Genre: Adventure
About perpetual_blockageLocation: You can find me on the psychopath Home Region: Age:16 Website: HA. Nice try, Davus. Favorite novels: Ender's Game, The Host, Mister Monday, A Tree Grows In Brooklyn, The Secret Life Of Bees, The Fountainhead Favorite writers: I've got a few. What of it? Favorite music: I'll listen to pretty much any genre, but what I have preference for depends on my scene aaaand you are already tired of reading this Non-noveling interests: friends...figuring out people problems...um...autumn? Also, Dr. McNinja. |
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Brief Author Bio: I'm a sixteen-year-old student named Jenny. I've been writing since I was twelve. My first story was called The Princess And The Prisoner and it was hilariously bad. I could name a couple friends who would like to get their hands on it, but they will fail. |
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Synopsis: A Rustling of Wings
There's this doll named Clara Minnelli and she is saved from a post-explosion fire by a masked vigilante. However, she sees things she isn't supposed to see and is held hostage in the hideout of the "hero." Clara is eventually forced to become his sidekick, because if you've got some kitten laying around your HQ you'd better make her useful.
Here, I explore the blurry line between good and evil, shamelessly rip off Batman, and keep my habit of only having like four characters in any of my stories.
Excerpt: A Rustling of Wings
“Follow.”
I put my feet back into my shoes and trail the spectral figure that glides along the narrow corridor.
When I, on my leaden gams, follow around a corner, the bird-thing is gone. I look around, stunned. Did I take a wrong turn? I couldn’t have; I’m wide awake. The new hallway I’m in is very dark, but the other end is lit from another room. I tentatively advance toward the light, into the gloom that seems to vibrate and echo my own unease back to me.
“You must watch your back.” A rustle.
I spin. No one is there.
Something brushes against my leg. “Know what is around you.” Something moves and, heart fluttering, I turn to see it.
A cold beak at my neck. I push it away, but it’s already gone, but I run for the end of the hallway—all at once, something slams down in front of it and it is dark and I cannot see.
“And never depend on the light.”
I stand tense in the impossibly short moment of stillness, trying to hear. An enemy I can’t see hits me unbelievably hard, a blunt force in my side, and I’m flying. I hit a wall—where I didn’t expect it to be, it’s in a different place than I thought it was—and crumple to the ground.
The black hissing in my ear. “Clara Minnelli, fight.”
Gasping from the pain of the blows, I tuck my face into my knees and try to protect myself.
A gloved hand touches me and fingers wrap coolly around my throat. “Fight.” It begins to squeeze and I choke, cough on my own restricted air. I pull at the unyielding hand, try to get my fingers inside.
“Not good enough.” The grip tightens and now I can’t breathe at all. In my panic I hit something; my hand catches in the folds of a fabric. I hit through it, feel something, a body underneath. For a moment, I’m strong, and it tenses at my blows, but I’m running out of time. My head and lungs and throat are in agony.
“Fight.” The hiss is almost a growl now. I smack feebly but it doesn’t last; soon I become aware that I’m not hitting anymore, I’m barely moving, and that’s when my eyes close.


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