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squidmaster
Novel: Entropy
Genre: Fantasy
26,993 words so far  

About squidmaster

Location: Ponchatoula, Louisiana

Home Region:
United States :: Louisiana :: New Orleans

Age:16

Website: http://www.squidamster64.deviantart.com/

Favorite music: Genesis, Dave Matthews Band, Coldplay, David Gray, My Morning Jacket, Death Cab for Cutie, J-pop, Franz Ferdinand, Muse...

Non-noveling interests: Digital art, video games, music, sewing, and fetuses in bottles.

Joined: October 21, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 1

NaNoWriMo buddies: 27

 

Brief Author Bio:

Won NaNo in 07 and 08, looking for another glorious purple bar for 09. ;) Except with the number 200,000 next to it this time!

Avatar art by me, made pretty by Roadie. ;)

Synopsis: Entropy

Throughout the lineage of Time itself, every generation has seen its sole Czar, whom has the inherent ability to defy Time. Syntropy--time travel.

Most Czars have come to the conclusion that using Syntropy as little as possible is the only way to keep order, but Lucia despises their readiness to use their power in identical means. She devises her own code of ethics based around defiance of their ways, and begins to forcefully eliminate their ideals--by killing them.

Her endeavors yield no repercussions until she faces the clever scheme devised by Mitch Gallibrae and his twin brother Otis. Suddenly, an outside factor could lead her to irreversibly changing herself--a change that might alter her radical opinions.

And she would become one of them.

Excerpt: Entropy

Nuborica—the city that never wakes. The entropy that hung over it was like the black fog that accompanied it, as much a living thing as its denizens. All seemed to share the same face, of utter indifference to all but the tasks before them, an entirely rigid and blank existence. There was no room for deviations here. Not out of harsh rule but out of tradition.

Lucia hated Nuborica. It was one big senseless, faceless mass, every bit of it. The steel buildings, the people, the heavy, low power lines, the blazing headlights and stop lights, and every other kind of lights, it was all one thing. Identical. Any square inch of it was just the same as any other. It was disgusting.

And cold. Granted her heavy wool coat kept most of the wind from scraping against her skin, and a hood kept her eyes down on the concrete sidewalk, the monotony still clogged her sight. The mindlessness. It was in the air she breathed, being sucked into her very being and dictating her movements. She pushed back against the oppressive entropy, replacing that omniscient bad feeling with one of her own creation, a hatred for it of the same power, that trailed off behind her little bubble of approved hate.

She would get out of this god damned city as soon as she could.

Her mission was a simple one. In a continuance of her past deeds, a devastating blow against the very conformity of the entropy that was threatening to squeeze the sanity out of her, she would kill the Czar of this Time. His gift was Syntropy, the power to traverse time, as easily as anyone could read the entropy of another. This power, in any hands, was a wicked one; he undoubtedly misused it.

Mitch Gallibrae would die within the next twenty-four hours.

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