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Miss Tips
Novel: Retreat [Tentative & Abhorred xD]
Genre: Fantasy
68,594 words so far   Winner!

About Miss Tips

Location: Where the streets have no name

Home Region:
United States :: New Jersey :: Northwest

Age:14

Favorite novels: Ender's Game, the Harry Potter series, the Pendragon series, the Young Wizard series, books by Stephen King, and others.

Favorite writers: Orson Scott Card, Stephen King, Diane Duane, DJ MacHale, and more.

Favorite music: U2, baby! *is obsessed* Also: From Good Homes, Incubus, Rush, etc.

Non-noveling interests: Reading, playing soccer and field hockey, hanging out with friends, and having fun. Obviously.

Joined date: October 3, 2007

NaNoWriMo posts: 120

NaNoWriMo buddies: 15

 


Retreat [Tentative & Abhorred xD]
an excerpt

That night, to clear her head, Kiera took up the pastime Shae had forsaken. In her right hand she grasped a thick, wooden pen with thick ink inside of it, and in her left she held open a leather-bound book her father had given her, before the war when luxuries such as that were common. Her hand ached from all she wrote, but she could not stop. It was as if her soul was pouring onto the page, and all the thoughts she needed to confront were out in the open.

‘So many stories are told about the Erea. Their glorious power, their wonderful defenses…it all seems so fake to me now.

Many people think the Erea are human, just evolved differently. My society was once completely at peace. War was a word I had never heard said, and it didn’t even live on in the oldest of memories. War was something for myths and legends – like the legends of the Erea.

People believe the Erea were people whose world was utterly at war, and constantly. People say all the pain and hurt that they felt all the time was so awful that they needed a way to negate it all. And so they evolved with the ability to ‘retreat’.

That’s all it’s called. No special name, no special interest – seemingly, for people are secretly taken with this power. Apparently, to escape from all the pain, Erea can retreat from it all and lock themselves away in their minds where they no longer feel anything. They appear in the place where they are most at peace, doing something that calms them, even if they’ve never done it before – like an illiterate person reading, as I believe Shae’s mother did when she retreated. There, they could hide from all the pain until it was safe for them. People venerate this power, now that our world is utterly torn by war. They want a way to escape.

But is it truly an escape? Yes, it may save the Erea…but the consequences can be deadly for everyone else. At the moment, most Erea are leaders of warriors, simply because they usually live longer than the other warriors. But what happens when they retreat? They cannot lead their warriors any more, and they die. All of them. This happened with Iris. I just can’t believe it. The power seems more like a curse to me. I would never abandon my people, willingly or unwillingly. I’d die first. So should this power be revered?

But that’s barely important. Shae is leaving tomorrow to fight.’

Kiera found she could write no more. Shae is leaving tomorrow, she thought, and she felt something hot rising up inside her – jealousy.

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