| Dreygan | YAY 4 GRAMER!! |
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So i was reading the last couple paragraphs to get back in the flow of my story and came across this gem: "Otherwise they are going to get more crushed and starting put more pressure on your body." You guys finding some quality bits like this? |
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Nov 4, 2009 - 23 58
I notice that I've been using more adverbs than usual. Example:
“Will you be saying something at the meeting?” asked one of the members anxiously.
Blech.
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Nov 5, 2009 - 11 32
Oh man, I'm glad I'm not the only one. I'm not about to go back and read my previous paragraphs for fear of being Savaged *cough* by my inner editor but I do recall a little gem that made me cackle like a madwoman.
It was something along the lines of:
"Is it me what caused the problem?"
*Facepalm*
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Nov 11, 2009 - 13 53
Here is one of those sentences that can only exist in Nano:
I wanted to take a nap, to awaken and not know all that I now knew.
----------Dana
http://danabooks.8k.com
Nano 2009: After The Great Devastation
Nano 2008: The Red Cloak
Nano 2007: Nightmares of Murder
NaNo 2006: No One Like You
NaNo 2005: Existing
NaNo 2004: All These Things
NaNo 2003: Kissing a Dead Man