"The Beauty of a Grid" - Alexander Deluca (Delucaa)

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"The Beauty of a Grid" - Alexander Deluca (Delucaa)

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I designed this cover so that it would agitate – and give evidence of – the main character.

"When he inherits a locked box that has no key from an unknown relative, an adopted young man must travel across the country in search for his real parents in hopes that they will provide the answers about not only the box, but his childhood of which he has no memory. While battling his obsessive compulsive disorder along the way, he encounters characters from all walks of life and gets a glimpse of the real America in this poignant tale of adventure, redemption, and self discovery.


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Wonderful job. :)

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It looks great! I love how symmetric everything looks.
Great job. (:

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The simple cover and title make you want to pick it up and wonder what it's all about. Nice job.

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Nov 3, 2009 - 15 03

That is stunning! I like how cheeky you are to make a cover like that for someone with OCD. I don't even have OCD but I'm twitching at the different boxes :P Great job!

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Great job, once again! I like how this one really get this point across. All it takes is one look at the cover to think "Someone's got OCD."

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Another great job! I love the magnet-looking lettering :)

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This is my favourite cover so far. Nice work fwis :)

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Thank you so much Chris, you have no idea how great it feels to see this!

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spectacular!

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spectacular!

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I Love it! It's great! It really makes me want to read it. It sort of reminds me of Paper Towns by John Green... I don't know why.

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I Love it! It's great! It really makes me want to read it. It sort of reminds me of Paper Towns by John Green... I don't know why.

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Nice subtleties...the D makes me antsy. A deserving story, congrats Alexander!

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love it(:

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Yes, that would agitate!

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i very much like it.

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Nov 3, 2009 - 18 51

Another excellent cover, it makes me want to pick up the book and the awsome summary is bonus. Congrads deluca.

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Every cover just keeps getting better and better! Just incredible!

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Nice to see you're keeping up with a cover a day! Interesting cover for an interesting story. Good luck to you both!

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Nov 3, 2009 - 19 34

The only thing I can find fault with here is that the cut letters should be more symmetrically rigid to the grid, the sloping cut and uneveness of the letters is nice but detract a bit from the grid and two different fonts in the headers is a little bit jarring.. though on second reflection funnily enough I think the Grid word is perfect as its cut evenly along the top and aligned that way so the different widths don't matter so much, perhaps because the letters are wider and theres more a sense of square and rectangles...

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Wow. This one is fabulous.

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"But I don’t want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?’" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here."

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Love the way this cover is set up. :) Nice work!

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I adore this cover! The story sounds really good too!

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I like this. I like this a lot. Though I am failing to place exactly /what/ it is I love about this over, I think it is just the quirkiness of it. This is rocking! Good going~

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I like this cover, and I enjoy the concept of your story even more. :)

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I love this cover. I would pick up this book just from the cover. And the story description is so interesting to me.

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Nov 4, 2009 - 00 04

I like how well the cover works with the description. It's very ordered, and the fact that the author's name is broken to keep the order is clever.

I don't think I'd pick the book up, myself. But I've always been artsy-fartsy and liked cover art that pops out at you. >.< Yes, yes, "a book by it's cover" and all that. x3 I can't help it.

Still, great work!

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This is fantastic, I don't know how you find time to do a cover every day. I've neglected almost a full week's worth of homework just trying to keep above the 1667 words a day mark! (I'm sorry, I don't have the will power to resist the delete button!)

I think that everyone should set themselves challenges, it's not only fun and exciting, but it also develops their skills and (for these particular types of challenges) the ability to work to deadlines.

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that's pretty awesome ... I love the symmetry and how that in turn relates to the MC.

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MCR_dynamite wrote:
This is fantastic, I don't know how you find time to do a cover every day. I've neglected almost a full week's worth of homework just trying to keep above the 1667 words a day mark! (I'm sorry, I don't have the will power to resist the delete button!)

Don't delete! Replace, replace, replace! that should be your mantra! LOL

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