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Barnardine
Novel: Cinderella: Vampire Slayer
Genre: Fantasy
12,711 words so far  

About Barnardine

Location: Eden Prairie, MN

Home Region:
United States :: Minnesota :: Twin Cities

Age:22

Website: realteenfaith.com

Favorite novels: Anything By Patricia Briggs or Jim Butcher

Favorite writers: Patricia Briggs, Eion Colfer, Jim Butcher

Favorite music: The Iron Man Sound Track got a lot of use last year.

Non-noveling interests: Watching super-hero cartoons and movies

Joined: August 14, 2008

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'08

NaNoWriMo posts: 67

NaNoWriMo buddies: 22

 

Synopsis: Cinderella: Vampire Slayer

Cinderella mourns the death of her mother while her father, a merchant, delves into his work. All is not well when he returns from one such trip, however, as he brings along a new addition to his family, his new wife, Lady Drakul, and her two daughters. As Cinderella sulks she learns that things are worse than she first feared, her new Step family are Vampires. To make matters worse Prince Oswald Charming is throwing a ball, and Lady Drakul has plans to turn him into a vampire. Cinderella, along with the help of her House Goblin, Lordo, embark on an epic quest to save Prince Charming, hopefully slaying some vampires along the way, before it's too late.

Excerpt: Cinderella: Vampire Slayer

“You married my father?” Cinderella blurted out when nothing else would come to mind.

“Indeed. And now we have come here, along with my two daughters, to settle our family.”

“You have daughters? Where are they?” Cinderella asked, looking around the room making sure that they weren’t hiding in a corner.

A sudden blood curdling scream rose up from somewhere outside, sending chills down Cinderella’s spine.

“That would be them, my dear. They are out having dinner,” Lady Drakul said as she took another step forward.

Cinderella became really self conscious of the fact that she was still on the table. She did not know what Lady Darkul’s daughters were eating, but that scream had sounded all too human.

“Wha- what are y- you?” Cinderella stammered.

“My dear Cinderella, I am your new master,” Lady Drakul purred as she launched herself at Cinderella’s exposed neck, fangs forming in her mouth.

Cinderella lost all control of her body in that terrified moment. Her bladder let loose, and she screamed a blood curdling scream of death. Her father still stood in the corner, passive to the beast feasting on his one and only daughter.

Cinderella screamed louder as thrashed wildly at Lady Drakul as her imposing teeth moved closer to her bare neck. It was now use, though, Lady Drakul was immovable, and within moments her teeth punctured Cinderella’s neck.

Cinderella suddenly stopped screaming. Pleasure began at the puncture wound and spread throughout Cinderella’s body. It was the most enjoyable pleasure that Cinderella had ever felt. She was lost in rapture. Nothing else mattered anymore.

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