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Novel: Lucky Angels
Genre: Mystery & Suspense
35,211 words so far  

About ladyviolathornhaven

Location: Springville, NY

Home Region:
United States :: New York :: Elsewhere

Age:17

Website: http://lvtnanowrimo.blogspot.com/

Favorite novels: I don't really read much...*sweatdrop*

Favorite writers: Get back to me on this.

Favorite music: Anime Music, Goth Rock, Musicals

Non-noveling interests: Music, fanfiction, fanart

Joined: October 4, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07

NaNoWriMo posts: 0

NaNoWriMo buddies: 4

 

Brief Author Bio:

I'm mostly focusing on this this month. Of course, RL comes first, but after that, this follows. I'm a high school student, senior year, who has lucked out to find a rather good plot this year.

I will update my word count sporadically during the month. What I have listed now will change within one to three days. My internet isn't the fastest, so most of my word count updates will be from school. I'll be on more on the weekends, where the updates will be a little less. Don't freak when it says I only have over x words. I probably have 500 more written by the time you've finished this. O___O I have no life.

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Anyways, this story spans over different genres. It's mostly a mystery/suspense, but also a romance and horror story. It gets a little erotic in a later chapter, with a "lemon" scene. Nothing is called by it's "true" name, so I call it a high PG-13, low R.

Synopsis: Lucky Angels

Drake Schlutze didn't know what he was getting into. Sure, his hometown had rumors flying about, but this one was a little more outrageous than others. The rumors of "the graveyard being haunted" or "the house on Sommerset Drive" had nothing on this. "Princess" Ravenna was a rumor in herself. The Gothic beauty that everyone turned to as the epitome of the angels. However, they might want to reconsider her title. Throw in the Angel Club, created by his older sister, and the twists just keep on coming...wait, what's this about reading a girl's journal about her older boss?

Excerpt: Lucky Angels

Chris slowly pulled back the cover on the object, and I think everyone was glad that Irina wasn’t home. Perhaps Freesia and Hattie shouldn’t be home either; it was very grotesque, and they both turned away, covering their mouths. What Chris found was more than an artifact. It was a mummy. Well, half of it, anyways, from the pelvis up. The skin was dried out, tugging onto the bones. The eyelids were sunken in; there were clearly no lifeless orbs behind them. Muscles were gone, having long since deteriorated away. There were small holes where hair follicles used to be, having long since died off. Despite me having a fairly strong stomach, seeing things in horror films as a reality made me a little nauseous.

“It looks like something from ancient Egyptian embalming,” Elena said. She seems unaffected, lucky girl.

“That’s the strange thing. It appears to be like this, but where I found it is not in a sarcophagus. I was walking down by the old graveyard, and it was pulled up out of the ground. I really wanted to preserve it a little better than just the hips up, but I think I found something interesting.”

“…what do you think you found, Chris?” Gar asked cautiously. The ever folklorist-in-training, Garrett asks a lot of questions. It’s a good thing for a folklorist to do such a thing.

“Look carefully at his neck.”

“His?” Hattie asked.

“Look at the shape of the pelvis, Hattie. It’s narrower, so it’s a male. If it was wider, then it’d be a female,” I told her.

“Yeah. Now look at his neck.”

I could see that Elena’s finger was hitting the zoom button on the camera. She let out a soft gasp. I leaned in a little closer to see what she saw, and I was a bit surprised myself.

On his neck were four holes: one set of two was closer to the nape of the neck, and the other two were closer to the jawbone. It seemed like a vampire bite, but that would be impossible! Everyone knows that vampires don’t exist.

“You could say that again,” Bethany said. It seems that I said that last line out loud.

“Drake, if you remember, one of the other versions of the legend is that a monster attacked the town. Vampires are mythical monsters, but this bite could easily belong to a rabid dog or something.”

“No…dogs don’t leave bites like this,” Freesia commented, her eyes wide as she remembered her accident three years ago.

“The key word here is ‘rabid’, Freesia. Your dog bite from a few years ago wasn’t from a sick animal. It was just warning you from the dangers that was coming your way, and that was on your hand. It would look different on a neck.” Chris placed a reassuring hand on the oldest triplet’s back.

“The strangest part,” Elena started, “is the embalming. If this male was bitten by some kind of animal and the part with the teen girl burying the bodies, why would our John Doe look like this now?”

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