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Novel: Danny Phantom in: No More Secrets
Genre: Adventure
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About hotwheelsjill

Location: Dayton, Ohio

Home Region:
United States :: Ohio :: Dayton

Age:20

Website: http://www.myspace.com/jill_2005

Favorite novels: The Giver, Skipping Christmas, The Burns Journal, The DaVinci Code, Starry Starry Night

Favorite writers: Neale Donald Walsch, Sylvia Browne

Non-noveling interests: God, reading, writing, watching tv, shopping, music, hanging w/ friends, surfing the net, some roleplaying, video games, euchre, sudoku, petting the puppies at the mall, Siberian Huskies

Joined date: November 3, 2006

Years done NaNoWriMo:
'06

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Danny Phantom in: No More Secrets
an excerpt

Author's Note: A frriend of mine wrote out the transcrip for "Phantom Planet; I just burrowed and edited it. If you've seen "Phantom Planet" you know what was in the movie and what wasn't; if you haven't seen "Phantom Planet" and you plan to don't read this, MAJOR SPOILERS!

Tucker, who is watching a radar on a laptop, shouts, “It’s coming!”
Everyone watches as the asteroid comes closer to earth, blocking out the sun.
Then Jack says to his wife and daughter, “Listen, I just want you all to know that I love you… and I’m so proud of each and every one of you for trying your best.” He then wraps his arms around Maddie and Jazz.
Jazz responds, “We love you too, Dad…”
Maddie, “At least we’re all together…” She looks over to Jazz who starts crying.
Jazz sobs, “I- oh mom… there’s something you need to know…” she looks over at the robot that she had disguised as Danny.
Maddie walks over and looks closely, she pulls off the wig. She gasps, “A robot? Where’s Danny!? Jasmine, where’s your brother!?”
Jazz looks out the window at the plane crash.
Maddie gasps, “JACK! WHERE’S DANNY?”
Jazz then makes her discision. “Mom, I know where the real Danny is: he was in that jet.
Maddie gasps, “But how can that be, unless he was…”
Jazz interrupts, “He is, Mom. He’s Danny Phantom.”
Both parents gasp. Then Jack speaks up, “What? How?”
Jazz quickly tells them the story of the accident he had in their lab (she wasn’t there when it happened but Danny had told her about it later). “I guess one day he decided to go into the Fenton Portal and he accidently pushed a button, causing the portal to come on and give him ghost powers.”
Jack, “So that’s how the portal got to working! I knew I missed something.”
Maddie is clearly shocked, “Why didn’t he tell us?”
“Because he was afraid to. You and Dad hunt ghosts. And you’re always talking what you’ll do whenever you catch a ghost: ‘Let’s rip the ghost molecule by molecule!’ ‘No, Jack. Let’s dissect the ghost.”
Jack, “We would never hurt our son. He should know that.”
Jack and Maddie look at each other sadly, clearly feeling guilty for making Danny feel afraid and think that he had to hide his ghost-half.

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