Okay, the end of your story... or at least if you're still writing by 30th, just the near ending lines then, DEADLINE Friday NOON. Winner needs to be at TGIO to collect the priiiiiiize.
DEADLINE CLOSED. You can still just enter for fun if you want to though.
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ML for Singapore




50,011 / 50,000
Nov 25, 2007 - 21 13
Okay, I can't win this one either, but here's mine:
"Hallowe'en was finally over."
50,751 / 50,000
Nov 26, 2007 - 00 51
Mine was
"And their mice started clicking again."
50,049 / 50,000
Nov 26, 2007 - 01 43
"It is time for the next cast."
50,613 / 50,000
Nov 26, 2007 - 02 16
"What the feline didn't know was that his own journey had only just begun..."
More clicheness!
61,429 / 50,000
Nov 26, 2007 - 05 27
...her dark green eyes closing lazily but her ears pricked up to listen in any interesting conversation.
51,001 / 50,000
Nov 26, 2007 - 14 35
"To say that I was happy would be and understatement."
52,185 / 50,000
Nov 26, 2007 - 19 11
This is mine:
His mass was diminishing, and so was everything else – he only had one chance -
He pushed the reset button.
56,285 / 50,000
Nov 27, 2007 - 11 54
"And still you continue on, for your truth, justice, and courage... why?"
I gave her a jaunty salute, before I closed the hatch behind me.
"I'm a superhero," I said. "It's what I do."
50,228 / 50,000
Nov 27, 2007 - 20 23
The closing curtain of the epilogue was done, thought the dragon, and here he was still stuck in "that darned reptilian social welfare project" which wouldn't have occurred in the first place had he gotten himself a proper lawyer like "normal" fifty feet flying lizards who have nothing better to do with their time than breathe fire at passing knights.
51,317 / 50,000
Nov 28, 2007 - 04 38
"So my sister's never going to come back, I suppose," said Lana, with an honest sad sigh in her voice.
"Yes," said Vitaliy, hugging her, "But you can't say she never tried."
60,136 / 50,000
Nov 28, 2007 - 16 01
"The End"? Haha! That's the best ending line I can think of, lol.
No, but seriously, here's mine:
"The Porsche sped off into the sunset."
50,921 / 50,000
Nov 29, 2007 - 22 13
The stranger stepped into the darkness leaving me with an empty bottle of whisky, unpaid bill, and an annoying sense of wonder, that gave me a headache, of how much of truth his story was.