Genre: Mystery & Suspense
About kippyjay
Location: Maine
Home Region:
United States :: Maine
Age:15
Favorite novels: Harry potter, Vanishing acts
Favorite writers: Jodi Picoult, JK Rowling
Favorite music: 80's 90's and Now
Non-noveling interests: Internet, Crafts, Children, bowling, watching plays, History, eating chocolate
Joined date: November 9, 2007
NaNoWriMo posts: 11
NaNoWriMo buddies: 3
Donna's New Life
an excerpt
donna was in a coma after she gets run over. but who ran her over. she escapes from a hospital to become a murderer. a whittness then comes into her room, hurt. donna admits everything to her. she then turns her in. donna then escapes once more to kill the person that had ran her over. then regreting what she did does something so remarcable that you have to read it to believe it.
I hid my light blue hospital robe behind the garbage can in the plastic bag that I got from the hospital. I walked about one mile east and saw a little neighborhood where houses where quite far away. The houses were dark, like everyone was sleeping. The houses where small like little cottages. Tall broad-leaved trees separated the houses. I walked down to the end of the road. I felt even more evil fill up inside me like I was drowning in evil. I walked around the house quietly to find the best door or window to go through. Along the way I stepped on leaves that crunched under my shoes. I happened to trip over a stump probably from a small tree that was brushing by a house. I made a big thump on the ground leaves flew everywhere. I stood off and brushed myself off. I went back to the window that I saw was open and was unseen by the neighbors. I found a large box I could step on to reach the window. I pulled my self up by grabbing the windowsill I gave myself a large push. Uh Oh I said to myself. The sink was right below the window. I laid my stomach down on the windowsill. I pushed myself further into the house until my behind end reached the entrance of the window. I found that I was stuck. I sucked my gut in and put all my weight to my topside and let myself fall. It worked, but not the way that I pained. I landed on my head in the sink that was full. I pulled myself out of the full sink and opened the first draw I saw.
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