At the Kick Off Party we created a communal character, Mr. Q, but because your mostly trusty ML is a scatter-brain who routinely leaves the house with her shirt on inside out* he languished in my backseat until someone (thanks Jerry!) reminded me about him.**
Mr. Q wants to be in your novel and the participants at the Kick Off gave him some lovely traits to help you get a better idea of what kind of fellow he is.
- His name starts with a Q. (first or last.)
- He has an afro.
- He has a tattoo.
- He wears thigh high boots.
- He speaks with a British accent.
- He is an unconvicted felon.
- He has a perpetual grin.
- He has blue eyes.
- He has won the lottery - but lost his ticket so he doesn't even know.
- He has a pet monkey.
- Red M&Ms ONLY. (That's all that was written - interpret it how you like.)
- He has a belt.
If you include Mr. Q in your novel you should definitely post an excerpt (just keep it clean, please, we're an all-ages forum.)
Have fun and happy writing!
* Not true. It's what we fancy writers call "exaggeration for comedic effect." The true scatterbrain stories are too embarrassing to tell.
** Seriously guys, if I ever say I'm going to do something and I don't, it's not because I don't love you, it's because I have a memory like a sieve and the prioritizing skills of a ... I dunno... some thing that doesn't prioritize well. I'll come up with something later. It's what we fancy writers do.
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Nov 7, 2009 - 10 53
My passage with Mr. Q is below.
Joe turned to see Quincy pulling through the staff door. His mushroom top hair lead the way for his body of interminable ancestry. Joe best guess was middle eastern, but it had always seemed wrong with that full English tilt following every word. "Wait up Joe. I need to ask you something." came Quincy's oddly paired British accent. Quincy had a hobbled gait from the thigh high orthopedics and crutches he always wore. As if that weren't enough his blue eyes denied any doubt of at least one European ancestor.
"Quincy, I'm going outside for a bit. You want to walk and talk?" Joe started moving towards the door not waiting for a reply.
"Sure thing buddy." Quincy vaulted across the floor in a surprisingly short amount of time. Joe held the door for him as they hit the cool air whipping outside the factory.
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Nov 7, 2009 - 18 14
Why, Quincy is a brilliantly British name. I like it. The crutches is a good excuse for the boots, too. Well played, sir!*
*if you're a ma'm, don't be offended. It's a phrase my cousin said all the time and I picked it up.
I am very delighted at the reappearance of a communal character, btw. There is no doubt Mr. Q will have a debut in my novel. Whee! Perhaps he is an assassin... hmmmm... that would explain the tattoo, and the felony charges, but I'm pretty lost on the thigh-high boots and the pet monkey.
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Nov 8, 2009 - 15 13
This is my Mr. Q excerpt :D It's not amazing but I still like it :D
"'allo pre'y lady... 'm Quinn, I am." His British accent grated on her nerves and she shivered a little.
"Nice to meet you. What's that tattoo on your arm?" She had to be nice. She did. That was the mantra in her head. If she wasn't nice, they could report her to the manager... Scrunching up her nose a little, she could almost smell the rotten horse poop here in the middle of the store.
"'e's Scar from Lion King..." The accent wasn't quite as bad now but it was still strange to hear it in the middle of the countryside of Missouri. "''s when 'e has Simba hangin' over the fire, it is." He pushed up his sleeve so everyone could get a better look.
"How... nice. Em, I'm going to go work in frozen today until we need to open another register." Her supervisor nodded and Nikki took off like a bat outta hell. Poor Emilie... she was going to be stuck that weird Quinn guy all day.
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Nov 9, 2009 - 11 05
Mr Q was kind enough to drop by my story last night. He was most helpful in giving one of my characters a reason to put out information that I had no idea how to work in.
It was pretty fun working all the requisites into one character, and I think I got them all.
-I apologize for the length and horrible-ness of the writing:
The familiar clerk behind the counter gave her a smile upon recognition, “Ah, Miss Mig,” he greeted her.
“Mr Q, we meet again,” she nodded.
“And what, may I ask, are you about?” his sharp blue eyes already reading her every intent.
Mig scrunched up her right eye and stared him down –it was her polite way of saying, ‘None of your business.’ Usually she let him get away with his incessant curiosity, something about that accent seemed so proper, so professional… and that disarming smile… but tonight she was planning on tearing down some walls. Well, at the very least, poking some holes in them –and it wasn’t the sort of thing you shared with your friendly, neighborhood gas station attendant.
He was keeping his penetrating gaze on her though, and least it wear her down she shrugged,
“I aim to misbehave…” she smirked and hoped it was enough.
His grin tightened imperceptibly, he said, “I was not referring to your current intentions,” He indicated the calendar hanging next to the, ‘Born before or on this date,’ sign.
“Merely that this day is generally reserved for spending time with family.”
“Oh, that,” she waved it off, “my family doesn’t really celebrate Christian holidays so much,” leaning closer, conspiratorially, she whispered, “they haven’t been the nicest folks to us, and we hold grudges forever…”
Mr Q raised his eyebrows at this, “An opportunity to spend time with your family, no matter the reason, should not be missed.”
“Dad’s back in Nebraska, and he wasn’t exactly in favor of me leaving…” she did not particularly want to talk about this. Changing the subject, “So why aren’t you at home with your family?”
The corners of his mouth dipped ever so slightly. He self-consciously ran a hand through his curly afro, “They took Nigel last week. Apparently it is a felony in this state to own a monkey.”
“Oh no, he was so cute,” now she felt bad for bringing it up.
“I plan to fight them, however,” he quickly pushed up his sleeves, proving he was not adverse to a fight, and incidentally showing off a large tattoo on his forearm. Her attention caught for a moment, she read the inscription, ‘Who Dares Wins’ under a winged dagger.
He noted her gaze and said, “Ah, from my old service days before my accident,” he thus indicated his legs.
As she watched, he pulled up his pant leg. The ‘boots’ he always wore extended at least as far up as he was able to reveal. He dropped his pants back into place and tapped his leg mid-thigh.
“Gone up to here,” he said with little concern.
Mig could not really be blamed for asking, “What happened?”
Still grinning, he shook his head, “Temporary bout of heroism, but I am much better now.”
“Who were you fighting..?” she was trying to remember wars from the last twenty years or so.
“Myself, mostly.”
Though his smile never faded, she got just the tiniest hint that he no longer wanted to pursue this line of thought. In an attempt to muddle the conversation further she returned to the earlier topic, “My dad is full blood Omaha –after my mom died, there was no reason for him to celebrate Christmas.”
“You are Native American?” he studied her features more closely.
Mig shrugged, “I’m half Indian, anyway. Mom was as white as the snows,” she smirked, “I’m sure that’s why dad went for her, despite his very verbal white-hating ways –that lure of the exotic…”
Mr Q cleared his throat, “That will be quite enough. I will not listen to you disrespect your parents in my store.”
At a loss for a moment, she blinked several times before responding, “I guess that did sound bad. I wasn’t really intending to disrespect them, that’s just how we’ve always masked ourselves…”
“Well I am not the one to apologize to, and I may have been abrupt in my judgment.” He motioned her closer, “I am half Indian as well, so we share something in common if only in name and not ancestry.”
Mig had never pegged him as being from Indian. Perhaps it was an over-sensitivity to assuming a gas station attendant was from ‘X handful of stereotypes.’ Maybe it was the accent –though she had heard Indians with British accents before… they had been a colony, right? Most likely though, it was the blue eyes and afro.
Mr Q laughed then and, hitching up his belt, said, “The sheer randomness of life. Do you know, I believe we have learned more about one another in the last fifteen minutes than in the four years you have been coming into my store.”
Mig smiled as she grabbed several items off of the shelves. “But isn’t that always how it goes? You never can be sure of what tomorrow will bring –or even the next minute…” She frowned, “Do you have peanut M&M’s?”
“Red M&M’s only,” he called to her.
“Peanut butter will have to do,” she picked up an over-sized red bag containing enough peanut butter M&M’s to feed a small country.
Mig finally decided she had enough junk food after her second trip to the counter. She nervously kept adding items, seeming to put off the actual purchase. Mr Q had seen this behavior more times than he could remember. His smile deepened as she had finally run out of delaying purchases.
She pulled three random DVDs from the five dollar bargain bin and placed them atop the obscenely large pile. Ever so casually, she let her eyes drift over the ‘behind the counter’ items. Her eyes working back and forth, searching, but trying ever so hard to appear casual.
Mr Q watched her wordlessly. She would build up the courage to purchase what she was too embarrassed to ask for on her own. If he tried to hurry her or show any sign of impatience, she would lose her nerve and bolt.
“Oh,” she said as if it had just occurred to her, “I should probably get some of those…” she waved to a vaguely, specific area behind the counter.
He could easily guess what she wanted from the general area indicated. Only there was a slight problem. There were brand issues to consider, as well as various styles offered.
Clearing his throat in what he hoped was a soothing, fatherly manner, “Do you have a preference..?” he asked.
Her blush shone through her dark complexion and her eyes popped wide, “Scratch-offs,” she nearly shouted, “just some one dollar ones… what, I don’t care which ones…”
He watched her shift nervously from foot to foot for a moment. He sighed, “I used to play the lottery,” he pulled off three random tickets from the display that was just above and to the left of what she had really wanted to buy.
“What?” she was distracted by her own thoughts.
“I used to play the lottery, you know,” he repeated, “Only, I kept loosing the wonky things.”
“Oh, right,” she smiled politely.
Once again, sorry it was so long -and the scene is completely not over, but that chunk covers everything, I think.
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Nov 10, 2009 - 21 54
I wasn't at the kick-off, but when I saw this it made me laugh. I didn't think there was a snowball's chance in hell I'd be able to find a place for him in here, but then I created someone and when I went to name him realized he was perfect. So here's two excerpts with Mr. Q.
Met:
- Q. His name is Bailey Quinn and he actually goes by Mr. Q.
- He's a shapeshifter and his favorite form includes all those traits, including giving himself a tattoo.
- I gave him the boots, at least for the scene. I can't believe I worked that in and am pretty sure I won't be keeping the boots, but for now they amuse me.
- As mutants are instantly killed upon discovery, I believe that counts as unconvicted felon. lol
- He's got a lazy happy air about him and pretty much always grins.
- He has a pet monkey named Jabber.
- He was at least wearing the belt for the first scene when he's met. He probably continues to do so as it's common among the fashion of the day.
Compromise:
- It's a fantasy world, so there is no Britain. I gave him a particular skill for mimicking accents.
Couldn't Meet:
- Lottery ticket. There is no lottery there, similar to not Britain and there was no compromise I could make for that. lol
- M&Ms. Couldn't do that one either. He will like sweets though. And he'll like red fruits. lol
“So you steal it?” she accused.
“If we have to,” was Alex’s nonchalant reply. “We sell things we make when we can. Quinn, the shapeshifter, is great at accents. His Naian is flawless, and he even knows the common words and swears – though, who doesn’t know the Naian swears?” She chuckled offhandedly, but Briala remained tense and distrusting. It was in her nature to hate mutants, even if she was one. “Mr. Q, that’s what we all call him, goes down to the towns or even up to North City and pretends to be a merchant. If we have any leftover produce, we’ll sell that, but mostly we sell the meat we hunt.”
And later we actually meet him:
Briala stepped around Alex to see the famous Mr. Q that Alex had told her about earlier. He was tall, with bronzed skin and bright eyes of an unnaturally blue color. Atop his head was a fluffy brown afro. All-in-all, it was a very odd combination. He had an easy grin on his face, she noticed a tattoo on his right arm but in the dim light couldn’t make it out, and sitting next to the rickety, hand-made chair he’d just been using in front of a warm fire that had no logs or kindling beneath it was a little brown monkey. He had a long tail and fluffy fur and the little girl in Briala instantly gushed at how adorable he was. He had on thick leather pants like the kind a soldier might wear in this cold, not dissimilar from her own, and she could see from the outline that his stiff leather boots went all the way up onto his thighs. She’d only seen that a few times before, on a couple of the pirates they’d convicted in the past that were on their way to be executed. She’d heard a rumor that they made it easier to keep their footing on the ships, stiffening and strengthening their legs, though she imagined they made it harder to be agile in sword fights. Perhaps in the icy mountains they helped Mr. Q keep from slipping on the ice. He wore a fisherman’s belt and loose white shirt. She guessed the man had been posing as a fisherman in his latest adventure to the villages, though how the monkey helped that façade was beyond her.
“Miss Alex, how was your little adventure?” he greeted warmly, hugging her loosely. Briala couldn’t help but instantly like him, despite his strange appearance.
“Entertaining,” she replied with a chuckle. “And yours?”
“Spectacularly educational,” was his report. Then he switched into the accent of the fishermen of Lucopul as he said, “Well, hello there, dear girl. You must be Miss Briala.” His full attention was on her as he gave his easy, lazy grin and shook her hand. “I am Quinn Bailey, but everyone just calls me Mr. Q.”
Her cheeks turned a little red. The charismatic presence of this man was intimidating. “It’s nice to meet you,” she mumbled. Then she cleared her throat, trying to regain some composure. “Is that your, uh, monkey?”
His accent returned to its normal infliction. “Yes, his name is Jabber. I got him off a merchant from Malundor. He’s quite friendly. You can pet him if you’d like.” Mr. Q snapped his fingers and called, “Jab! Here!” The monkey rushed over and shimmied up his master’s side to rest on his shoulder. “Good boy. Jabber, meet Briala. Shake her hand, Jab.” Briala reached up tentatively and took the monkey’s outstretched hand. She shook it and he made a happy-sounding noise, causing Briala to giggle a little. “He likes you,” Mr. Q told her.
“I like him.” Briala pet Jabber for a moment before Alex shifted slightly and their attention returned to her. When she turned her head to look at Alex, she remembered again how tired she was and yawned.
“Bedtime for you, Monroe.” She met Mr. Q’s odd blue eyes. “Mr. Q, do you wanna talk tonight or in the morning?”
“I’ll be up for a while, Miss Alex, but you should probably sleep, or at the very least go see your husband.”
“I met him at the entrance.”
“That’s not what I mean. You know how he hates when you’re gone without him. Spend some time with him before you sleep. I can wait til morning. You didn’t expect me back til then anyway.” He waved them away with his hands. “It was nice meeting you, Miss Briala. Now shoo, both of you. It’s late.”
And then they leave him and he has scenes later. I already love him. Accidental characters are awesome.
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Nov 10, 2009 - 22 14
To swimmingcarp: that reads quite lovely - and now you've managed to pique my interest enough to want more too. ^.^
At kitkatt - I'm with Nikki - poor Emilie, stuck with the strange guy Quinn. (egads, such a thick accent - i'd be likely to hurt him after a while of listening to it.)
zelf_gale - your Q seems nice - kinda like that odd looking nice fellow who makes everyone a little nervous but is generally liked.
EDITED IN LINES --> numlocke - I somehow missed your post in there... XD ...it was a good read - and now i'm curious as to why the marked bit about one eye, but alas, i will hopefully find out later. <-- end edit.
not new -->I have a Quail in my story (important person was named thusly before this thread appeared), I'm trying to figure out if I need an oddball for some location.
----------HGL is behind, but that's normal. (behind again :'I *sigh*)
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Do the characters have minds of their own? yes
Did they do something you weren't expecting? yes
Are they hiding things from you? yes
What good is it to be the author?!
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Nov 12, 2009 - 19 43
Mines probabally not the best but I thought of way I could use him in my story so it ended up working out. Here it is:
“Good day, sir.” He said with his perpetual grin, “Have you seen my lottery ticket? I think I have won but I cannot seem to find it anywhere?”
“Oh, uh, no sir, I have not.” Trenton replied, looking curiously at the leash the man held, “Whats that for?”
“Oh, this?” Said the man holding up the leash, “it is for my pet monkey. He must have run off somewhere…”
“I see… would you like help looking for him? Maybe he has the lottery ticket too?”
“Oh no, that is fine. I will just call him, MONK! Quintin wants you! Come here before I spank you with my belt!” said the man, “I am Quintin by the way.”
“Oh I see.” Trenton responded concerened for the man’s well being, “Sir, it was nice meeting you, would you like me to drive you to a shelter or something?”
“Oh no, that’s fine. You are a respectable young man.” Quintin said as he stuck out his hand to shake Trentons.
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Nov 16, 2009 - 20 28
Okay guys, I know I'm waaaayyyy behind in word count, but I'm gonna give winning NaNo this year the old college try. I've written a prologue that introduces Quintin Greenstone and posted it under my novel excerpt if you're even slightly interested in knowing more about him.
Btw, I know I haven't included all of his traits there but rest assured that since he is intended to be a major supporting character I will deliver the rest in due time. Note that since M & M's weren't invented until 1941, I took literary license with them since the prologue is set in October 1871. Read (not candy) here. :D
----------"Some people are born stupid, the rest of us really have to work at it."
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Nov 17, 2009 - 13 51
Yay! I have a Mr. Q! So far we don't know his name, or many of his traits, but... *evil giggle*... he is an assassin working on the fringe of the Mafia. So that's rather interesting, but works, because there's lots of room for quirky people in the Mafia.
Ahe-he-he-hem.
He was wearing a black leather jacket, but there were no buckles or decals or anything that would indicate he was in a gang. His hair was the huge, curly kind that was almost an afro, light brown. It could have been blond. The sun was glaring against the concrete police station's wall and it was difficult to be certain of any minute detail on the man. The headache didn't help, either. The man slowly raised a cigarette to his mouth and blew a cloud of smoke, looking away from John.
John was almost to his car, and he looked back to it. He realized he had been staring. Well, staring back. John pulled his keys out of his pocket and clicked the auto unlock button. He heard the locks go up as he reached for the door handle. He glanced up to where the staring man had been standing. He was gone. John got inside his car and took a deep breath. It was just the scare with the Russian making him jittery. That made sense, and John nodded as he turned the key. He would be over it soon.
John's office building was attacked by a Russian with a ski mask and a shotgun, btw. That's what he references at the end.
So yeah, there's my excerpt. It's really interesting to see how everyone's Mr. Q has such different personalities. Even though they all have thigh-high boots and pet monkeys... O_o
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Nov 20, 2009 - 23 33
I threw Mr. Q into mine and he fits in way better than I could have hoped for. from the looks of things he may prove to be a central force in the plot (considering besides Mr. Q I have practically no plot anyway). if this keeps going as good as it started I'm going to want like an "I <3 Mr. Q" t-shirt or something because he's the only character really working his butt off to save my story at this point.
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