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lonelyahava
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Nov 13, 2007 - 02 48

Hey! Who has excerpts that I can read? C'mon! Let me know who has things for me to read!

I have an excerpt! Two actually. Please, read. Please! And then send me NanoMail with comments, compliments, criticism, etc.

Or you don't have to, just read the excerpts and enjoy them.

Or don't.

I'm so tired!!!!!!

This was beyond the craziest thing I've ever done.

i'm going to pass out now and stop rambling.

G'night/morning y'all

--Ahava
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Something big is happening in Ahlterra.
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2006: Medari (winner)
2007: Kyrin, The Piite
complete texts of the above can be found on my website, 18+, please.

Awesome.Like.That
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Nov 13, 2007 - 03 15

Just because you mentioned it, I decided to add one. xD

Meister
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Nov 13, 2007 - 03 44

There's an excerpt on my profile. It's not much, and probably needs editing like the rest of the NaNo project, but gives an idea of what I'm writing...
You're welcome to read it if you want. ;)

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Nov 13, 2007 - 04 16

I've got an excerpt up on my profile, too. I'd love to hear what people think of it!

Maemi
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Nov 13, 2007 - 08 12

I've got a short excerpt up on my profile.

D.J.K.
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Nov 13, 2007 - 10 42

Good Day! Read your excerpt... I easily pictured the entire scene of the Fires, and the interaction with Kyrin and Rihana, your writing was succinct and flowing... But you lost me on the second excerpt... so many names, and without knowing the backstory of setting and characters, I was stymied...

But that first excerpt, two thumbs up!

DJ

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Nov 14, 2007 - 00 27

Thanks y'alls!! I appreciate it! and I'm going to go read the other excerpts now too.

But hey, just to keep ya updated, if the excerpts intrigued you, I've thrown the full writing that i've done so far up on my website. Feel free to go read. But please, please, PLEASE, be forewarned that the content that wasn't in the excerpts can tend to be for ADULTS ONLY! It's not Young Adult At All.

Also, the story from last year is also up there.

Just in case anybody was interested. Thought I'd plug myself

--Ahava

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Nov 14, 2007 - 19 31

I got a little one at my profile. I switch it every few days.

Maemi
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Nov 16, 2007 - 19 30

I just posted a new excerpt in my profile for anyone that wants to see it!

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Nov 17, 2007 - 01 15

I have one up as well.

I just broke 12k, stupid real world.

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Dec 1, 2007 - 11 35

I never had time to go back and edit anything while I was writing - Editing is for december, isn't it? ;) So just at the buzzer I picked out a spot, proofread it (and still managed to miss at least one typo), and stuck it in my profile. Enjoy :)

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