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Sefketabwy
Novel: Dark Sun Rising
Genre: Science Fiction
61,240 words so far  

About Sefketabwy

Location: Corpus Christi, Texas

Home Region:
USA :: Texas :: Corpus Christi

Age:22

Favorite novels: Snow Crash, Angela's Ashes, Harry Potter, The Pianist, Flow My Tears the Policeman Said, The Hunger Games

Favorite writers: William Gibson, Phillip K. Dick, Tanith Lee, Neal Stephenson, Frank McCourt, J.K. Rowling, Margaret George, Elie Wiesel

Favorite music: For this particular novel, the 'Requiem for a Dream' soundtrack has played a large part thus far.

Non-noveling interests: Playing guitar, reading like it's going out of style, knitting to reruns of Roseanne (and not afraid to admit it!), taking care of my husband and kitten, the SCA, theater.

Joined: June 9, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'04 '05 '06 '07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 54

NaNoWriMo buddies: 11

 

Brief Author Bio:

Wherever you go, there you are.

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Synopsis: Dark Sun Rising

"It was one thing to yearn for a different, better life; another thing completely to live among the ruins of it."

In a post-apocalyptic world, Eris is one of the few humans left alive, every day of her life a constant struggle for survival. The planet is now run by homo subtus, or what are more commonly referred to as the "subhumans": the similar and yet wildly different species that lived in the hollows underneath the earth while civilization above was slowly destroyed from within, only emerging when they saw their chance to regain control of what they felt had been taken from them many centuries ago: the world above ground.

Now an endangered species fighting to regain a foothold in the world they had once ruled, the remaining humans live as despised outcasts, forced to roam the last habitable areas of land in nomadic tribes that constantly clash with the now-ruling species. Forbidden to reenter the cities they had once created or face extermination, they sneak, steal, and kill when they must; and Eris is just another desperate life driven to desperate acts. When her mother falls deathly ill and her one contact and hope within the city walls goes missing, she finds herself unexpectedly thrust down a path that will cause her to rethink all of her preexisting notions and maybe even find a way to bring salvation to her people.

Excerpt: Dark Sun Rising

"Was it weird? Being around one of them?" Will asks, and Eris pauses, considering her answer.

"It's weird being around any of them." She answers carefully, pushing aside the urge to shudder.

"I've never seen one before," Lynette breathes out, her tone overly curious.

"You should be glad for that." Will says sharply, and Lynette sits back, chagrined.

"It's different, but at the same time...not different." Eris explains, frowning as she realizes how unhelpful her answer is. "They look like us. Same facial structure, same body, but it's their skin that does it. It's all see-through and...unsettling. Disgusting."

"You can see through it? How? Why?" Lynette asks in rapt fascination.

"There used to be these fish that lived really deep in the ocean." Will explains quickly, and Eris recognizes the distaste on his face as he speaks. "They lived so far down that no sunlight ever reached them. Because there wasn't any sunlight, their skin was often white, or translucent. I guess that's why the subs have skin like that...living underground, they never had to defend themselves against natural light. Their skin probably just...changed."

"Evolution," Eris nods. "The same reason their eyes are always completely white, and their ears and nose are shaped differently. It's all just evolution."

"So they're still humans, then. Just...not." Lynette says, and Will's face pales. Eris feels herself shaking her head, her fingers trembling from some emotion she can't quite place. Anger?

"They're not like us." Will says, his tone closed off. "We may have been brutal and cruel at times, but we at least had the decency to acknowledge the way we were, to sometimes accept it and try to be better. We didn't tell others that we were good-natured at heart and walk around professing to be peaceful while essentially committing genocide."

"But they weren't the ones that killed most of us in the beginning. That was our doing." Lynette argues. Eris remains silent, her eyes moving back to her mother, wondering what life would have been like for them if the subhumans had never arrived, if they had never even existed in the first place. Perhaps they would be alive and healthy, with her father, a bit worse for wear but still managing to thrive. Their lives now were certainly not thriving. The opposite, perhaps. They were struggling to stay alive, and fighting back the ever-present threat of complete extinction.

"But they finished the job." Will says flatly, and Eris can see no trace of his usual good humor now. "We could have come back from it. Hell, we humans have made history coming back from the worst possible hardship imaginable at the time. Look at the Holocaust during the second World War. That was genocide. If someone had come in after Hitler, taken his power, and finished the job he'd started while saying they were just doing it for the general good the entire time..." He trails off, his lips thin and white.

"That's what it is now." Eris speaks finally, closing her eyes. "They're killing us off slowly, without remorse, because they think it's the right thing to do. They think it's what we deserve, and that left alive we would just bring further destruction."

"Killing people is never the right thing to do." Lynette murmurs, shaking her head. "No matter what the reasoning is."

"I don't know," Will replies, catching Eris's eyes, knowing they're thinking the same thing. "I can think of a whole lot of reasons to kill them. High up on that list is to do it before they get me first."

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