Opening lines competition!

sarahcoldheart
Opening lines competition!
Winner!
50,051 / 50,000
Municipal Liaison
Joined: Oct 7, 2004
Location: Singapore
Posts: 103
Posted on:
Nov 25, 2007 - 18 04

Place your opening lines here for the competition. Deadline, Friday morning. Winners must be at TGIO to collect prizes though!

DEADLINE OVER! You can put more entries for fun but they won't be counted now.
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ML for Singapore

rozenGlowing Halo
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50,010 / 50,000
Municipal Liaison
Joined: Nov 9, 2002
Location: Singapore
Posts: 196
Posted on:
Nov 25, 2007 - 21 14

Just posting this even though I can't win as a judge and all that, but so that someone is first and not shy -- not that many of you are.

"It was Hallowe'en."

nerwenfaelvirinGlowing Halo
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51,001 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 7, 2005
Location: Singapore
Posts: 64
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 00 05

Here's mine:

"Sally Finnigan was happy."

Ziyang
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50,751 / 50,000
Joined: Nov 24, 2005
Location: Singapore (London now)
Posts: 20
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 00 52

Mine was

"One by one, before my eyes, they fell before me."

axilet
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50,049 / 50,000
Joined: Nov 20, 2006
Location: Singapore
Posts: 74
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 01 36

"It was a cold, dreary night, and the seemingly eternal fall of rain turned the view outside the stained glass gray and blurred."

ProtoKnightblazer
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50,613 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 31, 2007
Location: The Knightblazer Hideout, Singapore
Posts: 16
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 02 13

"The sun rose, casting its bright orange glow upon the mirrored rooftops of Eden."

Old and cliche, I know. =/

Sentrovasi
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50,270 / 50,000
Joined: Nov 9, 2006
Location: Lee Kingdom
Posts: 37
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 02 37

This is a competition where thinking isn't required, thank goodness =3

The gleam of a steel knife in the darkness confirmed her suspicions.

That's it.

a_x
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50,921 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 13, 2005
Location: Singapore
Posts: 13
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 03 55

Okay, here it is:

"Say, if you're an ordinary person living in a world full--and i mean it, FULL--of extraordinary people...won't that make you...extraordinary?", slurred the stranger as he eyed me solemnly and the bottle of whiskey in front of me hungrily.

mezzogal
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60,660 / 50,000
Joined: Nov 9, 2007
Location: Singapore
Posts: 26
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 05 18

Here's mine:

Carrie stared at the email on her screen.

Raven Silvers
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60,136 / 50,000
Joined: Nov 1, 2005
Location: Singapore, Singapore
Posts: 48
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 06 26

My own:

"The barrel of a gun, Jim Terns reflected, was actually very… round."

Mel73
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50,049 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 30, 2005
Location: Singapore
Posts: 10
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 07 18

Mine read:

With blood dripping at the edge of her wicked looking blade, Miranda stared coldly at the dead body lying in front of her.

AccidentalPresidency
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52,265 / 50,000
Joined: Nov 3, 2006
Location: Singapore, Tampines
Posts: 30
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 15 18

My contribution:

"Today was not going to be a good day."

Lily_GypsyGlowing Halo
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53,677 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 6, 2007
Location: Singapore (in all its sweltering glory)
Posts: 53
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 16 55

Mine

She stared down at the chaotic waves trying to smash themselves against jagged rocks, sudsy and foamy, roiling and struggling against an invisible yet enormous force pushing down from above the ocean.

bruise_d
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52,185 / 50,000
Joined: Nov 1, 2006
Location: Singapore
Posts: 23
Posted on:
Nov 26, 2007 - 19 08

What the heck. This is mine:

Agent 1361 at your service. As I write this, I await execution, because penning down or creating any evidence that the organization exists is tantamount to crime

benjaminong
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50,038 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 13, 2007
Location: Singapore
Posts: 9
Posted on:
Nov 27, 2007 - 06 09

Here's mine: Yesterday dear Joel nearly died, twice.

Now to get on and finish the damn thing.

dkellis
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56,285 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 3, 2003
Location: Singapore
Posts: 43
Posted on:
Nov 27, 2007 - 11 52

There is a sort of subtle and yet rather distinct difference between superheroes and their sidekicks.

alluminated scrolls
Winner!
50,228 / 50,000
Joined: Oct 17, 2007
Location: Earth Mark Two
Posts: 95
Posted on:
Nov 30, 2007 - 01 29

"In the beginning, apparently, the Universe was created; however, we are not concerned with this minor occurrence and turn our attention towards other semi-interesting plot details."

Opening line for you. ;)

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