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AravisGirl
Novel: Empire
Genre: Fantasy
33,842 words so far  

About AravisGirl

Location: Mostly in the Wood Between the Worlds... sometimes in Texas

Home Region:
USA :: Texas :: Longview

Age:16

Website: http://aravisgirl.blogspot.com/

Favorite novels: Jane Eyre, Chronicles of Narnia, Pride & Prejudice, Monster, and so forth

Favorite writers: C.S Lewis, Margaret Peterson Haddix, Caroline B. Cooney, Jane Austen, Charlotte Bronte, Shakespeare, Debra White Smith, Quinton Dodd

Favorite music: George Strait, Andrew Peterson, Tenth Ave North, Taylor Swift, Sara Groves, Brad Paisley, Montgomery Gentry, Fernando Ortega, Brandon Heath, Nicole Nordeman

Non-noveling interests: drawing, baking, biking, photo-manipulation, watching music videos and movie trailers

Joined: October 11, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 48

NaNoWriMo buddies: 47

 

Brief Author Bio:

I've been writing this side of forever and two-time Nanowrimo winner
I love to meet other Wrimos, so I'll put my info here.
http://aravisgirl.blogspot.com/
http://twitter.com/aravisgirl

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Synopsis: Empire

Prince Cerwan is coming of age. And his tyrannical father is determined to turn the boy into a prince fit to rule his ever-growing empire. The arrival of a strange healer from a recently-conquered land disrupts this ambition. Enigmatic, she seems to have bewitched the young prince. The healer is a magical being and was once the guardian of Brython, where Cerwan's deceased mother came from. She lays two destinies before him: the doomed path of his father or that of his mother's ancestors who were blessed.
When the schemes and ambitions of others put the palace in turmoil and the healer's life in peril, Cerwan will set out on a journey to save her--and maybe himself.

(photo credits for cover go to demoncherrystock@deviantart & solstock@deviantart)

Excerpt: Empire

Atop a horse, I never feel steady. I’m always being pulled one way or another—up, down, forwards, backwards, but mostly side to side. I’ve been in this saddle for days now, part of a large campaign marching to Nolan. Which is a joke, I’m no more a soldier than I am a horseman. My father, however, desires me to be both. And both I would be.
“Come along, Your Highness, we must keep ahead of the troops,” General Myghal urged me. I just nodded, but I’m sure I looked a bit green. Then again, the General might believe that was my natural coloring. He rarely saw me otherwise.
I looked around at the landscape. This would be my last chance to see it quite this way, at least for many years. On our return, all of this land would be razed. I had seen it before. I wished it were not so. The trees were tall, lively birches and white oaks. They were not close together so thick green grew all between them. My horse Pryder had eaten huge mouthfuls of it on our last (official) stop. He too was preparing for the future dearth of vegetation. Seeing sky this blue raised my spirits, which everyone thought sulky back home. If only Father would allow me to leave Caluth when I wasn’t accompanying a military campaign. Why was the world above such a brilliant azure when in Ildon it was a desolate gray? Father would probably call it the color of civilization.
Beyond these trees, I could see the land slowly rolled up to the Alb Mountains in the distance. Sometimes those mountains seemed to glitter. My tutor said it was an optical illusion, but he said a lot of dull things like that. The common folk said that magical beings of light lived up in those mountains and that those brilliant flashes were them. There was no way of knowing who was right. The mountains had been forbidden to everyone in the Empire so long as Ilsæca had existed.

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