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bkvagnini
Novel: The Trials Of Elijah Marcus Ash
Genre: Adventure
50,176 words so far   Winner!

About bkvagnini

Location: Tallahassee, Fl

Home Region:
USA :: Florida :: Tallahassee

Age:39

Website: http://www.greymatterideas.com

Favorite writers: Eoin Colfer

Favorite music: whatever I have in the CD player...gotta have headphones, though

Non-noveling interests: Music, Computers, Web Design

Joined: October 29, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 0

NaNoWriMo buddies: 5

 

Brief Author Bio:

My first short story was written in the Eighth grade as part of an assignment. It sucked. My, how the time has passed. Years of living have made the stories better, though and in 2007 I entertained the idea of writing a novel. In 2008, it became a reality.

Previous NaNo entries:
2007: The Apartment - (Drama/Slice of Life) 10,564 words- 7 days
2008: The Family Business (Adventure) 50,097 words- 26 days
2009: The Trials of Elijah Marcus Ash (Adventure) 50,176 words- 28 days
2010: unknown at this time (SciFi)

Previous Script Frenzy entries:
Starting 2010

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Synopsis: The Trials Of Elijah Marcus Ash

Elijah Marcus Ash is not your typical 16 year old high school student. He doesn't work at the supermarket, bagging groceries. Nor is he the fry guy at the burger joint. He's a trained killer and spy, and an overall good guy to have on your side. Something that his classmates soon discover on a field trip to Disney World. This is his tale.

Excerpt: The Trials Of Elijah Marcus Ash

“Now, ye don’t wanna be movin’ ‘round a bunch, else ye drop one o’ them Easter Eggs ye got. It could get a right messy,it would.”

Galen stepped away from the bed and Sam motioned for the three wives to do the same. They looked on from the door jamb. Elijah said, “I think that that concludes our transaction then. Did you want a receipt, ‘cause I’ll have to mail it to you, if that;s all right with you?”

The man remained motionless, trying to figure out a way out of his predicament. Elijah noticed this and said “C’mon. really? Did you think that we were going to make it that easy?” and he pulled out his pistol, when Galen stopped him.

“Nah mate. I got me a better idea.” And he fished around in his bag, pulling out the slingshot. He rooted around some more and found three or four stones from the last time. You never know.

He pulled back the slingshot and fired the first one into the man’s chest. It made a nice solid thump and it looked like it hurt a lot, but the man didn’t dare flinch. Galen launched the second one and his him square between the eyes. That did the trick. The man howled, the grenade dropped out of his mouth and the trio started running down the hall, pushing the wives as they went.

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