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Octoba
Novel: Neoma
Genre: Fantasy
17,875 words so far  

About Octoba

Location: Lorain, OH

Home Region:
USA :: Ohio :: Elsewhere

Age:15

Favorite novels: East, Percy Jackson and the Olympians, Harry Potter, My Sister's Keeper, The Hobbit

Favorite writers: Rick Riordan, JK Rowling, James A. Owen

Favorite music: anything on The iPod

Non-noveling interests: noveling

Joined: November 10, 2007

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'07 '08

NaNoWriMo posts: 86

NaNoWriMo buddies: 3

 

Brief Author Bio:

Hufflepuffs are particularly good finders.

Synopsis: Neoma

Whatever happens, happens, and there isn't anything that can stop the twists of fate. When things are set in motion in Terra Mater, there isn't anything that can stop them. Young Dmitri will soon find out that he very well may die before anyone will recognize him as anything other than a criminal, a turncoat, a revolutionary. War is on the horizon and he will have to solve the conflict peacefully before the country falls to ruin, blood, and fire.

Excerpt: Neoma

The city came into view as the sun began to descend. Dmitri slowed his pace and looked over his shoulder at Natty.

“Are you still there?” he asked.

"Yes. I am not leaving you.” She replied. “Your shoulder—”

"Is fine now. You do not have to stay. You are only guaranteeing yourself to be caught.” Dmitri seriously wanted her to leave. He had shown too much of himself to her already and he feared that he would fall for her. If she stayed . . .

"No it is not. I saw you stemming blood from it before we left and again two nights ago. It has not healed, Dmitri.”

"Does not the smell tempt you?”

"No. I told you that I attack only once or twice a year, and even I can not explain why or how it happens.” She snapped. “And why do you suddenly decide to make conversation after I have tried to for days? I should no even be talking to you.”

"I did not invite you to follow me!” he shouted, stopping. “You are more of a burden on me that I could have possibly thought. You nearly kill me and apologize over and over again like a small child who broke a vase. What if I had not recovered my composure as quickly? I would have tried to stake you if it were not for the fact that I was in shock. I could not hate you more! I was on my way to find out that everyone I loved was dead and I had nowhere to go except the only town where I was born and exiled from at the age of five! And to add to the fact that I was in pain and at risk of infection when I found out, too, is hard for me to bear. And yes, it still has not stopped bleeding. It is very easy for me to open it up and I do not know what you put in there but it bothers me to the ends of the earth that my would- be- almost- killer is following me.”

Natty was stunned. She stood there, wide- eyed and watched him turn and walk in the opposite direction into the sunset. She felt broken inside and angered. Like a flame if flared inside her and it quailed almost immediately.

“I am so sorry . . .” She whispered into the wind.

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