Ok, so I have ideas as to how i should introduce my MMC and FMC to each other, but i dunno. The ideas i have seem pretty lame. Any suggestions???
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May 9, 2008 - 14 55 |
Ok, so I have ideas as to how i should introduce my MMC and FMC to each other, but i dunno. The ideas i have seem pretty lame. Any suggestions??? |
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May 9, 2008 - 15 49
Maybe you could tell us what idea(s ) you already had in mind and we could go from there?
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May 11, 2008 - 05 42
well, my idea is to just have them meet unconditionally. The FMC is pretty much servant to this jerk, and they attend this banquet. The MMC sees her at the banquet which he is hosting and already knows who she is (there's a secret about her identity and with one look he recognizes who she really is). He tries to talk to her but she pushes him away for her Master has warned her not to speak to anyone, especially not the Prince (MMC). When her Master finds out that she spoke to him, he punishes her, the prince sees this and stops it, then she wakes up (after being beaten unconscious) to the prince who then offers her an ultimatum to get her away from her Master.
I haven't exactly written the scene out yet because i don't know how to start it. Heck, i don't even think it'll make much sense if I write it out. I dunno if it'll work if the FMC and MMC have a sort of 'forbidden' meeting, or if i should try another approach???
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May 11, 2008 - 19 26
Actually, the forbidden stuff is pretty popular. Something about not doing what you're supposed to. It also depends on how romantic you actually want to make this. I would rate this at medium-medium high, but I think it would work.
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May 12, 2008 - 13 22
Well, the first meeting probably won't be all that romantic. I mean, they just met. This isn't one of those 'love at first sight' novels. It'll take a while. Besides, she is wary of him to begin with, then she hates him, and distrusts him, but eventually they find common ground. But what other ways could i introduce the two???
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Jun 25, 2008 - 07 57
You could introduce the two by having everything become chaotic and them hiding in the same or something....or...you could introduce them through something like, and i know this is a cliche, but he is her 'prince charming' who rescues her but then can't find her and looks for her and then he sees her at the banquet...i don't know, just some ideas.