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jnewon
Novel: Thrill Junkies
Genre: Young Adult & Youth
50,036 words so far  

About jnewon

Location: Chicago

Home Region:
USA :: Illinois :: Chicago

Age:29

Website: http://scribblingwithoutapen.blogspot.com/

Favorite novels: To Kill a Mocking Bird, The Nanny Diaries, Jude the Obscure, Clan of the Cave Bear, Dune, The Radical's Guide to Economic Reality, Firethorn, Strands of Starlight, Winter Rose, Aria of the Sea, Bridge to Terebithia, Anne of Green Gables

Favorite writers: Austen, the Brontes, Rowling, Meyer, OSC, David Farland, Garth Nix, Hawthorne, Kingsolver, and maybe Austen again

Favorite music: Silence

Non-noveling interests: The stock market and financial news, knitting, thrift stores, ebay, poker psychology, baking muffins, food, surfing etsy and drooling, my completely adorable dog, my wedding

Joined: October 30, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 34

NaNoWriMo buddies: 33

 

Brief Author Bio:

Good luck to everyone this year and have a great November!

Synopsis: Thrill Junkies

Figure skater meets sk8r boy. If you think this is based on an angsty pop song, think again.

Conner--skate boarder, practical joker, and generally hyperactive mischievous ragamuffin-- never thought he'd fall for a girl like Adelaide, a driven, shy goody two shoes who lives, eats and breathes figure skating. Yet he can't stay away from her and given his "genetic condition," this is a Very Bad Thing.

Conner has Peregrinism, a rare vampirical disease that compels him to feed off of other's adrenaline while simulaneously pushing his victims' adrenal glands to make more and more until it causes death or madness.

Since she started hanging with Conner, Adelaide has noticed that her jumps have been higher, her spins have been stronger and she is skating like the champion she needs to be to take 1st in USFSA regionals. Could this be the power of first love? But first love isn't supposed to leave you dizzy or cold or give you frightening heart palpitations that feel like heart attacks, right?

Too compromising to stay together, but too addicting to part. Destined to break-up . . . or die trying?

Thrill Junkies
Making a play for 50K

Excerpt: Thrill Junkies

My toe-pick crunches ice, making a sound that reminds me of Velcro.

The sensation travels miles through my momentum-addled brain.

“No, this isn’t happening.” My brain tells the sensation. “We always fall.”

“You idiot!” Muscle memory cries. “Get out of my way.”

Swinging my left leg up and back with my toe pointing out to the side, I bend my right knee low to absorb the force of the landing. As if they are guided there by magnetic fields, my left arm stretches toward eleven o’clock and my right toward three.

By the time my brain is back in the driver’s seat, I can already see clearly and the ringing in my ears has stopped. Frozen snot runs ribbons from my nose and my top has ridden up so that my belly button wishes the world a Happy Christmas.

But I—muscles, brain and heart beating like machine gunfire—glide backwards at a gentle angle. My landing is square.

“It’s not Christmas.” My brain hisses, yanking my yoga tank down and wiping my nose on the back of my gloved hand. It automatically reminds me to throw this pair of gloves in the wash tonight.

Then my brain and mouth finally connect.

“Eeyaahaaa! Omigod! Omigod! Omigod!”

I lower my foot, standing shock still. The slight mist off the rink floor swirls promises around me like phantasmagorical creatures.

Oh, what we have done and what we will do, I hear them sing because I happen to be crazy enough to hear invisible ice spirits sing to me.

My frozen wonderland.

Half a second later, Jonas smacks into me from the side in a crude imitation of a hockey check. Crude only because it has so much more finesse. Reflex dictates that I smack him back even though he is only ten.

“Adelaide. What. Did you. Do?” he starts. “Was that your double sal? Did you just land Your Double Sal? That was, like, the highest jump I’ve ever seen you do.”

“Yeah. My double sal. Oh my God.” My voice trails off into that phantasmagorical mist. “It felt like I just fell out of the sky.”

A murderous smile crosses the little boy’s face. His eyes narrow a split second before he speaks.

“Do it again.”

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