This might make more sense if you were at Biblocafe yesterday but I thought I'd share a section that has just found it's way into my NaNo.
"Upstairs was a magical place. Elsie and I, despite dad's warnings kept sneaking back up to have 'just one more' look. Up there, taking up every available seat and stool were grown-ups. Each grown-up sat in silence typing away on their laptop. Elsie and I had no idea what they where doing but to us it seemed enchanting. Down below we could hear the chatter of our parents, the clattering of the café owner serving coffee and some soft background music. Upstairs, while we could still hear all those noises, they seemed to be drowned out by the clacking of keys, soft rustles as someone moved and the occasional cough from a lady in the corner who had a cold. Dad and mum were taking it in turns to drag us away from our spot at the top of the stairs. But always the lure of it would call to us and we would creep back up those stairs to watch the adults. Once, Elsie dared me to go and take a book from one of the shelves up there. I slowly entered that hallowed place and had the book, picked at random, in my hands when dad shouted. I guess he and mum had grown tired of chasing us down from there. We left shortly after and never did find out what those mysterious grown-ups where doing in that strange little room upstairs."
It's not very good but the best I could come up with at the time.
I wonder just what those girls thought we were doing.
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wonderful. thank you.
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And because it raised much hilarity at the time, and possibly because I'm procrastinating from studying, here is the bit I wrote about scones.
While the upmost off care has been taken while producing this post, please forgive any pselling/grammer errors that our correctionsystem may has missted.