Genre: Romance
About YamiNoMitsukai
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Favorite novels: Twilight, by Stephanie Meyer; Melusine, by Sarah Monette
Favorite writers: Stephanie Meyer, Sarah Monette, Laurell K. Hamilton
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Poison
an excerpt
Now, I knew it was a bad idea. I got that feeling in my gut I usually get when something I do is going to turn out bad. I rarely pushed past that bad feeling, and when I did it always turned out bad. But, anyway, I knew pick pocketing this guy would be a bad idea. But, he didn’t seem to notice anything around him, walking slow, but seeming to have a place in his mind that he wanted to go. But, you see, he was wearing his money, his ears were hung with six gold hoops each, small, but small crystals imbedded in each one, making his pretty blond hair glitter when they showed. He wore wealthy clothes, a deep blue waist coat, black trousers, and a jacket that had to be worth pounds upon pounds. His long, slender fingers were curled lightly, gold and silver rings glittering lightly, with jewels of various colors embedded inside them. He looked as if he hadn’t seen a day of hard work in his life. His green eyes glittered in the light, as he walked to whatever destination he was headed off to. And, he didn’t even notice me following right behind him.
I knew this was a bad idea, knew it was crazy to try and pick a noble’s pocket when I was feverish and my ribs ached like a son of a bitch. Seriously, I was almost seeing double, glancing around, and following the noble, each step like torture. I should have been resting, but even I knew I needed some help. And, no doctor was going to help some fool with no money. They just weren’t.
So, I was following this oblivious looking noble through the market, where crowds of people walked, and crowded around venders and street performers, ready to get ripped out of their money. He weaved the crowd, still oblivious to my presence. Hell, I think the guy could’ve been ripped a hundred times and not even notice. I followed his pretty blond head, and waited until he did something to make my part quite a bit easier.
That part came in the form of him walking down an alley way as a short cut probably to where he lived. He left the crowds of people, to a dead quiet alleyway, and I followed, moving as slow and careful as I was able. Not that I could move very careful, what with my ribs aching up a storm. Damn did they hurt. I wiped a bit of sweat from my head, fighting the urge to cough. Not only would that hurt like hell, but god would that key him off to my presence. And, that was a big no-no.
You see, I got in a brawl a while back. Some guy tried to kick my ass. I don’t exactly remember the reason, but I did something to piss him off, or maybe he was just in a rotten mood. I think I’d looked at him wrong, and the little bourgeois bastard couldn’t stand to have someone of my standing looking at him like he deserved to be looked at. But, he’d attacked me first and shoved me to a tree, and kicked the crap out of me there. This was when I just came down with a bit of the flu, which just kept getting worse and worse. Probably because I refused to rest. I just couldn’t rest when I had no where to rest. Yeah, it was harder than one should think, resting when you’re ready to get kicked out of the spot any moment. Let’s just say it didn’t work very well, at all.
I moved a bit closer, aiming to pass the noble, and get something out of his coat in the process, and I got a few feet away, moving near silent, when I made my move. Of course I should’ve notice him stiffen when I got that close, but the truth was I was too tired to care. He knew I was following, and I saw that in his eyes as he wheeled around whamming his elbow into my chest. I gasped, pain shooting through my ribs. He’d hit right where something wrong was going on, and the stuff that had healed I don’t think was healed any longer. I went down, my hand clasped on I don’t know what, but it was whatever was in his pocket at the time. I grunted lightly, grabbing my ribs, swearing wildly. He slammed another kick to my ribs, obviously seeing that was my weak point, and lights exploded behind my eyes, and darkness fell, taking me away from the awful pain.


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