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AJAiken
Novel: The Dance
Genre: Young Adult & Youth
46,133 words so far  

About AJAiken

Location: Scotland / England

Home Region:
Europe :: England :: Newcastle

Age:19

Favorite novels: Persuasion, Lord of the Rings, The Goose Girl, The Thief Lord, The Chronicles of Narnia

Favorite writers: Austen, Tolkien, C.S. Lewis, Shannon Hale, Cornelia Funke

Favorite music: Soundtracks, classical, pop, country and western ... anything ....

Non-noveling interests: Reading, filmmaking

Joined: September 2, 2008

This Year: Official Participant

NaNoWriMo History:
'08

NaNoWriMo posts: 4

NaNoWriMo buddies: 32

 

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Synopsis: The Dance

… something crossed his mind that had it been a different dance, had he not seen her there, he would never have agreed to it, or thought of it more … and yet …
'Will you dance with me?' he asked, softly, and he felt like he was baring his soul to this young lady who finally raised her beautiful grey eyes to his face.

Though the love of a dance brings them together at the King’s Ball, Richard and Sarah cannot bear to find any other commonalities between themselves. Sarah is a maidservant and holds a terrible grudge against those of the higher classes; Richard, on the other hand, is the Prince – and he finds he knows very little of the people that he will one day rule.

As they fight to overcome the attraction they find for each other, the servant and the prince find that they are overcoming their long-held prejudices. Yet though these two may have found a likeness through their relationship, can Richard and Sarah’s love for one another be understood by anyone else?

Excerpt: The Dance

Each of these steps marked a moment in Sarah’s life. The first three steps – the ones she could almost reach over, her legs were so long – were the little years of her life, worn down and forgotten in her memory. Those years – her mother’s favourites – were insignificant in Sarah’s eyes. The fourth and fifth steps, larger in importance, reminded Sarah of the days of ignorant childhood, when reality had seemed more like one of the tales her mother told at night before bed.
The sixth step was askew. At seven years of age Sarah had left her home, the pretty stone building in the Horse Market, bound for Hawkland Palace and the miserable life of a maid in the employ of King Richard the Second. Since then the steps had shown her – extraordinarily – how much she had grown. Seven, eight and nine were quickly surpassed. Yet step number ten … that last step, the one which was flat, and held the door … that was not yet reached. One more step, and Sarah’s life would be over.

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