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Akatari
Novel: Unbinding
Genre: Fantasy
50,150 words so far  

About Akatari

Location: the Land of Insanity

Home Region:
USA :: New York :: Elsewhere

Age:19

Website: http://lady_akatari.livejournal.com

Favorite novels: I have to -choose-?! Impossible. Authors are hard enough.

Favorite writers: Lois McMaster Bujold, Terry Pratchett, Jennifer Crusie, William Shakespeare, Patricia Wrede, Dorothy Sayers, Barbara Mertz, Jane Austen, Ngaio Marsh...

Favorite music: For novel writing: instrumental (especially Celtic, classical, or jazz). For listening: golden oldies, Broadway, and the instrumental genres mentioned earlier.

Non-noveling interests: Reading, D&D, creating art, singing, observing scenery, climbing trees, spending too much time online, teaching, baking, playing with little kids, talking too much, attempting to make computer graphics

Joined: October 29, 2005

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'05 '07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 0

NaNoWriMo buddies: 38

 

Brief Author Bio:

Known in that odd grey realm known as "the Real World" as Kate, Akatari is a second-year university student who wants to be published by the time she's graduated. She's majoring in history (or will be once the department acknowledges her), and is also interested in linguistics, archaeology, pre-modern literature, and a wide collection of miscellany in which courses at her uni are (sadly) not offered.

She writes mostly strongly-overlapping fantasy and romance, though some of her works are more one than the other. To date, she has two completed novel drafts, one of which she may submit later this year, and several incomplete attempts.

When she grows up, Akatari wants to be able to fly.

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Synopsis: Unbinding

Tierney is a petty lordling, a young man convinced of his own power and importance. Ciara is a local girl, a wizard, born to a peasant woman in the village below Tierney's keep. He told her he loved her and she believed him, and when she ceased to believe she tried--and botched--a love-spell.

Tell her to make me a cambric shirt... without a seam or fine needlework...

It drained out ten years of her life, reversed the requirements of the conditions needed to unwind the spell's threads, and left Ciara ashamed of herself and Tierney furious with her. She fled, unable to loosen the spell and afraid to remain within the reach of his anger.

Tell her to wash it in yonder dry well... where water ne'er sprung, nor drop of rain fell...

Four years pass.

Tell her to dry it on yon barren thorn... which never bore blossom since Adam was born.

Tierney wishes to make an advantageous marriage, but the twisted spell keeps him from doing so. Ciara had made it so he could not wed elsewhere, intending to free him of the obligation to do so--she hadn't known, then, that all he wanted of her was amusement.

Tell her to find me an acre of land... between the salt water and the sea strand...

Rhys is a wild magician, a wanderer with a strange relationship with fortune. Lord Tierney, older now, sends him to bear a warning to Ciara where she lives now at the great sea fair, eking out a living by selling herb simples: remove the spell, finally and completely, by midwinter, or he will have her killed to end it that way.

Tell her to plough it with a lamb's horn... and sow it all with one peppercorn...

Rhys is expecting a sorceress or a creature of faerie, entirely occupied with herself and her own wants, selfish and cruel; Ciara has for the past four years been waiting in dread for a killer. Rhys meets the wizard made wise by her own mistakes, somehow not brought to full despairing cynicism by any of this; Ciara finds her messenger unexpectedly sympathetic.

Tell her to reap it with sickle of leather... and tie it all in a white swan's feather.

And they decide to work together to unbind Ciara from Tierney.

And when you've done and finished your work... ...then you shall be a true love of mine.

Tierney, though, does not have the patience, after all, to wait for midwinter.

Excerpt: Unbinding

“What’s wrong?” Rhys asked

Ciara pointed to the floor. Dim in the shadows, he saw something metal.

“What is it?”

“It is,” she said, in a voice so precise and cool that each word came out wrapped in its own coat of ice, so very, very careful that he knew she had to be about to break, “a knife. It was flung just past my head earlier this afternoon.”

His bitten hand and bruising cheek suddenly seemed much less important. “A knife?”

“You may look at it if you wish. Or pick it up. I left it there.”

“Is it cursed?” he asked, not sure he wanted to touch it if she’d been so unwilling.

“I don’t think so.” Some of the cold perfection was gone from her voice, and she bent to look at it moving almost normally. The hand she reached out over it shook a bit, but it wasn’t that bad—he doubted he would have noticed if he hadn’t been watching, seen the quiver like some—he wasn’t sure. The flutter of a new bird’s wings? Not a leaf, the motion was too small for that, unless it was the littlest of breezes, gentle as a breath.

“No,” she said finally, looking up at him. It was dark, and firelight, but still when her hair swung away from her face she turned away to let it fall again. “No, it’s not cursed. I just—I didn’t want to touch it. I didn’t want to go near it. Someone threw it at me, Rhys, it wasn’t an accident and it wasn’t my imagination. I was sitting in plain sight, in full daylight, and this knife went right past my head, so close I heard it pass, and through the window.”

“What did you do?”

She stood, clumsily, and had to catch herself on the table. He reached out a hand to her, but by the time she saw it she was already balanced. “What did I do? I didn’t know what it was at first, but I knew something was wrong. And I saw someone in the crowds, and she saw me.”

She?” Rhys said before he could stop himself. Knives from the shadows wasn’t something women did, for the most part—poison, as the saying went, or a fair blade to one’s face, but not this odd blend of honor and dishonor, and perfect throwing (his sister would have hit him for thinking that, if she’d heard him, but it was true, from what he’d seen of her friends, that they liked throwing things less than his friends did).

“She. Red-blonde hair,” Ciara said, frowning a bit, “cut to her shoulders. Thin. Wearing black, that’s how I noticed her. It was... flashy, I suppose. Something that caught the eye because it wasn’t supposed to. There was a mark on her neck going down to her shoulder, and up to her cheek.”

Mark. A mark on her shoulder— “Ciara,” he said, “what did—”

“And suddenly I didn’t like it—I mean, liked it less than I had, I knew something was wrong—so I went into the house, quickly, and, Light-Holder divine, I hated the feeling I had when I turned my back on everyone long enough to open the door and go through it. Then I got into the house and saw it was a knife. Shiny,” she said, slowly, “and all sharp and pointy and silver. Not silver like the coin, just silver.”

“Yes,” Rhys said, carefully, because she shouldn’t have sounded this... young? Was that—yes, it was, and that was what was bothering him, that she sounded so very young and helpless. “Knives often are. People don’t make them out of silver itself, because it’s soft and doesn’t” cut “work.”

She nodded, all small and fragile-looking, and he reached out again because she was so frightened that she was making the room cold. “It’s going to be all right, if you’ll believe me,” he said.

“How?” She looked up at him. “How is it going to be all right?”

“Because if you don’t believe me you’ll give up,” he said. “Remember? If you don’t try, Tierney wins. If you try and fail, Tierney wins.”

“Is it midwinter already, then?”

For a heart-stopping instant he thought she meant it, that she truly had no idea that it wasn’t still not yet midsummer, and then he realized she was trying to tell him, without using that many words, that if Tierney had said midwinter and sent this black-clad woman with her markings and her throwing knives anyway then he was a liar and couldn’t be trusted, since Ciara still had more than half a year.

“No,” Rhys said, “which is why it’s all the more important you not let him do this to you. He’s cheating, Ciara. He’s like a small child who realizes he’s losing at Blind-Man’s Bluff and rips off the blindfold.”

“I’ve played with people like that,” Ciara said, sounding a bit more like herself. “You always wanted to take away their stick and clobber them with it.”

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