Unusual inspiration

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Unusual inspiration

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Nov 2, 2009 - 08 14

This might make more sense if you were at Biblocafe yesterday but I thought I'd share a section that has just found it's way into my NaNo.

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We were writing short stories in English class today based on a study group being interrupted from a unique point of view. I guess given that this is my journal, I can write my story here too.

"Upstairs was a magical place. Elsie and I, despite dad's warnings kept sneaking back up to have 'just one more' look. Up there, taking up every available seat and stool were grown-ups. Each grown-up sat in silence typing away on their laptop. Elsie and I had no idea what they where doing but to us it seemed enchanting. Down below we could hear the chatter of our parents, the clattering of the café owner serving coffee and some soft background music. Upstairs, while we could still hear all those noises, they seemed to be drowned out by the clacking of keys, soft rustles as someone moved and the occasional cough from a lady in the corner who had a cold. Dad and mum were taking it in turns to drag us away from our spot at the top of the stairs. But always the lure of it would call to us and we would creep back up those stairs to watch the adults. Once, Elsie dared me to go and take a book from one of the shelves up there. I slowly entered that hallowed place and had the book, picked at random, in my hands when dad shouted. I guess he and mum had grown tired of chasing us down from there. We left shortly after and never did find out what those mysterious grown-ups where doing in that strange little room upstairs."

It's not very good but the best I could come up with at the time.

I wonder just what those girls thought we were doing.
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Nov 2, 2009 - 10 14

wonderful. thank you.

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Nov 4, 2009 - 07 48

And because it raised much hilarity at the time, and possibly because I'm procrastinating from studying, here is the bit I wrote about scones.

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Dad explained how the Garden of Eden was God's best work on earth. However, after Adam and Eve committed the Original Sin, humans were thrown out of the Garden. Since we can no longer go back there and Heaven wont be reached until we die, as imperfect humans we attempt to recreate our own Gardens. These are little areas of tranquility, as perfect as we can get them, where everyone works in harmony and nobody argues or fights. He compared the many fruit trees, plants and animals God provided for food in the Garden to Aunt Bobbi's coffee tent and the cakes the Women's Guild provided. I wasn't sure how scones, even really good scones, even really good scones served with a spread of finest churned butter and a generous dollop of Mrs Smith's best vintage jam, compared to the original food God provided in the Garden. I suppose God did provide the Women's Guild with their baking skills and Mrs Smith's best vintage jam is made from home grown strawberries. So it really does make some sort of sense. I wonder if God planned scones all along...

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