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Genre: Historical Fiction
About Lady L'RaeLocation: Desperately behind on word count. Eve is cornered in a cave by a dragon. But I must finish algebra. I'm so torn! Home Region: Age:16 Website: www.freewebs.com/ladylrae Favorite novels: The Hiding Place, Secret of Sentarra, The Giving Tree, Anne of Green Gables, Anne of Avonlea... Favorite writers: Lindsey! (The rest are non-fiction writers) Ken Ham, David Barton, Dr. Morris, Corrie ten Boom, Leslie Ludy, anything from Vision Forum... I assure you, there are more... Favorite music: Soundtracks, pretty much... alot of Classical too... Non-noveling interests: Growing closer to God, telling others about Jesus, getting involved and debating about politics, reading and writing about Creation Science, learning history, teaching and babysitting children, holding babies, spending time with friends... |
Joined: October 31, 2006 This Year: Official Participant NaNoWriMo History: NaNoWriMo posts: 4 NaNoWriMo buddies: 4
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Synopsis: Bekkah, Daughter of Eve: Lessons
Bekkah, the sixth child of Adam and Eve learns for the first time of her parent's big mistake in the Garden of Eden. Bitterness and self-righteousness is the theme of the story as Bekkah fights with resentment against her Mother, the first sinner. When Abel tells her that his lamb died and that her favorite lamb was to be sacrificed at the alter, Bekkah snaps.
Excerpt: Bekkah, Daughter of Eve: Lessons
Cain pulled away, glaring at Cara. Cara continued to move toward her little sister. Bekkah whimpered again.
“You're scaring her Cain.” Cara said, reaching for the girl. When Cain stepped back again, Cara grabbed his arm and attempted to force Bekkah free. Cain shoved into Cara. She fell back to the ground, letting out a short cry.
Abel immediately grabbed Cain's shoulder and spun him around to face him.
Bekkah's eyes were wide with fright, as she was caught between her brothers.
“Never touch anyone again.” Abel threatened.
Cain set Bekkah down, his attention on Abel. “Don't mess with me little brother. I am much larger and stronger than you. You have never hurt me before. But if you touch me, I swear that I will hurt you so bad that you will beg for me to stop.”
Abel's eyes roved his brother's face as he fought to keep his fists by his side. “May God have mercy on you.” He muttered before turning away.
“I am god.” Cain spat.
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