Excerpts, People, Excerpts!

tygertyger
Excerpts, People, Excerpts!

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Nov 8, 2009 - 13 39

C'mon, y'all, I wanna see what people are writing! I showed you mine, it's only fair! Good on ya' Jay and Mary Kate, for getting your excerpts up.
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pookasluagh

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Nov 8, 2009 - 14 17

I have an excerpt up!

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Marisa_Gittinger

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Nov 8, 2009 - 16 01

YOU GOT TO 50K ALREADY?!!? OH MY GOSH!!!

And I don't have an excerpt, purely because I'm working on 4 different stories at a time . . .

EDIT: Mike, once again you have amazed me. I've said it a thousand times, but when these books get published you HAVE to tell me so I can buy them! =)

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jamileigh17Glowing Halo

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Nov 8, 2009 - 15 50

Wow, that's awesome! :-D
I have an excerpt up too, but it's boring. ;)

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thjoghild

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Nov 8, 2009 - 16 30

Ok, I posted a little something. I hope to make it to some of the write-ins soon! I want to meet y'all!

TheTal

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Nov 8, 2009 - 17 18

I have one up! Although, it's not that interesting... it just has some of the background of my story. Still, go for it!

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AnnieColleen

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Nov 8, 2009 - 18 31

Mine's up...and I'm resisting mightily the urge to edit it!

Zaramora_Gladen

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Nov 8, 2009 - 18 46

i haven't posted an expert of mine yet because i'm still debating which of the multiple stories i have to use.

pepperjackcandy

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Nov 8, 2009 - 23 21

I took a stab at it. Did I do it right?

thjoghild

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Nov 9, 2009 - 04 24

Everyone's excerpts are awesome! It's so fun to see how different eveyone's writing style is. Keep up the good work, y'all!

keijikunoichi

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Nov 9, 2009 - 07 28

Excerpt up, but thinking of changing it...

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elledeegee

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Nov 10, 2009 - 00 42

I have an excerpt... *shy little voice*

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JAPartridge

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Nov 11, 2009 - 09 11

I just put the whole first chapter up. I'm not sure how representative of the story it is, but hopefully it will intrigue some potential readers.

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queenofblank

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Nov 11, 2009 - 16 25

Meh. I'm waiting to put my excerpt up until I can find the perfect spot in the story to post for everyone to read. I just haven't felt it yet.

But ASAP! I promise. :)

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louxwriterGlowing Halo

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Nov 12, 2009 - 05 24

I'm not sure about the expert thing. This is my first attempt at writing a novel, let alone one with 50k words in 30 days. Just don't want to look like a total nut. I applaud all you other brave writers though.

SunnyBlue

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Nov 14, 2009 - 07 23

I was quite amused by the Traveling Shovel of Death, though I had no intention of using it. But I am writing a mystery, and the TSoD mysteriously showed up. The real surprise is that there's nothing gratuitous about finding it in the narrative. It's a sharp-shooter shovel---a kind of precision shovel---which is used to dig a deep, narrow hole.

tygertyger

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Nov 15, 2009 - 12 17

AnnieColleen wrote:
Mine's up...and I'm resisting mightily the urge to edit it!

And a lovely piece of work it is, too. I am so looking forward to reading the finished product!

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JAPartridge

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Nov 15, 2009 - 12 43

tygertyger wrote:
AnnieColleen wrote:
Mine's up...and I'm resisting mightily the urge to edit it!

And a lovely piece of work it is, too. I am so looking forward to reading the finished product!

I agree. I hope you make it available. That's definitely going on the to read list.

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AnnieColleen

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Nov 16, 2009 - 22 06

Not sure I want this as my official excerpt, but I had to share: 159-word sentence that (I think) is grammatically correct. Also, a flashback (well, diary/gossip pages entry) only marginally related to the plot, though the worldbuilding will come in handy later, and I'll probably keep some reference to this general incident. Spur-of-the-moment names redacted because there's a limit to ridiculousness for one night.

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The High Lord, deep in business negotiations with the traders of L___, put in his appearance for the hostess' honors and for the Spectacle of Lights that crowned the evening-- and, to the surprise of nearly everyone present, stayed for a good hour after the Spectacle's end to discuss the technicalities thereof with Lord M___ (when he could spare attention from his duties), with the scarred and bespectacled maestro of the Spectacle, with one or two of his own lords who claim some knowledge of how such things are done, and even with the curly-haired lads (reddened and browned with Algharad's sun) who tended the fiery powders and fetched the curiously shaped casings that housed them, and held the match that sent each individual Spectacle shooting far aloft, to burst in its varicolored splendors over the heads of the guests, showering the shoulders of each with sparks that quite ruined the evening's finery, short of drastic and expert repairs.

(And of course the scarred and bespectacled maestro of the Spectacle will have to make his appearance on the NaNoisms thread.)

rthurt

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Nov 18, 2009 - 06 58

I finally have my excerpt up. It's not great but I think it give you a pretty good idea of what the feel is like for the whole thing.

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JAPartridge

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Nov 18, 2009 - 15 02

'Bout time! (BTW--like your sig graphic)

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rthurt

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Nov 18, 2009 - 17 23

Thankee. I should probably change that font though. I don't want people thinking it's just a horror yarn.

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~Todd

'07 - The Nefarious Mr. Pleasant (epic fail)
'08 - Snap Case (not nearly so epic fail)
'09 - Others' Gate (so far, so good)

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