As you've probably gathered, this forum is for those nitpicky questions that hang up your plot, that sort of thing. If you would like direct critique and feedback on your actual writing, let me invite you to check out our Critiques, Feedback and Novel Swaps forum! You can post excerpts, request readers for your entire novel, and get that in-depth work you've been looking for.
Critique requests placed in this forum will be moved to the critiques forum. :)
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Heather
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