute when they fall down. Wed, 16 Nov 2011 22:08:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_734847 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_734847 urbadave "That's funny, because I seem to give away everything for free. It's very liberating." Wed, 16 Nov 2011 23:28:42 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_735893 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_735893 Piper the Perfect Lyanna gave a lazy shrug and turned to walk to Flynn. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 04:15:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_737783 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_737783 Piper the Perfect I love that imagery. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 04:15:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_737785 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_737785 allycloud "Theo Howard might be well mannered enough to offer a criminal who just attacked her in the street a cup of tea, but she certainly would not let him use her good china." It will definitely need a rejig later, but I liked it. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 05:54:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738265 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738265 tree of a different color "There was hope." Yay! Thu, 17 Nov 2011 06:36:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738537 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738537 tree of a different color Ha! Your line made me giggle. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 06:38:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738547 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738547 delphii “How is she?” she asked. Florence did not need to ask to whom she was referring. - Started my second plot arc, the main characters moved far far away and one of them is homesick and feeling isolated. Thrilling I know. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 06:40:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738564 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738564 ZackKaufen Joe lowered his head, unable to hold her terrified gaze. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 07:11:09 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738763 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_738763 clynn07 We had just pulled away again, huge, silly smiles on both of our faces, when the screaming started. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 09:17:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_739791 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_739791 Senny "I suppose physics had to sit in the corner and deal with it in the magical world, which might explain why it was such a bitch in ours." First time I've ever written in first person, but I have to say I do like my MMC's voice. Might alter it slightly later though, I'm not a fan of the way the bit after the comma reads. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 09:34:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_739955 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_739955 HoneyB My most recently-written line is more of a pagraph at the moment: "He continued to focus on that point in the middle distance, all the while imagining a rainbow stretching from one palm to the other, intently focusing on the colours – red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, violet – and how they lined up, how the rainbow would form as it stretched across his palms, whether it would be faint, barely-there and visible only if you were really looking, or bright and vibrant, almost becoming a beacon with its vivid colours." Thu, 17 Nov 2011 10:13:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_740344 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=35#forum_thread_comment_740344 imaginati "Joe can do whatever he wants, he's second in command of Hell itself!" Thu, 17 Nov 2011 10:52:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_740711 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_740711 Talus Storm Any other man would have run the other direction at the sight of four Knifeclaw demons. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 17:56:11 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746098 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746098 Red Mosquito Maybe in my next life I can be a private detective. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 18:22:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746408 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746408 NVstonebass "The pearly white gates of Heaven were not as welcoming as Wrath had hoped they would be. " Thu, 17 Nov 2011 18:29:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746488 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746488 4thAce "A person can die of grief, I know." Rich Thu, 17 Nov 2011 18:43:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746646 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746646 zepnut1 She seemed to have settled down now, and wasn’t crying anymore, pausing only occasionally to blow her nose again. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 18:47:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746696 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_746696 wingsoflight By then he would have more than enough money saved, and they could begin their lives anew, together. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 20:15:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_747730 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_747730 SweetJuly Her voice was soft. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 21:17:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_748418 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_748418 KingKamor Mine is this: "After every adjustment, she would glance back at the mountain of buildings that they left behind, and pick up the pace slightly for every time she was still able to see it clearly through the haze. " Thu, 17 Nov 2011 22:07:11 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749022 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749022 ChoKiba Several later, I was still reeling from the shock of it all. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 22:10:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749060 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749060 Lucinda “Yet,” he said as we entered the library. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 22:23:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749198 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749198 The_Squidd They wouldn’t release a public statement unveiling vampires until they were completely certain it was true. Thu, 17 Nov 2011 22:53:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749503 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749503 W.E.D. "The brightest lights cast the darkest shadows and all that jazz." Thu, 17 Nov 2011 23:32:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749890 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_749890 Doodles13 "Do you think we can do this tomorrow? I stink of booze and want to go to bed and just… not think right now." Fri, 18 Nov 2011 11:19:32 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_754290 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_754290 Toomii “You can walk away from this conversation but you won't be able to walk away from the person who killed Julie when he comes after you.” I stop mid stride. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 11:53:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_754620 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_754620 J.E.Blackworth She just knew she had to run, and she ran so fast the skin of her feet eventually bled and her eyes teared up and her lungs were ready to collapse any moment now. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 11:55:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_754635 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_754635 destiny2909 The assembled audience clapped politely and Darren headed back up the stairs to his seat. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 15:03:16 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_756679 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_756679 ChoKiba I shook my head trying not to think about it anymore. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 15:13:45 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_756822 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_756822 zepnut1 “You put it very well,” was all he could think to say. His mind had gone blank in this moment with this girl, alone together in the middle of Oxfordshire. “Let’s get that brew.” Fri, 18 Nov 2011 15:18:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_756895 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_756895 FairytaleHero And that, I must admit, was the main reason I was terrified of him. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 16:47:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_757899 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=36#forum_thread_comment_757899 jannin "You know, I have permission to hit you for every unprecedented question you ask me, and considering the scar you're already going to have, I wouldn't push my luck if I were you." Fri, 18 Nov 2011 17:58:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_758774 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_758774 ChoKiba Paranoia had kept me alive in France after all. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 18:18:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_758972 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_758972 Etch Feather “Me? I have no name I can remember, but you may call me Lucian if it pleases you.” He told them without a single look backwards. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 20:34:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_760415 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_760415 velvettouch_connectingdots Kai's red eyes are similarly darkened in the throes of lust, and he stares back, mouth open and dragging in air. Why does he sound like a dog in this? Fri, 18 Nov 2011 20:57:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_760655 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_760655 umitheelf “I met my Prince Charming but he wasn’t real,” Sophia said through her uncontrollable sobbing and buried her face into Brittany’s shoulder as she continued to weep. Fri, 18 Nov 2011 22:16:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_761540 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_761540 Burnt Sushi "West Greenlee is now a self-sustaining outpost under new management, and a bastion for all survivors against the overwhelming onslaught of undead masses seeking to devour both your flesh and your soul." Fri, 18 Nov 2011 22:21:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_761605 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_761605 Dani Marchand "We can't stop you from leaving, but you will be found, and the Council won't take kindly to the waste of their time." Sat, 19 Nov 2011 01:01:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763232 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763232 Chillibean Visere turned his back against the broken lump of wood that was the door, and slid to the ground. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 02:17:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763734 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763734 kwiykovics “Thomas, I'm coming,” Serena whispers under her breath, “Wait for me. I'm almost there.” And out of context, that sounds dirty. XD Sat, 19 Nov 2011 02:52:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763891 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763891 Papa Poe I love this thread. My latest after a desperate (failed) attempt to word sprint to 30k. "I enjoy blood made into a sausage, a black pudding you know, but I can't guzzle it fresh like my manservant here does. Olives?" Sat, 19 Nov 2011 03:16:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763978 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_763978 Mnemophage "Woke up to a bed on fire." Also known as: god damn it, something interesting WILL happen very soon. And I'm not going to cut away from the action like I have a tendency of doing, because the perspective character is strung out on oxycontin and this is going to be AWESOME. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 04:07:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_764180 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_764180 mycatduncan “Hold on, I think you triggered a memory flash!” exclaims Charcoal, then squeezes his eyes shut in concentration. “I’ve got it. You’re a numbskull!” Sat, 19 Nov 2011 06:42:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_764821 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_764821 cat_lady I could see it all as a vision in the gathering dusk. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 08:16:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_765313 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_765313 zepnut1 “The dream…it’s a bathroom. In Colombia. I killed a man there.” Sat, 19 Nov 2011 09:17:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_765706 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_765706 melwrites312 “Don't make jokes at a time like this and yes,” Dad said with a small smile. “Why didn't you tell us your panic attacks started back up? This is dangerous.” Sat, 19 Nov 2011 12:04:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_767259 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_767259 Appelsina The only exception I’d say would be the clothes which were slightly more worn down that the commoner’s clothes I had. I was no longer amused, but a little worried for some reason. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 12:15:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_767366 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_767366 Etch Feather Anthony tried to argue, but Lucian held up a hand to quiet them down. “It is both there and gone, for what you see is cockatrice blood.” Sat, 19 Nov 2011 13:09:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_767980 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_767980 Flindtasaurus Really, it was only a matter of time before I ended up clobbering him to death with a spoon or something. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 13:16:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_768081 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_768081 FairytaleHero "I can never reveal the secrets of my magic pancakes." It makes sense in context, I swear. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 18:23:16 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_771856 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_771856 ChoKiba They would find it better to err on the side of caution. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 18:36:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_771986 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_771986 Elfish Danced, danced in time with the beating of her heart, the beating that he ended and sent to the ground with her pale cheeks and rose mouth that had been parted in laughter but hours before, before they had been stained with her blood. 0.0 Sat, 19 Nov 2011 19:19:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_772466 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_772466 treegurl84 “Don't touch mah steek.” Sat, 19 Nov 2011 20:01:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_772953 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_772953 Fonzi "Kate you lie to me and I swear as soon as we get out of here I'm cutting off your toes." Sat, 19 Nov 2011 21:37:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_774074 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_774074 JoyceHeatherington Miss Dayna, will continue to do an article on the disappearance of coffee in the town, and why they were not getting any more in. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 21:45:49 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_774178 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_774178 SpiritofClyde Madeleine winced with every step she took, pain ricocheting through her body with each movement. Sat, 19 Nov 2011 23:54:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_775687 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_775687 XVisiEX [quote=treegurl84] “Don't touch mah steek.” [/quote] Not gonna lie ....that made me lmfao Sun, 20 Nov 2011 00:35:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_776043 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_776043 rrhiab Besieged on all sides, Jack valiantly chose to take the stamps from Addie, hand them to Thomas, and then retreat as far as he could without actually leaving the room. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 00:43:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_776104 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_776104 gravi "Rein, if you don't want me to kiss you again, shut up," she said through a smile. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 08:11:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_778653 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_778653 LynneH “It's an acquired taste, I'll grant you,” agreed Agamemnon. “But a sterling support in times of need”. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 08:23:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_778708 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_778708 awesome-me94 Normally, he'd be panicking and realizing this meant the blood contract was about to expire, but he was too busy thinking about Allison to notice. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 09:59:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_779251 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_779251 columbibueno A kind word here and there, and then the bombs of war, the sound cannons, the bullets and pepper spray, slaughterhouses, filth and cages and prisons, the billions that die in agony OVER AND OVER. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 11:37:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_780042 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_780042 DigitalAir "Sorry, I kind of over-reacted there..." He looks away, still smiling, clearly not sorry at all. "I told you I was good, though!" Sun, 20 Nov 2011 16:26:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_783420 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_783420 awesome-me94 Too bad, because, now nothing will matter except seeing Marquis burn in the flames of sweet, sweet revenge. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 17:17:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_784008 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_784008 ChoKiba After all, everyone was apparently going to die. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 17:26:09 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_784139 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_784139 DanielJPorter "He's yours." Caleb sighed. "Take good care of him. Sorry, big fella." He spoke directly to the mannequin model. "You'll have to live to fight space dragons another day. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 18:33:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_784973 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_784973 rampantpanda She drew the pistol and knife, each with its own rear-spin flourish. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 18:38:53 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785028 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785028 Whispy360 Time to do some note taking. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 19:12:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785457 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785457 Elizabeth116 "He was out the door before she even had a second to wonder where the nickname had come from." I think that was a little bit of author intrusion there. My FMC was just called a nickname 36,000 words in that she has never been called before. It just kinda came out of my MMC's mouth. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 19:26:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785618 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785618 mollyyymo “We certainly did not take steps to prevent it,” Klaus responded practically. (Kind of needs context - my MC is pregnant.) Sun, 20 Nov 2011 19:43:06 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785835 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_785835 DaikonDuck Anil visibly recoiled. *Oh goooods,* Robert could practically see him thinking. *I've been associating with a cootie boy.* Incidentally, those are supposed to be italics, but yarny doesn't support them. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 20:55:47 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_786758 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_786758 JoyceHeatherington Mr. Corey could not wait until next month to go to Snowball with his date. Sun, 20 Nov 2011 21:12:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_786984 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=38#forum_thread_comment_786984 emberwing “I’m not sure,” Flint admitted. “A delusional girl with air and teleporting powers claiming to be God just swore to kill us all.” That's right. I broke the fourth wall to add to word count And suddenly I am the villain It is me Sun, 20 Nov 2011 21:14:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_787011 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_787011 Marie.94 They spent the evening talking about what their lives were like growing up, how they came to find out about the Descendents of Milan, and even about what they would really like to do if they had no obligations to serve under the Descendents. Isn't my run-on sentence so pretty? XD Sun, 20 Nov 2011 22:18:45 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_787876 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_787876 Shaluna "Sinun ovat ajatukseni ja kallo joka niitä kantaa." translation ~ Yours are my thoughs and the skull that bears them. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 01:15:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_789419 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_789419 Chillibean Visere smiled. “Thank you.” I could've sworn he'd smiled and said thank you like... ten thousand times by now. *sigh* Mon, 21 Nov 2011 01:22:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_789454 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_789454 GinsuBlender He could look down the barrel, into the inky blackness, and the only thought that would come to him was not to run, or flee, or speak, but rather *This is how I die.* Click. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 03:52:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790195 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790195 Bullet Instead you will receive this a few days hence and will know that I have reached the very height of my success and still I wished to climb ever higher. To you, Mrs Fotheringham, I offer my heartfelt gratitude at your hospitality all those years ago and hope that you will always remember Josiah Winton June 8th 1848. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 04:29:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790345 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790345 Philtrum "Well, like I said, a lot of weapons and not a lot of English. I caught a glimpse into the back room, but only for a second. Nothing that will help us kill him." Mon, 21 Nov 2011 06:48:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790853 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790853 mollyyymo I love it. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 07:01:06 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790909 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_790909 Taekwondodo Because otherwise it does not make much sense I include the previous line as well. [quote]Kimberly stared at me with an appraising look on her face. One hand rested on the hilt of her sword and the other stroked her chin as she thought. “And the Watchers disappearing? That was you too?” “I don’t know, maybe? I was just thinking we could do so much more if we had some space.” [/quote] Mon, 21 Nov 2011 07:46:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_791124 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_791124 Bleistift_B "Malik ging über die Planke, neben ihm Afzal, dicht hinter ihm Owl, als würden sie eine Art Angriff oder Attacke erwarten." Translated: "Malik walked over the plank, next to him walked Afzal, close behind him Owl, as if they would expect an attack any moment." Mon, 21 Nov 2011 08:12:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_791286 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_791286 MariekeZ81 Jason knew very well there was a word for people who couldn’t love and that word was psychopath. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 10:52:14 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_792362 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_792362 Harajuku Otaku "Somehow, when everyone's focused on something else, 13 black roses appear on her grave. I have a theory." Mon, 21 Nov 2011 12:24:48 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_793227 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_793227 Ladypamela 'The House of Gallus has ruled the Empire for three generations,' Valentian pointed out. 'Good luck finding a chink in our armor.' Mon, 21 Nov 2011 12:36:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_793357 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_793357 JamesComstock "Rachel took a deep breath and, squeezing David's hand, left everything she'd every known behind." Mon, 21 Nov 2011 13:16:05 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_793779 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_793779 Appelsina At that point in time, I was worried about Charlie and Gilbert as well. Was I able to trust them as well? Better yet, was that why Cain took longer to reach the cabin? To tell the royal guard about us? Mon, 21 Nov 2011 13:48:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_794131 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_794131 tereseh “If you dare, I can give you a lift, if you’re going somewhere central,” he said and pushed the door to the balcony open. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 14:17:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_794496 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_794496 Burnt Sushi The author groaned at having to type the word facility again, but it was a good enough word for now, and she had no plans to keep so many of the same word after November, when she could edit to her heart’s content. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 15:08:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_795048 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_795048 Etch Feather “That depends whether or not you consider yourself as delicate as a flower.” Lucian laughed at his joyful insult, while Anthony sulked back a bit, unable to respond. Mon, 21 Nov 2011 18:54:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_797739 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=37#forum_thread_comment_797739 Etch Feather “That depends whether or not you consider yourself as delicate as a flower.” Lucian laughed at his joyful insult, while Anthony sulked back a bit, unable to respond. Nice to have a bit of humor when they're traveling in a barren wasteland, don't you think? XD Mon, 21 Nov 2011 18:56:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_797759 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_797759 Marie.94 Hell, kill off 95 percent of the worlds population and then split the few that remain and you will doom all of humanity! (Yes, my antagonists really are trying to kill off most of the population and yes, they really do believe that it is for humanity's own good.) &gt;_&lt; Mon, 21 Nov 2011 22:22:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_800210 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_800210 skinnybee I hang up my bag and coat and head to the kettle, figuring I could manage to fit in one last cup of coffee before my shift starts, as I tell myself every night I find myself here, with my feet sticking to the floor and my hands stinking of old limes. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 00:36:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_801557 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_801557 coolpearls Evan winked at him. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 01:06:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_801753 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=39#forum_thread_comment_801753 Tin Robot “Move to designated pickup zone with survivors. Air evac is inbound. Report to me on arrival at the CP. Your ass is mine, Ramy.” Tue, 22 Nov 2011 03:29:09 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_802338 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_802338 Ivy Apple He’s shut in his cell, no doubt complaining to the Keeper of the Keys about the unsalted bread. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 05:28:06 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_802734 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_802734 CassMorris (40k!) Would seeing her every day — every day that he was in Aven, at least — make her less of a commodity, less a thing to be prized? Tue, 22 Nov 2011 14:04:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_806731 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_806731 The-Jedi-Ninja Everything was neat and structured now, there was no wilds left and cities had sprawled, taking over suburbs and surrounding land. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 14:56:49 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_807430 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_807430 writeandknow "I don’t think Colby will be their next victim, he’s been alive too long, but I think a murdered victim will turn up soon.” Tue, 22 Nov 2011 15:00:42 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_807484 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_807484 emmamore Yes, it was insanity, but there was never any other way to describe our family. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 18:36:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_809993 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_809993 Gilly Bean So Natalie knew if she was going to succeed, she would need the help of none other than Phoebe Addler. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 19:56:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_810967 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_810967 Criansa Also, it seems to be written in blood, so that’s probably important. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 20:47:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_811600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_811600 Marie.94 It occurred to Raine that if she did not turn back around soon she would risk possibly getting lost. *That would not really be so bad would it?* She thought, but she decided it would be best to turn back around anyway. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 21:28:10 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812151 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812151 Selanfene "I meant to visit you on Thanksgiving. Sorry I didn't make it." Could it possibly be more mundane? Haha. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 21:32:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812208 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812208 thegreatescape2014 "I am pretty damn proud of that fact." And personally, I'm pretty damn proud of the fact that I haven't gone into a complete mental breakdown this month. Even though I did write one...or two...okay maybe like five. Tue, 22 Nov 2011 21:55:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812545 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812545 Quinzy “I’m assuming the poison the queen made you consume causes hallucinations, none of what you saw was real, nobody could survive a fall from that.” Tue, 22 Nov 2011 22:27:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812951 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_812951 Etch Feather He didn't bother to ask Anthony about it, but he was fairly sure the rest of it was human blood, not monster. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 00:28:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_814527 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_814527 basilbudgie Jeremy smiled at him before turning and walking off. I know what you are thinking, my last sentence is a pretty boring and average one, but I'm building up to the massive battle scene and I'm trying to pad my story out as much as possible. I don't want to finish the story before I reach 50k. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 00:37:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_814614 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_814614 Purrabella This had to work. you said it. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 02:45:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_815457 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_815457 Chillibean <em>Am I a friend?</em> Klyte wondered. <em>An ally, certainly. But would he consider me a friend?</em> Wed, 23 Nov 2011 03:12:33 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_815612 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_815612 sarahmfighter A few lights glowed to life and the screen changed, playing previews for upcoming Litholian Movies that won't be playing in any theaters near you. Um. xD That line will probably be deleted in the edits. But I like it! Litholia is the planet, by the way. So movies in Litholia that won't be playing in our Earth theaters... yup. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 05:52:10 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_816324 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_816324 Dairenna Just as Michael R. Wembley found out the hard way: Rule number seven of dealing with demons: never, ever offer them something you would rather keep. I don't like the double colon thing but I'm too meh to fix it right now. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 15:17:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_821624 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_821624 RabbitinRed "Her eyes are glittering, scary bright. " Wed, 23 Nov 2011 16:22:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_822418 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_822418 Writing in my Free Time “Hm,” Jamie said and sipped his coffee thoughtfully. “Touché.” Wed, 23 Nov 2011 17:07:26 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_822965 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=40#forum_thread_comment_822965 Mnemophage Not so much a line as a paragraph, because I love how much of a jerk I can be through Linda's perspective. sent f0rge. Linda was feeling like the last person in the world capable of typing a complete sentence. The fact that Tanuuki was almost certainly going to die should she so much as set foot outside her sanctuary was a thought that occurred significantly later. Maybe that's why she was crying. This, my friends, is the Las Vegas Revolutionary Society. It is comprised of the last three people in the city who have internet: a furry, a 14-year-old boy who just figured out how to swear, and whatever the hell Linda is. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 17:10:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_823014 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_823014 Mnemophage And then I realize that the way I've formatted online chatting in my novel is unquotable when actually put on the internet. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 17:19:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_823126 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_823126 Lalina2005 She climbed up slowly, and then they both stood on the roof of Southway staring down at the mayhem around them. Wed, 23 Nov 2011 18:11:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_823618 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_823618 W.E.D. "Today was a day worth being sober." Thu, 24 Nov 2011 01:21:46 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_827900 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_827900 J.E.Blackworth »Tell me... What it is that you want.» Thu, 24 Nov 2011 13:32:32 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_831963 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_831963 She Who Writes (Not including Chapter 19's title) the last line I wrote as of now is: However, things would never happen, like with all wishes, with the exact precision the wisher longed for - it would not even be close. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 14:54:45 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_832586 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_832586 She Who Writes Ooh~ I like this line. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 14:55:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_832594 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_832594 cohr Cheshire made a few more comments on our height, the fact that we were clearly not from around here, and I’m pretty sure he was beginning to say something about my crooked teeth just before we left. (Thought it's definitely not my favourite line) Thu, 24 Nov 2011 16:40:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_833518 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_833518 TheNinthWord "He was king." Hello, turning point! Thu, 24 Nov 2011 16:47:54 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_833584 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_833584 writeandknow "We have a body." xD Thu, 24 Nov 2011 16:58:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_833684 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_833684 Zahra My last line (and, to my huge luck and happiness, the very last line of the novel) is: "The truth is that I couldn't be without you." May I add that the title of my novel is "Without you"? Am I proud and happy? Oh yes. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 17:38:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834033 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834033 brendon “I hate you more,” I returned, and that was that. Pleasant. xD Thu, 24 Nov 2011 17:43:22 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834065 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834065 Marie.94 How would he take all of this? Thu, 24 Nov 2011 18:06:45 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834229 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834229 Scylax "But for now, silence, stealth, and a steady step, okay?” Okay, that's tautology, but if you want to get down into the dungeons without someone screaming or falling down the stairs, it may be justified. I hope. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 18:37:57 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834470 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_834470 DebraStang "Seize him!" Morgan cried, but the other fairies held back, apparently in no hurry to find out whether I truly would use the iron I carried against them. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 21:21:33 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_835896 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_835896 NinaQ She’d stopped pacing and was standing near the door, in almost the exact spot where we kissed last night. I could see her conscious mind didn’t realize the connection, but I was sure some part of her did. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 21:32:27 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_835997 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_835997 Marie.94 “No. He is free at the moment,” Demetri replied promptly, asking no more questions. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 22:56:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_836851 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_836851 DarkCoffeeJazz Muttering and grumbling obscene things under his breath, Gareth and Aidan followed Ross to the ship, ready to do the jobs that the boisterous sailor had volunteered them for. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 23:04:32 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_836919 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_836919 Etch Feather Caldin met his glance with a certain intensity, "That beast as you call it seemed to have much more emotion than alot of other things I've seen." "You talk like you have met an honest human in there." "Perhaps I did," Caldin raised an eyebrow, trying to provoke a reaction, but Lucian's face stayed cold and blank. "Or maybe it just knew how to think like one." (Had to include the last three lines, because I loved them so much.) Thu, 24 Nov 2011 23:29:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_837130 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_837130 Dani Marchand Sergio doesn't want to be the one to face Cecilia's wrath when she discovers that her young ward had to be dragged back home by a search party of soldiers. Thu, 24 Nov 2011 23:33:11 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_837155 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_837155 Chillibean Yes! I love king turning points! *cackles with laughter* Fri, 25 Nov 2011 02:25:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_838263 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_838263 Chillibean He was perfectly balanced, calm and precise, the perfect killing machine. The sad thing is, this sentence describes an MC perfectly. And here it's a minor character (whose personality I have not decided upon), while the MC sits in the castle because he's sick... This will need some major editing later. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 02:26:24 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_838269 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=41#forum_thread_comment_838269 clynn07 Zach’s face had frozen in an expression of pure hatred that he didn’t even try to hide as Daniel spoke again. Ah, love triangles...this one's about to get particularly bad. Something about the climax of a novel inside an evil fortress brings out the worst in people. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 06:22:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_839076 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_839076 J.E.Blackworth <em>»L-let me out of these bandages, Lorenz, and I will give it to you...»</em> ... well that sounds fantastically erotic out of context. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 09:32:05 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_840094 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_840094 fantasyauthor8664 "He pulled his hand out of her grasp, still looking very frustrated with her. Even so, he said nothing in response." Essentially, two characters that are just barely acquainted with each other (but are all right with being alone in the same room) just got into an argument, AKA a turning point of the plot. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 12:16:10 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_841408 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_841408 sarali "Oh, the tricks our minds play on us even when they aren't doing a single thing wrong." This probably would make more sense if I had cared about spelling and phrasing at this point. But hey, it's more coherent than the one before it, and it's pretty sounding out of context. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 17:02:13 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844204 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844204 Bookcrazy "Rats and flies were everywhere and they chained me close to the ground so i had no choice but to sit in the gooey ground." Not my best, sad :( Anyway he just got thrown in a dungeon where they dump chamberpots Fri, 25 Nov 2011 17:06:16 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844250 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844250 Julia VV As long as Miss Taylor and Miss Miranda have the Scorch’s broadcasting towers in their hands, they will go on kindling the flame of war. But what they don’t realize is that you can’t fight fire with fire—you only get a larger flame. ^ probably my favorite line of the day as well.^ Fri, 25 Nov 2011 17:26:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844462 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844462 aaliona "It was the kind of day such a hectic schedule demanded, just so they could unwind." My characters are spending a much deserved day at the beach. :) My wordcount may be on time, but my plot line is still a little under halfway. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 17:31:49 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844517 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844517 42n8 Me "Then the desire in my heart outshone that in my loins." Yes, as you've probably guessed, this leads up to a love scene. Actually, that love scene was completed a few days ago, but I just finished its preamble today. :-) Fri, 25 Nov 2011 17:43:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844621 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844621 xFortuneCookie "He couldn't hear anything anymore. He could only hear his own heartbeat fading away." First time my own story started to choke me up a little. D': Fri, 25 Nov 2011 18:10:55 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844898 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_844898 W.E.D. I found myself drinking his memories in liquid form with each sip. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 18:46:17 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_845252 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_845252 velvettouch_connectingdots 'Well, now that the introductions are over with....' Yeah. I introduce a new character at the end of the entire thing. Fri, 25 Nov 2011 23:18:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_847983 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_847983 babyhilts "Sweet," Chase said, staring wide eyed at the old man and the pair of decapitated bodies at his feet. What do you write when you're desperately behind on your word count? Why, a fight scene involving an arthritic old man and a couple of zombies, of course! Fri, 25 Nov 2011 23:48:45 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848339 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848339 Dani Marchand “You are breathing, aren't you?” Sergio mutters. Callisto is wearing a grin wider than the situation can possibly merit. “I saw fish.” Fri, 25 Nov 2011 23:49:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848358 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848358 Marie.94 If we wish to buy time in order to stop the release of the sarin, this is the only way. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 00:08:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848543 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848543 Anjehla We observed and we adapated and eventually we decided that it was time to reassimilate back into society. My poor characters, hopefully they will realize it is for the best... Sat, 26 Nov 2011 00:31:21 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848732 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_848732 Chillibean 'We gave chase, we cut him off, we let him bleed until he could no longer move.' ...And my MC is working for the guy talking. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 04:14:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_849928 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_849928 cbwriterman Need to give you a short excerpt for context. The scramix sidestepped Ellan gracefully and extended the same leg to me, this time with much more confidence. I took the small paddle shaped foot, which reminded me of a human hand that might have been rolled flat a few times by a lethal rolling pin. We shook. I looked at Ellan, who was now being crowded around by the other scramix, who were all extending their legs toward her. She looked at me and beamed. I was so proud of her. I was so proud of us. And then they invited us for a swim. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 08:36:52 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_850964 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_850964 Egress (Ooh, I'm gonna love this.) 'Now you guys are lesbians!' Sat, 26 Nov 2011 08:56:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_851071 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_851071 cat_lady Nice! Sat, 26 Nov 2011 15:33:33 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_854271 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_854271 cat_lady “Ah, the acolytes! The red of eye and the steady of horse!” One of them cried. “Come for your great trial!” Sat, 26 Nov 2011 15:36:20 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_854298 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_854298 Marie.94 When the Aurelian base was built into the basement, the ceiling, walls and doors were thoroughly sound proofed to avoid any suspicion that there might be something going on below. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 16:22:06 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_854750 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=42#forum_thread_comment_854750 Lokemele Not the last line I wrote, but the current last line of my book: "Will I be allowed to see my babies before I’m tossed into the wilderness to die?” (said ironically to a person who knows if she's exiled she'll be just fine) The actual last line I wrote, which comes earlier: “Oh, and they asked me if Aunt Ran had ever mentioned something called The Others.” Sat, 26 Nov 2011 16:27:23 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_854798 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_854798 ptanzey Let's go have some dinner. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 16:59:42 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855116 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855116 TheGreatCurve It was the proposed epitaph for the tombstone of the MC's sister: This Morning Glory always bloomed even in the darkest of days. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 17:03:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855158 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855158 TheGreatCurve *Whoops, should mention this is the end of the book. XD Sat, 26 Nov 2011 17:04:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855161 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855161 Spuggey “She’s not coming back! She’s dead! I know it!” ------------------- That's Jay shouting at his dad. He's 13 and his mother is missing... :( Sat, 26 Nov 2011 18:11:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855796 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855796 Spuggey That's a nice epitaph... Sat, 26 Nov 2011 18:12:09 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855803 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_855803 scains Snow slipped down her back sending shivers up her spine as she was lifted and hauled over a shoulder, the ground slipped away as they left the ground flying high into the sky, Emilie opened her mouth wide and tried to scream but nothing came out. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 18:42:38 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_856120 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_856120 meredithjunior I ran through the house that I had known, up until now, only in darkness and sweat and the lights of a party. Sat, 26 Nov 2011 22:09:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_858414 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_858414 Chillibean <em>It does not excuse mine [actions] either, but I have done nothing personal to you, whereas you have stripped me of everything I cared about.</em> Sun, 27 Nov 2011 00:43:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_859947 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_859947 J.E.Blackworth Lorenz was behind the entrance, scaring them. Embracing the silence he heard from inside the tent. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 20:11:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_869025 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_869025 Erosaf "I now present to you our new monarches, Queen Meira gem Silverleaf and Prince Consort Taeron Drannor Silverleaf." ~ and so ends my nano Sun, 27 Nov 2011 21:12:23 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_869665 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_869665 Eilorae We went back inside together, I was in my normal form fully embracing my new gift. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 22:36:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_870619 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_870619 Anjehla “Azural, I do not feel well, my love. It seems as though something is wrong. That the world is crying out and no one is listening to the sorrow filled song. Empaths everywhere will be tearful today. To feel this overwhelming sadness does not bode well for the human race. I fear what is next to come.” “My dearest Elisandra, if there is a tragedy of such proportions coming I promise I will be here with you to protect you and help you however I may. Your pain is my pain and I long to lift whatever pain I can from your shoulders and take it on to my own. To allow you to breathe easily and sleep peacefully tonight and tomorrow and every day after that until eternity comes to claim us both.” Random chatter between two of my more formal characters.. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 23:22:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_871158 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_871158 Marie.94 It’s easier to err on the side of safety. Sun, 27 Nov 2011 23:54:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_871508 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_871508 Lokemele The sentence that put me past 50,000 words: Ran dodged, rolled off the bed putting it between her attacker and herself, grabbed the water pitcher and flung the contents into his face, hit the guy’s hand holding the syringe with the pitcher and sending it flying before the door burst open and the man was tackled to the floor by a pair of soldiers, one of whom turned out to be Imoto. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 07:04:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_873651 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_873651 clynn07 “What now?” I asked softly. “What else?” he answered. “We’re going home.” There's one chapter left in my story...and I must admit this line brought a bit of a tear to my eye. It's so perfect for the situation my MC's currently in. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 09:25:20 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_874499 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_874499 Smackdreezy “And who the fuck is this?” The man's snarl was deep, almost animistic, Kid couldn't prevent the chill that crawled down his spine from the sound of it. (Scuse his language, bit of a potty mouth he is.) Mon, 28 Nov 2011 11:16:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_875369 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_875369 Dani Marchand But the question itches at the back of her mind: what does Aeren mean to the Council, and what will he ask of her? Mon, 28 Nov 2011 13:09:27 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_876375 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_876375 Shadowdancer The last lines of the actual novel: "Nine months after I awoke on the mountain I held my son in my arms for the first time. He has light blond hair and grey eyes and is the spitting image of Finsternis. I have named him Edirian Amaranth." And I love it. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 13:33:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_876639 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_876639 Marie.94 “No, Miss Thompson,” he replied dipping his head. Mon, 28 Nov 2011 22:32:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_883015 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_883015 Disco_The_Writer “Hey. If you’re listening up there, I just want to say: make it less of a cliché next time.” Mon, 28 Nov 2011 23:42:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_883799 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_883799 Forsaela “That is the best I can offer you,” Julius replied. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 00:09:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_884068 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=43#forum_thread_comment_884068 Bree-Valdaz "You're a horrible bodyguard." Tue, 29 Nov 2011 01:40:26 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_884656 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_884656 kateykins93 And so, with a nod, Alex broke the envelope’s seal. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 01:46:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_884693 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_884693 Gortos It's just the end line of part one because it's meant to be a novel of about 150,000 words divided in three parts (translated from German): Stepping out of the car, Alex realised the snow had begun to melt, more than the years before; a single flower, no more than a bud yet, had already broken through. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 02:28:35 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_884860 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_884860 J.E.Blackworth »I love you», she whispered against the dead, cold skin. »I love you...» Tue, 29 Nov 2011 12:18:39 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_888308 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_888308 Aurora Ottiliana Frihet susade omkring henne, frihet! Translated into English: Freedom sored around her. Freedom! And I think this will be the end of the novel. However, I already miss my character :-( Tue, 29 Nov 2011 12:28:16 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_888386 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_888386 annaspargoryan Dr McMillan looked over Dana’s charts, then at her patient, a mere shadow enveloped by white sheets. “Okay.” Tue, 29 Nov 2011 14:20:56 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_889474 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_889474 ms.mercy The kiss is chaste but sincere, and whether it demonstrates brotherly love, or something more, is entirely up in the air. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 16:16:28 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_890926 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_890926 Tune_ [quote=Short Story] "... I think we're done here." The man [breathed] said with an edge of annoyance, sighing [sighed] heavily as he rose from his seat and pressed a red button which was placed [on the edge of the desk] on the underside of the desk. It's {was} {is} a signal to the guards on the outside that their session's {was} {is} ||&lt;--- Hey, genius. How's about you stop being lazy and figure it out, hmmm?|| over, and just like it's supposed to do, it alerted the guards {via walkie-talkie}. They came rushing in to undo the Jokers restraints and drag him back to his maximum security cell [as safely] as quickly, safely and effectively as possible to avoid any mishaps from happening. Of course, the scarred man struggled {with all his might} and [gave the men such a hard time] threw the equivalent of a tantrum all the while. It took the guards a few good minutes to get a proper hold on the madman to finally drag him off to his cell [and out of the room].[/quote] ... And that, my good sir, is how mostly everything I've written this month looks like. :D Tue, 29 Nov 2011 17:49:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_892075 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_892075 clynn07 “You know, I might be a natural at this whole dancing thing after all.” The ending of my novel is quite bittersweet actually...not that the last line would suggest that. :) Tue, 29 Nov 2011 19:40:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_893356 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_893356 Sabulum Then he hits Carlsen with the shovel. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 21:44:02 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_894904 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_894904 iamchloehughes "Unless there’s a defect or a mutation in the other gene, angel gets trampled each time.” This makes roughly no sense taken out of context... Tue, 29 Nov 2011 21:58:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_895092 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_895092 Marie.94 So I guess probably our first move should be to find somewhere a good distance from here that is safe and figure out what we are doing next. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 21:59:08 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_895106 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_895106 Sandler The last line of my novel is, "Angelo bowed his head and, for the second time in his life, allowed tears to roll down his face." Tue, 29 Nov 2011 22:00:29 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_895120 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_895120 Cookiebee "Sweet dreams, and goodnight to the only night that they had ever known." Well, that looks weird out of context. :P Tue, 29 Nov 2011 23:16:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_896113 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_896113 Tsukasa "Aren screamed." Yeah. I like it. Considering where he is. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 23:37:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_896384 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_896384 Ms_Mouse "His blood still boiled at this utter betrayal." Damn cat. Tue, 29 Nov 2011 23:56:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_896617 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_896617 Pagadan Nancy sat down on the porch steps and couldn’t stop laughing. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 00:51:04 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_897148 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_897148 Dani Marchand (Still not the end, but getting closer) As Pietro sits there rubbing a lump on his head, Io offhandedly says, “I think I may have even developed my magical skills to the point where I could move your skin in one piece to another location entirely.” Wed, 30 Nov 2011 02:30:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_897730 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_897730 crazy.chocoholic.monkey.girl And then the entire building went up in flames. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 07:53:30 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_899397 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_899397 Spuggey "The screwdriver had gone straight through his hand, in the centre and the wound was visible on the other side, in the middle of his palm." Zero doesn't like being told 'no'. He gets stabby. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 08:04:09 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_899477 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=44#forum_thread_comment_899477 Coffeetailor "With the condition of so many elderly ladies, I suspect they will buy it.” My MC just murdered her sixth husband (sixth that she's married, not that she's murdered) and a kind stranger (future MMC and love interest) is helping figure out her alibi. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 08:17:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_899564 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_899564 bloodonmytypewriterkeys Darkness filled my vision, and there was no more pain. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 08:23:03 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_899604 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_899604 J.E.Blackworth The End. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 12:34:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_902145 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_902145 Professor Plothole "LUCIFER LAWLESS WILL RETURN. WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT." Wed, 30 Nov 2011 14:28:37 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_903551 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_903551 Selanfene "And then it moves on." It's the last line in the novel. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 16:12:15 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_905156 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_905156 Erosaf my final line in my nano and the actual novel is: Turning to face all the assembled elves that were looking on happily, she moved away from the new king and queen, so she was not blocking either from view and said, in a loud and clear ringing voice, "I now present to you our new monarches, Queen Meira Gem Silverleaf and Prince Consort Taeron Drannor Silverleaf." Wed, 30 Nov 2011 16:24:33 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_905337 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_905337 Arlette Last line of my novel: "I'm going to overthrow the government. Want to help?" Obviously I'm planning a sequel for next year. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 16:51:59 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_905826 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_905826 Lightfall My last line, not the last line in the novel, but the last one I wrote: Sparks smiled and slid into her chair. Spinning around, she faced the rest of the crew. “Fletcher, what’s our status?” Her line there is sort of a recurring thing, so it made me smile. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 17:09:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_906125 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_906125 Lightfall Last line of the actual novel: She looked up at him, and smiled. “I’ve got you, I’ve got my rustbucket, it’s all gonna be fine.” Wed, 30 Nov 2011 17:10:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_906143 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_906143 thegrouch314 They have a 'self destruct the entire race' button up their nostril. Wed, 30 Nov 2011 17:36:07 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_906557 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_906557 Marie.94 It would not take long for security to mark them as being suspicious. (No, this is not the last line of my novel. November may be over, but my story isn't.) Wed, 30 Nov 2011 23:53:34 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_912082 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_912082 tajavioletta "Man, would I have the courage to make that happen?" Thu, 01 Dec 2011 02:25:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_913269 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_913269 Forsaela And that was it. ((Final sentence of Draft One of my novel... because I was utterly exhausted and emotional and had a headache by the time I finished. I kind of like it, though, in context. &gt;v&lt; )) Thu, 01 Dec 2011 09:01:51 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_914791 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_914791 Writing_Ninja Yesterday, the last words I wrote: "Of course, I will never ever stop writing." Thu, 01 Dec 2011 11:56:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_916048 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_916048 ninja_monkey Oh, and I am sorry I may kill you and leave your poor little frail wife to suffer without you and leave a vengeful son to take your place who will soon kill Cassius; I am so very sorry you loveable little scamp with love and great pain I bid you adieu or something like that I did not take French. Thu, 01 Dec 2011 21:18:18 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_920090 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_920090 fuzz [quote]It was too late now. [/quote] Well, that's suitably ominous. Tue, 13 Dec 2011 04:33:58 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_968812 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_968812 okaysparky So, I hit 50k 17 minutes before November ended. The very last line I wrote, before checking my word count and realising that yes, finally, I had hit 50k? "Oh, thank God, it's over." I didn't even realise until I opened it up yesterday to start working on it again. What a massively appropriately line to end NaNo on! Tue, 13 Dec 2011 10:16:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_969237 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_969237 everqueen In the bed, the boy sleeps on. Wed, 14 Dec 2011 15:12:25 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_972983 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_972983 mycatduncan Even though some of the kids are droopy-eyed and yawning, a deaf person couldn’t get any sleep with that driver sawing logs. ^^ I like it. ^_^ Things I like about this gruff carriage-driver just keep popping up, and he's been in the story what? Eight pages? Thu, 15 Dec 2011 14:18:44 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_975558 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_975558 Julia VV And what a strange world it is when a girl can walk in the middle of the street at high noon and cast no shadow; a strange world indeed. Thu, 15 Dec 2011 16:30:33 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_975876 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_975876 Apiecalypse “Why are you being so nice to me?” She asked. Fri, 16 Dec 2011 18:54:42 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_978515 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=45#forum_thread_comment_978515 Kenouni Renashin But she was a bit shy about showing off her drawings sometimes; at that moment was one of those times. That was the last line I wrote yesterday. Yay for word padding by putting in massively long ponderings and/or monologues! Bleh. ~Ken-Ren. Tue, 20 Dec 2011 04:55:43 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_986969 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_986969 Spuggey "It made him think, momentarily, of the military guards and even Alice Knox... the people who had been his puppets." Xavi's feeling guilty about his zombies. Tue, 20 Dec 2011 07:21:19 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_987084 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_987084 mycatduncan “Hey,” Karol murmurs, nudging me gently with his elbow. “Don’t let them make you feel like that. They’re the ones wearing tights.” Dude, Karol, I love you. ^_^ Why couldn't you be my MC? Clarisse is so serious and boring. Mon, 02 Jan 2012 09:16:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1021188 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1021188 jboy I didn't respond, my distractions claiming the entierty of my focus Tue, 03 Jan 2012 20:07:12 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1027551 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1027551 Hellsmedic Today mine was: " I hit his arm with the back of my hand. “ Grab your damned guitar and lets go.” " Mon, 13 Feb 2012 22:21:50 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1138078 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1138078 zepnut1 And she clenched the beret to her face, the tears rolling down her cheeks to soak slowly into the piece of sandy beige compressed wool that had once meant so much to him. (Also happens to be the last line of the novel!) Thu, 16 Feb 2012 04:05:31 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1143623 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1143623 kittymammas I just wrote the last sentence of my alternate ending. She always knew she wanted the crown, she just never would of guessed it to be this one. Fri, 17 Feb 2012 17:15:36 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1147819 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1147819 Cedar Great, she supposed, really had very little to do with “good”. After all, Vesuchi himself was arguably the greatest sorcerer of all time, and he was about as good as a rotten egg salad sandwich, though he probably smelled better. Sat, 03 Mar 2012 13:47:41 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1186969 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1186969 ZackKaufen [quote=Kenouni Renashin] at that moment was one of those times. [/quote] This doesn't make sense to me. I think you want either "that moment was one of those times." or "at that moment it was one of those times." Tue, 06 Mar 2012 02:06:40 -0600 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1193472 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1193472 YourDestiny He ignored me and turned his head away, his wolf ears flicking against the breeze. Wed, 25 Apr 2012 15:22:08 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1319547 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1319547 Keslie Neill-Writer " ...You three kids need to get out of here now before the flute wears off and Ivan becomes a monster once again.” Note: this is the very last line of like a paragraph worth of dialogue. Mon, 07 May 2012 20:15:31 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1351445 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1351445 murphyslawyer Emily had walked away, disappearing unnoticed. -- And at a tense part of the book, too. Come on now, Emily. Wed, 09 May 2012 13:29:22 -0500 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1356117 http://www.nanowrimo.org/en/forums/this-is-going-better-than-i-d-hoped/threads/18727?page=46#forum_thread_comment_1356117