Space Denizens and Conspiracies.I started with one plot bunny then I thought I had three but when I went to disentangle the conspiracy plots I realized it was like a hydra headed bunny forever I tried to knock off I ended up with more. So there's space travel, big corporations fighting among themselves, evil paramilitary group, and a crew with one too many stowaways. There was shooting in the first chapter, moral ambiguity on behalf of a lot my side characters, and now there's a race to the macguffin which I don't know what'll be yet.
Agg, five days left, shoves hydra conspiracy bunny into box, finds it has eaten holes in my outline. Agg!
Improve from here on then.
"There are big rocks and there are little rocks. Important rocks and not so important rocks. We are sitting the most unlikely to be important rock in the entire galaxy but you know what? We're about to become pretty friggin' important."
"How's that?" asked a very small, very sleepy boy at his feet.
"We're sitting a rock in between the two most important rocks. Know what that makes us?"
Boy shook his head.
"Middlemen." Said Uncle William. "Middlemen."