Need a critique

Cooper3	Need a critique
50,145 / 50,000 Municipal Liaison Joined: Oct 13, 2007 Location: Big Bear Lake, CA Posts: 100 Posted on: Oct 11, 2009 - 18 22	I just finished editing the first sox chapters of last years Nano and now gathering note from friends of mine. Anybody care to read them for me? I need some fresh eyes on my WIP. It's rated mature. Care to help an aspiring novelist? ----------
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Dannigrrl	RE: Need a critique
51,933 / 50,000 Official Participant Joined: Aug 16, 2009 Location: So Cal Posts: 91 Posted on: Oct 11, 2009 - 20 02	How many words/pages is it? Are you wanting a line-by-line critique? proof-reading? or opinion on over-all feel? I would be willing to read it and offer up suggestions for you. I'm part of a critique group right now, so I've got some practice. : ) ---------- As imagination bodies forth the forms of things unknown, the poet's pen turns them to shapes and gives airy nothing a local habitation and a name. - A Mid-Summer Night's Dream
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Cooper3	RE: Need a critique
50,145 / 50,000 Municipal Liaison Joined: Oct 13, 2007 Location: Big Bear Lake, CA Posts: 100 Posted on: Oct 11, 2009 - 20 41	It's roughly over 30k words and I think I want to know if it feels right to the reader. I have someone else helping me with the grammar and stuff, but if you find anything grammar wise, go right ahead. It is on a protected and secure website I made so NanoMail me when you want the login information. Thanks. ----------
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lisalogan	RE: Need a critique
59,000 / 50,000 Official Participant Joined: Oct 4, 2006 Location: SoCal Posts: 22 Posted on: Oct 21, 2009 - 01 44	Hey Cooper ::waving::...it's me, Lisa from Stell's last year. I'm an acquisitions editor for a publisher, so if you want some eyeballs from someone who reads submissions for a living (on the side), I'm your gal. Drop me a PM. ---------- Lisa Writing in My Wildest Dreams at http://lisalogan.net
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