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aredshaw
Novel: The Last Place to Stand
Genre: Science Fiction
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About aredshaw

Location: Scotts Valley, CA USA

Home Region:
United States :: California :: Santa Cruz

Age:37

Website: http://www.theredshaws.com

Favorite novels: Going Postal, Seeker, Grapes of Wrath, Ender's Game, Snow Crash, And Then There Were None, The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time, The Saga of Seven Suns

Favorite writers: Terry Pratchett, Jack McDevitt, Steinbeck, Kevin J. Anderson, Agatha Christie, Neal Stephenson, Tolkien, Orson Scott Card, O. Henry

Favorite music: Classical (Bach, Mozart, Vivaldi, Beethoven, Dvorak, Tchaikovsky, Rachmaninoff)

Non-noveling interests: Tae Kwon Do, Church, Computers, Teaching

Joined: October 2, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07

NaNoWriMo posts: 4

NaNoWriMo buddies: 6

 

Brief Author Bio:

I live with my supportive wife and two sons in Scotts Valley, and teach high school English in San Jose. I am an assistant pastor at my church (www.newhopesv.org), and I enjoy doing Tae Kwon Do, where some day I hope to attain to black belt.

Synopsis: The Last Place to Stand

        In the future, there are two civilizations that have developed. One is built on the idea that technology is the highest achievement of man. These people live a fast paced life filled with the quest to improve themselves through technological advantages.
        Another civilization is made up of those who have decided that they wanted out of such an all consuming whirlwind of a life. By some, they are called the Outcasts.
        These two societies at opposition to one another will be forced together as an experiment is starting in the city that could bring devastation throughout the earth.

Excerpt: The Last Place to Stand

        The building was the same as usual, but it felt different somehow to her. It was not the office, she realized, that had changed. It was her.
        Upon entering her office, she saw the same people doing their same jobs. No one talked. All was moving of chairs, clicking of keys, sending and receiving of feeds. But something did get her attention. The man whom she had talked to the other day, the whole reason she came to work one last time, was gone. He did not sit in his customary chair. She wondered what could have happened. Was he sick? Was he suffering from something? Had he reached the same conclusions that she had?
        She went over to his desk. There the computer hummed. On the screen was a memo to be sent via feed, she assumed. But the memo said, "X213, I have something you should probably know. I think something big is about to happen. There is an experiment that the company is about to start. It might be dangerous since it involves a more complete interface of man and machine. Make sure you don't get the upgrade if they offer it. I sort of stumbled into this information."
        "You should also know that I will not longer be here. I realized that this is no place for me. You are the only person I ever talked to at our work. I would be surprised if you even read this, but I wanted you to know. As an old man, I always thought you could have been my daughter."

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